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04-21-2008, 06:17 AM
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| | Ashwinder
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 1,627
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kayden 'Kay' Noelle
Third Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Delaney Riliegh
International Cooperation |  The Reason for my Existence - Sa13+
The Reason for my Existence - Sa13+ by me
This is my first story, so be utterly honest.
Prologue:
How is this possible? That foul, louthsome, evil, little boy. Why does he have such a power over me? I have lived a full 16 years without a man by my side, and I don't plan on starting to depend on one now.
But there is just something about him that is the very reason for my existance. The way he smiles when he sees me, and the way his ears turn a charming shade of pink when he is embarrased, and the way he runs his hand into his slightly messy hair. And the way... arg! Come on Lily, get a hold of yourself!
His name is James Potter, and I loath him. He annoys my very soul, and yet he sub-consciously enchants me. He is an arrogant, big headed jerk. He is spoiled and used to getting anything he wants. And he wants me, it's a known fact. But I will not give it, he needs to learn to grow up. But it's becoming hard to resist.
Secretly I'm afraid that if I give in, he'll no longer want me. Sometimes I think he is more in love with the chase than actually me.
Chapter One
Chapter Two, Part One
Last edited by PurpleJellyBean : 05-02-2008 at 08:17 PM.
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04-22-2008, 02:21 AM
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| | Demiguise
Location: Melting in the heat! Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 5,374
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jamie Chapley
Fifth Year |
I am loving it.. I can't wait for more!!!
First Reader! | 
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04-22-2008, 02:30 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 275
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Billy-Jean Bennet
First Year | 2nd reader
I love James and lily fan fics
(sets up tent and waits for next post)
Any one for hot chocolate?????
love voldyXOXOXOOXO | |
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04-22-2008, 02:45 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: SS, duh Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 3,451
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Carolyn Weasley
Fourth Year
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Isabella Longbottom
Magical Games & Sports |
I'll take a cocoa Voldy. I must wait till the next post. I need another post, this FF is awesome. can't wait till the next post. | |
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04-22-2008, 05:38 PM
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| | Kneazle
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 3,242
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
First Year
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Ariana Dumbledore
Department of Mysteries |
I'll take a hot chocolate please Voldy!  I'm going to join you in the tent... cause I'm going to wait for the next post!!!
Lily and James fan fics are soooo cool! I can't wait to see how this fic fans out!
Jemmz
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04-22-2008, 10:01 PM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 321
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Janie Smith
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One cocoa plz!!!
Your first story? Well hunny you are awsome!! 
Plz PAMS when you can!!
~Abby~ | |
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04-22-2008, 10:06 PM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 275
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Billy-Jean Bennet
First Year |
three hot chocolates coming right up 
please post soon
love voldyXOXOXOXO | |
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04-23-2008, 01:50 AM
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| | Ashwinder
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 1,627
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kayden 'Kay' Noelle
Third Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Delaney Riliegh
International Cooperation |
Ahh! I love you guys. I have to write an essay for school tonight, so I'll try to post chapter one tomorrow. eek! You all make me so happy!
Sorry for the delay.  | |
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04-23-2008, 02:13 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: SS, duh Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 3,451
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Carolyn Weasley
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Isabella Longbottom
Magical Games & Sports |
Its totally ok. We can wait. Right everyone? | |
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04-23-2008, 02:53 PM
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| | Kneazle
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 3,242
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
First Year
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Ariana Dumbledore
Department of Mysteries |
Yup we can wait  We have our drinks, and I've got cookies!! *Holds up a plate of chocolate chip cookies* Cookies anyone??
We don't mind, the story looks good, so we will keep reading it!
Jemmz
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04-24-2008, 02:48 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 275
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Billy-Jean Bennet
First Year |
ooooo cookies
thanks jemmz
(takes one)
thats okay take your time
i'm in no hurry
love voldyXOXOXOOXOX | |
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04-24-2008, 03:19 AM
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| | Ashwinder
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 1,627
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kayden 'Kay' Noelle
Third Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Delaney Riliegh
International Cooperation |
Chapter One
It is September 1st, of my sixth year. I was walking down the corridor of the train when I saw him in a passing compartment. He was sitting there, his croonies surrounding him. I passed swiftly, hoping to run into Alice. I had almost made it to the empty compartment at the end of the aisle when...
"Hey Evans!"
I stopped in my tracks, not wanting to turn around and face him. I knew it was James for many reasons. A ,I could recongnize his voice anywhere. It haunts me at night. B, He consistantly used my surname instead of my first. And C, who else would be calling for me?
I slowly, reluctually turned around, to see his glorious face smirking at me as he stuck his head out of the door. I gave him a questioning glance, putting one of my hands at my waist.
"You can sit with us." He smirked again. Oh how I'd love to just punch him in the face for that stupid smirk of his.
"I don't think so." Its times like this I believe he truly likes me. Sure he rolled his eyes and muttered an unwitty response. But I could see his face fall ever so slight when I rejected him. He probably didn't mean to expose his sensitive side, but I saw it.
It was moments like this that made my heart flutter. My knees were literally about to give out, when Alice came out of the compartment she had been hiding in, and took a hold of me. She dragged me into the compartment and pushed me onto the seat.
"Come on Lily, get yourself together!" Alice said. Its strange, Alice is like my conscience. She always knows what I'm thinking and whats good for me. I mean, technically I never told her of my sudden like for James Potter. But suddenly, she knew. She knows me better than I do.
I nodded my head and slid farther down on the seat. I was very tired all of a sudden. I slowly drifted into a light slumber. His face was the last thing I thought of before my unconsiousness.
I know its a bit short, but I'm not used to the long posts yet. Actually this is pretty long for me, I usually post short. The next chapters will be more eventful, hopefully. I'm not sure when I'll be able to write it, school has been incredibly hectic. Anyways, tell me what you think.
Last edited by PurpleJellyBean : 04-26-2008 at 03:07 PM.
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04-24-2008, 03:21 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
Location: *runs far away* Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 841
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Alycya "Aly" Weasley
Second Year
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Edith "Edie" Griffiths
Minister's Office |  New Reader
** NEW READER **
This is really good!! Keep up the good work!! Well done Well done!!!!!!
Can't wait fo the next post! Well I probably can .... I'll try!!!
*sets up camp and snuggles in* waiting waiting waiting!! 
Oh well, please post soon.
Love it already
Jade
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 
P.S. I'm subscribing to this thread!!!!
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Reason: hehehe this is good!!!
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04-24-2008, 06:29 AM
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| | Kneazle
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 3,242
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Sabrina Dumbledore
First Year
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Ariana Dumbledore
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Brilliant post hun!! Loved it!
Now all I have to do is wait for more!! Can't wait to see what happens, so I'm going to wait patietly (I'm not sure how well I do that) 
Jemma
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04-24-2008, 10:22 AM
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| | Bowtruckle
Location: Ohio Join Date: Mar 2008
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Rogue Katherin Narcissa Black
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New Reader!!!! i love your story!!! PAMS!!! | |
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04-24-2008, 07:35 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: SS, duh Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 3,451
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Carolyn Weasley
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Awesome post, luv. Well, i'll take one of Jemma's cookies Voldy's cocoa and sit back and wait for you to post. PAMS...plz. And thanks guys ohh i have brownies anyone want one?
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04-24-2008, 07:44 PM
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| | Demiguise
Location: Melting in the heat! Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 5,374
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Jamie Chapley
Fifth Year |
I am loving it.. Cant wait for more!! | |
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04-25-2008, 03:11 PM
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| | Kneazle
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 3,242
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Originally Posted by eric_2007al_2006  Awesome post, luv. Well, i'll take one of Jemma's cookies Voldy's cocoa and sit back and wait for you to post. PAMS...plz. And thanks guys ohh i have brownies anyone want one?
~Michelle~ | Yes please You know, I think we'll be quite well off food and drink wise during this fic!!
Jemma
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05-02-2008, 08:08 PM
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| | Ashwinder
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 1,627
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kayden 'Kay' Noelle
Third Year
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Delaney Riliegh
International Cooperation |
Chapter Two (Part One)
Classes resided September 2nd. I rolled out of bed with an uncomfortable filling in my stomach. I always felt that way before the start classes. That achy feel that only goes away when you actually step into the classroom.
I was sitting up on my bed, thinking of comforting thoughts, such as how great it will be to start potion brewing again. I've always had a thing for potions, unlike most of my Gryffindor peers. When all of a sudden the time on the clock caught my attention.
7:54.
Crap! Classes start at eight. I felt so stupid, why didn't I notice that all the other girls were no longer in the dormitory? Did Alice try to wake me up? Not wasting another minute, I jumped out of bed and struggled to get my uniform on. I didn't even have time to brush my hair or check in the mirror. I knew I had to look horrible. I had planned on walking up early and ironing my clothes and doing my hair all nice.
I ran to the dudgeons through the oddly empty halls, struggling to put my shoes on. I just couldn't get my left shoe on. I pulled it roughly on, causing my to lose my balance.
I held my breath, awaiting the crucial pain of my body hitting the hard marble floor. But it didn't come. Instead two strong arms wrapped around my torso, keeping me from my doom. I let my eyes flutter open, to see the face of my rescuer. I let my eyes linger over his face, his black hair and mysterious eyes.
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"Severus?"
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05-02-2008, 08:11 PM
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| | Demiguise
Location: Melting in the heat! Join Date: Mar 2007
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Jamie Chapley
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Very Good! I cant wait for more!!
Jamie | |
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05-03-2008, 02:11 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: my caged mind Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 297
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Aurora Jullian Marks
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finnaly i was waiting for snape to come in
OMG Jazzyjay i LOVE your avatar
were did u get it? | |
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05-03-2008, 02:15 AM
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| | Demiguise
Location: Melting in the heat! Join Date: Mar 2007
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Jamie Chapley
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Originally Posted by TriwizardChamp12 finnaly i was waiting for snape to come in
OMG Jazzyjay i LOVE your avatar
were did u get it? | I got it from Photobucket | |
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05-03-2008, 03:31 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 275
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Billy-Jean Bennet
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Yeah Sev is in the building
great posts
love voldyXOXOXOXOXO | |
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05-08-2008, 01:57 AM
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| | Augurey
Location: Hmm I forget Join Date: Apr 2008
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Ashley Smith
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Lily, James, and Snape!!!!
its going to be a great story
Wait scratch that it is a great story
Loveing it
Hope the post comes soon
I need one now!!!!!!!!!!!
~Ashsun~ | |
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06-06-2008, 02:55 AM
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|    Head LC & FF ModI <3 StoogingManticore
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