thanks the next one isn't a ship poem but im planning to writ more of those

thanks. i love your avvie by the way

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ok heres another one:

Dumbledore, Dumbledore,
True and Wise,
It's a good thing he's headmaster,
'Cause you can go to him for advice,
He's never afraid,
Nor angry or mean,
It's a shame he died,
Now there's no hope for me

Wow Hibbah!!!! These are amazing....I love them!! Keep it up!! They're really good!!

thanks i just wish other people would post here

Great poem, Hibbah! I love Dumbledore. *remembers the last book*

Can't wait for more.

thanks. right now im at the library so i cant remember the poem i wrote. our computer has a virus so once it's fixed ill post a poem

Your called Loony-Luna,
And I'm just plain destructive
They think you pretty weird,
And that I should be feared,
You love to read the quibbler,
And i wish that i was Braver,
I can't help that i like you,
'Cause you understand how it feels,
Your nice even if your teased,
Which makes me really pleased,
I hope you what I feel
'cause the feelin feels so real,
I wish i could just tell you,
But I'm too scared to reavel

It's awesome, Hibbah!

Of course, I read it before.

I don't see why you don't like it..

Post more soon. ♥

i just read them all! wow i really do love poems. this is very cool.

Thanks

i know i haven't been on for a while. sorry. i'll write more later.

thanks so much! that really means a lot

i wrote another poem the other day.this poem isn't exactly about hp but i really liked it so i'm gonna post it. i wrote it based on this book called Twilight by Stephenie Meyer (best book ever, my #1 favorite). if you haven't read it you probably won't understand it. i guess if you try you could make this poem from ginny's point of view, if harry dies or when he broke up with her. so i'm not exactly braking the rules

Broken
I'm very breakable,
But you kept me in one peice
A smile, a simple kilss,
could get me through the heat.
Your hazel eyes, you marble skin.
You were all I need.
Because of you,
I always managed to stay in one peice.

But now you gone.
I'm broken.
I'm lost, without a clue.
my heart's one thousand peices,
each one thinking of you.
You've helped me get through each crisis,
guiding me towards the goal.
But through the biggest crisis,
I have no hand to hold.
"It'll be as if I never existed,"
Is not what I want to be told!

hphg- i'm really really glad you liked my poems

i knew you'd like it.

and i read the first chapter of midnight sun a while ago you should read the outtakes! they're awesome

i like that one! alot! never read midnight but i thought u were talking about Draco perhaps. i'm not sure y. i just saw marble skin and yeah. PLEASE POST MORE POEMS!

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i see how you might think that. the book is actually called Midnigh Sun but it's not out yet. it's based on this book called Twilight but it could kind of relate to hp i guess

sry i havent posted. i'm always sooooooooo busy. i''ll try to get to it asap. but i can't think of a topic. any ideas?

okay i finally got another poem :woop:
i wrote this at 11 PM so if it doesen't run smoothly, cut me some slack

Holding the body of the greatest wizard,
The white tomb stood, elegant and tall.
The silence that surrounded it
Was heavy with grief from all.
Dumbledore was gone,
Leaving many without hope.
Gone because of a second chance,
Given to the man at the end of his rope
That many betrayed him,
And killed him, devestating all.
Because of the one death,
Voldemort may never fall.

Oh man that is soooooo good! i LOVE your last two poems!

thanks

i was just rereading it and i have no idea what i meant about the last 2 lines

hee i think you added and extra word *scratches head*

thanks so much dont count on any poems in the next two and a half weeks though. school ends on the 24th and the teachers are already throwing projects at us like crazy