I think we should start making a list of the writers and which chapters they have.

Writers:
Hpoenixrose13star-- Chapter One (also willing to do Chapter two if need be)
Linda Black--

Professor Snape, does that mean you want to write????

Chapter 1: Through My Eyes - An explanation of Dumbledore's death from Snape's point of view. What happened with Draco and how Snape feels about him and the mission he failed, and Snape's true situation with Harry.

Chapter 2: Traces - Dumbledore needs to have left something behind that is found in the end that proves Snape's true loyalties to the Order and most of all to Dumbledore. Snape sabotages certain select DE missions.

Chapter 3: Through the Pain - Draco is punished by "Crucio!"

Chapter 4: Knowledge - McGonall knows Snape is still a good guy and the whole thing with Dumbledore was a set up.

Chapter 5: Last Days -The whole big battle thingy from Snape's eyes, he survives.

Chapter 6: And We Are Saints - Snape dies in protecting trio/ kills Voldy.

Chapter 7: Snake's End - The aftermath of the war. Who has died? Who has been sent to Azkaban?

First, we need to title the chapters. I put some in just for the sake of now.... if you want something else.... just put up your suggestion and we can all decide.

Next..... as I mentioned, the chapters are too vague... some are at least.

Also, just because this is from Snape's point of view, it doesn't mean it has to be first person narrative. It would work from his perspective just fine as a third person narrative.....

I'm confused.... chapter five is the final battle, yet Snape dies in chapter six? Shouldn't chapter six be the final battle...???

So, who else wants to write???

And Linda, what chapter do you want???

I'll take 3 and 4, and it looks like 5, 6 and 7 will be covered, with Maya and Professor Snape (don't know your name beyond that) willing to write. So, that leaves only one chapter left! Cool! I can make something out of 3 and 4, put conversations in and that sort of thing to add a little substance. Hey Aria, nice job on chapter breakdown and summarization!

Linda, those are your breakdowns. I just copy and pasted and edited a bit for clarity and to be a little less vague. The credit is yours.... so pat yourself on the back! heehee And I titled them... but that's all. But thanks, if you mean the titles too. ; )

What chapter would you like to write, HPR??? *I'm being lazy and abrievating your name, yes* Wait... is your name Maya????

So, this is the new list...

Writers:
Hpoenixrose13star-- Chapter One: Through My Eyes and Chapter Two: Traces
Linda Black-- Chapter Three: Through the Pain and Chapter Four: Knowledge
Professor Snape-- Chapter
HarryPotterRulz-- Chapter



Chapter 1: Through My Eyes (Taken)
An explanation of Dumbledore's death from Snape's point of view. What happened with Draco and how Snape feels about him and the mission he failed, and Snape's true situation with Harry.

Chapter 2: Traces (Taken)
Dumbledore needs to have left something behind that is found in the end that proves Snape's true loyalties to the Order and most of all to Dumbledore. Snape sabotages certain select DE missions.

Chapter 3: Through the Pain (Taken)
Draco is punished by "Crucio!"

Chapter 4: Knowledge (Taken)
McGonall knows Snape is still a good guy and the whole thing with Dumbledore was a set up.

Chapter 5: Last Days (Available)
The final battle thingy from Snape's eyes, he survives.

Chapter 6: And We Are Saints (Available)
Snape dies in protecting trio/ kills Voldy.

Chapter 7: Snake's End (Available)
The aftermath of the war. Who has died? Who has been sent to Azkaban?



Linda, I'm still confused. In your summary, you wrote that chapter five is the final battle but that Snape dies in chapter six..... Confused! Please explain....

Aria - I see your confusion. I was copying th elist from suggestions and ideas, but I guess we should break that down into two chapters with it being like this -

Chapter 5 - The final battle begins. Snape tells his story of what is happening

Chapter 6 - The battle is nearly over, but right at the end Snape dies in protecting the trio/kills Voldy.

(After all, the battle can certainly take up a couple chapters to cover.)

Hope this makes more sense!

I will start on Chapter 3 and 4 as soon as you finish yours and send to me!

Yeah, that does help!

Okay, what about the last three chapters. Who is will be writing those???

Okay, I will get started as soon as I can on the first two chapters! I've got a ton of FC FFs I'm working on.

sounds good. If you don't mind the only thing I'll conrtibute is betaing your chaps. :-) My profs seem to have a fave hobby called 'moving exam dates aournd', so I'm quite busy revising.

Yes, you can ask all questions here, I've been follwoing this discussion will continue to check back at least once a day.

Maya, sure will! So, it's just Chapter 6 and 7 that are left to be done, I guess. Squibby, betaing is a very important job! Thanks for offering to do it for us.

I would love to take chapter six. (For obvious reasons) I think I can get just the right words in.

That's great!!!! Now we only need to get Chapter 7 done! Actually, I would be more than happy to wrap it up at the end with Chapter 7 if you guys want.

Posted by hpheonixrose......

I'm confused.... chapter five is the final battle, yet Snape dies in chapter six? Shouldn't chapter six be the final battle...???

I don't really know, perhaps he sustains injuries, or the battle takes place over two chapters, but we need to clear that up before we write.....

I think seven is a good number...yeah....and you have to be prepared for what I write.. i mean this might be my first fan-fic on this site, unless my other one goes up first, but I think that if you think you can do it, I think you should go for it!

I agree 100%! It doesn't matter if it's your first FF or your 500th, as long as you want to do it that's the main thing!

Yeah, the final battle is being extended over two chapters, we decided it would be kinda long and we can have more detail now and whatever.

Right, Right, well, sooner or later I'm gonna have to write Snape's...death. *Shakes head* are we thinking slow, painfull death, or quick but tragic? Or are we kinda making it up as we go along? And another thing; is it turning out that Snape is good or ev-uh- bad "Evil is a strong word" ?

I've received Chapters 1 and 2 from Aria, guys, and expect to have my chapters (3 and 4) finished by Thursday. Hooray,hooray!

coolies! Why don't you send me the chapters you already have so I can read them bit by bit instead of getting all 7 chapters and then having to rush it? :-)

EDIT: Just received the following PM and thought I'd let you know as well:

No problem! I just finished Chapters 3 and 4, and I will PM the first four chapters to both you and Maya (next writer). This way, all will be completed as planned. (And we are moving along!)

and to me please! I already skimmed through the first chapters, and you guys are amazing - it already sounds really good!

Hi,

sure you can send it in two, or just sent me your chapters, I already have 1-4 anyway :-)

Oh, great... I'm glad that the deadline is flexible...

Looks like we're doing good on the chapters!

Maya, okay... nice to meet you! Heehee. If you need to you should break up the PM into twos or threes....

Do we have a chapter seven writer yet?

Right, no rush, take your time, make it good.....I'm just jotting down Ideas and such so I'm not totally ready, but when you're done, send 'em on over and I'll get it done ASAP! And i need to know who to send it to! Also, A suggestion for the title of my chapter :The Choice. You know, Snape has a choice, to die or not...?