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| | The Patil Palace [PP2FC] Double trouble! The Patil Twins Fan Club! | Have a very Harry day!!
11-28-2006, 09:54 PM
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| PP2FC & AA&SC FounderI Love Gaspard UllielRupert's Best Friend Banshee
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | PP2FC: Monthly Short-Story Contest Hello all my wonderful Patil Fans! I came up with this idea for a short-story contest when I was entering my submission for a site that is currently running a contest for writers. It will be a monthly short-story contest like our PP2FC Fanart Competition which is hosted by our lovely artist, Aya. For the time being, I will be in charge of the contest until one of our PP2FC Activities Officer is willing to take over. Now, it's simpe and fun; There will be a 'Story Line' posted each month. Based on that 'Story Line' you are to create your own short-story. You will have the entire month to work on your short-story, but be sure to submit your entry before the deadline. All entries will be PMed to me (HPChick4Life a.k.a. Mischa); I will post all of the entries that were sent into me in here. The winner of the contest will be based on the number of votes; you are not allowed to vote for your own story. Each entry will be given a number (1, 2, 3..etc); if you see the number repeated twice then it's by the same author. When voting you are to PM me which entry you're voting for by stating the number; example: Entry 1. All of the stories will be 'quoted' when posted in here. I encourage everyone to take part in this even if you're not a writer. Just enter in for fun; you never know what could happened. Guidelines: Your short-story must include: - Title - Banner or graphic - 1,500 words or less Rules: - All SS Rules Apply - Vote for TWO of your favorites *Don't vote for your own* - Votes are sent to HPChick4Life - Limit 2 entries only - PM all Short-Story Entries to HPChick4Life - Can be on either Parvati or Padma or even both (unless story line says otherwords) - Other Characters are allowed - Have Fun!! In the second post you will find all the month's past competitions and winners. Now, as for the prizes for our winners, they get to choose between matching avvie and siggy or a tag (saying they're the winner, maybe something like: PP2FC SSC Winner #1) I've written like a whole page so I'm going to cut this short! I didn't get to cover everything but just follow the rules and guidelines and you'll be fine. I have posted the rules and guidelines in this post, but I will also include it when we have our first short-story contest. If you have any questions please feel free to PM me! Have fun with this and be creative! |
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11-28-2006, 09:58 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | Here you will find all the past competitions and the winners. December 2006 Contest Winner: Audrey a.k.a. Drey-Drey for her Short-Story 'Seeing Clearly' January 2007 Contest Winner: Aya for her Short-Story 'Payback Time' http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s.../parvati16.jpg March 2007 Contest Winner: Sri for her Short-Story 'The Other Twin' *This list will be edited from time to time*
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12-02-2006, 01:53 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | December's Short-Story Contest Okay, so it's time to have our monthly short-story contest!!! Are you guys ready? Alright, I'm going to post the storyline and the rules. If you have any questions please feel free to PM me! Good Luck to everyone that enters! Storyline: Parvati has been in love with Harry ever since the Yule Ball, but kept her feelings for him to herself. She keeps having these haunting nightmares of Lord Voldemort killing him (Harry). She later discovers that she can see the dark secrets of his mind. It was one night after the D.A. meeting she learnt of his plan to kill Harry. Parvati decides to strike a deal with the Dark Lord to save Harry's life, but finds that she is now is danger. What will happened? Will Lord Voldemort use Parvati to get to Harry? Will Parvati ever get the chance to tell Harry she loves him? How will this all end? You decide! Guidelines: Your short-story must include: - Title - Banner or graphic *DO NOT INCLUDE YOUR NAME OR USERNAME* - 1,500 words or less Rules: - All SS Rules Apply - Vote for TWO of your favorites *Don't vote for your own* - Votes are sent to HPChick4Life - Limit 2 entries only *must be different from each other* - PM all Short-Story Entries to HPChick4Life - Can be on either Parvati or Padma or even both (unless story line says otherwords) - Other Characters are allowed - Have Fun!! DEADLINE FOR ALL ENTRIES: 28TH DECEMBER 2006 VOTING WILL BE: 29TH & 30TH DECEMBER 2006 WINNERS ANNOUNCED: 31ST DECEMBER 2006
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12-02-2006, 01:00 PM
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|  Dutch Language Mod Twins VP Sean's NZ Princess
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| I love th idea Mischa. Wahen's the deadline. i hope my exams will be over by then and I'll be able to cook something up. |
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12-02-2006, 07:36 PM
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| PP2FC & AA&SC FounderI Love Gaspard UllielRupert's Best Friend Banshee
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | ^Oh, dear me! I forgot to state the deadline! Sorry guys! Thank you Aya! Well, you guys have this whole month to work up something! But I'm going to add the deadline right now! |
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12-03-2006, 01:42 AM
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| OCFC Graphics Officer K.o. Alfie Enoch AA&SC FC Vice Pres. Chizpurfle
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| Oh I will DEFINITELY be participating in this... I already have something brewing in my head...  Look out for my entry Mi-Mi. lol. |
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12-03-2006, 09:36 AM
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| K.o. Robert's Hair Loves Everything ECFC Erkling
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aliza (Ali) Stabler Fourth | i've already started mine. Hopfully my entry would be in by tomorrow. |
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12-03-2006, 07:59 PM
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| PP2FC & AA&SC FounderI Love Gaspard UllielRupert's Best Friend Banshee
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | I'm happy that everyone fancies this! I'm really looking forward to reading some of the entries I get!! Good Luck to all you guys!!! Drey-Drey: You know since I'm doing this it's gonna be H/P lol! |
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12-04-2006, 02:57 PM
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| Urdu Mod ♥ SotS Head of Writers JPFC Pres KasTan Snidget
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Corranda Melvicks / Royda Dames Special Ops | Aha! More of t3h Harry/ Parvati-ness flying around. =D I'll be entering if I can find time. I'm having my Mid-Terms right now, so yeah.  |
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12-04-2006, 04:43 PM
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|  SS Quill Journalist Hermione Co-President Book Club Babe SotS Champion Vampire
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Jermey Jackston Special Ops | I'm so going to do it. It seems like a lot of fun. It'll tale a while to get it in, but I'll make the deadline.  Good luck to every who is going for it. |
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12-04-2006, 05:21 PM
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| PP2FC & AA&SC FounderI Love Gaspard UllielRupert's Best Friend Banshee
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | I hope you do find some time Maxie! if not that's okay! Jess, I'm really happy that you will take part! |
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12-05-2006, 05:58 PM
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| K.o. Robert's Hair Loves Everything ECFC Erkling
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aliza (Ali) Stabler Fourth | has anyone else besides me sent in entries already? |
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12-08-2006, 09:30 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | Guys, if you're going to take part in this contest, then please follow the rules. It was stated that your entry must include a banner or graphic of some sort. If that's too much of a problem then don't bother sending in your entry to me. |
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12-16-2006, 01:14 AM
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| OCFC Graphics Officer K.o. Alfie Enoch AA&SC FC Vice Pres. Chizpurfle
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| wOo, *works on a banner* lol!
Duuuuude, H/P?! Would I expect anything else?? lol; lovvve it 
I'm almost done it, so you should be getting it soon. If I have time, I might enter 2. |
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12-16-2006, 08:34 PM
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| PP2FC & AA&SC FounderI Love Gaspard UllielRupert's Best Friend Banshee
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | ^Oh, I'm very excited Drey-Drey! Can't wait to read it love |
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12-18-2006, 08:25 AM
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| OCFC Graphics Officer K.o. Alfie Enoch AA&SC FC Vice Pres. Chizpurfle
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| Duuuude; I just pm'd you. lol.  |
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12-20-2006, 01:57 AM
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|  SS Quill Journalist Hermione Co-President Book Club Babe SotS Champion Vampire
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Jermey Jackston Special Ops | I entered, and I did it under the word line. And I think that it's good. Course I would think that all writers think their work, is good. Can't wait to read all yours! |
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12-30-2006, 02:40 AM
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|  SS Quill Journalist Hermione Co-President Book Club Babe SotS Champion Vampire
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Jermey Jackston Special Ops | hey, it's the 29th. arent we voting today? |
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12-30-2006, 03:19 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | Entry # 1 Quote: 
Only if you love me.
"I'm not going to sleep," she told herself repetitively. "I won't!" For a time it worked, but after a while it sounded soothing, and she fell asleep.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaa!" It happened again, her nightmare, her love, Harry James Potter being killing by Lord Voldemort.
"Parvati!" said her roommates, in unison. "What's wrong?"
Parvati looked from Lavender to Hermione. If she told Hermione, Hermione would tell Harry. If Lavender, the gossiper, knew, she would spread it around.
"Just a bad dream."
"Ok," they said uncertainly.
"Night."
"Night," said Parvati, this time pinching herself awake.
They had a D.A. meeting the next day. Parvati waited for Padma by the Great Hall to come. She was thinking whither or not she should tell her about the dreams. Dumb idea, she thought. Padma's voice rang sub conscientiously, "Parvati, you're spending too much time with that Lovegood girl. That's not good for you. You can bet that if Mum and/or Dad ever found out—"
"Hey, Parvati," said Padma.
"Hey, let's go."
"Fine."
They walked for some time, but then Padma realized that she left some of her homework in the Great Hall, and went back to get it.
"Hi, Parvati," said a voice she'd crave to hear, Harry's."Why are you by yourself?"
"Well, I was waiting for Padma but . . ."
"Let's go. Don't want to be late, do we?" he winked at her.
They walked side by side to D.A. and they talked about stuff.
She was walking/talking with the one she loved; she was floating on air; she sighed.
"What?"
"What what?" she said snapping back to reality.
"You sighed," he paused, "a very sad sigh, a sigh that would make one wonder why you sighed."
She wrinkled her eyebrows gave him wondering look. "What the heck?"
Harry burst out laughing. "Just what I was thinking too," he said after he calmed down a bit.
"Ha-ha very funny," her voice dripping with sarcasm.
"Come on, Parvati, I was joking."
"And I was sighing because I'm floating on air," she hoped it came out sarcastically.
"Sorry, I made you fall back to earth."
They made a turn and Harry headed into D.A. headquarters.
"Sorry you made me fall back to earth for you," she said softly. "Can you be sorry?"
"Coming?"
"Coming," she walked in and realized that she and Harry were the last ones there, even Padma was there.
"Why did you—" started Parvati.
"Harry."
"Thank you."
Padma nodded a "welcome".
They had a productive meeting, and when Harry blew the whistle, Parvati wished they had more time.
"That was great everyone, see you next meeting," and with that, people filed out, two to four at a time. Out they went till there were only Ron, Hermione, Harry, Cho and Parvati left.
"You go ahead," said Harry. "Cho, can I talk to you?"
"Ok, mate," said Ron. "Come on."
Parvati could feel her blood boil. "Cho, can I talk to you?" played in her head till drove her nuts!
"I need to get something from the library," she told Hermione and Ron after getting half way to the common room.
"Ok, see you in the common room," they said.
She ran back to headquarters. As she turned, she bumped into Harry.
"Hi," she said breathless.
"Hi, yourself," he said. "What's up?"
"Er . . . just going to the library, I—" before she could continue, she saw Cho leave headquarters. She felt cold all over.
"I—left—my—my—I got to—" she set off for a run, but collapsed onto the floor.
All was black, but she saw Voldemort, now clearer than in her dreams, standing in front of her.
"Tomorrow night," said someone, Lusius Malfoy.
"Yes," said Voldemort's icy voice. "Tomorrow night Potter will die; nothing can stop me. Nothing."
"Master, do you think—"
"I have thought of every way. There is only one way for him to be pardoned."
"Yes, for one of his friends to take his place."
"Correct! Since no one knows this, he's going die."
Cackling of the two voices and then, "Parvati! Parvati!"
"What?" she stirred. Harry was in front of her with a worried look on his face.
"You passed out. Are you ok? Do you need to go to the hospital wing? Do—"
"NO!" he looked startled. Thinking fast she said, "I—I didn't eat much at dinner, so I guess that's why."
"Are you sure you are ok?" he said, uncertain of letting her go.
"Course, would I lie to you?"
"I wouldn't know, don't know you that well to tell."
"That hurts, Harry; I thought that you were one of my friends."
"Kidding!"
"You better be. I need to—to go get my work."
"Ok, see you later."
"I don't think that you will, Harry." She knew what she had to do, she needed to go find Voldemort and make him agree to kill her rather than Harry. Where are they? She thought. Malfoy!
She got her broomstick, swung her leg over it, went into the air, and headed toward Malfoy Manner.
Draco said something about his house when they were younger. Teasing her, but she remembered what he had said about the location. "I could come to school by broom. North of this dump."
She thought of what to say to Voldemort, but before she could do that she saw a huge house, knowing she had reached her destination, stopped at the door.
Before she could do anything hands pulled her into the house and tied her up.
"Master, she's here," said Crabbe, and he dragged her into a room.
He pushed Parvati in a chair that was adjacent to Voldemort's and left.
"Miss Patil, just who I wanted to meet."
"Kill me instead of Harry!" she cried. Well, there goes all preamble.
"Oh, my dear girl, that can not be. You see, you're bait for Harry, first I didn't think that you would response to nightmares, but I knew that a faint in front of him would do it. Now," he stood up, "I have send him a note which states that his friend—" that cut Parvati to the core, "—is in trouble and he'll come."
"He won't do that! He's not dumb enough to fall for that," she said, willing it true.
"Wrong," he sounded like a teacher, "as a matter of fact he is on his way here as we speak."
"How would you know?"
"Because," he said silkily. "He's at the door."
"NNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!"
"Take her to the dungeon."
Two people came up behind her, grabbed her chair, and took her to a dungeon. Why did I do this? It was so stupid of me!!!! she thought.
After she was tied up for about five hours Draco came in. "Well, if it isn't Patil and here I thought that you were too dumb to find my house. Do you like it? It is a pity that you can't have a proper tour."
Parvati felt totally deflated, but knew she shouldn't act like it, "Yes, a pity I—" there was a yell, and Parvati knew it was Harry. "What are they doing to him?" hoping she sounded as though she didn't care.
Draco smirked, "You'd like to know, wouldn't you? They're killing him."
"WHAT?!??!?!?"
"Yeah, that's they whole point of getting you here, didn't you know?" Before she could answer someone called for Draco and he left Parvati to herself.
Nothing happened for ten hours, she could hear shouting, but then, there was silence. She could feel her insides turn into lead. They had killed Harry. How else could there be silence? Then, the dungeon doors opened.
"You're right," she said crying, what difference would it make if Harry was dead now? "They only got to him because of me. Right, how dumb was I? Letting myself get carried way because of someone I loved."
"'Someone you loved?'" repeated a voice she knew all to well.
"Harry?"
He stepped out of the shadows.
"I—how—you?"
"The Order came," he said as he took the chains off of her. "What did you said?"
This time, Parvati had no fear of what he would say; she knew in her heart if she didn't tell him, one day it might be too late.
"I love you."
"Really?" he raised his eyebrows.
"No, I would have hung in a dungeon for anyone? Nah, would've done it for an anybody."
"What I want to do to you, I haven't done to anybody," he said slipping his arms around her waist.
"Oh, yeah, what's that?" she asked as she wrapped her arms around his neck.
"I want to kiss you, if you'll let me."
She looked into his emerald eyes, "Only if you love me." | |
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12-30-2006, 03:23 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Someone messin' with mah post again; keep an eye out mamas...KPT: 16,315 | Entry # 2 Quote: SEEING CLEARLY “How can it only be 8 o’clock?!” Parvati wondered out loud to Lavender while they sat in the common room on a sofa in front of the fireplace. They had nothing else to do on that boring Thursday evening. “I don’t know,” Lavender replied, flipping through her Divination text for what seemed like the tenth time. “How ‘bout I channel Father Time for you and you can ask him about it?” “Would you?” Parvati groaned, leaning back and shutting her eyes, bored to death. She sighed and opened them after two seconds. She looked around the common room. It was still pretty busy. She spotted Harry playing a game of chess with Ron in the corner of the room. She tried not to stare, but she couldn’t help it. Ever since the Yule Ball in their fourth year, Parvati’s had feelings for him. She waited for him to ask her. She turned down four guys for him. Four! Including Blaise Zabini. And Blaise is pretty, she sobbed inwardly. But he wasn’t Harry.After being in the same house and having the same classes with him for almost seven years, she saw who he really was. He didn’t ask for all the horrible stuff that happened to him. Lavender wasn’t aware of Parvati’s actual feelings. She still thought that she only had a small crush on him. Since then she’s never acted on her feelings, afraid that he hadn’t changed his mind about her since fourth year. Parvati couldn’t take it when she had a crush on him, but now, three years later, her feelings have grown into something more. Even if she hadn’t done anything about it, Parvati was glad they were at least friends. She wasn’t as close to him as he was with Ron and Hermione, but they did talk, and that was good enough for her. “You feeling any hotter for Potter there, Parv?” Lavender smirked. Parvati’s reply came in the form of a throw pillow to the face. “Ow!” “Shhh! You know Hermione has the ears of a flipping fox,” Parvati hissed. “Yeah. If she did, you’d think she’d have done something about that unholy mess she calls hair by now,” Lavender said in a low voice. “I’ve only discussed it with you a million times in our dorm. The holidays are coming up. I think I’ll go out and buy her some relaxer.” Parvati chuckled, “someone still bitter about being dumped by Ron?” “I wasn’t dumped,” Lavender retorted. “I was…” “Dumped,” Parvati finished. Lavender stuck her tongue out at her. Parvati gave her a little smile. She glanced at the gr | | |