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07-05-2008, 10:39 PM
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| Jump Around! Faerie
Location: In Forks, Wash. Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 4,252
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | It's alright Jay, I'll let you in on a secret, I have writers block too, that's why i haven't posted yet, lol. I really need to sort that out. *sigh* Post whenever you can, I know you're busy too so take your time, I'm always going to wait for you.
and yes HPF1, non sorters can post a fan fic, as long as you're not still confined to the newbie hut, you can post. |
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07-29-2008, 05:47 PM
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| | Dugbog
Location: collecting words Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 632
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarah Annabell Paterson First Ministry RPG Name:
Blair Alice Bancroft Magical Education | NEW READER!!!
Omgsh I love the story! It's so well written!!!
And Seriously Draco needs to chill. k?
love it, can't wait for an update!
PAMSPAMSPAMS!
<3 Sarah |
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07-29-2008, 05:55 PM
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| LPFC Event Officer Ginny Weasley-Potter Faerie
Location: At home.... duh Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,287
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | Just a note to everyone... Jay's almost done with the next post!!! We love you Jay and this story is brilliant! not just because I'm in it
Can't wait to see what happens to Rose, Scorpius and Albus next! Though I think I'm coming around to loving Scorpius, even if he is a Malfoy! 
PAMS!
Jemma
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07-31-2008, 06:32 AM
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| In Love with the 80's Niffler
Location: here or HPRA Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,775
Hogwarts RPG Name: Derek Johansen Ministry RPG Name:
James Randall Magical Creatures | Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry Potter Freak 1 Ok i understand we will wait patiently and i understand how writers block is like i hate it.
* HPF1 *
PS. Does anyone know if a non-sorted person can write a fan fic? | tHANKS FOR the patience Quote:
Originally Posted by moonchic07 It's alright Jay, I'll let you in on a secret, I have writers block too, that's why i haven't posted yet, lol. I really need to sort that out. *sigh* Post whenever you can, I know you're busy too so take your time, I'm always going to wait for you.
and yes HPF1, non sorters can post a fan fic, as long as you're not still confined to the newbie hut, you can post. | i was really wondering if my creative train of thought had just delayed or was completely derailed but im back on track now i think Quote:
Originally Posted by Mrs_ronald_weasley NEW READER!!!
Omgsh I love the story! It's so well written!!!
And Seriously Draco needs to chill. k?
love it, can't wait for an update!
PAMSPAMSPAMS!
<3 Sarah | well new reader welcome to my fic and im glad you are enjoying it almost done ..... yeah 3 days later i know i been telling you i was almost done for days but guess what ? im still almost done. Note to Jemz I know as soon as you see there is a post by me in here you will push everyone out of the way to read it but guess what I had to comment everyone first so yes im laughing at your over enthusiasm.  |
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07-31-2008, 06:36 AM
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| In Love with the 80's Niffler
Location: here or HPRA Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,775
Hogwarts RPG Name: Derek Johansen Ministry RPG Name:
James Randall Magical Creatures | now more of the long awaited fan fic. Much to the surprise of Scorpius Christmas break was not as bad as he had feared it would be even with the usual festivities of Christmas day lost for the first time since he could remember. His father had busied himself in work and was gone before daylight was even roused. He had pretty great gifts as a Malfoy would but the mood of the holiday had been drained the minute Scorpius entered the mansion. It had been nearly the entire three weeks of holiday and even though he was disappointed that his father hadn’t really had much to do with him since he returned home. He had expected his father to be angry specially after the howler he had received but no the reaction was emotionless, cold, and at times disgusted his father avoided him and when he couldn’t be avoided he was looked down on like a filthy muggle and ignored. But the peacefulness of his forced invisibility was about to take a drastic change. Scorpius was in his room packing the last of his things for the return to school when there was a soft pop and house elf appeared. “Master Malfoy would like a word with the young sir in the parlor.” “Me but… Okay” he said as he stopped packing and nodded as he made his way from his bedroom downstairs. Scorpius nervously made his way down the staircase, his left hand glided smoothly over the long elegantly hand-carved, natural rich chocolate colored surface of the African Wenge wood of the banister. He was hesitant when he entered the antique Victorian decorated parlor; scared what his father was going to say to him in the wake of returning to school. His mum didn’t look up from the letter she was writing at the desk in the corner and nor did his grandmother’s eyes shift from the needlework she was busying her self with. The room was so quiet he was sure he could hear d the soft scratching of his mothers quill on the parchment. Scorpius looked up and his eyes met the cold steel blue eyes of his father. He had the same steel tinted irises and found himself wondering if his eyes had the same coldness to them. He watched as his father folded the paper he had in hand and placed it down before he spoke. “It is beyond me, Where your mother and I went wrong with you “Draco said “There apparently can’t be anything done to put you where a Malfoy should be that headmaster is just as stubborn and senile as Dumbledore” Astoria looked up at her husband her expression clearly showing that she did not agree with the comment how ever she remained silent this was a discussion between Scorpius and his father. “You have disgraced this family not only by being in Gryffindor! But by associating with traitors and half blooded filth like Weasley and Potter’s children! It’s disgusting. You’re a Malfoy and you WILL act accordingly even if you are in Gryffindor! Your Grandfather would turn in his grave if he knew you were befriending that...that FLITH!!” “DRACO!!!” Scorpius jumped at the firm tone his usually soft spoken grandmother had with his father. “Your father was foolish! He only followed the Dark Lord out of Greed and Fear! I had hoped better from you but I see your father’s corrupt loyalties have influenced you far greater than I have and I take the responsibility for that and it is about time you know the truth.” “Truth? W-What truth?” Draco asked his eyes met his mother’s glare and he looked as if he were a naive first year again. Narcissa sighed. “You are as big a fool as your father.” Her tone softened to normal. “Draco when you decided to stay in the castle that night the Dark Lord considered you a traitor he ordered your death that night. I made a choice as any mother would have and I will never regret it even in your blind ignorance. I only thought to save you which is why when in the forest the night of the final battle when I was given the task to check if Potter was still alive I denied the Dark Lord the truth.” “You betrayed the Dark Lord!?” Draco hissed with a look of disgust. “My father died in Azkaban because of YOU.” Narcissa’s soft grey eyes flashed with anger at her son’s tone and accusations. In that flash of anger the back of her hand came into hard contact with his cheek. Scorpius stared wide eyed as he witnessed his grandmother slap his father. “DON’T you EVER!” She snapped back. “You have No IDEA the consequences I have dealt with since that night Draco don’t you dare blame me. I did what I had to do to save my child else you would have died as well!” “W- What?” his hand still touching his reddening cheek. He’s expression was blank. Scorpius wasn’t sure if it was from the bewilderment of her words or the fact that she had actually hit him. Probably both… “In exchange for me telling the Dark Lord Harry was dead. He told me of your whereabouts in the castle so I was able to find you first. So weather you like it or not Harry Potter saved your life as well as everyone else’s Draco. Accept it or don’t that is up to you. But deny your son True friendship is the worst mistake you could ever make. Think long and hard would you trust his life in Potter’s hands or with one of that fellow Slytherin’s you chose to still call friends?” Draco glared hard in thoughtful angry silence not blinking as his mother held his gaze. He was the first to break when he cast his gaze to the floor and inhaled a deep defeated breath. He didn’t look at his son as he walked past Scorpius to the desk where Astoria was now sitting still silent watching the events unfold before her. Draco pulled a key from his pocket and unlocked the top drawer of the desk. He stared for a couple minutes with out a word before he reached in and pulled out a stack of envelopes that was tied together in a bundle with a length of twine. He carried them as he walked towards Scorpius he paused only to shove the bundle of letters into Scorpius’ hands before he stood rigidly straight and walked out of the parlor and disappeared down the hall into the solitude of his study. Scorpius looked at the envelope on top it was a letter addressed to him from Albus he flipped through them there was more from Albus along with a bunch from Rose too. He smiled at his grandmother who returned the smile before Scorpius hurried back upstairs to read his letters. OOC: hope you all like this part I had a blast writing it.
Last edited by J.Rigdon : 07-31-2008 at 06:45 AM.
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07-31-2008, 06:42 AM
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| Spectacular! Spectacular!No biting!Perfect Pickle Performer Pygmy Puff
Location: On Phil's Lap Join Date: Oct 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Reese Selena Northway Third Year | I think I was the first on in the thread when I noticed you posted,Jay.I beat Jemma here...which IS a shocker.I was disappointed when it was the comment post
Wow.That was one long post  Very Very intersting,though.I LOVED it
You better add more soon...or else
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07-31-2008, 06:50 AM
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| LPFC Event Officer Ginny Weasley-Potter Faerie
Location: At home.... duh Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,287
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | Okay firstly I must point out I did not rush to see the comments post I walked fast So thanks for laughing at my expense.
Secondly... Jay you're amazing! I now have some respect for Narcissa, especially for standing up to Draco like that. She seems to have gotten stronger with out Lucius there
Thirdly Draco's finally cracked! I hate him for keeping letters from Rose and Albus away, but then again, I guess that's where Dobby learnt it from! Hey at least Scorpius' christmas was better then Sabrina's.
PAMS!!!
Jemma
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08-01-2008, 03:22 AM
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| Jump Around! Faerie
Location: In Forks, Wash. Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 4,252
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | ...wow, that's all I can really say is wow. You are an amazing writer Jay, absolutely amazing! *dreamy eyes*
I always thought Cissy was different *hugs Cissy* and Yay! Draco finally lets Scorpius be himself. I wonder what the letters say, especially those from Rose.
PAMS Jay, I just gets better and better   |
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08-01-2008, 04:52 AM
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| Tom's Quidditch robesDevilish Draco Skrewt
Location: the Snape Manor. =] Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha Savvy Snape Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Shea Safari Snape Accidents & Catastrophes | YAY!! you posted! i loved it! i'm so happy that Cissy told Draco what happened that and made him see that he should not hate Harry.
PAMS!!
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08-09-2008, 08:37 PM
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| | Bundimun
Location: A boooring place... Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 36
| NEW READER!!
Hi, my name is Lizzie, and I've just ended reading your FF.
The story is amazing, it's well written and I'm really looking forward to read your next post!! I hope you continue writing it.
And I've gotta say, OMG great chapter, with Cissy telling Draco the truth and make him shut up! He should not be so mean to poor Scorpius, but then again... Being mean to his only son sounds just like Draco. I would like to know what Harry/Ron/Hermione/Ginny would say if they met Draco and his wife in Diagon Alley, what would happen? Hmm
Anyway, have a nice day and PAMS |
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08-14-2008, 12:45 PM
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| | Bundimun
Location: Western Australia Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 39
| OMG! this is awesome Hi Jay, I'm new, and I just want to say your story is AMAZING! It's very well written and I love the storyline... but where does the romance come in?! lol love it heaps and will continue to read it! PAMS
cya xx |
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08-15-2008, 02:50 AM
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| | Nogtail
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08-18-2008, 10:25 PM
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| In Love with the 80's Niffler
Location: here or HPRA Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,775
Hogwarts RPG Name: Derek Johansen Ministry RPG Name:
James Randall Magical Creatures | Quote:
Originally Posted by PhelpsLover101 I think I was the first on in the thread when I noticed you posted,Jay.I beat Jemma here...which IS a shocker.I was disappointed when it was the comment post
Wow.That was one long post  Very Very intersting,though.I LOVED it
You better add more soon...or else
~Cat | Hey CAT-lady glad you liked it wow beating jemz here that is a shock she was the only one that new i was working on it LOL I thought she was perched there just waiting guess you are just a Quicker Clicker 1st-ly: you dont fool me you did run and you probably tripped which would explain Cat-lady getting here first
2nd-ly: i couldn't let Cissa go down with out some sorta glory shes a mother and proved ( at least to me anyhow) that she would go to great lengths for her child even if I do think he is a git.
3rd-ly just cause he cracked doesnt mean he broke. Quote:
Originally Posted by moonchic07 ...wow, that's all I can really say is wow. You are an amazing writer Jay, absolutely amazing! *dreamy eyes*
I always thought Cissy was different *hugs Cissy* and Yay! Draco finally lets Scorpius be himself. I wonder what the letters say, especially those from Rose.
PAMS Jay, I just gets better and better   | well I have got to the letters yet so right now Scropius is going to be keeping them private. Quote:
Originally Posted by draco*malfoy*lover YAY!! you posted! i loved it! i'm so happy that Cissy told Draco what happened that and made him see that he should not hate Harry.
PAMS!!
--Prongs. | SHOULD being the operative word Quote:
Originally Posted by LizzieEvans NEW READER!!
Hi, my name is Lizzie, and I've just ended reading your FF.
The story is amazing, it's well written and I'm really looking forward to read your next post!! I hope you continue writing it.
And I've gotta say, OMG great chapter, with Cissy telling Draco the truth and make him shut up! He should not be so mean to poor Scorpius, but then again... Being mean to his only son sounds just like Draco. I would like to know what Harry/Ron/Hermione/Ginny would say if they met Draco and his wife in Diagon Alley, what would happen? Hmm
Anyway, have a nice day and PAMS | * scratches chin and arches Brow* " interesting very intersting" *evil smirk* Quote:
Originally Posted by xx.hpluva.xx Hi Jay, I'm new, and I just want to say your story is AMAZING! It's very well written and I love the storyline... but where does the romance come in?! lol love it heaps and will continue to read it! PAMS
cya xx | i know I know its inthe romance section and it will have moments i promise but you have to remember in the eyes of and ELEVEN YEAR old romance is cringed at like brussel sprouts. Quote:
Originally Posted by TriwizardChamp12 | You say that now
HEY don't you all be looking at me like that Khris, jemz, cat lady and Crew. you all are well aware by now how evil my creative genuis can get at times so don't look so suprised..
NOTE: I know the next post is really short and im sorry I just have a LOT on my plate right now and havent really been able to focus on my fic much. but I decided to post what i had becasue I just felt bad bout leaving you guys hangin fo long.
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08-18-2008, 10:37 PM
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| In Love with the 80's Niffler
Location: here or HPRA Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,775
Hogwarts RPG Name: Derek Johansen Ministry RPG Name:
James Randall Magical Creatures | It's Short I know and im sorry “Can you believe the homework we have in potions?” Albus complained as they made their towards the Great Hall for dinner. “We haven’t even been back from holiday a full week yet.” “It’s not that bad Al.” Rose said “It’s just an essay.” “It might as well have to be a novel.” He grumbled crossing his arms he looked to his left when something in the shadows of a statue caught his attention. “Ewww.” He said making a face. “What?” Scorpius asked as He and Rose looked the direction Albus was scowling. “Ugh.” Scorpius made a face along with Albus when he saw them kissing. Rose just giggled. “I think they make a cute couple.” Rose said.” And I know Jemma really likes him I heard her talking with some older girls a few days ago.” “You would you’re a GIRL.” Albus wrinkled his nose as the sight of his brother and her. “Gross.” He mumbled. Rose glared.” You’re a dork Al.” she huffed. “It’s not that big of a deal is it...? I mean “if they want to swap germs that’s them right... let’s get to dinner.” Scorpius said hating when Rose and Albus bickered and huffed over silly things. “I guess.” Albus said as they made there way down the hall. “Especially if they really like each other.” Rose said barely loud enough for anyone to hear. Scorpius blinked and turned to Rose when he heard her whisper. “Huh?” He asked as butterflies filled his stomach. Rose blushed and looked at the stone floor. “Nothing.” Scorpius looked at her trying to figure out what she was blushing about for a minute before he brushed it off. But the butterflies remained. “I thought you were hungry.” Albus asked. “I... Don’t think I am anymore.” Scorpius stared at his plate. “Are you sure your okay Scorpius.” Rose asked she put her hand on his and blushed. “Do you want to go see the nurse?” “I… uhh.” The butterflies intensified almost to the point of being nauseating. He pulled his hand away from Rose. “Just not hungry now...” he said. “It was James in the hall wasn’t it?” Albus asked “See I told you that was disgusting.” Albus made a face. “Yeah probably.” Scorpius lied he seriously doubt what ever had come over him had much to do with Al brother and his girlfriend but he couldn’t tell Al that. It was Rose something about expression on her face when they had seen them kissing. His stomach did a somersault and he got up. “I think I’m going to go back to the common room. “ “Want us to-“Rose started to ask. “No!” he said quickly hurrying out of the Great Hall. |
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08-18-2008, 11:41 PM
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| Tom's Quidditch robesDevilish Draco Skrewt
Location: the Snape Manor. =] Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha Savvy Snape Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Shea Safari Snape Accidents & Catastrophes | aww, how cute!
i loved it!
pams! |
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08-19-2008, 01:08 AM
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| Jump Around! Faerie
Location: In Forks, Wash. Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 4,252
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | What?? No letters? *sigh* oh well, I'll wait.
Awww when you said it was awkward you weren't kidding, those two are sooo cute together. He finally learning how he feels, finally, can he figure things out and act upon them?
Post whenever you can love, we can wait for you. That was a great post Jay and sooo sweet  Talk to you tonight my love.  |
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08-19-2008, 03:18 PM
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| | Bundimun
Location: A boooring place... Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 36
|  That was so cute, I absolutely loved it
Hope you write more soon, but no presure
Have a nice day, and PAMS
Lizzie |
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08-19-2008, 11:09 PM
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| Spectacular! Spectacular!No biting!Perfect Pickle Performer Pygmy Puff
Location: On Phil's Lap Join Date: Oct 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Reese Selena Northway Third Year | Awesome as usual,Jay
I guess I can wait for another post*sets up a tent*
PAMS!!! Quote: |
you all are well aware by now how evil my creative genuis can get at times so don't look so suprised..
| Oh Really? I wasn't acting suprised |
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08-21-2008, 09:19 AM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 107
| *new reader*
i've just read your story is great.Scorpius is so sweet.This story is really good
Can't wait for more
PAMS
Alice |
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08-21-2008, 09:53 AM
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| | Bundimun
Location: Western Australia Join Date: Aug 2008
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| bit short, but at least you've posted!
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