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11-04-2009, 08:07 AM
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| | Ashwinder
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Magical Games & Sports |  As the Sun Sets - Sa13+
Hey, I'm Lily! This is my 6th fic! Yep! Hope you enjoy it!
Disclaimer: I do not claim anything but the plot and the title. The HP world belongs to J.K. Rowling!
made by: me! Chapter #1 - The Dark Lord Rising "But why..." she asked, holding his hand up against her cheek.
"I have a job to do! How could we stay together?" he smiled sadly, brushing her hair gently.
"'Cause if we love each other," the girl trailed off.
"Just stop! Look, if I told you I just don't wanna be with you would you leave me alone?" he snapped.
The girl growled and slapped him hard across his face.
Tearing up she shouted "I can't believe I ever loved you!"
He squinted at her and then said "I'm sorry, but I have to leave you!"
The slim girl ran off holding her face, she slipped down into the muddy grass.
From behind her a voice screamed the killing curse.
Ginny turned around, chest heaving.
Harry was curled around his feet.
Ginny gasped.
"Why hello... what is it? Ginny? Why I haven't met you since you were 11!" Voldemort smirked.
"If your gonna kill me, kill me now!" Ginny growled not even taking out her wand.
"All right then!" Voldemort smiled sourly.
Pulling out his wand he uttered the words...
Ginny rose, screaming. "Ginny! You woke me up again!" shouted Ronald Weasley peered through the door. "What is wrong with you?" "Nightmare, thank you very much!" Ginny snapped. "God, every night you have night mares, He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named is a right pain!"
Ginny nodded him off and fell back into her bed, breathing heavy.
Turning Ginny thought of his face.
His messy, ash, black hair.
His deep, emerald, eyes.
Ginny kicked off the covers that screwed her down to the bed.
Standing up, Ginny slipped her feet into her slippers.
He would be arriving in just 3 weeks... -Index-
Chapter #2! Life has Big and Small Problems!
Chapter #3! Muggle Mayhem!
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11-05-2009, 04:27 AM
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| | Niffler
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AHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Lilyluff has a new storrryyyy!!!!!!!!
FIRST READER/REVIEWER/FAN!!!! 
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I really like the plot hun!
So Voldemort is coming in a few weeks?!?
PAMS!!!
Jess(:
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11-05-2009, 06:09 AM
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| | Gnome
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WOW this is an amazing story so far.... can't wait for more
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11-05-2009, 08:50 AM
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| | Ashwinder
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Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron  AHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Lilyluff has a new storrryyyy!!!!!!!!
FIRST READER/REVIEWER/FAN!!!!
<3333333
I really like the plot hun!
So Voldemort is coming in a few weeks?!?
PAMS!!!
Jess(: Thanks Jess!
Being my first fan I'll have to see that you get something...
It's Harry coming in a few weeks!
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Originally Posted by harrypotter4ever WOW this is an amazing story so far.... can't wait for more
but wat year is this set in is it after 7th year or way b4?? Thanks!
Year 7!
~Lily
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11-05-2009, 11:08 AM
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| | Gnome
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WOWZERS *new reader*
love this stoty so far! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS! ok?
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11-05-2009, 12:46 PM
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WOOW! I'm loving this story soo far it's soo good. I can't wait for the next chapter! PAM PAM PAMSSSSSS!!!!!
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11-05-2009, 01:30 PM
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awesome!!!! PAMS PAMS PAMS! | |
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11-05-2009, 05:04 PM
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| | Niffler
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hey lily...nice post...want to know more...
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11-05-2009, 06:25 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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 thank you batcave! Chapter #2! Life has big and small problems
Ginny dragged her feet down the creaking stairs.
With the sleep still stuck on her dark eyelashes, everything was slightly blurred. The smell of bacon and eggs filled her nostrils. “Mommy... whats for breakfast?” Ginny asked sheepishly. “Food, Ginny, dear!” smiled Molly Weasley, coming over to Ginny and squeezing Ginny's face slightly.
Ginny rolled her eyes but smiled all the same.
All of a sudden, the lid of a tall pot started to jump and frothy bubbles slid down the metal. “Oh god, not the porridge! We're in a war! Porridge is hard to find!” Mrs. Weasley screamed running over to her over-flowing pot. “Calm down, mum! Just use a bit of magic!” Ginny smiled, slipping Mrs. Weasley's wand out of her apron.
Molly frowned but took the wand mumbling under her breath and Ginny smiled in surprise when she heard a tiny curse. “That was gorgeous, mum!” Ginny mumbled, rubbing her (what-felt-like over-grown) stomach. “Thanks sweetie!” Mrs. Weasley smiled warmly, then added thinly “I'm going to Diagon Alley!” “Mom, can I-” “No!” Mrs. Weasley said sharply. “It's too dangerous!” “Then why are you going?!?” Ginny demanded, banging the table.
Mrs. Weasley's eyelids fell over her eyes in stress. “I need to check on the twins!” “Mom, I'm sure there fine!” Ginny said running over to her mother and flinging her arms around her mothers plump figure. “I'm going out to play a bit of quidditch!” Ron called, his broom over his shoulder. “Just don't go any further than the orchard or mom will have a heart attack!” Ginny shouted, flicking through a muggle magazine. Ginny grimaced when the door slammed, meaning Ron was
gone. Shaking her head she turned the page.
The thin paper slipped through her smooth skin.
Ginny swore a loud as trickle of blood oozed from the cut.
Frowning Ginny stumbled to the sink.
Sticking her finger under the hot water, she frowned. “Dear god, you clumsy little-” she muttered to herself.
As the hot water pushed against her skin making it flap back slightly, Ginny clenched her teeth. 'You've been through a lot worse!' she thought. “My god, I gave birth to pr*ts!” came the strained voice of Molly Weasley. “Mum?” Ginny asked turning off the rusty tap. “They keep a dragon in the basement!” Mrs. Weasley continued as she walked into the small kitchen.
Ginny shook her head but smiled. “Where's Ron?” Mrs. Weasley asked frowning. “Oh right, yeah...” “Calm down, mum! Jeez, I didn't die!” Ron rolled his eyes, backing into wall. “Ronald, what if deatheaters found you?” screamed Mrs. Weasley. “ They didn't!” “But what if they did?!?” “But they didn't mum!” Ron sighed in annoyance. “The neighbors could have seen you is well! Then deatheaters would have come anyway!” Mrs. Weasley exclaimed, beads of sweat skimming her forehead.
Ron rolled his eyes and turned on his heels.
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11-05-2009, 09:19 PM
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“Calm down, mum! Jeez, I didn't die!” Ron rolled his eyes, backing into wall. “Ronald, what if deatheaters found you?” screamed Mrs. Weasley. “They didn't!” “But what if they did?!?” “But they didn't mum!” Ron sighed in annoyance.
“The neighbors could have seen you is well! Then deatheaters would have come anyway!” Mrs. Weasley exclaimed, beads of sweat skimming her forehead.
Ron rolled his eyes and turned on his heels. BRAVO BRAVO!!!!! YOURE A VERY GOOD WRITER AND I LUVED THIS PART!!!!!!!! | |
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11-06-2009, 04:01 AM
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11-06-2009, 04:13 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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Originally Posted by Jenny Malfoy WOWZERS *new reader*
love this stoty so far! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS! ok? Gotcha! Quote:
Originally Posted by emerald dawn WOOW! I'm loving this story soo far it's soo good. I can't wait for the next chapter! PAM PAM PAMSSSSSS!!!!! Thank you! Quote:
Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraquel! awesome!!!! PAMS PAMS PAMS! Why, thank you! Quote:
Originally Posted by harita hey lily...nice post...want to know more... I'm sure you do... Quote:
Originally Posted by draco'sgirlraque! BRAVO BRAVO!!!!! YOURE A VERY GOOD WRITER AND I LUVED THIS PART!!!!!!!! Oh, why thank you, sweety! I can promise Draco but not H/D...
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11-07-2009, 03:48 AM
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Oooo lily i luv it!! can't wait for more!! New Reader!
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11-08-2009, 08:27 AM
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Originally Posted by potionsmater22 Oooo lily i luv it!! can't wait for more!! New Reader!
*Sammy* Thanks Sammy!
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I can promise Draco but not H/D...
I mean are Draco and Hermione going to be in the story yet?!?
I can't wait for more of your fantastic story Lilyluff!
Jess(:
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11-08-2009, 02:16 PM
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I can't wait for more of your fantastic story Lilyluff!
Jess(: Ohh yeah... 
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11-08-2009, 09:58 PM
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11-09-2009, 04:02 AM
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New Reader! I love it!! Can't wait to see how Hermoine and Draco fit into this!!!!
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11-10-2009, 06:33 PM
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Originally Posted by cait bragg Oh can't wait for more!!!! New Reader Welcome to our fic family! Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape New Reader! I love it!! Can't wait to see how Hermoine and Draco fit into this!!!! SPOILER: you'll see a lot of draco, but in due time...
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Chapter #3! Muggle Mayhem!
Hermione Jean Granger screamed herself awake.
“Merlin's beard!” she muttered, feeling her sleepwear stick to her sweat skin. She begged her mind not to replay the dream she just had but nightmares are always planted in your mind for a day or two.
She tangled her fingers Ronald Weasley's auburn hair but would not kiss him, refused to kiss him.
It just didn't feel right.
Ron leaned towards her but she just backed off.
“Whats up, 'Mione?” he asked reaching out to twirl a lock of Hermione's hair.
Hermione jumped back, making her hair frizz slightly more.
“Your not the real Ron!” she screamed feeling the frame of a window scratch her back.
“True right you are!” Ron snarled spinning around in circles.
Slowly, to Hermione's horror, his skin began to tear off to reveal Bellatrix Lestrange.
“Bellatrix...” Hermione mouthed, to shocked to make a sound.
“Yes, 'Mione,” she smirked. “I all so killed your little Won-won!”
Hermione suddenly felt bubbles in her stomach.
“Now shall I put you out of your misery?” Bellatrix smiled sourly, making Hermione's stomach turn.
Bellatrix raised a dagger and plunged it through Hermione's heart...
Hermione felt chill's icy finger on her spine.
Yawning, she stood up and walked down stairs.
Hermione looked in the mirror in the hallway.
Flattening her hair, Hermione smiled weakly to herself.
“'Mione!” Mr. Granger called from the sitting room.
“Your going to Weaslbey's house today!” grunted Hermione's dad.
“Weasley, Dad!” Hermione laughed.
“Yeah, yeah, yeah! There's a girl there, right?” Mr. Granger asked, nervous. Hermione rolled her eyes. “Yes, daddy!”
“Breakfast is ready!” Mrs. Granger called from the kitchen.
“Oh my lovely, how do you do it?” asked Mr. Granger, rubbing his plump belly. Mrs. Granger smiled sweetly. “Now hush hun, 'Mione has something to tell us!”
Hermione felt something sink inside her stomach.
“N-not tell, d-do!” Hermione let the burning tears fall.
“'Mione, whats wrong?” Mrs. Granger came over to comfort her only daughter. “I have-have to do this to protect you...” and regretting it fully, she pulled out the portkey.
“I promise I will find ye when the war is over...”
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awww! poor Hermione..
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11-12-2009, 02:58 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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| | Niffler
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aw...how so weet her dad was worrying about Mione staying with guys all around her...hehehe...but it was sad too that Mione had to go away from her parents...pams...and nice post banners you are putting up...cool...
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11-13-2009, 02:14 PM
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awww thats soooo sad! hope she feels better!! PAMS
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