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Old 03-01-2008, 03:32 AM   #201 (permalink)
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*SCREAMS AT THE TOP OF LUNGS*
URG!!!!
RON I HATE YOU!!!
HE IS SO EVIL!!!
SHE NEEDS TO GET HIM! BAD!!
OR I WILL DO IT 4 HER!!!
you are a lovely writer!!
I would never be able to write somehting like this!
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GREAT STORY!!...normally i dont really like hermione/draco but this is really good!!..
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Old 03-03-2008, 12:36 AM   #203 (permalink)
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wow,
that was great i loved it.
ron needs to get real no doing that to a girl. she'll beat you up!
lol. way to go draco for being nice and calm about it.
can't wait for more.
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Old 03-05-2008, 12:22 AM   #204 (permalink)
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so the new chapter is ALMOST done! YAY!
but... i can't update until Lizzy (aka hpbookworm) finishes reading it! (best friend = has to read stories!) yup so go poke her to read... cause otherwise she'll go read spuffy (spike and buffy from buffy the vampire slayer) fanfics! which is bad! ok? so bug! cause i wanna update!

thanx guys... hopefully i'll be able to post soon!



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Old 03-05-2008, 04:59 AM   #205 (permalink)
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Hey! lookie lookie at me! i finished reading all 26 chappies! and OMGOSH you have to update NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh, and ron is a complete jerk and i HATE HIM!

he and angel need to go die a horrible, grusome death! preferably sooner than later.

well, it can take as long as you want, but, the process needs to start soon.

MY GOSH, ron just ****** me off! *grrrrrrrr*

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Old 03-05-2008, 05:18 AM   #206 (permalink)
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LIZZE YOU FINISHED! YAY!

which means I can update now! YAY!

... but i'm not finished with my chapter yet... how about i give you guys the first paragraph as a preview! sounds good to me!

Hermione was very frustrated, more frustrated than she had ever been. Ron was being his annoying self, but ever since she started to “date” him (and their dating wasn’t even real relationship) he became more and more of a jerk. She couldn’t wait to get out into the hall after potions and tell him that this sham was over, and then, hopefully, get on with her life. She never had thought that something like this would go so wrong.

i'll finish the chapter soon!

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PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!!
Please end my agony and post the new chapter!
I really really need to read this!!
PLZ PAMSIOD!!!!! as soon as u possibly can!!!
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Old 03-06-2008, 03:56 AM   #208 (permalink)
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So it's the new chapter! YAY! that's uberly exciting!

hope you like it! it's not one of my favorites but hey! it's more story right?

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Chapter 27

Hermione was very frustrated, more frustrated than she had ever been. Ron was being his annoying self, but ever since she had started to “date” him (and their dating wasn’t even real relationship) he became more and more of a jerk. She couldn’t wait to get out into the hall after potions and tell him that this sham was over, and then, hopefully, get on with her life. She never had thought that something like this would go so wrong.

“You have ten more minutes.” Snape said so that his voice was heard through out the entire classroom. “As per procedure, one of you will come up to the desk, select a flask, and fill it with your potion and write the names of the people who made the potion on to the flask to be graded.” Hermione nodded to herself, and studied her potion closely. It was turning from a light shade of lilac to a rich, dark emerald. She smiled, as she knew that she had done it right. She looked over towards Draco’s table, he was working with Blaise, and his potion was doing the same. She next looked at Ron, who apparently had dozed off sometime in the last hour. She sighed to herself and pushed his feet of the desk, startling him awake.

“Go get a flask.” She said hotly, still annoyed that she did all the work.

“Couldn’t you go get it?” Ron asked sleepily, and began closing his eyes to fall back asleep.

“Ronald, go get the flask. It wasn’t a question.” She said through gritted teeth, trying to stop herself from lashing out in class, something that she had always prided herself in doing. Even when Umbridge taught Defense Against the Dark Arts, she kept her temper, at least around her. Ron opened one of his eyes and gave her a skeptical look. “Ronald. Now.” Hermione watched as he gave an exasperated sigh and stood up and walked to the front desk and snatched a glass flask from on it and marched back furiously.

“Here.” He slammed it on the desk, “Happy now?” Ron flopped back into his chair and crossed his arms in a furious manner. Hermione was now seething even more than she was before. She couldn’t believe his nerve! She took a few calming breaths and stirred her potion in a clockwise manner a few more times so that it would attain the right shade of green before pouring it into her newly acquired flask and placing her name on it, and only her name on it. She strolled pleasantly up to the desk and handed the bottle to Snape.

“There is only your name on this Miss Granger.” Snape drawled with feigned interest.

“Yes Professor, I brewed the potion all by myself, with no help from my partner and thus I believe he should not receive any credit.” Hermione said with a very straight and firm face. Blaise who happened to be standing next to her handing in Draco’s and his potion laughed out loud.

“Finally, I thought you we’re going to let those two oafs you call friends walk all over you your entire life.” Blaise commented, a small smile hidden on his face. Snape had nodded in understandment.

“Very well, you do realize that Mr. Weasley will receive a failure for this assignment.”

“Very much so. Thank you Professor.” And with that, Hermione turned around and faced the room, and much to her surprise everyone was looking at her. Sighing, she walked down from Snape’s desk and made her way back to her own desk and reached down to grab her bag from off the floor and then leave when Ron grabbed her wrist.

“What the hell was that?”

“What Ronald? You didn’t do any of the assignment and didn’t deserve any credit.” Hermione snatched her wrist out of his grasp and hastily grabbed her bag off of the floor, throwing it over her shoulder.

“Don’t you know that I’m close to failing?”

“Then I guess you ought to be making more of an effort for once in your life.” Hermione said boldly and turned away from him as if to leave, when he grabbed her arm roughly. “Let go of me Ron.” Hermione said softly, starting to become scared of what he might do.

“What the hell is the matter with you? You’ve never acted like this before! You’re being such a cold-blooded witch!”

“Ron, you’re hurting me.” Hermione said quietly, trying to hold back tears that where threatening to fall from her fear of Ron and what he might do, even under a teacher’s nose.

Draco was near a boiling point, and the moment he saw the beginnings of tears in Hermione’s eyes, he was blown over the top. He quickly marched over to her and gently grabbed her arm and peeled Ron’s hand off of her with great fury, he looked down at where his hand had been and saw the beginnings of a bruise. He resisted the urge he felt to punch the git in the face.

“Come on, let’s get you out of here, away from this abusive air head.” Draco said the last part so every one knew what Ron was, something that no one thought that Ron would have ever become.

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Old 03-06-2008, 09:18 PM   #209 (permalink)
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oh... yep. my last judgement still stands.

ron. angel. twelve o'clock meeting with dreadful torture and a horrible death in the fiery depths of heck.

THEY ARE SO EVIL! (and not in the - hey, thats soooooo cool Draco Malfoy or Spike way) THEY DESERVE PAIN AND DEATH!

or at least to be shot down by their girls so the right guys can hold em and comfort em.

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DRACO!!!!
THE ONE TIME RON DESERVES TO BE SMACKED U DONT DO IT!!!!!
Ok.... ok.....ok...
Im done
Wait..... nope.....
RON!!! URG! I'M GONNA GET U!!!
OK HERMY U R THE BEST WITCH/WIZARD IN UR YEAR!
HEX HIM TO OBLIVION!!!!
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Ron.Must.Go.NOW!!! i never thought that ron would be eviler than malfoy. but other than that, graet chapter!! cant wait for more...
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Old 03-08-2008, 01:25 AM   #212 (permalink)
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Draco's a sweetheart!! But what's wrong with Ron!! O my God please don't let him be like that!! awesome post!!
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Old 03-09-2008, 01:04 AM   #213 (permalink)
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i dont know if anyone's missed me but i was deathly ill and missed like the last 2 pages. sooooooooooo LOVED IT gawd Draco is being such a sweetie, u gotta love him. But wats up with Ron being all hurtfull jeez anyways PAMS
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sup guys? just wanted to say THANKS for all all the reviews! Things have been crazy busy on my end so hopefully i'll get enough time to write the next chapter soon!

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That was a great chapter! Ron is being so evil! what happened?!? And Draco is such a gentleman! Please post soon! I love this story!
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I think the story is very good
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Great chapter, Sarah! Why are you making Ron so evil? I love that red head!
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omg!!!! wtf?!?! WHY? WHY does she put up with him? she need's to dump him lower than a potatoe under the ground!!! if a guy ever touched/grabbed me like that i would've hit them so hard that nearly headless nick would've felt it!!! well...now that i've got that off my chest*whew* i can go on and say great post!!! i luved it! can't wait for more and post more soon!!!
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Hey guys! It's the next chapter and it's all Draco and hermione! YAY! hope you like it! and comments are mucho appreciated! And thanks again for all the comments on the last chapter!
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Chapter 28

Hermione and Draco now stood in a nook a few corridors up from the Potions room, Hermione however was being held up by Draco as she cried on his chest. Draco ran a hand over curly hair, and looked hard at the wall just behind her. Fuming thoughts continued to real through his head, he was furious that someone would be such a jerk to such an amazing girl. His head was full of thoughts of beating the guts out of Ronald Weasley.

“Hermione,” Draco said ever so softly, “Do you want to talk about it.” Hermione nodded her head.

“First I got mad when he felt me up when we were taking notes during class.” Draco stiffened slightly when he heard this but didn’t say anything and let Hermione continue. “Then when I tried to make him stop, he wouldn’t. Not until I got up to go get the potions ingredients.”

“Why didn’t you tell me what he had done then?” Draco inquired furry was now boiling inside of him. Hermione shook her head furiously and a few more tears fell down her cheeks.

“I don’t know.” she whispered hoarsely, Draco wiped the tears that had fallen down her cheeks.

“Then what happened after you went back?” Draco urged her on, desperate to know what had happened.

“Well,” Hermione sniffed trying to regain her composure, “I started to brew the potion while Ron decided to sit back and watch and sleep. Once I noticed he was asleep I was furious. Then after Snape told us to collect a flask and bottle our finished potion. So I woke up Ron and told him to go get one and he gave me this haughty attitude about how he was trying to sleep and that I should do it. I couldn’t believe his nerve! After all I had brewed the ENTIRE potion without his help and the least he could have gone was gotten the flask. So then I told him that it wasn’t a question and that he needed to go get it now. He grumbled the entire way up and the entire way back, fueling the fire that was already burning. I was so mad that I didn’t put his name on the flask, after all he didn’t do any of the work, and then I turned it into Snape. Snape then asked me if I knew that I hadn’t put his name on the flask, and Blaise said something and when I turned around the entire class was staring at me. I then went to go get my stuff, and then that’s when Ron hurt me.” Hermione glanced down at her arm at the light bruise that was sure to become darker later. “I’m such an idiot.” Hermione sniffled into Draco’s chest. Draco paused and looked down at the top of her head.

“Hermione you are, in no way, an idiot.” Draco said firmly.

“Yes, I am. I’m an idiot to believe that I could ever pull something like this!” Hermione cried.

“What do you mean by ‘something like this’?” Draco asked curiously, since he had no idea what on earth Hermione’s eyes widened as she heard what Draco had just said back to her. She had never meant for that to come out of her mouth. It was just supposed to stay in her head, in her private thoughts.

“N-N- Nothing. It didn’t mean a thing.” Hermione stuttered, slightly nervous, but hoped that Draco would put that on her distraught state. She looked down towards the ground, and shuddered slightly when he placed a finger under her chin.

“Tell me, you have to be able to trust me.” Hermione looked into his eyes and saw the truth behind them.

“Look I do trust you but I can’t tell you. You’d hate me for it.” Draco laughed slightly catching Hermione off guard. “What? What’s so funny?”

“Hermione, I couldn’t hate you. I may dislike you at times, but I could never hate you. Not after all that you’ve done for me this past year.” Draco’s face had once again become serious and full with compassion. Hermione’s eyes brimmed once more with tears, still fearing that he would turn his back on her. She felt like she truly was an idiot, she had ruined a relationship with her one of her “best” friends and now was teetering on the edge with Draco as well. It was almost to much for her to handle.

“You wouldn’t understand.” She looked away from him, trying her best to not let anymore tears cascade down her cheeks.

“Hermione, why wouldn’t I understand? Why can’t you tell me?”

“Because, I can’t, Draco. I just can’t.” Hermione took in a deep breath, trying to calm her mind. Draco looked at Hermione questionably, knowing that she was hiding something from him. He desperately wanted to know what.

“Hermione, I wish you would tell me. I won’t make you but I hope that you will come to me and tell me, all right? Over the past few days, you see to be growing steadily unhappier. I’m worried about you.” Hermione looked up and saw the sincerity in his eyes, as well as worry too. She felt immediately guilty; he shouldn’t feel worried about her, he shouldn’t be this caring towards her. “Hermione I just want you to be happy.” Draco said softly rubbing his calloused thumb over her tear stained cheek.
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awwwwwww...... *tear* so sad! draco such a wittle softie...
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