Charli looked like she was dieing. The train began to move again finally but Charli was still not back with the others. Somebody must get her hwlp soon or she'll die. "Ahh!! Stopp this please don't kill my sister!" Charli screamed so loud it almost broke the other students eardrums. "If you hurt my family, I swear that I will..." Charli's vioce subsided as the train pulled into Hogwarts station.

Brendan started to think"i hope my shadow doesn't take control over me today....i look ugly when it does.....it feeds on the darkness of others....destroying everyone in it's path growing stronger with every victim(SP?)That has dakness in their heart.........i transform into something that looks like a dementor except you can see it's face......it makes the room it's in grow cold.....no spell can damage it.....spells like flapendo only make it stronger.....the only spells that weaken it are healing spells and light.......it's skin rotting and grey with very fe hairs on it's hand........wearing a cloak simaler to the cloak a dementor wears..........it's hand looks like the hand of a skeleton with skin still on it.it's long fingers reaching out towards it's victims"Brendan keep saying this in his head,hoping someone would read his mind......."Someone get help!"

ooc: so dont post in our story BRISK

bic: Charli's eyes began to turn back to her own purple/green colors. She spoke as if she was still in the 'danger'. "Jamie, no please don't die. I never meant to hurt you. I cant controll them. Their to strong for me!" tears roled on and blood kept dripping as she burst into crying.

OOc: back and im dying to rp. soreh i havent been on lately...school has been EVIL! lets gooo!! PLEEASE!!!!

IC: Melani,who had been in a solemn trance the entire time finally wakes. She looks around at all of the commotion of the compartment and her eyes widen. She looks around frantically, but once she catches sigh of blood, is totally fixed up on it. She rises from her seat as if she's being pulled by another force. She glides over to a bleeding Charli and cocks her head watching her whimper and hungrily watching as the blood drips.
Oh...I shouldn't be doing this....I have those lolli pops....but....so much lovely human blood.....so warm....I don't think I can control myself.....
She laughs in euphoria at the sight of the blood, trying with her innermost will to not attack Charli and drink her dry. She looks like a pyro tempted with fire.....

Brendan noticed that Melani was finally paying attention....but in a bad way."Don't."Brendan said,giving her a serious look.Brendan looked back at Charli."Wha?!"

Laura gently placed her thumbs over Charli's eyes. The blood turned into normal tears.

"Welcome back..." Said Laura quitely.

Brendan looked at lauren."That calmed me down a bit."brendan said with a small smile.

Laura followed Melini back and took a seat bedie her. "Too tempting hun?"

Charli lurked upward as her eyes glowed and she inhaled strongly but still in a strance. The train began to unload with students as Hagrid's voice came closer. "I swar I didn't do anythnig wrong. I try not to do these things but they sometimes just.."her vioce stopped.

Laura walked timidly out of the train. The Thresels weren't going to get the better of her this year.

Brendan followed the others into the carrige.Brendan felt something lurch in his stomack hoping it wasn't his shadow trying to take over him.Brendan started to think."My shadow can sometimes do as it pleases.It sometimes controls my body.And when it does,i grow tall and grey may hands and fingers frowing long and start to look like a hand od a skeleton but with skin on it.i start to lose my hair and end up with few hairs on my head.My face starts to wrinkle. and my cloths disappearing and being replaced by a claok simalar to the dementors.It feeds on the darkness in others heart and kill every one in it's path at the same time.Spells from flapendo to Avada Kerdavra only make it stronger.Only healing spells can hurt it."Brendan kept saying this in his head,hoping someone would read his mind.rendan muttered"Someone please read my mind."

ooc: I suppose Charli is just going to be left on the train?

bic: When everybody left, Charli Ryan sat up straigh rasping her head. "Oh my gosh! That was so scary! What happened to me?" nobody answered her for a moment.

Sydney was in the carriage listening to Brendan's thoughts. She had a frightened look on her face. "You can't control it, can you?"

Brendan looked around seeing that Charli wasn't there.He was still thinking about his shadow taking him over "Why isn't charli here?"Marvolo mumbuled looking around.Brendan looked at Sydney with a puzzled look and then relized what she was talking about.Brendan leaned towards sydney and whisperd."No."

Sydney kept looking at him, astontished. "Well that stinks!" she whispered back, her warm smile and laugh coming abck to her, hoping it would make Brenden cheer up a bit.

ooc: so nobody cared really if she was dead or ust left there? I may as well kill her

bic: Charli tried to get to her feet and the pool of blood surounded her. Hagrids voice came from outside and she wanted to rush but felt dizzy, fell to the floor and was unstedy as she saw everybody leave. Her voice was so weak, it was almost not heard. "Wait, I'm here still, please stop!" CHARLI RYAN had lost so much blood, that she DIED right there with nobody around to see.

"That does suck," Kirra said stumbling into the carriage. She had heard his thoughts earlier, but wasnt sure if she should say anything. She smiled warmly at him. She was dressed in a purple robe, long non-matching multicolored gloves with the fingers cut off, and the inside of her robe was a silky material made of all sorts of different designs and colors. Her cloak was a bit long and she often tripped over it , as she did climbing into the carriage.
"Phew," she exhaled looking around their carriage. She played with stray strings on her gloves for a bit before gasping. "Hey! Wanna see something neat!? Look at this.
Kirra opened her hands in front of her and a greenish-purpleish light appeared, and there was Charli, laying on the ground, pale and her eyes closed, a pool of blood surrounded her. Kirra screamed.