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| | The Snitchseeker 100 100 stories of 100 words. Are you ready for the challenge? | Vote for SS! 
08-30-2006, 09:14 PM
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|  Potterwatch! Momma
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|  SS100 - Comments and discussions!
We're going to try something different in here.
In the other Fan Fiction forums here at SnitchSeeker, readers are allowed to comment in people's threads about their stories, and as a reader and as a mod, I find so much spam and unnecessary posting has a really negative effect on a good fic.
So let's try this. All discussion about any drabbles in this forum go in here.
If you have some private comments and/or constructive criticism to give and you're not sure if you should say it publicly, PM the author for a more personal and meaningful exchange of ideas.
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So.. judging by the number of claims and threads in less than 24 hours, I'd have to say this was a pretty good idea! Kudos to Erin, my drabble partner-in-crime for bringing it to us! *applause*
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08-30-2006, 09:15 PM
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Lissy De VilYeti
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 This is awesome! Great idea Erin and Jan! | |
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08-30-2006, 09:18 PM
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| Potterwatch! Momma
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Hahaha Blame Credit goes to Erin, Lis.  She's so cool. *loves*
OH MY GOSH. IMI is on a roll. Imi! Slow down, girl! You're makng the rest of us look lazy!  | |
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08-30-2006, 09:42 PM
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|  Dan's Script HolderGhoul
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This is a lot of fun! Great idea Erin and Lis!  Good luck everyone! | |
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08-30-2006, 09:55 PM
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Lissy De Vil Yeti
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Originally Posted by Floo14 This is a lot of fun! Great idea Erin and Lis! Good luck everyone! | *huggles* You are sweet! I take no credit at all!  to Ern and Jan! I'm just playing this time!
Two threads for me and I promise I won't do more. | |
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08-30-2006, 10:14 PM
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|  Bellatrix LestrangeDraco's DirectorDramione=OTPDemiguise
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OMG, everybody's drabbles rock! This is a great idea! Kudos to both of you for coming up with the idea! | |
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08-30-2006, 10:16 PM
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This is a fantastic idea! But it's so difficult getting everything right on the dot, just a hundred words. And as usual Jan beat me to Snape.
Again.
... hmph. | |
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08-30-2006, 10:16 PM
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I'm just going through reading some right now.
Lissy - your first Trelawney drabble made me giggle right out loud.
TeeNa - your first Draco drabble was SAD. Very nice. | |
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08-30-2006, 11:04 PM
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| I mod Cauldrons 0_oMy Imi Kelpie
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This was an ultra brilliant idea both of you! Thank you so much for giving me something new to write tee hee hee! Quote: |
OH MY GOSH. IMI is on a roll. Imi! Slow down, girl! You're makng the rest of us look lazy! | *slows down* No, i'm not making you look lazy, i was just extremely inspired lol!
TeeNa- i simply adored your Draco dabbles they were both so perfect, very well written, i loved them! | |
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08-30-2006, 11:06 PM
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| Reality PoliceOfficial -()- Seeker
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OK, Peonychan, here's my review. No, heaven forbids, it's not dramatic-depressive. The "snip" repetition makes a good expressive resource. It's accurate. It's unclear what exactly happened with the boy (oh, is it Cedric?), but I guess it doesn't matter either way. (It isn't like there was lots to add. The drabble main problem is the lack of space.)
In short, I like it. It's very, very subtle. It gives you the choice of reading it as if it was... scaringly sad, but also lets you read it as it was less... tragical than it could be. It's not too expressive, I will let you know. The cold sadness can be read as (angry) indifference. Again why I said it leaves a lot for especulation and choice of interpretation, which makes it pretty original. For a deppression-related fanfic.
Last edited by She-Who-Is-Not-To-Be-Psycho! : 08-30-2006 at 11:17 PM.
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08-30-2006, 11:11 PM
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| I mod Cauldrons 0_oMy Imi Kelpie
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Brianna, i loved your James/Lily ones, they are so cute. I love the way they're written too, they make me smile!
Cassirin, your first Tonks one was so good! I loved her last line!
Jan, total Snape, honestly! It was perfect! | |
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08-30-2006, 11:41 PM
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|  Luff PuffPadfoot's Pawprint Headz&Tailz<3Phoenix
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This is so awesome!!! you guys uber ruleeeee i got no idea how you come up with these competitions and games  | 
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08-30-2006, 11:51 PM
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| DA Game Officer RHFC Games KeeperSS100 Triumphant Snidget
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This was a good idea. Thanks for the push to write my fanfics & Thanks Imi for the compliment.
I haven't read them all yet.. but I the ones I've read were really good
Cassirin - I loved your first two drabbles about Tonks.. I cant wait until the rest come out.
Imi - I love your about harry and ginny. I love their relationship in it. I love how romantic it is. I dont think i have to wait long to read the rest of yours. you'll probably be done soon
Le - your drabbles are really good. I thought the part about feeding the chickens was funny. I wonder whats next for Charlie
*runs off to write and read more drabbles*
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08-30-2006, 11:56 PM
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| Luff PuffPadfoot's Pawprint Headz&Tailz<3 Phoenix
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The trio one is quite good, and i laughted at Lissy's for the maurders I want my thread to open so i can post my drabbles on percy! | |
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08-31-2006, 12:16 AM
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Originally Posted by LovelyLunaLovegood
Le - your drabbles are really good. I thought the part about feeding the chickens was funny. I wonder whats next for Charlie
| Hehe, you are so sweet! Thank you!  OMG, I finished seven now! I still have so muchmore insperation left! Ithank you guys for making this up! I have some great wonderful news!!! Mom is making this count as SHOOLWORK!!!!!  | |
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08-31-2006, 12:21 AM
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| I mod Cauldrons 0_oMy Imi Kelpie
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ditto with the inspiration! I loved yours too, the chickens were great!
How are you getting your mum to make it count as school work? (well done on that btw!) | |
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08-31-2006, 12:42 AM
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Originally Posted by starlightangel ditto with the inspiration! I loved yours too, the chickens were great!
How are you getting your mum to make it count as school work? (well done on that btw!) | Thanks! I love yours, they are super! Ha! My evil Get-out-of-doing-schoolwork ploy!  See, I'm homeschooled, so Mom is my teacher. And everyday I have to do, what she calls, a freewrite. That's where I write whatever comes to mind, but it has to be substantial. So, I was working on my drabbles at the kitchen table, and she complimented me on my freewrite! So I explained what I was doing, and she loves it! So now my freewrites have turned into drabbles!!  | |
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08-31-2006, 12:56 AM
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| Reality PoliceOfficial -()- Seeker
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OK, OK! Where goes another review. For Peony's last drabble:
ChoChang - Divination Drabble: The Essay
The Reason I Liked This Drabble, by Nadia *clears throat* First off, it's foreshadowing, but with a plausible reaction from the character, even indifferent which makes the prediction cause this strong feeling of being overpowered by fate. It's a loomy feeling. Grim but not overly sad. Frightening even and not easy to convey, which you did get to convey, so I say kudos to you for that! The end.
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Reason: damn, wat's wrong with the dumb thing
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08-31-2006, 01:01 AM
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*coughcough* I have an announcement to make.
I love Nadia!
Thanks for the great reviews ^^ | |
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08-31-2006, 01:15 AM
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Hehe... I love all your comments, guys. I'm so excited that we have so many great writers here at SS. Great and prolific.
I see you, Nadia! I want to see some of your writing! | |
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08-31-2006, 01:31 AM
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| Bellatrix LestrangeDraco's DirectorDramione=OTP Demiguise
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Originally Posted by Meandering Thanks for the great reviews ^^ | They aren't great, they're honest  That wasn't directed at me, but still... I love your drabbles! They're amazing!
EDIT: Forgot this the first time... tatewin, I loved the two drabbles you've posted!
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08-31-2006, 01:39 AM
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Le: This is terrible! I can't get anything to come up on your grabbles! They are all blank! I SO much want to read them! I don't know why they aren't showing! | |
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08-31-2006, 01:44 AM
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