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Old 04-22-2008, 11:36 PM   #51 (permalink)
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thanks for the post

poor sev

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it makes me want to kill them

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Old 04-23-2008, 04:36 AM   #52 (permalink)
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I feel for Sev. He is trying his hardest and yet it aint enough.
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Old 04-24-2008, 03:40 PM   #53 (permalink)
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aww *pats poor severus*
awesome chapter!!btw the lucy comic was cool!
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Haiis again.
I write better when I'm listening to Paramore, and... Thats what I'm doing right now..
Expect a good chapter..


"Come on, Severus, just raise your wand slightly higher!"
Severus struggled with the charm that the other boy was trying his best to teach him.
"Stupify!"
A tingle ran up his wand, but he couldn't hold it. The charm went flying off, miles past the crude wooden target.
"I can't do it Rod, I just can't."
Rodolphus pulled Severus around and glared right into his eyes.
"YES YOU CAN, SNAPE!And don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise."
Severus righted himself and pointed his wand at the target.
"Just close your eyes and believe in yourself." He heard Rodolphus murmur into his ears.
"Stupify!"
A bolt of white came from his wand, making Severus stagger slightly, but all the same, it smashed into the target, and sent it reeling.
"Well done, Sev!" Rodolphus grinned, "I seriously was expecting MUCH worse!"
Although there was a slight insult packed into Rodolphus' words, Severus smiled.

"Hey, Rodolphus, Severus!" Bella came running through the trees in muggle attire.
"Bella..." Rodolphus paused, and struggled with his words as he tried to make a coherent sentence. "Uh, hi."
Bella went up to Severus and wrapped her arms around his neck and began to sing.
"WE ARE ALL THIRD YEARS!"
"Uh, smart, well done Bella," Severus stuttered, "Now can you please get off of my neck."
Bella obliged him and let go.
"Guess what?" She said excitedly.
"I never will, so tell me." Severus replied, rubbing his sore neck.
"My retarded cousin has been taken up to Dumbledore, along with all his idiotic friends!"
Severus exchanged a confused look with Rodolphus, and then turned his attention back to her.
"How is that exciting?" He asked
"Apparently, Remus Lupin has something wrong with him!"
Severus looked even more confused, looking across to Rodolphus, he saw his expression echoed on his face.
"I don't get it."

"OH MY GOD!" She yelled, "Boys!"
She stomped off from whence she came.
Severus looked across to Rodolphus, and then burst out laughing.
It was going to be one heck of a term.
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Old 04-26-2008, 01:33 AM   #55 (permalink)
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So Bella has the hots for Sev? And how did she find out about Remus? Oh very good by the way. Can't wait for more!
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Old 04-26-2008, 05:00 AM   #56 (permalink)
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lol!bella has a crush on sev??!!lol!!awesome chapter!
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Old 04-27-2008, 03:20 PM   #58 (permalink)
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Yeah, I'm going to do it that she has a slight crush on him, and then Rod'll suddenly turn really hot in the middle of his third year.

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And how did she find out about Remus?
She did a bit of snooping in the night... See, I'm going to make Bella a really insecure character, so she's afraid of the dark, but was always bullied about it at home.
At the moment, I've got no time for another chapter (Sorry!) But I'll probably add one later today.
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Old 04-28-2008, 12:11 AM   #59 (permalink)
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Right on! I cant wait to read it!!
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Old 04-28-2008, 05:10 PM   #60 (permalink)
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*Coughs like a guinea pig*
Meeaaaahhh.. I have a cold, so I'm signed to my room...
So, I'll write more for the Sev hungry people out there.
Sorry if its a bit rubbish, I don't write well when I'm ill...


"So, how long have you know her?" Rodolphus asked.
"Aw, Rod, can we just quit talking about Bella please, I mean," a teasing glint came into Severus' eyes, "It's not like you fancy her or anything."
Rodolphus swallowed and looked at his feet.
They were on their way to potions. Something about having Rodolphus close made Severus feel safer, it was like, he had a friend who wasn't ashamed to be out with him.
Rodolphus pushed open the large door and walked into the classroom, Severus close on his heels.
"LeStrange, Snape, your both late. Did no-one tell you we're starting early today?"
Rodolphus looked at Severus.
"Uh, no Professor," Rodolphus paused as he was feeling nervous. That was another thing they seemed to have in common.
"We haven't really spoken to anyone apart from each other."
Severus sent a glare in Rodolphus direction as titters of laughter echoed around the classroom.
"Well, please sit down, and could someone remember to tell these two if times change."
"Yeah," said Sirius in a whisper just loud enough to be heard by Severus and Rodolphus, "the two little nerds."
Rodolphus glared at him, which was something he was good at.
They joined a table with Parkinson and began their studies.

"Can you believe the cheek of him?" Rodolphus stormed out of the classroom, in a similar manner to how Severus had done so many times.
"You just need to get used to it." Said Severus, catching up with him.
"You let him walk all over you?" Asked Rodolphus in disbelief.
"No, I just try not to respond to the insults." He retorted.
Rodolphus was quiet.
"Sev!" Lilly ran up behind him. "I'm so sorry I didn't catch you on the train. How are you?"
Severus sighed, "Lilly, we came to Hogwarts about a week ago," He stopped as he noticed the hurt look in her eyes, oh why did she have to be so sensitive?
"But thank you anyway..." He continued.
"Well..." She looked back at James and Sirius, who were teasing Remus playfully.
"I'll see you around, okay?"
She smiled, "OK."

"Man..." Rodolphus whistled, "she is fine!"
Severus whirled around.
"What did you just say?" He growled, his anger rising.
"Uh, nothing, lets just go..." and then under his breath, "look for Bella."
"Rodolphus, life isn't all about Bella." Severus sighed, still quite annoyed with his friend.
"Yeah, but... OK, lets just go." Rodolphus muttered.
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Old 04-28-2008, 08:27 PM   #61 (permalink)
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Ohhh protective Sev strikes again. And Rod really like Bella. I loved it. Cant wait for more and get to feeling better.
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Old 04-29-2008, 12:24 AM   #62 (permalink)
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*Claps!* Nice!
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Old 04-29-2008, 03:47 PM   #63 (permalink)
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hehehee!*me playing peeves*Rod lyrvessssss Bell!Rod lurves BBBBBellllllll!!
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Old 05-01-2008, 10:36 AM   #64 (permalink)
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Haiis, I'm sorry I haven't written in a while. This time I have no excuse.
At the moment I'm working on Rod and Bella's relationship.
YAY!


Slowly slowly, he felt himself falling, through misty air. Gently he hit the ground. But he'd fell so far, how come it didn't hurt.
"He's got Padfoot at the place where its at."
Lights. Bright lights. Death.
Sleep executed.


Severus woke with Rod's face over his, a concered look on his face.
"LeStrange? What are you doing here, this isn't your dorm."
Rod looked down at his feet.
"Lucius wanted me here, he said you were talking about Sirius Black in your sleep."
Severus sat up and rubbed the sleep from his eyes.
"Whats the time."
"Ten thirty."
"WHAT?"
"Ten thirty," Rod simply said.
"Why didn't you wake me?" Severus asked, frantically pulling his trousers on.
"It's Saturday, Severus."
Severus stopped, mid trouser pull.
"Huh? But it was Friday yester... Oh..."
"You are way too stressed," Rod said, streching his arms above his head, "Maybe you should come with me and Bella to Hogsmeade."
"Wait, Bella agreed to go with you to Hogsmeade?"
Rod tried to hide a blush, but his fair skin just made it worse.
Severus snickered, and then burst out laughing, he really did look stupid when he blushed, and... "You've combed your hair!" Severus laughed.
"No, it's always been like this." Rod protested.
"Ever since your hormones kicked in." Severus grinned.
"Thats not true."
"So is."
"Not."
"Is."
"Not."
"Is."
"Not."
"Uh..." Severus was almost doubling over with laughter, he and his friend were acting like seven year olds.
"Are you going to come or not?" Rod asked, looking a bit grumpy.
"Perhaps, but first you've got to admit something."
"What?" Although he knew what it was.
"Rod, do you..." Severus ducked to avoid a flying pillow.
"NO!"
"Your going red."
"I am not."
"Are."
"Not."
"Look are we just going to continue this until Lucius throws both of us out?" Severus asked.
"We could try."
"Nah, I'll come along."

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Old 05-01-2008, 10:41 AM   #65 (permalink)
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*Hugs Sev*

Aww..

And Rod is really cute too
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Hugs Sev and Rod
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Very good!! Acting like 7 year olds is the truth.!!
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Old 05-03-2008, 10:45 PM   #68 (permalink)
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Very good!! Acting like 7 year olds is the truth.!!
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Awesome, awesome, thanks!
I'm getting tired all the time *drinks *
I'll post another chapter today, sometime....
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I will be right here waiting. *pitches a tent*
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Hello my tent residing fans. I am quite happy to be back and writing.
In this chapter, Severus is going to have a 'doom moment'. Does anyone else have them?


Severus walked with Bella and Rodolphus down the cold path to Hogsmeade. It was so obvious that Rodolphus fancied Bell, he just didn't do anything to hide it. He'd blush infront of her, and then say stupid things whenever he got the chance, it was a wonder that she didn't hit him.
Severus' mind danced over the dream he'd had the last night. Why was he dreaming of that stupid, stinking Sirius a-hole Black? He almost growled at the the thought of him.
As the entered the town, he could tell something was going to ruin his day, it was just one of those doom things that fell apon you whenever you're having a really really good time.
"Hey, Severus?"
He looked across at Rodolphus.
"Mmhmm?"
"Your muttering to yourself again."
"I am?"
"Yuh-huh."
"Oh."
Bella gave him a strange look, and then went back to talking to Rod about the famous Quidditch teams of the world. Severus couldn't care less about Quidditch. His father had tried to teach him it, but had only resulted in him burning his broom.
They went to a cafe and Rodolphus paid for all of them to have hot chocolate. They took up a table and began to talk.

"So," Bella said, "I heard that my sister, and Lucy are going out." There was a sneer copped in that sentence that made Severus feel uncomfortable, almost as if she was blaming it on him.
Rodolphus was all amazement.
"Really? I never knew Narcissa liked him that much."
"I don't think she does." Severus said quietly.
"What d'you mean, Snape." Bella snapped.
"Whoa, what's up with you?" He retorted, no less venom.
"Just shut up." She growled back.
Rodolphus, was in a dilemma. He didn't know weather to defend the girl he fancied, or his best friend. So, he kept his mouth shut.
"I'm leaving."
"Aww, little half-blood Sevvy is going to run away."
Rodolphus looked up,
"Half blood?"
"How the hell did you find out?" Severus asked, standing up.
"Lucius told Cissy. Cissy told me."

Severus stormed out of the cafe. How could he? He'd done almost everything for Lucius, and for what? For him to tell his latest squeeze, that 'little Sevvy' was a half blood.
He went and sat on a bench, and cried.
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Oh Poor Sev. He so does not need that.. Bella is a pain. Cant wait for more!
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Bella if you don't watch out I'll kill you too along sith Sev's Parents
Poor Sev someone needs a hug
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