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Old 04-20-2008, 11:22 PM   #26 (permalink)
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I absolutely loooove George.
This story makes me jealous that I'm not Allie! xD
I still love it though, PAMS!
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Old 04-21-2008, 06:31 AM   #27 (permalink)
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oooh!!!! I am just cracking up right now!! That was sooo good! When Hannah told Allie about Gorge and Goerge heard, that was really funny!
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That was classic!! Very good cant wait for more.
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This story makes me jealous that I'm not Allie! xD
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Thanks Shirel, I liek to make people laugh! I'm really glad you came to read my FF! I rushed writing this jsut for you!

For the next week I avoided George, as much as possible. I was way too embarrassed to even look at him after what happened. (And trust me; I could stare at him for hours.)
Saturday finally came, and me and Neville, who was going to help set up, walked to the portrait of the old women in a chair.
"Hello, I'm here to set up for the sleepover. And, I also have the list of the girls coming, and the password."
"You must be Allie." said the old women, "Professor McGonagall told me everything last night. The other girl, Hannah, is here too. She told me to tell you when you got here. Now, let me see that list, my dear."
She stuck out her hand, and it came out of the portrait. I was a little surprised, never seeing a portrait do that before, but I gave her the list any way, and she started to read it.
"When we get in there, don't act shy around Hannah again." I said.
"Coming from the person who has been avoiding George all week."
"That's different; I have a legit reason to avoid him. You have no reason to be shy!"
"Yes, I do! Did you see what I made in Transfiguration! That was embarrassing!"
"You make horrifying creatures every class, trust me when I tell you this, we are all used to it. I actually, like to name them. The last one, I call a Batrat, because by the end of the class, it looked like a rat with bat wings. Bat-rat, it’s actually kind of fun to say."
He stared blankly at me.
"What’s the matter, nervous?" I said.
"No, just wondering why my best friend is such a horrible person!"
"Stop complaining, and get inside."
"The password." said the old lady.
"Aqua portat” I said.
"I was told not to let boy’s in." she said staring at Neville.
"It's OK," I said,” he's only here to help set up. He will be gone before the party begins."
"Fine." the old lady replied, and she swung open.
We walked in, and saw Hannah laying down sleeping bags.
"Hey, Hannah" I said.
"Hey." said Neville.
"Hey, you two. I laid out the sleeping bags, so that’s all there is left to do is set up the tables to put the food on, and get the food."" Hannah said.
"That’s great! Why don't I go get the food, and you, and Neville set up the tables."
"Sounds good." said Hannah
"Yea." said Neville trying his best not to seem shy.
I left the room, and walked down to the kitchens. I tickled the pair, then turned the door knob, opened the door, and guess who I saw. Just guess.
"Hi Allie."
"Hi George." I said looking away from him.
"What are you doing down here?" he asked.
"Just getting food for the sleepover." I mumbled, hoping he wouldn't remember.
"The sleepover that you’re going to tell everyone what happened on our date?"
He remembered. Great.
Dobby came running up to me. "What can I get you, miss?"
"The usual, except double." I replied.
"You have a usual?"
"Yes, I come here a lot for other sleepovers. You know, with just the Gryffindor's." I said hoping to change the subject.
"Oh, well. HEY! Don't try and change the subject."
" I wasn't. You asked."
"Yes. You were -and that's your usual."
Dobby had come back with about ten cartons of ice-cream, and cookie dough, tons of candy, butterbeer, and two boxes of pizza.
"Doubled."
"Why is there raw cookie dough?"
"Why wouldn't there be?"
He just stood there, looking confused.
"Would you like me to bring this to the place, miss?" asked Dobby.
"No, I will just do two trips, but thanks, Dobby."
"Why don't I take half?" asked George.
"Oh, umm..." I said, looking for an excuse to say no, but there was none, "okay."
He took the rest, and then we both left the kitchens. We walked in silence for a little while, but then he said,
"What exactly are you going to tell them?"
"You were there."
"Yes, I was. But, I've always wanted to hear what happened from a girl’s point of view."
"The same as yours but add a lot more OMG's!"
"Interesting." he said.
We got to the portrait.
"Aqua portat." I said.
"He can't come in." said the old lady.
"He's just dropping off the food!"
"But, the other boy left!"
"He did?" You can't leave Neville alone for five minutes. "Well, he will be gone in five minutes, if you just let him drop off the food."
"Fine." She swung open.
We walked in, and saw Susan Bones, and Hannah.
"Hey. Susan."
"Hey, Allie. OOO look who's with her Hannah, her boyfriend!"
"SUSAN!" said Hannah.
I could feel myself turning red, again. I put down the food, turned to George, and said,
"Well, I’m going to go die now." And quickly left the room, and walked down the hall, to the knight, sat down, and rested my head on my knees.
"Wow, your friends like to embarrass you, don’t they?"
It was George.
"Go away."
"And why would I do that?" he said, sitting down next to me, and putting his arm around me.
I know I was really embarrassed, but I couldn't help thinking; OMG!!
"So, did you really tell them that I was your boyfriend?"
"No, I didn't tell them anything. Maybe in my head I thought about it, but in my head, I also convinced myself I could eat all that food, and not gain any weight." I looked at George. "I've learned not to go by what my head tells me."
"Well, what if I said, you should listen to your head this time?"
"Really?" I said trying to hide the excitement in my voice.
"Yea."
Then, he kissed me. Not on the cheek. A real kiss.
We broke apart.
"How many OMG's are in this story?" he said
I laughed.
"I think, about a billion."


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Old 04-21-2008, 03:22 PM   #29 (permalink)
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OMG, he kissed her!!!! Poor Neville he needs to be not so shy.

I really need to stop getting distracted in the WWW

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This was wayyyyyy cuuuute! I absolutely looved it!
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Old 04-21-2008, 10:33 PM   #31 (permalink)
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exactly my thoguhts about latin. Even tho JKR does use it in the books. Like in the fourth book; Prirori Incantatem means proir incantation, but thats a obvoius one. ANother one in the sixth book is Felix Felicis which is a latin adjective and means lucky, succesfull, fortunate
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Ther will only be about 4 more post of her fourth year. After this it will go to the Yule Ball, and then to the end of the year.

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After sitting with George for another half an hour, we said good-bye, and I went to go find Neville. I found him in the library, and told him everything that just happened. He told me, he was happy for me, with much less excitement than I expected. I ran out of the library, thinking that I would probably get a better reaction at the sleepover tonight.

************
It was finally time. Hannah and I had just finished double checking everything when the girls started to arrive.
When everyone was there, they wasted no time cornering me, and making me tell them everything that happened, from the date, to that afternoon. After much excitement, and about a million OMG's from Lavender and Parvarti, I said,
"So, what about you guys?"
Everyone suddenly got quiet.
"Come on," I said "I only promised you one story and gave you two! So, someone better tell me something."
"Well," said Susan," Hannah likes somebody! Don't you Hannah?"
"Umm..." said Hannah turning red.
"It's Neville!" said Susan.
"SUSAN!" Hannah shouted, "You guys can not tell anybody!"
"Wait, Neville Longbottom?" I said.
"Yes." said Hannah "Wait a second, isn't he like your best friend?
"Yea."
"Does he like me?"
"Yes." I thought.
"Can't tell you that, sorry." I said out loud.
"Why not?"
"Because I promised Neville, I wouldn't tell anyone, and I have told him way too much to brake my promises."
"But, he does like someone?" said Ginny.
"Yes." I said smiling at Hannah, trying to give her a hint, that it was her.
I saw her smile. She got the hint.
The rest of the sleepover was just like any other one. We stayed up all night gossiping, and ate all the food I had brought from the kitchens.

*****************
After, Hannah and I finished cleaning up, I went back to the common room, and found Neville.
"Neville, you have to ask Hannah out!"
"Does she like me?"
"Can't tell you that."
"Why not?"
"I promised her that I wouldn't." I said. This conversation sounded very familiar.
"But, she does like someone?"
"Yes." I said smiling at him, trying to give a hint that it was him.
He didn't get it.
"Just ask her!" I said annoyed.
"Fine, I will." he said.
"When?"
"When the time is right." he said. Then, he got up, and walked out of the common room.
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Poor Neville.. He is going to have to learn when a girl is hinting at him. He better ask Hannah to the Yule Ball...Very good by the way! Cant wait for more!
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Oooh! This is getting sooo good!!
Allie and Goege are to totally meant for eachother!
Do you mean that in four posts you're finishing this FF???
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Do you mean that in four posts you're finishing this FF???
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haha, thanx! No, i wont be finishing it. This will go to the end of Allie's seventh year. But, I will be finishing her fourth year soon, 5 post at the most.

I will have a new post sometime this week, I wont be able to write as much since my vacation is over. I will try to post as soon as possible!
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Heres the next chapter!!

"Neville, concentrate." I said.
I've been tutoring Neville for an hour, and he still can't transfigure a rat into a bird.
"I am!" he said, trying again, and managing to make a bird with a rats head.
"Your so close, just-" was all I managed to say before someone covered my eyes.
"Guess who?"
"George!"
"How did you know?" he said turning me around, then kissing me.
"Mr. Weasley, and Ms. Johnson, can I have you attention please?"
We instantly broke apart, and I turned my head, it was Professor McGonagall. How does she keep turning up everywhere?
"Now, that I have everybody's attention," she said glaring at me, and George; I had to force myself not to laugh, "I have come here to tell you all about the Yule Ball. The Yule Ball is a tradition of the Triwizard Tournament. Students fourth year and up will be allowed to go, but you may invite younger guest if you wish. This is a formal event, so dress robes are required. The ball will be on Christmas day, starting at eight o'clock and ending at midnight in the Great Hall. There will be a Hogsmeade trip this weekend for those in need of dress robes. I expect you all to be on your best behavior and not to embarrass the school."
"Oh, and Potter, all the champions will have to dance, at the beginning of the ball." she added.
"But, I can't dance, Professor!"
"Then learn." she said coldly, and left the room.
"A ball, how exciting!" said Hermione.
"I know! We all have to go dress shopping this weekend!" I said.
"But, what if no one asks me? I’m only in my third year!" Ginny said.
"Don’t worry about it Ginny, someone will ask you."
"What if someone doesn't ask me? Said Hermione, suddenly worried.
"Yea, it's pathetic for a girl to go alone." said Ron.
"No it's not!" I said, "It just means that she was either to good for the person that asked her, or no one was brave enough too! It's more pathetic for a boy, because that means either they got turned down, or they were to shy to ask someone!"
Ron didn't say anything.
"So, Allie, will you go to the ball with me?" asked George.
"Of course." I answered. I turned to Neville,
"So, is the right time?"
"I guess, but...”
"Come on." I said grabbing Neville.
"Where are we going?"
"To find Hannah."
"But-"
"Come on, Neville."
"Fine."
We walked down to the third floor before we found Hannah with a group of her friends.
"I can't she’s with her friends."
"So ask to talk to her alone!"
"No, then all her friends will start to giggle, and that will make me nervous, and-"
"Fine," I said, "go to the library. I'll make sure she goes down there alone."
Neville quickly agreed, and turned to go to the library. I walked over to Hannah.
"Hannah, sorry to bother you, but I don't really understand the Charms homework. Do you mind helping me?"
"Sure. Why don’t we go to the library?" she said.
"OK."
We were half way to the library before I told her that I had forgotten my Charms stuff, and that I would meet her there. I walked up to Gryffindor Tower, where everyone interrogated me on where Neville and I went. I told them they would find out later, grabbed my Charms book, and walked back down to the library. When I found Hannah, she seemed to be in some sort of day dream.
"Hannah," I asked, "are you OK?"
"Huh? Oh, yes, I'm fine. You'll never believe what just happened! Neville asked me to the Yule Ball!"
"That’s great, Hannah!" I said, "Do you have a dress?"
"No, not yet."
"Then, why don't you come to Hogsmeade with me, Hermione, and Ginny this weekend? Were going to buy dresses."
"That sounds great!"

*******************************************
When Saturday finally came, we met Hannah at the Great Hall, and all went to Hogsmeade. We shopped for three hours before we all found the perfect dress, then we went to the Three Broomsticks.
"So, Ginny," said Hannah, "whose asked you?"
"Michael Corner, he is a Ravenclaw in your year."
"What about you, Hermione?" I said.
"Viktor Krum."
"What?!" Hannah, Ginny, and I screamed at the same time.
"Well, he came up to me in the library, and said that he had wanted to talk to me for a long time, but was to shy. Then, he asked me to the ball, and I said yes."
"OK, you guys, this is going to be the best night ever!"


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I loved it! And yay for Neville! He asked Hannah!! Go Neville
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I agree! That is definitley going to be some night! Way to go Neviile! I never thought he would get the courage.
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OMG love the story

Soo sweet Allie and Goerge sound great together

And Neville and Hannah ahhhhhhhhh so happy 4 them

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Thank you, and thanx for reading my FF!!Im glad you like the story!!

Sorry I dont have a post for you yet , but i have really bad writers block for this post!! I seemed to have everything planned out for her fourth year except the yule ball!! But dont worry, i already have some written and im going to try to post this weekend...if i dont have a post by Monday i want you guys to bug me untill i post!!
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The room was in complete ciaos. Everywhere you turned there was girl, either looking for the perfect shoes, or trying to decide what color eye shadow to wear. In the center of all this was me and Ginny, waiting for the worst of all of them, Hermione.
"Are you guys sure I look alright?"
"Yes!" said Ginny, "Can we please go now! We were supposed to meet everyone in front of the Great Hall ten minutes ago!" We were both starting to lose are patience.
"OK, let’s go."
"Finally" I sighed, as we made are way down to the Great Hall, to meet George, Neville, Hannah, Michael, and Krum.
On are way down we met Hannah, and then we walked to the Great Hall, and started to scan the crowd for our dates. I spotted Fred, George, and Neville standing just a few feet in front of us. I told Hannah, and then I went to tap George on the shoulder.
"George."
"Well it’s about time; you guys are fifteen min...Wow. You look...wow. I mean, wow...."
"I’m going to take that as a compliment." I laughed.
He nodded. That’s when I saw Neville, standing there, not saying anything, and looking kind of shocked. I thought Neville was over his shyness thing, unless.....
"Hannah," I whispered so only she could hear, "when Neville asked you to the ball, he did speak, and you know, use actual words, right?"
"Sort of. He did speak, but using actual words. I did manage to hear 'you', 'ball', and 'me'. I thought he was being rather cute, actually, acting all nervous."
Too bad that wasn't an act. Still it was a step up from this.
"Say something!" I mouthed to Neville.
"You look...uhh...you look v-very pretty, Hannah.” said Neville nervously.
"Thank you, Neville!"
"Why don’t we go find a table?" said George.
We walked into the Great Hall, which was decorated with its usual twelve Christmas tree’s, and other Christmas decorations, except instead of four giant tables, there were many small ones. We picked one in the middle of the hall, and were soon joined by Ginny, Michael, Fred, Angelina, Ron, and Padma.
"I’m hungry! When is the ball going to start?" whined Ron, for the billionth time.
"Any minute now." I said.
Just then, the four champions, and there dates marched into the hall, and took there seat’s at the very first table. Finally, now we cane at. But no food magically appeared in our plates. I looked around and saw Dumbledore saying something to his plate, then food appearing. I looked at my plate,
"Umm, Lobster?"
Lobster suddenly appeared in my plate; the rest of the table did the same.
"Hermione must love this," said Ron sarcastically, “all this must be a ton of more work for the house-elves."
"She looks like she is having a good time." said Neville looking over at their table. Ron also looked.
"Ugh, I can't believe she is here with Krum." he said with a look of disgust on his face.
"Sounds like someone is jealous." said Fred.
"I AM NOT!! I just think that she shouldn’t be here with the enemy, that’s all!"
"The enemy?" Ginny laughed.
"Isn't this ball supposed to be about getting to know the student's from the other schools?" asked Hannah.
"Well....I still think he's the enemy."
"CAN EVERYONE IN THE HALL PLEASE STAND UP!" yelled Dumbledore.
Everyone obeyed immediately. The, with a wave of his wand , all the tables disappeared to make a giant dance floor, and a stage appeared. As the four champions walked onto the dance floor, some wizard band walked onto the stage , and started to play a very classical tune. The Champions started to do a waltz, and soon everyone joined in, including George and I. Once the song was over, there was some polite clapping before the band started playing a much faster song.
George and I started dancing (if you could call it dancing) wildly. We literally danced the night