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Old 05-19-2008, 05:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot, and maybe Lily did have a weakness early on of Defence Against The Dark Arts, but I've not done my research, I only wrote this in the 30 minutes of discussion time I have in school with other years/grades in my school.

Summary: This is a fluffy Sev/Lily friendship fic, Severus helps Lily with her weakness.

Lily Evans’ Only Weakness

Severus Snape watched his friend, Lily Evans tackle her recent Defence Against The Dark Arts Essay.

“I‘ll never get this annoying essay done,” she muttered to herself.

He rolled his eyes and moved next to her, taking her by surprise. She looked at him, frustration showing darkly in her emerald eyes.

“Come here,” he took the parchment for her before she could object. He took the book and highlighted the paragraphs she needed with a highlighting charm, and handed it back to her, smirking.

She glared at him for a moment, clearly defiant on not wanting help, and her expression softened, she was smiling and she went back to her work.

When she had finished, she turned to him, asking, “What‘s the title of the essay?”

Dear, sweet Lily, so unable to manage a little bit of fourth year Defence. Severus thought. He took the highlighting charm off before the aged Librarian Madame Pince cut at them for vandalising a precious book.

“Effects of a werewolf bite, and how to be wary of a werewolf.” Severus smirked, watching her write the title, put the lid on her ink pot, she dropped her things into her bag and stood up.

He led her out of the library for dinner in the Great Hall, wondering, out of everything she is good at, why Lily’s only weakness was Defence Against The Dark Arts.

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Old 05-21-2008, 02:01 AM   #2 (permalink)
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hey

wow...

I just loved it...

it is really great...

I just wonder too...

Lol

nice work
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Old 05-21-2008, 03:13 AM   #3 (permalink)
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2nd Reader Hurray

Cool story

I think it fits Lily well

Her only weakness being Defense

I LOVE THE STORY

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Old 05-21-2008, 06:19 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 05-21-2008, 08:08 AM   #5 (permalink)
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New reader!!! wow i love it and im totally hooked. Lol!!!

Im sooo subscribing to this thread.

I cant believe Lilys only weekness is DADA. Wow!!!! She's such a bright student.

Cant wait for more

luv ya

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Old 05-21-2008, 08:14 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Silly Lily! I found it very curious...though I'm wondering...if perhaps in the future James'll help her out? or no?
PAMS
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Old 05-21-2008, 08:39 AM   #7 (permalink)
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New reader!!! wow i love it and im totally hooked. Lol!!!

Im sooo subscribing to this thread.

I cant believe Lilys only weekness is DADA. Wow!!!! She's such a bright student.

Cant wait for more

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sorry guys, it's a finished fic

but thanks glad you liked it
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im confused :/ as in u won't tell us any secrets or as in you can't continue with it?
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No it was a one shot wasn't it?

Oh well, it was a very good one shot! Well done! Can't wait till you write another one!

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im confused :/ as in u won't tell us any secrets or as in you can't continue with it?
as in i can't continue with it, it was just a 30 minute spur of the moment thing
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that was pretty amazing!

i loved it.
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I confused!!!! Well it was a very good one shot, but it wasn't really telling us much.

Well anyway cant wait for another story you may write. Bye

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Well anyway cant wait for another story you may write. Bye

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This is good its just like how JKR writes
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ooh i cant wait for more please post as soon as possiable
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