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Old 11-21-2007, 12:31 AM   #26 (permalink)
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I wrote this fic for two reasons

1.) I love L/N ship
2.) I was appauled to find out that neville marries hannah abbot, she so goes with ernie macmillan
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Keep it up! I like this. But come on don't leave us in suspense!

And I agree, Luna and Neville go together, and Hannah and Ernie.

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Old 11-22-2007, 05:06 PM   #28 (permalink)
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Hrmy you'll know the ongoing joke so, yeah...


"Oh Flobberworms*!" I exclaimed. How could I be so stupid?

"What?" Seamus asked.

"The spell!" I cried.

"Neville, what spell?" Ginny asked.

"The... the... do you still have your DA coins?" I inquired.

Lavender began rummaging in her school bag; Seamus dropped to his knees and looked in his trunk; Parvati simply took it out of her pocket; Ginny took off her left shoe and extracted hers. I took the four and waved my wand over them.

"Here," I said handing the coins back to them. "Seamus." I said squeezing my coin.

"What? Whoa it's vibrating!" Seamus said.

"Look, it's red!" Ginny squealed.

"Now squeeze it, that means I can talk to you." I instructed. He did and my coin turned blue.

"Hello Seamus." I said. Two seconds later the coin echoed the words.

"That's brilliant!" Parvati exclaimed, I blushed, I am not one for compliments.

"It was nothing..." I muttered.

* long story, in is now a ongoing joke between me and my friends

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"Oh fobberworms!" I'd forgotten about fobberworms. Wow...

Nice. Keep it up.
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How could you forget the fobberworms? What about the very well proportiened fobberworms??
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Well hey, it's been awhile.
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awhile? whatev
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Hope y'all like it!

The girls said goodnight and departed. I slipped on my pajamas and crawled

into bed, that night I dreamed of my favorite ravenclaw.

"Neville! Gosh wake up! We're late for breakfast as it is!" a distinct irish-

accented voice reached my ears and barely registered.

"Wha?" I muttered and turned over.

"WAKE UP!!!" Seamus bellowed, so loud I fell out of bed.

"I'm up, I'm up geez." I said. I dressed quickly and hurried down stairs.

"Neville!" Ginny cried, as soon as I sat down. "You haven't given Luna her coin!"

"Yeah, I should go tell her." I said and stood up again. I moved slowly toward

the Ravenclaw table. I walked past Luna and slipped a note into her hand.

Meet me in the Room of Requirement after breakfast.

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Ooh, suspense! I love it! PAMS
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Next post to be written by hrmy.
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Nevi and LuLu!!!!!! tinkle
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whatever....OK next chapter by me.

After breakfast, I ran up to the Room of Requirement. Luna wasn't there yet,

so I sat down to wait. I would wait forever for someone like her...

Luna came in and shut the door behind her. "What was it you wanted

Neville?" she asked. And she looked at me with those eyes, those beautiful

misty eyes, like molten silver... Snap out of it Neville! I told myself.

What are you in love with, her eyes? "Uh...uh...I..." I

stammered. "Uh...I have something for you..." How stupid am I? That sounds

all wrong. Luna looked at me, curiously, and for a split second I saw

something in her eyes that wasn't confusion, or curiosity. It scared me as

well as delighted me. "Um...we all have coins and you didn't get one yet..." I

was beginning to sweat slightly.

"Oh! Well why didn't you say so Neville?" said Luna cheerfully. She came

forward and took the coin from me. Her hand was so soft...

"Well I have to go, I'll be late for Divination," she said. She backed out

of the room, keeping her eyes on my face. The minute she was gone, I

smacked myself in the forehead. "You complete idiot, Neville, you're

obsessing!" I muttered angrily.

Then I hurried off to my own class...Potions. Ugh.

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Old 11-30-2007, 02:44 PM   #39 (permalink)
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adorable, i loved it!!!!
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Ok next post...

"Your late, Mr. Longbottom." Professor Slughorn said to me as I walked into

mere seconds after the bell rang.

"Yes, I'm sorry Professor, I left my things in my truck and had to go back to get

them." I said, I had learned a ton of excuses and this was one of the best, but

only on the first day.

"Well, seeing as it's the first day, i'll let it pass, please take a seat."

Slughorn said. I walked over and sat between Ernie Mcmillian and Hannah

Abbott, I silently passed them DA coins and then focused on Slughorn, who was

about Amortenia, which I swear we had already covered but...

" How about you Mr. Longbottem, what do you smell?" I was startled, I hadn't

noticed the smell in the room untill it was metioned, but then my nose

registered the smell. I smelled cookies, bubble gum*, and... Luna's hair.

"Uh... I smell... bubble gum and cookies and... something floral... kind of like

roses." I said, blushing a bit.

"That's very nice. Now, just between this class and me, I smell chocolate,

butterbeer and oak meade wine.

"Ms. Abbott what do you smell?" Slughorn added.

"I-" she said with a half glance at Ernie. "um, strawberries, honey and blue."

"Excuse me but blue?" Slughorn asked, all the while I noticed that Ernie's eyes

were, indeed, blue.

"Yes... I don't know how, I just smell blue." Hannah said.

"Well... thats a first." Slughorn said and proceded with inquiring about what

people smelled. The bell rang and I headed to... Muggle studies.

*You know the whole his-insane-mother-gave-him-a-gum-wrapper thing.

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That's cute! I like it.

OK I am officially joining dark_emeralds in this FF.

Next chapter by me. I think it'll be up today. I'm not sure.
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Katie r u still on? Ok whatev yeah good i got my chapter done and now you must do it so i can write more and this is a never ending circle
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I'm here now...I'll write the chapter tonight. Keep your socks on darky!!
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darky?! geez just call me susi
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okay okay already. Susi. I'm writing next chappie now
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good katie-rose
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I can smell blue toooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!
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OK that was odd. Next post....

"Longbottom!"

I nearly fell out of my seat. Alecto Carrow strode heavily up to my desk. She

slapped me across the face. Pain blossomed where she had struck my cheek.

"Detention, Longbottom."

What?" I squeaked.

"DETENTION!"

She whipped out her wand, but thought better of it. Alecto continued, with

forced calm.

"It is a known fact thatyou are friends with, not only the blood-traitor

Weasleys," she stopped for breath, "but also the Mudblood

Granger." She spoke the word with ferocious distaste.

"Don't you dare use that word!" cried Parvati Patil from the back of the room.

This led to a massive uproar. Everyone was shouting at Alecto, and even

Lavender brown, who was known for rather disliking Hermione, was on her

feet, shouting insults at the pudding of a woman who called herself a teacher.

"Enough! Enough!" bellowed Alecto. "ENOUGH! Crucio!" She

pointed her wand at Seamus Finnigan, who fell to the floor, screaming.

"No!" shouted Lavender. She pulled out her own wand. "Expelliarmus!"

Alecto's wand went spinning off to the side and Seamus got up, still

whimpering. Alecto snarled and turned on Lavender, but before she could do

anything, the bell rang. Class was over. The entire Muggle Studies class

stampeded out the door, me with them.

(This is part of why the FF is rated Sa-13+.)
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