9/11 - remember the live's in my short poem

Summary:
two year's ago the twin tower's were hit be a plane here's my poem

Article:

The tower's
When the Twin Towers were hit firemen, ambulance, army, and Police were there to protect the wizard's were in need as evil grew deeper the greatest hero's helped us the wizard's of society (firemen, ambulance, army, and Police) the president raiseing his wand saying Sonorus today has been a national tragedy has hapened "with a pause "the twin towers have been under a terrorist attack" and with a pause america cried and the army's went to war and for two long years and many to come we use a cheering charm to forrget the evil and love our hero's.By Lord Montymort

that's a story, not a poem.
please put it in the correct place next time!!!

Actually, it could be considered poetry.....

get off it it was a poem and a very good 1

yeh thats very touching

i liked it, but it lacked the poetic format...

i dont do mine in format eaither thats the good thing about poetry u can do it how u like i swear no 1 in this world can give posetive feedback its rather appling

very good poem lord montymort