This idea just popped into my mind,so I hope you like it.

~*~
We look into each others eyes
as we pass each other by.
Once again I am awaiting.
Secretly,forbiddenly,but awaiting.

Awaiting a chance to meet you.
To help you in your attempt to escape.
Just like me,trying to be free,too.
But I am awaiting,the destined time.

Unknown to many I have my own feelings.
My own passions,worries,that are slowly unsealing.
The whole terrifing drama consists around you.
All the rumers that I hear,I don't know which are true.

I await the day we will meet
That we will talk,bond,admit.
To the horrors that might meet us on our forrbidden journey.
I can at least say,I am still awaiting it.
~*~

Reply what you think.

i like it ,very good.

Yay!!
Someone likes it!! :mrgreen:
I'm gonna turn this into a portfolio. :sorcerer:
Expect more. :flowersmile: Flower for you.

BRAVO!ENCORE! :sorcerer:

ha ha Courney.
No Oncour(sp)
Why don't you write poems.
Your good with words when it comes to love.
~*~

A Warm Breeze

A warm breeze passes me.
as it tickles the tears playfully.
I learned that the heart can destroy
when its taken as a lovestruck toy.

A warm breeze can pass you by.
Or hit you hard and make you cry.
a heart is fragile when it is abandoned
Nothing will help once you have been saddened.

A warm breeze can widen the tear.(as in rip)
People separate and develope despair.
Many wonder the reason of such a weakness.
Love is just an obbsession,its very obvious.

A warm breeze passes every lover.
Distrust and lies may alter the cover.
Cracks will show within the heart.
and drag any loving couple apart.
~*~

What do you think.

Cracking good read!
Read mine!It is called life :flowersmile:

Excellent job! This is great! Hey, thanks for reading my poems. It means a lot to me! *winks* Keep it up!

I think it's great! :up: Keep it up!

Yay!!!
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Memories

Forgotten memories of cold love and harsh words return every night.
In the blink of a tear filled eye they disappear in the search of cold plight.
They take all pleasure of serenity filled dreams and visions.
Replacing them with harsh memories that are only filled with painful missions.

I seem to recall the words in my head.
The unwelcomed wispers that will come again.
The bitterness of snow and the fierceness of fire.
mixed together only created suffering and liars.

Painfilled memories return and disappear,
Its hard to take these flashbacks and make them clear.
Hate and sadness will only bring horror.
Thats what I realized in the halls and corridors.
~*~
This isn't true.
It just came to me. :mrgreen:

Awwwww! Those are wonderful, Alley! I love them! I was never good at love poems, but you've got them down pat! :up: :up:

Thank you.
That means alot.
Flowers for all of you. :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:

I am going to write the Haiku I wrote in the Haiku Hype here so ya'll can read it.
Its a boy's point of veiw;keep that in mind.
~*~

I Don't Know

Awaiting someone
A person who is perfect
Well,at least to me

A girl who likes me
Who doesn't care of my past
Only my future

People always run
When they see me in this game
This virtual world

But this girl won't run
No matter what she will stay
and be unafraid

I am awaiting
for a chance to be normal
a chance to be free

Though I await
I have already found her
The girl who helped me

I await the time
When we'll be excepted here
Until that day,well.....





I don't know.

Waves

A wave crashes over the rocks and sand
Washing the stones which were once in hand
Soothing the heart that suffered destruction
Cooling the anger that stops the function

Waves flash through the heart and soul
Releiving the sadness that took its toll
Waves clash away the remaining debree
that was left behind by a hurtful degree

The heart and waves are one and the same
as they are partners in a very twisted game
As the water floods the mending rocks
Loves floods the heart as if it mocks

Someone here was writing suicidal poems and said they were easier to write.
I wanted to see if thats true,and I wrote one.What do you guys think?
~*~

GoodBye

Is there a way to banish the pain within me
from your harsh words that destroyed my heart so deeply
I wonder as I sit in the bathroom;eyes wet with tears
caused by your hurtful words and your laughing peers

I relized I want to get away from all the problems I face
I also wonder how the police will rest my case
when I pick up the sissors I draw a hole
and that's where all my problems will go

As the deepness of the hole deepens even more
I think of my past though my memory is poor
all I think about is that I'm free
no more pain from you to me

I look at the red sissors as I feel the pain at bay
the hole had sucked all my problems far away
I smile and close my eyes as I fall to the floor
all I can think of is I can't feele pain anymore

As I think of what really happened before
I wonder why I couldn't take it and endure
as I lay there on the smooth cold hard tile
I just lay there,slipping away with a smile

as I wisper...."Goodbye."

<span style='color:darkred'>I LOVE THEM!

I simply love the words you choose to use.
And so easy they are, even though they're filled with (painful) emotions.

I especially liked "a warm breeze" and "Memories".

It's not really easier to write suicidal popems. Depends on who you are. </span>

Really??
So thats why my friend couldn't write suicidal poems!
I need to write more.
Flower for you!! :flowersmile:

I think that was great! It was so heartfelt, it was almost as though reading it, you could feel yourself slipping away. Awesome job! Have a flower, or two, or three, or..... :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:

np and thanks

*Struggles to climb out of the giant pile of flowers*
Thanks!!
It means a lot when people enjoy my my work.
~*~
Hard to Forget

I remember the memories of the past we had together
As I walk down the alleyway that we had that first encounter
You were so shy and inocent I couldn't help but say
that you were annoying but you grew on me anyway

I became involved in a unique and awkward friendship
You had to hide and I couldn't let your situation slip
I was scared that you would one day get hurt
and my nightmare came true after the search

As tears filled my eyes as I saw your lifeless body
I barely held back my rage with my remaining sanity
You saved my life when all this time I thought you didn't care.
That got me crying as I corrupted my stare.

You were so young that I was more of a parent
You looked up to me and thought of me as an untamable torent.
As I sat there losing reality in that twisted fate
I looked over toward you and wondered Was it too late?

I ran to you and shook you but you didn't speak
I cried and breathed in painful gasps that made me so weak
As you layed on my lap I felt your heartbeat beating
Slowly,softly beating,in my mind,as the tears stoped falling

I awoke in my room in my bed in my home
I cried for hours at the nightmares I have alone
I logged into the game where we talked so long
Then you walked up to me and asked Is somehing wrong?

I told him that it was nothing that wasn't normal
But he noticed that something that I kept secret took its toll
He looked at me unconvinced but he decided not to fret
For he read my mind somehow and wispered It must be hard to forget.
~*~
Its long I know.This has to do with the same 10 year old guy in all my poems,except the suicidal poem.If you haven't noticed,you know now.The girl in
this one is 16,and cares about this guy like a parent,and the girl in 'Awaiting' is 9.
I'm explaining this because my friend was confused after I told her that all my poems were linked together. :whisle:

i love ur poems there great

*still struggles to get out of the flower pile*Thanks!

I really liked Goodbye.I myself write poems like that though I never mean it that is just the way I feel at the moment.The funny thing is I can only really write when I am angery or upset I can't write when I am happy.I agree with Christhanie I love the way you use your words.I don't give flowers, but it seems like you already have enough.

Too Late

I stand by you
I protect you
and I love the way you smile
I miss you deeply
I feel so lonely
and for your return I await awhile
As my feelings drift away
I wish they'd stay
at least I think
And as I stand here
With my mind clear
I relized my heart had sinked (this is correct grammar)
You have no idea how long I had to await
But then I notice,your too late.
~*~
I hope you liked this one.

I Feel my Heart.....

I feel my heart leap with laughter
and sink with cold depression
I feel my heart pound with fear
and explode painful aggression

I feel my heart suffer extreme lonelyness
as it struggles to decide
I feel my heart beat intensively
as it wonders deeply about its pride

I feel my heart love
I feel my heart try
I feel my heart worry
and I know I'll feel it die

I hear my heart wisper
I hear my heart sigh
and though I hear nothing
I hear it say......Time passes by

It all changes,I think
its the only solution
but I feel my heart race
and relize of my hearts polution

I feel my heart change
in the blink of an eye
as time keeps going
I feel my heart cry

Is it because of what you said
or is it because I just do?
Either way I'm saying goodbye
So long,farewell....but I will miss you.
~*~
I know,I know.
Anouther extremely long poem.
I get caught up in detail.
Can you blame me??

no :whisle:

I'm only posting one more poem until you all reply.
I don't want to post them for nothing.Guys veiw(again)
talking about friend who's a girl.
~*~
Loyal Friends

I walk the streets aimlessly
I meet you once again
When we first met you were different
and I was scared within

We don't get along well
but at times we seldom do
We became a good freindship (not relationship;just friends B) )
because of the determination from you

You helped comfort me
when I was frightened or sad
You helped make me see
What I gained and what I had

When i met her (as in 'the one')
You helped me see her again
I know that we must be loyal friends
and will stay that way to the end