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| | Script Crypt (Poetry Vault) Beneath the stone and dimly lit, a place to store your wizard wit, just take the cart, beware the curse, and enjoy each other’s treasured verse… |  Have a very Harry day!! 
05-08-2006, 12:05 AM
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| | Hippogriff
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Poems Hello and welcome to my poems. At first I never wrote HP poems but since I was introduced to The Sphinx's Sofa I started writing HP poems. Here is one of them (Harry's Pov): The sun is warm against my soft skin, The wind is light and gentle as i breathe the fresh air in, I look at all the children playing, like they have no fear in the world, I wish i was like them, But i have to many worries to behold, The Dark Lord has rised again, And he'll do anything to kill me, Just like he killed my parents, Who stood strong and fearless, I will have to face hime someday, And be the hero that I am, I'll take his life from him, Like he did to my family and freinds, I'll say "Avada Kedavra", Then he'll fall and be no more, And from that day on, I'll be the greatest wizard ever known! I hope you like it 
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05-11-2006, 01:27 AM
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no replys? | |
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05-11-2006, 05:20 AM
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What do you mean no replies? o_0. I see a reply right here.  Your poetry is very good Hibbah. I like it. I like Harry's thinking too. 
Maxie
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05-11-2006, 11:12 PM
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 yaay. hiiii. thanks im glad you like them. ill post another one on Saturday.  | |
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05-12-2006, 02:18 AM
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awesome  great job!!!! Quote: |
Originally Posted by jk fan I'll say "Avada Kedavra", | hehehehehe i love that!! | |
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05-12-2006, 01:16 PM
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Originally Posted by jk fan yaay. hiiii. thanks im glad you like them. ill post another one on Saturday. | I just can't wait but Saturday is my paper.  I'll try to be online though. I think I can manage it...
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05-12-2006, 01:20 PM
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um ggeeee....sure a godd one | |
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05-12-2006, 10:41 PM
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Originally Posted by argentinaz_angel awesome great job!!!!
hehehehehe i love that!! | thanks. this is the HP poem iver written Quote: |
um ggeeee....sure a godd one | thanks im so glad you liked them.
i promis ill post one tommorow | |
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05-12-2006, 11:18 PM
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|  My name's not JoMessy Hair FanRadio ArtistCentaur
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Hibbah, you're writing poems? That's awesome! It's a really good poem. I really loved it, but I suggest you add some more rhyme to it, and I can help you with that if you need. Just PM me if you do! Can't wait for you next poem. *glomps* ♥♥♥
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05-12-2006, 11:43 PM
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Originally Posted by JoHermione Hibbah, you're writing poems? That's awesome! It's a really good poem. I really loved it, but I suggest you add some more rhyme to it, and I can help you with that if you need. Just PM me if you do!
Can't wait for you next poem. *glomps*
♥♥♥ | thanks. some of my poems rhyme and some don't. but if i do need any help i will PM you. | |
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05-13-2006, 01:10 PM
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heres another poem. this is the first HP poem i have ever written: Hogwarts is where i want to be, There are games to play, And treasures to see, McGonagell's cool, But Snape's a ghoul, There's Histery of Magic, Transfiguration too, So much to learn, So much to do, It all starts With a boat ride to school tell me what you think
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05-13-2006, 01:21 PM
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HAHA! I love this part.
It's a very nice poem, Hibbah! Update more when you can.
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05-14-2006, 12:14 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Originally Posted by JoHermione HAHA! I love this part.
It's a very nice poem, Hibbah! Update more when you can.
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| thanks. it was my very first HP poem ive actually been writing for a while, i just haven't been telling anyone
it turns out i forgot two line in the poem so i have to edit it. | |
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05-19-2006, 11:03 AM
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Lovely new poem Hibbah. I love it. It's really great. *loves* Post again soon. And Snape is a ghoul. LOL.
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05-19-2006, 10:10 PM
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yeah he is. ill post on Thursday, my last day of school. and ill probably right a poem about how Harry feels when the Hogwarts term is over | |
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05-20-2006, 08:25 PM
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I'll be waiting. Meanwhile I have to go update my fic: Faraway Stars. See you when you have another poem up love. *huggles*
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05-22-2006, 01:48 AM
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I'm really bored so i decided to post another poem(H/G): Neville is a great dancer, But it is you who i fancy, I don't care about Voldemort, Or your worry for me, I just want you to embrace me, In your strong but gentle arms, Dark times lie ahead, And i need a shoulder to cry on, Just put your worries aside, And take me in your arms, i can be taken from you quickly, And you'll regret it for very long i hope you like it | |
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05-26-2006, 04:21 PM
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Yay. A H/G poem! I love that ship.
Amazingly written. Shows what she's really thinking of!
Can't wait for your next poem. ♥
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05-27-2006, 02:55 AM
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 thanks. im so glad you liked it. im glad someone posted | |
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05-29-2006, 05:07 PM
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ooooooooo Hibbah I love them they're very very good!!!!!!! I can't wait until u post another one!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I especially like the H/g poem!! But they are all excellent!!!!!!! | |
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05-30-2006, 01:34 AM
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hi Cheyenne. im glad you like them ill post another one tommorow. it'll be R/HR poem | |
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05-30-2006, 05:45 PM
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I fight with you a lot,
It's a great way to hide my feelings,
I don't listen to my heart,
I'm afraid it'll be broken,
Although i try to deny it,
I love you dearly,
The Dark Lord has rised,
And I'm afraid you'll be taken,
So for now I'll hold on to you,
And cherish the good times we've had,
I hope you feel the same,
'cause if ou don't I'll be heart broken *frowns* i didn't like this one too much. it should have rhymed more. tell me what you think. | |
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