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Old 08-20-2008, 12:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Can You Tell Me?


I always thought I was in love with Ronald. Not that I would ever admit it. Since our first year that we were close, but we were always fighting. Sometimes, I thought there wasn’t a subject we could agree.
Harry always was a very special friend. Deep down, I think everybody knew Harry and Ginny were made for each other. Even Dean.

But me…
I always known the gossip about me, of course; a girl that loved books so much she never dated any guy. However, I had been chosen by Viktor Krum to be his date for the Ball. People said that was weird.
I hear all of this but I like to pretend I don’t. I never cared about what people thought about me.
Until the day I started to care.


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Hey!
This is a Dramione fic that takes place in the trio’s sixth year.
Hermione Granger we all know is in love… by the most dangerous guy in Hogwarts.
Draco Malfoy has a lot more to take about than girls. He has an important mission that needs to be done. If he doesn’t… the price to pay will be too high. But then, fell for her…
What now? Will he continue to be the same Draco Malfoy? Will he be able to complete his mission? Can Hermione pretend there’s nothing going on? Can she ignore her heart and keep loyal to her friends?


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*First reader*
Hey Filipa! Awsome start! I can tell this is going to be good!
I can't wait for your next chapter, please hurry up!
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Intriguing . . . Eager to see where you're going with this.
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Old 08-21-2008, 05:22 AM   #4 (permalink)
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oooooooooh I like this can't wait to see more stuff !!!
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Old 08-22-2008, 12:16 AM   #6 (permalink)
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SHIREL!!!

Thanks you all. I know it wasn't much, so... here is the first chapter.


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Draco Malfoy was in the owlery when I went there to send a letter to my parents. For my surprise, he was crying. Draco Malfoy… crying. I got intrigued. I sent my letter but I felt I couldn’t walk away.
Draco hadn’t seen me yet. The moment he did, he turned to the wall and spoke harshly:
“Granger. What are you doing here?” I could tell he was trying to ignore the fact that I had just seen him crying.
I didn’t answer because Harry came in. Clearly, he had been running.
“Mione.” He stopped to breathe. “McGonagall wants to speak to you.” He realized there was somebody else in there. By his expression, I could tell Draco was the last person Harry was expecting to see. Soon I discovered why. “With you too.” He was now speaking to Draco.
I followed Harry and we had Draco walking behind us.
Professor McGonagall was already in the transfiguration office although she was in her animagus form.
I looked around and saw Ron. He had also been running. He sat on one of the four chairs McGonagall had put in front of her desk and I sat next to him. Draco sat on my other side. The fourth student was another Slytherin. I recognized the other prefect. I raised my head to search for Harry but he was gone.
It took me not too long to realize that it was something just for prefects. Well, we all had been prefects the previous year, so I didn’t understand. And why just Gryffindor and Slytherin prefects?
“Well, you’re all here now.” McGonagall said, transforming from cat to her human form. “You must all – unless you already realize it, Miss Granger - be wondering why called you. You were always prefects last year.” She paused. “You did a good job.” Another pause. “Now Hogwarts needs you.”
Nobody said a word; we could hear each other breathing. McGonagall seemed not to bother with the silence.
“Hogwarts is facing a big danger now.” I felt Ronald’s hand on mine. He squeezed it gently. By the corner of my eye I was watching Malfoy. For some unknown reason, I thought he had something to do with that. In the other hand, I trusted McGonagall. If he was there was because he was trustworthy…right?
“I need you to be always careful. Hogwarts is a safe place, but we – the teachers – believe that it’s possible a student to bring danger into the school.2 she paused. “No student should walk alone in the corridors or any other place.” McGonagall was looking at us, studying our reactions. She only get a frightening silence.
“You understand?” we all nodded. “Good. Now, I’ll put a Slytherin working with a Gryffindor. You should act exactly like last year, and by this I mean, to do the same tasks you did last year.” Another paused. The teacher’s years turned at me.
“Miss Granger, you’ll stay with…”
Please no, not Malfoy, please. I thought. But I knew the name even before Mcgonagall say it.
“Mr… Malfoy.”
After that, McGonagall dismissed us.
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Yay! She's with Malfoy!! I know I'm not supposed to be saying this evillness but I can't help to see how this turns out! I love Dramione's. Add a little pepper and Cinammon and I'm hooked!
I wonder why Draco was crying. I bet my broomstick that the studen't to make trouble in Hogwarts that McGonogall was talking about is Draco.
Please write more soon!!
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ooo. yay

i love it fil.

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Thanks!! Thanks to all!
I love Dramione's as well... You can tell right?

I can't give ou pepper and cinammon right now, but I can give you another chapter. What do you say to that?
Tell me your opinions. Like... why do you think Draco was crying?


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I wasn’t happy for staying with Malfoy, but Ron and Harry were even less happy.
“Hermione, you have to talk to McGonagall!” Harry was walking back and forward in the common room. I was listening to that for about an hour and I couldn’t handle it much longer. I sent a desperate look at Ginny, that came to help me and took Harry trough the corridors. She made him walk with her to the Astronomy class.
That gave me some time to think.
“Mione…. You know what I think about this.” Ron started. I told him to stop. I knew to where that was going.
“Ron, it’s like I’m happy this. I’m not. But I think McGonagall knows what she does. If she put me with Malloy, she must have a good reason.” I couldn’t convince him.
“Tell me just one good reason.” I was too sleepy to bother about that.
I came upstairs. Soon Harry would be back and he’d love to give me a lecture because I stick to my decision of trusting whatever Professor McGonagall’s ideas were.
The next day, Harry kept pushing me to speak with McGonagall or Dumbledore. I wasn’t going to bother any of our teachers. I had something completely different on my mind.
I couldn’t stop thinking of Draco Malfoy crying. And I wanted to discover why. I knew I could do it; it was just a matter of time.
Eventually, I fell in love with the boy behind the mask.

I didn’t see Malfoy the entire next day. It felt like a relief to me, since there was always Harry or Ron with me. That situation continued for a week.
I escaped to the library. I needed to study but the guys were driving me crazy.
I picked some books and headed to the table where I normally sit in. Figure who I met there. I ignored him and sat on one of the four chairs, like I always do. He raised his head from the potions book he was reading.
“What are you doing?” he asked harshly. I waited some time to reply:
“Trying to study.” I said, trying it sounded in the same tone of voice.
“I’m sitting here.” He said, making a gesture. He was ‘inviting’ me to leave. I didn’t answer him, an attitude that bothered him enough to leave the library without the book.

I took it with me to the common room and dedicated some time searching for something there. Draco wasn’t the type of guy you meet in the library. Maybe in the Quidditch pitch or in the teacher’s offices, but not tin the library.
When I was about to give up, I saw it.
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Ah! Not a cliffhanger! She saw what???

My guess about Draco's waterworks -- he's being made to do something death eaterish and isn't keen on the idea.

Great chappie, keep them coming!
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What did she see???
Lol. I love this <3
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Inside the Potions book, there was a letter. It started like this:

Draco,
Nothing changed since the last time we spoke. As he had promised, S. made the unbreakable oath. But be careful, my son. We live in hard times.
You must be successful in your mission. Amelia’s life is in danger. So does yours.
Your mother,
N. M.


I hide the letter in my robes and went to my dorm. I’d think about it in the morning. But the letter gave me no rest. Who was Amelia? Why was her life in danger? And why was Malfoy’s life in danger? These questions hunted my dreams that night. I hardly knew what I had just find out.



So it was going to be that way.
Draco Malfoy was angry. Her mother had made no reference to his father on her letter to Draco. Not one. The sixteen year old Slytherin searched the letter in his pockets. He was sure he had put it there. Merlin. Dear Merlin. He couldn’t find it. Where is the letter?! Draco was starting to be scared. Where had he left the letter?
A quick, and late, search in the library revealed the Granger girl had taken the book. Draco was now officially in troubles and he knew it. While he was leaving the library and heading again to his dorm, he was thinking of a plan to get the letter back without Granger notice it. When he fell asleep, he had the perfect plan.
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Ooooh wonder what his plan is?
And who's Amelia?

Love your story, hun! PAMS!
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It's really really good Fil, buuuuut.... Don't go negleting your other one nooow!

Don't listen to me, it really is aweesome, PAMS.
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This is sooooooo good! The cinammon and pepper are doing their job!
I can't wait to find out more about the plan. I ahve got to read more! I don't think I'll be able to slepe tonight.
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Hi I'm a new reader. Who is Amelia is the question on my mind. ooooooo I am liking this story.
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hey whos amelia?

shannon wants to know.

loved the chapter
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Ooooh wonder what his plan is?
And who's Amelia?

Love your story, hun! PAMS!
Thanks! Glad that you're enjoying.

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It's really really good Fil, buuuuut.... Don't go negleting your other one nooow!

Don't listen to me, it really is aweesome, PAMS.
I won't, I promess. The proof is the new When It's over chapter. Yup, I updated.

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I can't wait to find out more about the plan. I ahve got to read more! I don't think I'll be able to slepe tonight.
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hey whos amelia?

shannon wants to know.

loved the chapter

I might update still today.

Who is Amelia seems to be everyone's question... hum... I know nothing...
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Wink New Reader! PAMS

New Reader! I love Dramione fanfics... they are my favourite couple... so cute!! i think this fanfic is awesome, but what is up with Draco crying?! I want to know!! PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS!!
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