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Old 02-14-2004, 03:04 AM   #26 (permalink)
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These are great! I especially liked the first one. I think you really captured how Harry's feeling and it made me wanna cry.....
And as for the requests, you think you could do one about Draco or the Malfoy's? I know not everyone likes them (which I find unbelievable), but I do and I think it would be interesting. Post more soon!
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These are great! I especially liked the first one. I think you really captured how Harry's feeling and it made me wanna cry.....
And as for the requests, you think you could do one about Draco or the Malfoy's? I know not everyone likes them (which I find unbelievable), but I do and I think it would be interesting. Post more soon!
thanks Slytherin Heir, thy challenge accepted

1. snape
2.draco or the malfoys


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Old 02-14-2004, 03:27 AM   #28 (permalink)
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Cool poems Sir Spots!

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Old 02-14-2004, 03:21 PM   #29 (permalink)
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Wow, I'm very impressed Sir Spots. I have a request or more an idea: Why don't you write a Valentine's poem from or about your favourite couple *lol*?

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Old 02-14-2004, 05:42 PM   #30 (permalink)
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Nice.
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thanks gang, Rox I will see what I can do...

but here it is...the next installment, a request by the best Biochemist in the world!! (well... it's the only I know)



Snape

Come in!, SIT DOWN!, and mind your tongues
this is my Potions class,
take notes and learn, you’ll join the ones
whom, on my exams have passed.

Another bunch of dunderheads
like those who’ve come before,
some Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaws
but most from Gryffindor.

You’ll rarely need your wands in here
it’s potions that we make,
mix the wrong ingredients
and your life is what’s at stake.

A “Celebrity” amongst our midst?
that Potter boy, we’ll see,
I’ll treat him rough and watch him close
for what his father did to me.

Powdered root of asphodel
makes a Draft of Living Death
DO NOT PAY ATTENTION!
and you’ve drawn your final breath.

Shrivelfigs and daisy roots
and gillyweed’s, your tools,
to make the potions, that you’ll need
to stay alive, YOU FOOLS!

And if I catch you talking
during my Lessons, why don’t fret,
first time is not expulsion
it’s DETENTION that you’ll get.

Although I’m Potions Master
it’s not the job I’ve sought,
the position that’s denied me
Defense Against the Dark Arts

A qualified Legilimens
your inner thoughts I see,
the only way to block me out
is through Occlumency

I know there’s those who loathe me
for what I used to be,
Death Eater of Lord Voldemort
am I still?, let’s wait and see.

So heed my warning and my dare
that if you wish to pass,
come in, SIT DOWN!, and mind your tongues
this is MY Potions class.



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Old 02-14-2004, 09:25 PM   #32 (permalink)
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I love that! I could read it all day! I wish it went on and on!
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Old 02-14-2004, 09:26 PM   #33 (permalink)
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thanks Sarah, I'm glad you enjoy them....


Okay next on the list was supposed to

Draco and/or the Malfoys

but due to a more time-sensitive request from Professor Phoebe Phoenix (she is a Prof. after all) I will try to get the Valentine's DAy request done first....


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Old 02-15-2004, 03:57 PM   #34 (permalink)
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*laughs*

I only have authority in school, though

Anyway, Snape was really cool. I really envy you for your talent. I could never find matching words so easily...
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I loved that one on Snape. So great!
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yay! You're doing a great job. I'm going to come up with a killer request... eventually.

In the meantime, I'm going to enjoy your poems. They're brilliant.
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Thanks guys, I hope I can keep these up to your ever-growing level of expectation.....



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wow Sir Spots

totally brilliant keep up the good work

i luurrve the snape one.. how on earth do u get it to rhyme but also say exactly what you want and have brilliant content aswell

lol i command u to write more = when u can lol

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wow Sir Spots

totally brilliant keep up the good work

i luurrve the snape one.. how on earth do u get it to rhyme but also say exactly what you want and have brilliant content aswell

lol i command u to write more = when u can lol
hears command and obeys...stay tuned...


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The Snape poem is SUPERB !!!! :flowersmile:
I love how you rhyme things and have them make sense !
The characters come alive in your poems..if you know what im trying to say !!!
And you've probably heard me say those same things to your other poems, but hey its the truth !!!

More more more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Snape is my man!!

Oops... wrong forum

Thanks, Sir Spots. That was really great. I was going to quote my favorite stanzas, but there were too many

*gives Sir Spots a dragon bone*

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thanks Angel and Kristi (grabs bone and curls up)

now I'm off to work on my next poems....



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alright folks don't get too excited yet, this is just another cheer that I transferred from the cheerleading site that I came up with to signify the end of the Quidditch match between Gryffindor and Slytherin....I will be posting a Valentine's poem with a twist in the next day or so , keep checking and thanks for the reviews....

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Oh my god another ryhme,
we may have won the match this time.

Question 3 was in the air,
and Harryshottie soon was there.

If she's right, the match is done,
and Gryffindor, the best!, has won.

But in the end its not who wins,
it's sportsmanship and other things.

Like how you play and how you lose,
how you cheer and what you use.

We'll band together, four houses one,
good over evil, until it's done.

Lord Voldemort's returned to fight,
and, all as one we'll do what's right.

So Congratulations to Red and Gold,
if we are right and Snitch we hold,

But also too for Slytherin,
cause in the end, we all will win.



GO GO GRYFFINDOR and SLYTHERIN

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I liked that. You dont' see too many cheers that emphasize sportsmanship.
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thanks Kris,

Okay here it is, Professor Phoebe Phoenix requested a Valentine's Day poem about my favorite couple, it would have been easy to pick Harry and Cho or something like that, I chose to pick a different couple that I feel captures the V-day and the HP series so far....hope you enjoy it too.....Spots


Valentine Hearts


Both Gryffindors of days gone past, their love did there commence,
and to this day, so much has changed, yet love grows ever since.

Both students of the Hogwarts School, he dashing, her so sweet,
they rarely dared to break the rules, 'cept late at night, they'd meet.

To share each other's company and plan upcoming things,
to stay together, come what may, see what the future brings.

The times were good but evil lurked outside their peaceful world,
old bitterness once thought as dead, was once again unfurled.

The weekends spent together would be joyous, it is true,
trips to the shops in Hogemeade, time spent loving, just the two.

While others fought the battle, they began to start their life,
to begin a family was enough, for this young man and wife.

Their firsts were Bill and Charlie, full of freckles and red hair,
and not much later Percy came to join his brothers there.

Then came the two that parents dread, twin jokers to the core,
the ones most parents say "that's it" we're never having more.

But for these two, their love was such, they couldn't stop just there,
so in came Ron, same puzzled look, more freckles, more red hair.

Alas, the time had come to change the bantor of this throng,
the parents' dreams were answered when sweet Ginny came along.

Who'd ever think that such a group could come from just these two,
the Weasleys are a family who's bloodline's old and true.

On Molly's side, maternity, to take care of her young,
for Arthur's it the ministry to finish what's begun.

She stays at home to tend the house, make supper, beat the rugs,
he goes to work studying muggle-things, their batteries and their plugs.

Each night they come together and are thankful for their life,
they share what many long for between a husband and a wife.


Seven children raised as wizards in a time of evil choice,
they stand behind their parents' love for goodness, as one voice.

It's the Order versus Eaters, in a match that none can win,
for when it's finally over, a new life we'll all begin.

But for Arthur and sweet Molly, and their happy family,
each day they spend together shows how rewarding life can be.

For two who fell in love back then, what little did they know,
how each would need the other's heart to help their true love grow.

So on this Day of Valentines we celebrate their hearts,
the Weasley two that grew to nine, and this is how it starts.

Both Gryffindors of days gone past, their love did there commence,
and to this day, so much has changed, yet love grows ever since.


Happy Valentine's Day everyone……



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Wow. That was beautiful. I really LOVE that you picked Molly and Arthur. The Weasleys are awesome.

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Sir Spots! Nice job, once again. I really love Molly and Arthur, and I'm glad that you decided to showcase an example of lasting love and devotion, rather than just a favorite "ship."

Nice work...

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thanks Kris and Erin, I'm not sure which I enjoy more, the poems or the RP, okay,, I'll do both........


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I luv the one about Arthur ad Molly. It's really good. You have talent!
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That was a good one on Arthur and Molly. Not a lot of things are done on them.
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