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Old 12-16-2007, 04:42 PM   #126 (permalink)
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Aww! I'm soo glad they made up! But Hermione and Draco better be together cause I don't think I can stand Hermione being with Ron...
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Old 12-18-2007, 01:29 AM   #127 (permalink)
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great post love it to death remember wat i said about how it better have a happy ending? yea remember that PAMS PAMS PAMS sweetie
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Old 12-18-2007, 04:11 AM   #128 (permalink)
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Hello! It’s another chapter! YAY! And ack I feel like the quality of my fic is rapidly decreasing! Could you please let me know if you feel the same, if it’s not well that just means I’m crazy insane, which is perfectly normal. Otherwise I’ll work hard to improve the quality until it meets it’s previous standards!

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Hermione continued to make her way towards the Head’s dorm, and away from him. He had been the reason for all of her problems, he always caused her more misery than she needed and he never seemed to truly care for anyone except for himself.

“Stupid Malfoy.” Hermione muttered to the ground. Her feet continued to take her further and further away from him.

Hermione had no idea where her feet where leading her but before she knew it she ran into a couple who were walking around the corner.

“Sorry” she muttered as she kept walking on.

“Watch where you are going next time mudblood!” a male voice yelled back at her, Hermione stopped for a moment and clutched her fists in her brief moment of rage.

“Great now I have to wash—Malfoy what the bloody hell are you doing?” The male voice sounded somewhat surprised and as Hermione turned around, her eyes widened in shock to what she saw. Draco with his wand pointed at Blaise’s throat. She quickly ran back towards Draco, Blaise, and what looked to be Pansy, the later two still holding hands.

“Draco,” Pansy whimpered as Hermione was mere meters away from the three, “Please don’t be ma, I love Blaise and I—“ Malfoy gave her a look that shut her up immediately.

“I don’t care if you love Blaise,” Malfoy looked at Blaise, “You take back what you said.”

“What are you talking about? Mate I think you’ve gone bloody daft.”

“Malfoy, what in Merlin’s name do you think you’re doing?” Hermione yelled.

“Go away Granger.” Malfoy said through gritted teeth.

“Not until you put your wand down!”

“Granger you don’t get it, and you never will!”

“Then explain it to me! I can’t understand until you do otherwise!”

“I can’t!”

“And why not!”

“ I just can’t! Like I said, you wouldn’t understand anyways!”

Blaise coughed bringing the two’s argument to a sudden stop.

“Um, is there something going on between you two?” Blaise asked with a curious look on his face his eyes darting back and forth from Hermione and Draco’s raging faces.

“Of course not, except my roommate is a complete idiot and I don’t even care about him anymore!” Hermione yelled and saw the flicker of sadness that flashed briefly in his eyes. She promptly turned around and began to walk away from him.

“Good. Now I won’t have to talk to you any longer!” Malfoy called after her and turned to walk away when he felt Blaise’s hand on his shoulder.

“What do you want?”

“Look, mate, just don’t get to involved with that girl, she’s a mudblood remember?”

“I know but—“

“But what… you don’t actually like her do you?”

“No more than I need too but she can start to grow you like a fungi. It bugs me so much.” Draco lied and he figured Blaise had noticed but Pansy was to dense to tell.

“Oh, Poor Draco, do you want me to spread a nasty rumor about her?”

“No, that’ll just make living with her even more unbearable.” Draco said as he sat down on the ground and placed his head in his hands, Pansy pouted at the loss of being able to start another horrible rumor about the head girl.

“Mate, just… just don’t anything stupid.” Blaise warned.

“You to mate, after all I am betrothed to that girl on your arm. I don’t mind, but our—“

“Parents, I know. Thanks for being so understanding, we’ll have to rant about that issue again sometime.”

“Like I care.”

“You going to breakfast?”

“Yeah, I’ll just have to grab my bag before I go.”

“See you around Malfoy.”

“Yeah whatever.” Malfoy turned around and headed back to the Head’s dorm.

XoXoXoXoXoXo


Hermione had finally made it back to the dorm and was now lying on the couch screaming her lungs out into a pillow, all the while having the WizRadio blasting out music. She kept wishing that Malfoy would just sod off and leave her alone for a while, but the part of her that loved Malfoy was broken hearted. Hermione continued to yell foul things into her pillow about Malfoy. Mostly about what a jerk he could be and how much of a git he was… only using the nastiest words she could come up with, and those were some nasty things. ( A/N That shall not be mentioned, as they could possibly bump up the rating of this fic)

She continued to yell… completely unaware that Draco had entered the room and standing behind the couch. Figuring he had heard enough he coughed giving Hermione quite a fright. She quickly sat up and looked Draco square in the eye with a death glare.

“What the hell do you want Malfoy?” she sneered.

“Language Granger.”

“ Get the hell away from me.” She told him. Malfoy was shocked Hermione never cussed in front of people, or at least when she knew people where present. Not to mention the look in her eyes, that was terrifying.

“Honestly, can’t even have a decent conversation anymore.” Malfoy huffed and stuffed his hands in his pockets and walked up to his own dorm, leaving Hermione once more alone in their shared common room.

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Old 12-18-2007, 12:12 PM   #129 (permalink)
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aw pooor Draco darling..ARGH hermione! lmao...she needs to be nicer! lol I LOVVVVED IT! Your doing a WONDERFUL jobb! PAMSSSMSMSMSSS

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Old 12-18-2007, 04:46 PM   #130 (permalink)
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Oooohh! That was really good! I can't wait to see what happenes next!
About what you said about the quality and stuff, I think this ff is awsome but maybe you shoulden't use curse words and stuff like that...
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Old 12-20-2007, 03:37 AM   #131 (permalink)
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Just caught back up!!

Wow!

Hermione has quite a temper these days!

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Old 12-22-2007, 01:10 AM   #132 (permalink)
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ooo i love a good vicious fight great post i think its just as good as wen u started dont worry about being insane i suffer from acute paranora and slight bipolar disorder (not kiding) but i m ok anyways pams pams darling
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Old 12-24-2007, 05:29 PM   #133 (permalink)
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Im so sorry i havent been here for a while, i missed so much!
i loved it all tho! this story is soooo good. i cant decide if i want it to be D/Hr or R/Hr, i love them both! wut ever you decide, i guess, its ur ff!
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OK guys my power keeps going out! so i'll post this as quickly as possible! it's not the entire chapter... but since i've been gone for so long you all deserve something for waiting so long! hope you enjoy and i hope*crosses fingers* that i'll be able to post the rest soon!!!

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Ron paced back in forth in the Gryffindor common room after realizing the situation he was in. His book bag was lying on his bed. Which conveniently happened to be in the same room that Harry and his sister where “making up” in. Ron plopped down on the couch, feeling very frustrated. There really wasn’t much he could do. It wasn’t like he could march upstairs, burst through the door, and grab his book bag while the couple where working things out. ‘Oh bugger’ Ron thought to himself. This was a tight spot. He had to get that book bag somehow, or else that would just leave Hermione and Draco alone even longer than he would like. Oh, this was not good. Ron looked up at the clock, Ginny and Harry had only been alone upstairs for just a few minutes, although to Ron it felt much longer. He stood back up and began to pace. He wasn’t going to let the ferret weasel his way back to Hermione. Not if he could do anything to prevent it. And by Merlin’s name that was exactly what he planed to do. He would stop that ferret from getting anywhere close to Hermione’s heart. That is, any closer than he already was.

Ron glanced up the stairs that lead to the 7th year boy’s dorm. His mind was clouded by jealousy and he began to forget about the situation at hand. Nothing was going to stop him now. He was going to show Hermione that he was what she wanted, what she needed. Not that blasted Malfoy. No sir. He knew what was best for her and for everybody. Nothing was going to get in his way. Even if he had to hurt the one person this was all about to do it.
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okay! so i think i'll end chapter 8 here... hope you like the last bit! (and plus the weather is calm now) oh and i decided just to post the whole chapter over again. O.o

Chapter 18

Ron paced back in forth in the Gryffindor common room after realizing the situation he was in. His book bag was lying on his bed. Which conveniently happened to be in the same room that Harry and his sister where “making up” in. Ron plopped down on the couch, feeling very frustrated. There really wasn’t much he could do. It wasn’t like he could march upstairs, burst through the door, and grab his book bag while the couple where working things out. ‘Oh bugger’ Ron thought to himself. This was a tight spot. He had to get that book bag somehow, or else that would just leave Hermione and Draco alone even longer than he would like. Oh, this was not good. Ron looked up at the clock, Ginny and Harry had only been alone upstairs for just a few minutes, although to Ron it felt much longer. He stood back up and began to pace. He wasn’t going to let the ferret weasel his way back to Hermione. Not if he could do anything to prevent it. And by Merlin’s name that was exactly what he planed to do. He would stop that ferret from getting anywhere close to Hermione’s heart. That is, any closer than he already was.

Ron glanced up the stairs that lead to the 7th year boy’s dorm. His mind was clouded by jealousy and he began to forget about the situation at hand. Nothing was going to stop him now. He was going to show Hermione that he was what she wanted, what she needed. Not that blasted Malfoy. No sir. He knew what was best for her and for everybody. Nothing was going to get in his way. Even if he had to hurt the one person this was all about to do it.

He stood up straight and marched over to the stairwell. Nothing now was going to stop him. He’d pound that ferret into the ground for even looking at her unless it was a look of utter disgust. He continued to march up the stairs until he got to the seventh year dorm. He reached for the handle and was about to burst through when for a moment, his last moment of sanity, he stopped and thought better. He knocked on the door, and waited until he heard that it was okay for him to come in. He opened the door swiftly and quietly and grabbed his bag from off of his bed. And walked right back out the door closing the door quietly behind him. It was then that all of his sanity flew out the window. He ran down the stairs, through the common room, and jumped out the portrait hole. He glanced up and down the corridor and turned to sprint down the halls that lead to Head dormitory.

XoXoXoXo

Hermione still lay on the couch with a pillow over her head minutes after Draco had gone up the stairs that lead to his dorm. Hermione sighed and sat up and started to massage her temples. She soon stood up and looked up the stairwell that led to Draco’s room, she thought about going up there to talk to him, to apologize for all that’s happened, but remembered what he had said to her. Every harsh word that he had said that weekend and decided it wasn’t her that needs to do the apologizing.
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aww. COME ON HERMY. go apologize...YOU GUYS WERE MADE FER EACH OTHEH. lmaaaooo. LOOOVVVED IT.

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Hermione apologize!!!!!! And Draco should too by the way!! hahaha But whata about Ron? what's he going to do!!! ahhh its great!!
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Hermione apologize!!!!!! And Draco should too by the way!! hahaha But whata about Ron? what's he going to do!!! ahhh its great!!
I totally agree!!
But Ron should just go away for awhile and let Hermione and Draco make-up and get together!
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Sorry Ron but you'll just have to find someone else!
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