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04-09-2008, 01:23 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katrina Adelia Devereux First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Gabriella Kayla Doucette Magical Education | So Different Yet So Alike - Sa13+ Hi! I'm Amrita, and this is my third fanfic on SS  ! This is a fic about......well, read on and try to guess!
Chapter 1-Introduction A long time back, when I was a kid, I used to think that I'm never going to fit in and be accepted. My elder sister thought I was weak. My younger sister had no respect for me and didn't think much of me. I was always a disapppointment to Mom and Dad, and they never really cared about me. My sisters were their pride and joy. I was supposed to be Sorted into another House at Hogwarts, but I begged the Hat to put me in the House I knew my parents would prefer. It agreed only because it sensed my desperation: desperation to not disappoint, once again. I was always unhappy. Don't get me wrong; they never neglected me. I was showered with luxuries, given whatever I desired, and my every need was fulfilled. But I never got the thing I needed most: someone who cared about me. I felt that no one understands me, and no one ever would. But finally, I've found that person: someone who cares, someone who accepts me as I am, someone who like- maybe loves- me. Only problem? Our families are hate each other. You know, there's no reason for me to be unhappy. Anyone who saw me would say that. I have loving, caring parents, a great sibling, and so many friends who are like family to me. I had a happy childhood, I have a great home, and I'm in the House I always wanted to be in. I get good grades and I'm intelligent enough to be in out of school by now. To everyone else, I'm a happy, normal girl, because I have everything a girl could want, right? Not. I have everything but what I want most: the guy I like- maybe love. Only problem? Our families can't stand each other.
Well, as you may have realized, this is a story about my favourite ship, Rose and Scorpius, two people from different backgrounds who are madly in love with each other. Will they manage to overcome their families' hatred? Or will they be forced apart? And through all this, can they manage to find the person who is wreaking havoc through the school and the wizarding world?
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04-11-2008, 07:03 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ariana Dumbledore Department of Mysteries | First To Post!!! YAY! I'm first to post!
I love Rose and Scorpius ships! They would make such a cute couple and would make all previous fueds between weasleys, potters and malfoys disapear.
Who are scorpius' sisters? How old are they?
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04-12-2008, 03:37 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | [[size="4"] I love this all ready and its only a few lines long
i can tell this is going to be a reall really good fan fic
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04-12-2008, 05:02 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | I love Rose/ Scorpius ships! So as you can probably guess, I already love the story, PAMS!! |
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04-12-2008, 04:44 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katrina Adelia Devereux First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Gabriella Kayla Doucette Magical Education | 3 readers already!  Well, this will be written using Scorpius' POV in one chapter and Rose's in the next. This one will be written from Scorpius' POV so you can know a bit more about his family and his history. Chapter 2- The Malfoys
I walked down the stairs of my dorm, yawning. My day is probably going to be horrible, I thought miserably. Two tests, a vist from Mum and no meeting with Rose. I knew O.W.Ls were going to be tough, but this bad? As for Rose, since her brother nearly caught us two days ago, she's refused to meet me until next week in Hogsmeade. She's the only thing that actually keeps me going. The rest of my day is, well, just nasty looks from other Houses, tons of tests, and sneers from my sisters. I opened the door leading out of the Common Room and walked to the Great Hall, thinking about Rose. Until third year, Delanna, my elder sister, rigidly controlled whatever I did. She refused to let me go near other Houses, and especially kept me away from the Potters and the Weasleys. When we went to Hogsmeade for the first time, I had my first chance to leave her. That's when I met Rose. We were friends in private and enemies in public. Then, in fourth year, my sister was finally convinced I was never going to near a Gryffindor, she left me alone. That's when we went from friends to something else. She's not my girlfriend. We're something else........we're so close that I can't just call her that. I was jerked out of my thoughts as I entered the Great Hall and a wave of noise hit me. My eyes went automatically to the table at the far end as I searched for Rose. She was seated next her brother in the middle of the table, as usual. Her blue eyes met mine, and she gave a slight smile before returning to a conversation with her cousin Lily. I turned to the Slytherin table with a sigh. I hated sitting there, and wondered why I had been stupid enough to refuse the Hat's offer to place me in Gryffindor. The answer came to me immediately: Mum and Dad would have been furious. I went to the table and took my usual place at the very end, hoping no one would make a comment today about 'that coward Malfoy'. That's my new nickname ever since I refused to fight James Potter. I had explained to him that the reason I didn't want to fight was because I had had enough of Malfoys vs. Potters. Now he had a slightly better opinion of me. Unfortunately the rest of the House would never accept that and my parents would have gone ballistic, so I simply told them I didn't want to. But I guess the Slytherins have to have someone to pick on. "Look who's here. The biggest coward besides the Hufflepuffs," said Georgina Goyle. I hunched my shoulders and sat quietly as others joined the Malfoy bashing. Delancey and Delanna turned their heads away, as though determined to make sure no one thought they were related to me. My thoughts turned to Rose again. Her beautiful brown hair, her lovely blue eyes, her sweet smile.......trust me, I could talk for hours about her and still not be done. That was all I thought about until finally it was time for our first class. |
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04-12-2008, 06:23 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | Aww poor Scorpius, why do everyone have to pick on him, especially his sisters? They need to leave him alone, and if they don't, I shall hurt them, lol. PAMS!! |
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04-12-2008, 07:22 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katrina Adelia Devereux First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Gabriella Kayla Doucette Magical Education | Well, I have some time now, so here goes next chapter..... Chapter 3- Rose and A Secret Meeting
I was already sitting at the Gryffindor table when Scorpius entered. An early night for the first time in a month made me get up really early today. His blond head immediately caught my eye, and I gave a slight smile. I didn't dare do more than that; I didn't want anyone to see. As far as I knew, James had actually been civil to him since Scorpius refused to fight him, but if he found out about us, I doubt he'd feel the same way! As Scorpius sat down, I could see people jeering at him, and his sisters turning away. I shuddered at the thought of controlling Hugo as Delanna had controlled Scorpius or being controlled in such a way by James. I shook my head and turned back to Lily, who was chatting animatedly about her Charms class and the boy she was sitting next to. I smiled at her and nodded, but my mind was drifting back to him.......One thing that I loved about him was his eyes. Grey like his father's, they were full of kindness and love, unlike the hatred his father's showed when he looked at any Potter or Weasley. I loved his soft blond hair, which I often ran my fingers through, and his smile, which was so unlike his sisters' cold, calculating smiles. A snap from Albus' fingers jolted me back to reality. "Rose, you were supposed to give my book back today, remember?" he said. "Yeah.......sorry, I think I left it back in my dormitory. I'll give it to you later," I replied. I was a bit lost and dreamy these days. Albus, looking annoyed, turned away, and finally we all filed out for our first class.
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04-12-2008, 07:50 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katrina Adelia Devereux First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Gabriella Kayla Doucette Magical Education | Well that was really short......so I'm continue the chapter from Scorpius' POV.
I walked down the hallway towards Potions, my first class. I knew it was Rose's first class too; today I would see her in at least 3 classes. Just as I was about to descend the steps to the dungeons, I stepped into an empty, unused classroom on a whim and waited until I saw Rose. I grabbed her arm as she passed, pulling her inside as well. "Shhhh.....its me," I said before she could cry out. "Scorpius!" she said in a fierce whisper. "We can't arrange a meeting today, I told you!" Smirking slightly, I said,"Well, its not arranged." Rose rolled her eyes, then said,"But why?" I didn't reply, but instead pulled her towards me and kissed her. She nearly pulled away, but then wrapped her arms around me and kissed me back. When we I finally pulled away, I looked into her eyes and said ,"That's why." "Its a good reason,"she replied, smiling. "But we're both late, so c'mon." I sighed, then said ,"I guess we have to......." She rolled her eyes again, then pulled me out. Laughing at her expression, I followed her. But as she reached outside she froze, staring at someone I couldn't see. I went around her and followed her line of vision, and then as I saw the person my mouth fell open.........
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04-12-2008, 08:02 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | OMG They kissed, YAY Rose and Scorpius kissed!!! Now I'm happ....Who's in the corridor, who who who who who who who who who who who who who?????????????????????? Khristina needs to know!!!!! PAMS!!! |
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04-12-2008, 10:01 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tempest Elizabeth Ducan. Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
James Randall Magical Creatures | New reader: great fic cant wait for the next bit. |
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04-12-2008, 10:02 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ariana Dumbledore Department of Mysteries | I need to know too! I must know it's going to drive me crazy!!!  crazy I tell you!
Aww.. Rose and Scorpius kissed... YAY!!!!!
So what year are his sisters in if Scorpius is in fifth???? I'm glad he didn't fight James, it shows how grown up and mature he is. Although he shouldn't be bullied.
Jemmz
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04-13-2008, 12:52 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katrina Adelia Devereux First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Gabriella Kayla Doucette Magical Education | Thanks to all my awesome readers!!!!!!  *hugs you all*
Next chapter!
Chapter 4-Surprises "Lily!" I squeaked. Lily raised her hand, then stopped in mid-wave as Scorpius appeared behind me. His smile slid of his face as he froze, mouth open in surprise. I searched my brain frantically for something, anything to explain this as her eyes moved from me to Scorpius and back again. Understanding appeared in her eyes; she knew, she definitely knew. Oh no, I thought, I am in SO much trouble. I was sure she was going to say that I'd lost my mind or start screaming, and it was hard to say whether Scorpius or I were more surprised when she smiled! "Well, at least now I know why you're always so distracted," she said. Now it was my turn to look shocked. "But I thought- I thought you'd be-" "Angry?", she said, and laughed. "Not really. I think its great that at least someone in our family can get along with a Malfoy." "But you won't tell anyone, right? Because I'd prefer to tell them myself, and I don't think Scorpius' family would take it too well." "I won't," Lily said, smiling."But you two had better get to class or someone will realize." I gave her a grateful smile, then ran off in the direction of the dungeons, Scorpius right behind me. I leaned against the wall, trying to catch my breath, and gestured for Scorpius to go inside. We couldn't be seen together, after all. I entered the class room and was stopped immediately to Professor Horace Slughorn, Jr., Head of Slytherin House. "Scorpius Malfoy," he said sternly, though with a slight twinkle in his eyes; I was, after all, one of his favourite students, along with Rose. "You're late. One more time and I'll have to give you detention." Many people in the class rolled their eyes; Slughorn said that everytime, but never actually ever gave anyone detention. "Yes sir," I said politely, before moving to my place next to Angelina Nott. She turned away from me as though she was embarrassed just to be seen with me. I ignored her and turned to the door, sneering right on time as Rose entered. When everyone was occupied, though, I gave her a smile and a wink. She smiled back and then continued with her work. An hour later, we left the classroom to go to DADA, then Charms. Finally it was time for lunch. Unfortunately I was dreading the idea of lunch, because Mum had said she'd vist, and a vist from Mum always meant more insults.
I decided to change the way I write this FF, so now I'll be writing including both POV's in one chapter. Comments please! |
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04-13-2008, 05:08 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ariana Dumbledore Department of Mysteries | HA!!! Lily knows, it's brilliant. I love her, and she can keep her word.
I like the idea of two POVs in one post, because then we can get to hear the two people about most of the same things. And it means that you have to write even more, to make up for not writing two seperate posts!!!
His mother is so mean, but it would be funny to see how she would take it, if she was the one that caught Rose and Scorpius together. I'd like to see how Scorpius would handle it, as we have seen Rose, ease herself out of a problematic situation.
PAMS!!!
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04-13-2008, 07:23 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | I agree with Jemmz with everything she said.
I'm glad someone knows about Rose and Scorpius, and it's best that Lily knew instead of, well, Hugo. I can't wait to see what his mum's going to do, PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPMASPAMSPAMSPMAsPAMS!!!!!!! |
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04-14-2008, 12:53 AM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | wow you have posted sooo much
i love this fan you are such a great write
i feel real sorry for Scorpius
please post soon
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04-14-2008, 04:25 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jamie Chapley Fifth Year | New Reader and it is great.. Keep up the good work! |
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04-14-2008, 12:14 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katrina Adelia Devereux First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Gabriella Kayla Doucette Magical Education | Thanks for the comments!!!!!!!  Luv ya all! Quote:
HA!!! Lily knows, it's brilliant. I love her, and she can keep her word.
I like the idea of two POVs in one post, because then we can get to hear the two people about most of the same things. And it means that you have to write even more, to make up for not writing two seperate posts!!!
His mother is so mean, but it would be funny to see how she would take it, if she was the one that caught Rose and Scorpius together. I'd like to see how Scorpius would handle it, as we have seen Rose, ease herself out of a problematic situation.
PAMS!!!
Jemmz
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| I did kinda think of putting Mrs.Malfoy there instead of Lily, but I just didn't like the idea. But maybe add it in later so everyone can see her reaction!Thanks for the suggestion, Jemmz! Quote:
I agree with Jemmz with everything she said.
I'm glad someone knows about Rose and Scorpius, and it's best that Lily knew instead of, well, Hugo. I can't wait to see what his mum's going to do, PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPMASPAMSPAMSPMAsPAMS!!!!!!!
| Hugo might have been a *little* more shocked than Lily was, so I decided it was better for Lily to know. Quote:
wow you have posted sooo much
i love this fan you are such a great write
i feel real sorry for Scorpius
please post soon
love voldyXOXOXOXO
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New Reader and it is great.. Keep up the good work!
| Hi, JazzyJay  !Glad you like the fic!
Well, I'm doing two FF's right now this one and Just One Little Spell in the Other Stories section(if you want you can take a look at that too) so since I posted in this one now I have to write one chapter in the other one! Will post here again tomorrow or today if I feel like it. |
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04-14-2008, 03:34 PM
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| In Love with the 80's Clabbert
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tempest Elizabeth Ducan. Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
James Randall Magical Creatures | New reader:liking it so far cant wait for more. |
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04-15-2008, 03:39 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
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Gabriella Kayla Doucette Magical Education | Hi, J.Rigdon! Thanks, hope you enjoy the rest! Jemmz, I forgot to answer your question earlier; Delanna is in 7th year and Delancey is in 4th. This chapter mostly details what went on in the years between the final battle and the present. Chapter 5- Past, Present and Everything In Between(Part 1)
I walked down to the Great Hall, dreading the thought of going to lunch. Sure, it was our only free time in between classes and tons of homework, but meetings with Mum always end up with her praising Delanna and Delancey and picking out every fault she can find in me. I entered the Great Hall, hoping that something had made Mum cancel or at least postpone her vist. No such luck. She was standing right next to my sisters, talking cheerfully. Then her eyes fell upon me and immediately she looked away. Its as though she's embarrassed to admit I'm her son. My mother, Astoria Malfoy, was born Astoria Lydia Greengrass into a wealthy, pure-blood Slytherin family. She was raised to believe like most pure-bloods that Muggleborns were scum, half-bloods were tolerable and pure-bloods were royalty. Growing up, she was typical Slytherin princess- tall, beautiful,snobbish and disdainful of other Houses and others weaker than her. She always only wore the best clothes, as was expected of one like her,was showered with luxuries from jewellery to the best brooms, and had her pick of suitors. Until now, she looked almost exactly the same as she had when she married my father 20 years back; the same slim figure, sleek, long black hair and dark brown eyes, with that slight hint of a sneer whenever she smiled. Her family, unlike my father's, escaped the disgrace faced by many other families like hers after the final battle. While most lost their affluence and wealth, her family maintained theirs, and this was why my father eventually married her. Penniless and shunned by many, the Malfoys lost their upper-class status and were forced to work. My father couldn't complete his schooling; he started working straight away to support my grandmother, who had fallen into depression after the arrest and permanent imprisonment of my grandfather and the loss of all their wealth. Still, they had their reputation and bloodline, and so my mother married into the Malfoy family. Rich again, my father completed his schooling, then started working in the Magical Transportation Department. Often, I think my father married out of necesscity, not love; they knew each other only for a month before their marriage, and I even thought my father might have been in love with someone else. He had almost the same opinions as my mother about many things, but he refrained from calling Muggleborns 'Mudbloods' now, and never argued over the fact that I talked to people from other a Houses . However, he shared my mother's opinion over Potters and Weasleys- stay away from them. A few years after their marriage, Delanna Narcissa Malfoy, their first daughter. was born. A mixture of Mum and Dad, she inherited my mother's straight nose, sneering smile, and dark hair, as well as her strong, opinated and fearless nature. From my father, she inherited grey eyes and pale skin, as well as his quick temper and sarcasm. She was their pride and joy; an intelligent, mischievious little girl, she was raised much the same way as my mother. Two years later I, their second child and only son, Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy, was born. A miniature version of Dad, I was obedient, s | |