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11-07-2009, 11:23 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: in my old hometown X
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellie Kathleen Hixton :) First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily Jane Prongs Magical Education | The Next Maurader - Sa13+ This is my first FF so I hope you like it
Plot: James Potter' life. From his own point of view etc. . . . . I really want you to know all the characters so:
All about the characters and time line and world of James Potter, in ‘The Next Marauder’:
The story starts in 2017, when James is starting his 1st year.
Wedding Dates:
•* Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks- 1997
•Bill Weasley and Fleur Delacour- 1997
•Percy Weasley and Penelope ?- 2000
•George Weasley and Angelina Jonhson - 2003
•Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley-2005
•Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger-2006
•Draco Malfoy and Melanie Parwyn-2006
•Neville Longbottom and Luna Lovegood-2008
Children:
•Lupin and Tonks: Teddy Remus- February 18, 1999.(18)
•Bill and Fleur: Victoire- June 13, 2001. (16) (Charlie: Godfather of Victoire.)
•Percy and Penelope: Percy Jr. - May 7, 2002.(15)
•George and Angelina: Fred- July 21, 2005.(12)
•Harry and Ginny: James Sirius- August 9, 2006.(11)
•Bill and Fleur: Giselle-December 16, 2006.(11)
•Harry and Ginny: Albus Severus- March 12, 2007.(10)
•Draco and Melanie: Scorpius- April 2, 2007.(10)
•Ron and Hermione: Rose- June 22, 2007.(10)
•Neville and Luna: Alina- January 1, 2009.(8)
•Harry and Ginny: Lily Nymphadora- October 29, 2009.(8)
•Ron and Hermione: Hugo- November 23, 2009.(8)
•Neville and Luna: Frank (Jr.) - September 11, 2011. (6)
Jobs and etc:
•1980-Harry-Auror.
•1981-Ginny- played on the Holy Head Harpies team until she was pregnant, then became a housewife.
•1975-Percy- Minister of Magic.
•1975-Penelope- housewife and Daily Prophet photographer.
•1977-George- owns a joke shop.
•1977-Angelina- captain of Holy Head Harpies.
•1980-Hermione- Magical Creatures departments- Elfish Welfare.
•1980-Ron- ???
•1972-Charlie- Head of Magical Creatures, and specializes in dragons.
•1970-Bill- works at Gringotts.
•1976-Fleur- works at Gringotts- more of a housewife, works less hours at Gringotts.
•1980-Luna- owns an exotic plants and etc. shop.
•1980-Neville- Professor of Herbology at Hogwarts.
•1981-Melonie- Head of Games and Sports Department.
•1980-Draco- unspeakable.
•1956-Ellianne McGonagall- Headmistress(Minerva McGonagall’s niece)
•Rebeus Hagrid- gamekeeper
•Arthur Weasley- retired to study Muggles.
•Sarah Fanner- works with dragons, and other magical creatures.( Is dating Charlie.)
I think that summarizes it, haha here it is, the beginning: He opened the familiar door, careful not to wake the sleeping baby. “You think he’ll like it?”
“Harry, he’s a baby! Of course he’ll like it!” Ginny smiled
Harry smiled back; this was the baby’s first time in his own home. Ever since his wife had said she was pregnant Harry had worried about making his baby feel at home. He had grown up in a horrible house, his aunt and uncle’s house. He grew up being treated horribly by his cousin, aunt and uncle. And he knew Dudley, his cousin to be too spoiled. He had only a mild idea of how it should e like, the impression he had gotten from the Burrow, where his best friend and Ginny had grown up. Thinking about that he remembered, they should be here any minute now!
He didn’t want his child to be spoiled rotten, but certainly not treated badly like him, Harry Potter. He was so glad to have Ginny! She could ease his mind without words. He looked from the baby to Ginny. His eyes brown, like Ginny’s but his hair untidy and jet black, exactly like his father’s. His face resembled so much of Ginny but there was something about him, which Harry could not put his finger on, that reminded him of himself.
The baby had been named James, after Harry’s father. Ginny had suggested it, only smiling and saying, “I think it’s a wonderful idea, Harry.” Harry appreciated that, he only hoped James wouldn’t be such a trouble maker like he was.
Looking at James again he said, “I think we’d better put him in his crib.”
He and Ginny climbed the stairs of the mansion. Grimmauld place was very cheery-looking now. Much better than it had been only 8 years ago. He had inherited it from his godfather, Sirius Black.
The backyard was round surrounded by high and tall trees allowing one to go on their broom as high as the trees covered it. And the mansion itself was very high, with 4 floors to it.
Ginny opened the door of James’ new bedroom. The walls were green and there was crib by the wall, surrounded by several toys. Ginny kept going, striding gracefully to where the toys were. Leaning down she pushed them to the side for her husband to pass through. Harry passed, James in his cradling arms, asleep. His tiny little chest rising and falling quickly.
As soon as Harry let go of James in his crib, he wanted to pick him up again, and stare at him at his new-born son all day. He let his arms hang at his sides. Ginny slipped her fingers through his and they both stood there, in the silence.
Please comment on it, I'd love to hear it!
Last edited by ginnywright; 11-18-2009 at 09:03 PM.
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11-12-2009, 10:19 PM
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| | Skrewt
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Pinellas Park, Fl.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Audio Eastwood Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
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Great start!
This is reeeally good, especially considering that this is your first one.
Great job, PAMS! |
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11-12-2009, 11:37 PM
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| | Kappa
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Adams First Year |
PAMS! I love it is wonderful! You are a great writer!!!!!! Good job! Post more soon! Aww they are so sweet~!
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11-15-2009, 01:04 AM
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: ...turn around
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It was awesome. I think iit's going to be a reat story! Pams!
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11-15-2009, 05:02 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: in my old hometown X
Posts: 138
Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellie Kathleen Hixton :) First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily Jane Prongs Magical Education |
thanks, guys! oh I tend to change the story a lot so keep checking.
I actually changed the beginning a bit.
Sorry I took so long, I didn´t even realize it was out!
Hope you like it. . .
Last edited by ginnywright; 11-17-2009 at 05:08 PM.
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11-17-2009, 01:57 AM
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| | Imp
Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Hogsmeade
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Ministry RPG Name:
Ari Rovario Department of Mysteries | Who you gonna call?
Ooooh interesting.. PAMS!! haha
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11-18-2009, 08:25 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: in my old hometown X
Posts: 138
Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellie Kathleen Hixton :) First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily Jane Prongs Magical Education |
guys, I'm sorry I took so long, but at least I wrote a lot
XD Ana Harry embraced her and said, “I think he looks more like you, though.”
Ginny broke free; her face alighted with glee, and said, “Now don’t start! I think he looks like me as much as he looks like you.”
“You can’t fool me, I know a Weasley when I see one!” He joked and grinned back. At that moment, there was a THUMP! down stairs, breaking the silence.
“They’re here!” Ginny said, forgetting to whisper. She took a hold of Harry’s hand and walked down the hallway, excitement taking over her. She opened the sitting room’s door open and looked inside. A flaming-red-headed man that resembled Ginny, was standing there next to a slightly bushy- haired woman on his side, both smiling. Ginny ran over to the woman, and squealing, she hugged her.
“When you sent me the letter, I wanted to meet you right away, and then I had James. But I still want to hear everything!”Ginny had grabbed her right hand and was staring at it.
Without saying anything, Harry walked towards Ron whose face had gone scarlet. So Harry said, “That’s great mate! Finally done it! I told she’d say yes. You could have done it months ago. But congratulations!” Harry clapped him on the back.
Hermione was talking fast to Ginny now. Hermione seemed to notice Harry, but turned to Ginny and said, “And how’s he taking to being a dad, Ginny?”
“He’s much too excited; you’d think he’d never seen a baby in his life! Oh, you should see James, though.” Her eyes twinkled. “He looks just like Harry! That untidy hair will drive me crazy! But he has my eyes . . .” Ginny trailed off, an air of maturity had taken place.
“How’s Teddy?” Ron said. Before Harry could answer though, there was another THUMP! and 4 people came out of the fireplace. One of them with flaming red hair and could only be recognized as a Weasley.
“Bill! You came!” Ginny opened her arms wide welcoming her brother. “Fleur!” She looked at Fleur’s big belly. “When’s she coming?” But not waiting for an answer she noticed the 2 kids with Fleur. “Oh! You brought Victoire! And Teddy too.” She squatted, making Victoire taller than her.
“How old are you now? Six years old?” Ginny asked.
“I’m five, Aunt Ginny!” Victoire giggled at her aunt.
“That’s so old!”Said Ginny sarcastically. Ginny stood up, and leading them all to sit on the couch.
“Did you know that I’m having a little sister, aunt Ginny? She’s coming in December! I don’t think I can wait that long!” Victoire said, jumping onto the couch.
Ginny laughed, “I think you can! December is coming pretty fast isn’t it?”
Harry meanwhile was already talking to his godson:
“You were visiting?” Harry laughed.
“Yea,” The little boy nodded. So much like his father, Remus Lupin, yet still a Metamorphmagus like his mother, Nymphadora Tonks.
Harry lowered his voice so only Victoire and Teddy could hear, “You guys want some cake? I’m sure we can fix something up, can’t we?” he asked looking up at Ginny.
Ginny smiled, her eyes twinkling again as she said, “Of course, come on!” Ginny let her hands slip into Teddy’s and Victoire’s little hands, as she walked out of the room.
Harry looked around. Now it was Fleur talking to Hermione and examining her right hand. “Let’s go to the kitchen shall we? Have a little celebration?” Harry said just loud enough for them to stop talking. “Do you guys know who else’s coming?”
Fleur answered him first, “I think George is coming with Angelina and little Freddy.” She said with her French accent.
“And Mum and Dad too. I don’t think Charlie will be able to come since he became Department Head and Percy’s busy with the election and everything.” Bill finished for Fleur.
“Okay, good! I can’t wait for you all to meet James!” he said, leading them out of the room. He went downstairs into the kitchen where Ginny, Victoire and Teddy were eating a cake.
The rest had followed him in, Fleur sitting down right away. Several thumps followed in the sitting room. And Harry walked into the sitting room to find Mr. and Mrs. Weasley by the fireplace and welcomed them with a pat on the back and a hug. Soon behind them came George and his wife, Angelina. Angelina was holding baby Fred who was laughing merrily at his mother’s tickling, always with his flaming red hair.
“Hey, good to see you.” He said to his fellow old Gryffindor Quidditch Team players. “How’re the Holy Head Harpies doing? Last I heard they weren’t going to the finals!”
“Oh we’re getting much better lately, practices always help.” Angelina answered. “You don’t mind if I go see Ginny, right?” she walked away to the kitchen, after Harry had nodded and said, “Of course not! Go ahead.”
“So you’re a dad now?” George asked, with a smirk, after Angelina had already gone into the kitchen
“Yeah, wait till you see him!” Harry said, ignoring it. George had changed so much since his twin, Fred, had died. Who would have imagined him getting married and having a kid? He was a great dad of course, very fun to be around.
Though Harry sometimes wondered if George was truly happy. Ever Angelina had come around, George had been much happier, but Fred was nevertheless gone. Harry heard crying from upstairs. Before Ginny could say something he had already said, “I’ll get him.”
Harry picked the baby up and held James close to him. James stopped crying immediately looking at who had picked him up, his tear-streaked face smiling as his father tickled him.
Harry smiled, glad his son felt comforted in his arms. As soon as he walked into the kitchen, they crowed around him
They had a wonderful dinner. And finally just before they headed to the sitting room, Harry made an announcement.
“We want Ron and Hermione, our best friends and who are now engaged, to be the godparents!” Harry was smiling so broadly he thought his mouth would break.
Ron and Hermione looked taken aback, but happy all the while. “Of course! We would love to!” Hermione declared.
“To James, Hermione and Ron and to life!” Mr. Weasley said, raising his glass in a toast. |
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11-18-2009, 09:00 PM
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| | Jarvey
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: in my old hometown X
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellie Kathleen Hixton :) First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily Jane Prongs Magical Education | sum more The Letter James turned out to be a trouble maker, like his father and grandfather. He was kind sometimes and definitely smart but still a trouble maker. He loved to play pranks on Albus, but he left Lily alone.
Albus wasn’t annoying, well, not really. Not for a 10 year old anyways. His cousin Rose was over there all the time and they usually spent the whole day in the drawing room, making up stories. Rose was the spitting image of aunt Hermione apart from the hair, because she had very straight, long, red hair.
Lily had a cousin her age too, Hugo, Rose’s little brother. He had read engine straight hair as well, looking just like uncle Ron. And then there was Alina, the daughter of a good family friend, the Longbottoms
James annoyed Albus for that. He wished he had a friend like that too. But Giselle, who was his age, was too much like his aunt Fleur was before: stuck-up and French. James didn’t really like that. Though he thought she was very pretty, and she could sometimes be nice, when she thought no one was looking. James didn’t understand her, but who understands girls? James thought.
He spent his days in Muggle school with Albus and his summer in his room dreaming of the day his letter would come, telling him to go to Hogwarts like his mom and dad. He couldn’t wait to get his wand, either.
Today they were going to have lunch with everyone: uncle Bill, Aunt Fleur, uncle Ron, aunt Hermione, uncle George and aunt Angelina. Even uncle Percy and aunt Penelope were coming! Not to mention the good family friends, Neville and Luna Longbottom. Of course Mr. and Mrs. Weasley were coming as well.
All the kids were coming too: *Alina and *Frankie Longbottom, Teddy Lupin, Victoire and *Giselle, Rose and Hugo, *Fred, and *Percy Jr. all the Weasleys, and of course Albus and Lily Potter.
They were about to sit down at the table when James had a sudden desire of playing a practical joke. He quickly pulled something out of his pocket and was about to put it on a seat when---
“James!” his mother exclaimed taking the needle out of his hand. “What were you going to do with this?”
“I—nothing.” James said.
“Were you playing a prank on your brother again?” his mother asked, eyes wide. “You are grounded you hear?” She said.
James was outraged. “But that’s not fair!” he said.
“Yes it is. I told you last time that if you played another prank, you would be grounded. Now you are.” She sat down and ordered spaghetti for everyone. And James was still mad at her when the spaghetti came.
“I heard you got grounded, James.” His father said.
James narrowed his eyes. “Yea, so what? Anyways, it wasn’t fair.” James said before his father could answer.
“It was very fair. Mom told you, you would be grounded if you played another prank. You tried and now you are grounded. What’s not fair about that?” his father asked.
James stared at his plate, he was so very angry. He was only trying to make everyone laugh! What was wrong with a little joke? Suddenly all the spaghetti turned into worms. “Eww!” He heard from several different directions. Had he made this happen?
He heard his mother whisper to his dad a smile on her face as though she was trying not to laugh, “Harry! Do something! Fleur is definitely in hysterics over this!”
Uncle George laughed, all of this was making James forget about being grounded. His dad looked at him, muttering, “Uncontrolled magic! Oh well!” James noticed him muttering spells several times, waving his wand under table. And finally the worms turned into spaghetti once more. James could hear his aunt Fleur calming down and complaining a bit, saying she wasn’t in hysterics.
With the spaghetti being back to normal before any of the waiters could notice, they finished lunch, with jokes and laughter. They all said goodbye, and took a picture, a very nice moving one.
As the Potter family got home, James headed to his bedroom, and opening his door, he found a pile of presents on his bed. He rushed to the side of his bed, kneeling down and tearing the first one open.
The first present was from Lily, wrapped in orange wrapping paper was color-changing ink! He had wanted that for weeks! His last one had finished ages ago. And they already had a new version anyways!
He opened the next one, which was from Albus, underneath the red wrapping paper, were several Cannon quills, quills that had the Cannons on it, making it bright orange and flashy as the players flew around.
The next was from his mom and dad; he opened it and something flew out. It was a fake snitch! That was awesome! It flew and everything! He let it go for a few seconds then caught it just before it went too far. He kept opening one present after another, each one seeming better than the next.
The last one was from Giselle. He hesitated for a minute, then opened it, inside was the only photo they had ever taken together. It was when they had gone to Diagon Alley, they were in Florean Fortecue’s Ice Cream Shop, and Giselle was laughing at James’ joke. They were both still laughing, in the picture. James loved it.
He put it on top of his wardrobe, next to the one he had also gotten from Dobby their house elf, which was a picture of everyone who was at lunch today. It was the photo they had taken today. He liked that one too. He spent the rest of the afternoon trying out the rest of his presents, in every way he could think of.
Finally, after he ate dinner with his family, making sure to thank everyone for the presents, he went upstairs to get ready for bed, only thinking about tomorrow when Fred and Giselle would come for the whole afternoon. |
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| | Kappa
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
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Thats awesome! good Job! I love it! Harry is so sweet and lily and james and albus and ginny and everyone lol! Great job!
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| | Dugbog
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I love the story you are just such a good writer!  GREAT WORK!
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| | Bundimun
Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: ...turn around
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Hannah Snow Department of Mysteries | Great story! But Dobby died. How can he be their house elf? |
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