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12-30-2007, 10:40 PM
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#76 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Location: Uk, my house :] Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 80
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Leonie Longbottom
First Year |
New Reader!! Love This Story! Neville And Luna So Sweet! Pams!!
Serena x
Phoenix feathers <3 | 
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12-31-2007, 02:55 PM
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#77 (permalink)
|  A bit confused
 Bicorn
Location: dancing through life Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 1,645
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maura Felicia Silvermoon
First Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Slivermoon
Magical Creatures |
Oh good a new reader! (Thank you.) I think Susi is typing up the next chapter now. She told me it was really long. So be patient my pretties, it shouldn't be too long (hopefully.) | |
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12-31-2007, 03:14 PM
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#78 (permalink)
|  Like cheese, cheese, cheeseHippogriff
Location: SS, duh Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 3,451
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carolyn Weasley
Fourth Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Isabella Longbottom
Magical Games & Sports |
Good I'm glad it'll soon be up. | |
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01-12-2008, 07:29 PM
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#79 (permalink)
| A bit confused
Bicorn
Location: dancing through life Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 1,645
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maura Felicia Silvermoon
First Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Slivermoon
Magical Creatures |
It has been almost two weeks since we last got a comment on this and that's because the new chapter isn't up. I don't know what's going on with Susi but i'm going to talk to her. | |
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01-13-2008, 09:17 PM
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#80 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: Hogwarts Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 307
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Vanessa Lillian Lane
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Ok really soon now like within an hour. | |
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01-13-2008, 09:37 PM
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#81 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: Hogwarts Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 307
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Vanessa Lillian Lane
First |  The EVILER cliffe!
Yeah sorry it took me so long.
I walked down to breakfast contemplating the day
ahead. It was Friday November 13, 1997. Not good. I
have always been superstitious. Who can blame me that
my Grandma had a black cat sent from hell? I sighed,
tonight Ginny had made me agree to what I thought
was the stupidest plan imaginable Steal the Sword of
Gryffindor. Stupid, stupid, stupid. But Ginny Weasley is
very persuasive, that is she threatens to hex you into
the next centery. I sat down next to Seamus at the
table.
"There you are Neville!" Ginny exclaimed and
launched into a speech I had heard ten time already.
"...and then we'll have an advantage over you-know-
who." Seamus and I finished. Ginny glared at us, "It's
not funny you know!" Ginny said. I had met Mrs.
Weasley once or twice and the look she had given Fred
and George that day when they had dropped Percy's
prefect badge down the tolit emulated Ginny's
expression perfectly.
"We meet at eight." she said sternly and turned to go.
***
I jogged down the corridor my dark brown hair (which
was growing quite long because, in the middle of a War
one doesn't have mush time for cutting one's hair.)
whipping at my face. It was 8:03. My death sentence.
Bye Luna, know I have loved you. Ok shut it Neville
hopefully Ginny won't be the hard on you.
"You're late Neville." Ginny said obviously trying hard
not to lose it.
"And you sound like Umbridge when you say the, now
lets get this done." I said equally tried. Just then Luna
spoke up.
"Ok, lets go now." Luna said giving us each a gentle
shove towards the Heads office.Marveled at how soft her
hands were against my bare arm but pushed the
thought away.
"Ok, Neville get the sword." Ginny ordered, once we
were in the office.(The password had been The Dark
Lord, Hagrid had told us.)
"Why me?" I asked.
"Because I am a coward and Luna is a Ravenclaw."
Ginny said, as if stating the obvious.
"I'm a coward too!" I protested.
"Don't tell me your a coward Neville Longbottom,
you're leading a gang of teenage rebels for goodness
sakes!" Ginny exclaimed.
"Stop bickering!" Luna said and opened the glass case
and extracted the sword.
"What the-?" I asked.
"How did you-?" Ginny asked. Luna shrugged and
handed me the sword, it did not have the power Harry
had said it had, no energy rushed through my veins.
"Somethings wrong..." I said.
"Yes Longbottom I agree., what are you doing in my
office?" Uh oh.
Aren't I the evilest person on the plant?
Last edited by dark_emeralds : 01-21-2008 at 05:43 PM.
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01-14-2008, 03:51 PM
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#82 (permalink)
| A bit confused
Bicorn
Location: dancing through life Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 1,645
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maura Felicia Silvermoon
First Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Slivermoon
Magical Creatures |
Finally!
I will get writing soon
Susi you need to spell check your posts. (LOL) | |
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01-14-2008, 03:57 PM
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#83 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: Hogwarts Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 307
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Vanessa Lillian Lane
First |
lol my Word pad doesn't have a spell checker  | |
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01-15-2008, 01:43 AM
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#84 (permalink)
| Like cheese, cheese, cheese Hippogriff
Location: SS, duh Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 3,451
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carolyn Weasley
Fourth Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Isabella Longbottom
Magical Games & Sports |
great post | |
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01-15-2008, 09:16 PM
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#85 (permalink)
| A bit confused
Bicorn
Location: dancing through life Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 1,645
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maura Felicia Silvermoon
First Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Slivermoon
Magical Creatures |
How can it not have a spell checker?
I have a study hall tomorrow so I'll write the next chapter then. | |
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01-16-2008, 11:05 PM
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#86 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Location: in a different world unknown to all human beings Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 87
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ella DeParra
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Susi!!! You're just.....evil! Poor neville!  | |
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01-18-2008, 11:41 PM
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#87 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: Hogwarts Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 307
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Vanessa Lillian Lane
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haha i had a much worse cliffe but i didn't want to torture Luna(or hrmy for that matter she woulda killed me) | |
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01-19-2008, 11:46 PM
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#88 (permalink)
| A bit confused
Bicorn
Location: dancing through life Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 1,645
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maura Felicia Silvermoon
First Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Slivermoon
Magical Creatures |
No I wouldnt've! I'd have had neville punch the lights out of whoever was doing the torturing. Anyway, I am typing the chapter now. It should be up by the next couple of days. | |
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01-20-2008, 02:15 AM
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#89 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: Hogwarts Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 307
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Vanessa Lillian Lane
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MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! whoa sorry about that... i have issues | |
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01-20-2008, 01:39 PM
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#90 (permalink)
| A bit confused
Bicorn
Location: dancing through life Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 1,645
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maura Felicia Silvermoon
First Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Slivermoon
Magical Creatures |
Since you can't see me, maybe you should know...I'm raising one eyebrow. | |
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01-20-2008, 07:34 PM
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#91 (permalink)
| A bit confused
Bicorn
Location: dancing through life Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 1,645
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maura Felicia Silvermoon
First Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Slivermoon
Magical Creatures |
Okay I have the next chapter. It's really long....
Luna's eyes were wide with fright. Ginny had a similar expression. Slowly, I
turned around, terrified of what I knew I would see.
Severus Snape was standing in the doorway, a raised wand in his hand and
an unpleasant leer on his ugly face. I let out a terrified squeak and stumbled
backward into Ginny. Snape laughed softly. "I don't think so, Longbottom." He
clicked his thin fingers. "Get them." He stood aside as two hulking figures
burst through the door. Amycus and Alecto Carrow advanced, leering, and
three more figures darted through. Draco Malfoy pinned Ginny to the wall,
wand held aloft, and both Crabbe and Goyle went for me. Each took one of
my arms and they smashed me into one of the cabinets. "Oof." I groaned
with pain. I looked past Goyle's shoulder to see the Carrows advancing on
Luna. She held up the sword defensively. Alecto flicked it out of her hand
effortlessly. Luna blanched.
WHAM.
Crabbe slammed his fist into my stomach and I doubled over. "No!" I slammed
my shoulder into his stomach and stood up, pulling my wand out of my
pocket. "Stupefy!" I cried, pointing my wand at Goyle. It struck him
square in the chest and he fell over. The same fate awaited Crabbe.
"Stupefy!"
Ginny punched Draco in the nose, hard, and then performed her legendary
Bat-Bogey Hex. It hit Malfoy in the face and he stumbled backwards and
landed hard on his butt. "Ow! Get 'em off! Get 'em off!" he whimpered.
"Nice one, Ginny!" I yelled, and then I looked over my shoulder wildly at the
sound of a scream.
My heart nearly fell out of my body.
Luna was slumped on the floor, whimpering, while both Amycus and Alecto
stood over her. Amycus, I saw, had his wand pointed at her heart. I realized
with terror that he was using the Cruciatus Curse on her. My eyes widened. I
was on the verge of crying out when suddenly, Luna kicked out at the
Carrows. They both stumbled back, surprised. Luna picked up the abandoned
Gryffindor sword and pointed it threateningly at them. "Don't you dare come
near us," she said, and all the dreamy quality was gone from her voice. She
sounded nearly as hard as Professor McGonagall, and there was a dangerous
glint in her eyes. The Carrows looked at each other and in that moment, I
made a run for it. I grabbed Luna's hand and ran out the door. Ginny was
right behind us. Severus Snape was waiting for us at the bottom of the
stairs, but (by some unbelievably amazing luck) he had fallen asleep. We
crept past him and ran, ran down the corridor as fast as we could.
We stopped behind a suit of armor. I looked at Luna concernedly. "Are you all
right?" She had a bleeding cut on one cheek and a bruised lip, but other than
that she seemed fine on the outside. "Oh, Neville, I feel as though I've been
run over by the Hogwarts Express," she groaned. Ginny took her hand
comfortingly. "You were amazing, Neville," she beamed at me.
"Yeah, thanks, Ginny. So were you. You both were." I told them proudly.
Aching all over, we headed back to our common rooms with a promise to
meet at breakfast at the Gryffindor table. It was half an hour later, safe
under my covers in the dormitory and looking at Harry's and Ron's empty
beds, that I realized we had left the sword in Snape's office. | |
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01-23-2008, 05:13 PM
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#92 (permalink)
| | Bowtruckle
Location: Home, sleeping with the enemy♥... Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 227
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loved it  who's making fun of whom?  | |
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01-25-2008, 05:01 AM
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#93 (permalink)
| RPFC Co-President
HEFC Promo Off.This tag is the new black! Hippogriff
Location: * not sure * Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 3,405
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kaika Isabelle Lockhart Castelle
Fourth Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Jack Nathaniel Lockhart Thomas
Magical Creatures |
OMG! You guys, this is all so good!! Loved it!
*I secretly hoped for Neville and Luna to end up together in the series, but, oh-well, JKR thought differently*
New Reader  | 
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01-26-2008, 02:46 PM
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#94 (permalink)
|  Private LionPotterifficFaerie
Location: Enlgand Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 4,412
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Keira Davenport
Fifth Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Evelyn Vixon Walker
Magical Education |
Very good,i fell in love with the story...you shuld be an author  xxx | |
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01-28-2008, 02:30 PM
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#95 (permalink)
| A bit confused
Bicorn
Location: dancing through life Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 1,645
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maura Felicia Silvermoon
First Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Slivermoon
Magical Creatures |
Thank you Ms. Diggory and TalithaWhite. Susi told me the next chapter should be up soon. | |
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01-29-2008, 02:40 PM
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#96 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Location: in a different world unknown to all human beings Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 87
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ella DeParra
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oh, good! Keep it up! | |
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02-08-2008, 05:05 AM
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#97 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 278
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Billy-Jean Bennet
First Year |  wow
is is great love neville's bravery....... new reader keep on writing amazin g stuff   | |
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02-08-2008, 02:13 PM
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#98 (permalink)
| | Bicorn
Location: At The BURROW!!!! Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,709
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ravenclaw
First Year |
GrEAT STORY!I really like it!
-<3Molly | |
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02-08-2008, 03:39 PM
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#99 (permalink)
| | Flobberworm
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 19
Hogwarts RPG Name:
unsorted
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[New reader]
Luvit Luvit Luvit Luvit Luvit Luvit Luvit !!!!!!!
This is amazing I always thought Neville and Luna would be great togeather! | |
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02-08-2008, 08:50 PM
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#100 (permalink)
| A bit confused
Bicorn
Location: dancing through life Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 1,645
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Maura Felicia Silvermoon
First Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Slivermoon
Magical Creatures |
Thanks to Voldemort&88, Mrs Molly Weasley, and HarryPotter=<3! Welcome all new readers! We're glad to have you!
Susi told me that she has the next chapter written, both for this and for The Hogwarts Four, our other fan fic. She still has to type them up though. We've both been really busy lately. | |
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