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05-09-2009, 01:58 AM
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| Formerly: coolgirl97 DP Journalist SS Featured Author Diricawl
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Clark Landers Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Adeline (Addie) Renae Carlisle (no twilight affiliation) Daily Prophet | The W Questions - Sa13+ Disco Duck Leader of the Spork Rebellion Who will kill Voldemort if I die? Harry once wondered. What will Harry do if I die? Ginny thought.
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Harry Potter is dead.
Ginny Weasley has vanished-presumed dead.
Ron and Hermione always think about each other, even now, four years after the battle, four years after Harry and Ginny lost their lives. But one night, Ron comes to Hermione's restaurant. Hermione was afraid. How could she let Ron see her like this?
But his love was unconditional.
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The restraunt was slow tonight. Customers trickled in, weary with their troubles. If only they knew, Hermione Granger thought. Her life was filled with more troubles than were in this room.
She served them all however, not really looking at them.
"Hello, my name is Ginny, how may I help you?" Hermione asked, her stage name already decided on. From what she could tell, the customer was a tall male. When was the last time she saw a tall male who she liked?
"Um, yeah, I'd like a hamburger, a chocolate milkshake-extra large, the type with the cherries, and one-two orders of large fries. The voice was achingly familiar and brought back unwanted memories. She forced herself to look at the man's face, hoping to not see what she expected.
"Ron," she breathed.
Last edited by Spork!; 05-31-2009 at 07:14 PM.
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05-13-2009, 05:19 AM
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| | Kneazle
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: O.H.I.O. xDDD
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Vanessa Campbell Sixth Year |
OOHH! I love it!
I'm gonna be one of your #1 fans! 
I wonder what will happen when Ron realizes that "Ginny" is Hermione!
I can't wait!
PAMS!!
Please comment on my story, it's also a ron/hermione story
p.s. look at my username
~Jess
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05-13-2009, 05:31 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Illinois
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nicolette Cassidy Finn Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kalee Ginger Magical Creatures |
you have a new fan!
Now i have one demand.
MORE!!
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05-13-2009, 07:47 AM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: diagon alley
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Diana Hayden First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Stella Maries Minister's Office |
wow !! ur story is intresting!!!
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS !!!
i too demand 'MORE'
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05-14-2009, 09:37 PM
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| Formerly: coolgirl97 DP Journalist SS Featured Author Diricawl
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Clark Landers Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Adeline (Addie) Renae Carlisle (no twilight affiliation) Daily Prophet | Disco Duck Leader of the Spork Rebellion
Thanks guys for your support! I'm gonna see how long it takes Linds (moonyroxs) to find this, lol-
Anyway here's Chapter 2!
"Excuse me?" Ron was taken aback. Had this strange woman said his name? He looked in her face and saw nothing familiar. Her hair was black and crew-cut, her eyes were small and blue, and her nose was large-she wasn't pretty by normal standards, but the face was...reminiscent of old memories.
"Hem, hem." Hermione faked coughed to cover her voice up. "Okay, your order will be out shortly. Order two thirty-nine. About ten minutes, sir."
Hermione headed back to behind the counter to talk to her friend Maggie.
"Mags, I know that man." Maggie gave her a strange look.
"Ginger? How? Gin, do you need me to go out there? Is he the one you knew back then?"
"No, Maggie. Well, yes. He is, but I was lying to you. I'll tell you what really went on between us." Hermione looked down at her purple-conversed feet. "It's not with a happy ending."
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05-14-2009, 10:31 PM
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| | Kneazle
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: O.H.I.O. xDDD
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Vanessa Campbell Sixth Year |
what happened back then?
uh oh.....
loved it!
More!!!!
~Jess
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05-15-2009, 07:11 AM
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| | Dugbog
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Sunnydale/ Hellmouth
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Buffy Willow Lily Fineheart Second Year |
oooooooo interesting!! I like it. Consider yourself stalked!LOL
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05-15-2009, 10:25 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Home.
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | A bit confused
I really like it so far! It's got promise. Keep the chapters coming!
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05-16-2009, 04:43 AM
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| | Mooncalf
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: diagon alley
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Diana Hayden First Year Ministry RPG Name:
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this is intresting
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05-21-2009, 02:04 AM
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Fyodor Balouch Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Marina Effron Department of Mysteries | Pwn'ed by James Steampunk Sultan Interesting plot, it's really different.
Me likes. 
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05-24-2009, 10:14 PM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jack West Second Year | I love this story!!! write the next chapter soon Please!!!!! |
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05-27-2009, 05:38 AM
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| | Kappa
Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Broadway=Life
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Laken Carson LeClair First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Taylor Vanessa Roberts Magical Games & Sports | DIVA of the boondocks
This is great! Keep on writing!
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05-27-2009, 06:03 AM
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| | Lethifold
Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Being Catshup :)
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This is very good  PAMS!
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05-30-2009, 07:52 PM
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| Formerly: coolgirl97 DP Journalist SS Featured Author Diricawl
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Clark Landers Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Adeline (Addie) Renae Carlisle (no twilight affiliation) Daily Prophet | Disco Duck Leader of the Spork Rebellion
I shall post the next chapter now.
"I was eighteen and so was he. At our school, some bad things were happening. It was a war, and we were somewhat nieve that bad things wouldn't happen to us.
Our best friend was brave, smart, and he was the one the enemy hated. He had to sacrifice himself, but we didn't know that. We thought that the day he left, he would come back in an hour or two. We were wrong.
That was the day that he asked me to marry him. I was so in love, I couldn't picture saying no, it was just so stupid how head-over-heels we were-we thought we were.
His sister was with us that day too. She was so excited, she planned it all in about an hour. She thought it was going to be a double wedding with our best friend-they were in love also. It was the happiest day of my life-for about six hours.
We got a letter saying our best friend had been killed. He let himself be killed. He knew it had to happen. We were anguished-we were scared and sad, and walked around in a stupor for a week.
After a few days, we noticed something was wrong. His sister was so distant. The day next, she vanished. I couldn't stay there, couldn't let him see me like this. I left a week later.
I can't sit here and just see him. I am still in love with him.
His name is Ron. My name is really Hermione. His sisters name-was-is-I don't know-Ginny.
Our friend was Harry Potter. The Boy who Lived, then died and crushed us."
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05-31-2009, 12:32 PM
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Fyodor Balouch Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Marina Effron Department of Mysteries | Pwn'ed by James Steampunk Sultan LOVELY post, and great work.
Ginny didn't die, she vanished -? Well, then there's still the hope that she might be alive? Hmm... this could be developed in a lot of ways. Niiice, I like it. xDD Quote:
Our friend was Harry Potter. The Boy who Lived, then died and crushed us.
BEAUTIFUL line, awesome choice of words. <3
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05-31-2009, 07:15 PM
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| Formerly: coolgirl97 DP Journalist SS Featured Author Diricawl
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Clark Landers Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Adeline (Addie) Renae Carlisle (no twilight affiliation) Daily Prophet | Disco Duck Leader of the Spork Rebellion Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie LOVELY post, and great work.
Ginny didn't die, she vanished -? Well, then there's still the hope that she might be alive? Hmm... this could be developed in a lot of ways. Niiice, I like it. xDD
BEAUTIFUL line, awesome choice of words. <3 Thanks! I loved writing that line, and I knew her little speech had to end with something like that.
So a question for all of you:
Who do you think Maggie is? Because it's tricky. |
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06-01-2009, 06:45 AM
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| | Kneazle
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: O.H.I.O. xDDD
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Woah that just blowed my socks off!
*even though i have no socks on right now* 
but it definetley would!
i love it!
i think Maggie might be Ginny but then again she might not be....
I'm not sure...More please!
~Jess
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06-02-2009, 03:19 AM
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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Originally Posted by coolgirl97 Thanks! I loved writing that line, and I knew her little speech had to end with something like that. Hehe, it was very good. Quote:
Who do you think Maggie is?
I think she's Ginny, but I could always be wrong. 
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06-03-2009, 05:49 PM
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| | Kappa
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Missouri
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I love it! Post more you are an awesome writer! i think maggie is Ginny, but who knows!
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06-03-2009, 06:25 PM
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| Formerly: coolgirl97 DP Journalist SS Featured Author Diricawl
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Clark Landers Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Adeline (Addie) Renae Carlisle (no twilight affiliation) Daily Prophet | Disco Duck Leader of the Spork Rebellion
Haha! All very good guesses, but you have to read the next chapter to find out. It'll be up tommorrow, or later today.
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06-06-2009, 10:41 PM
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| | Abraxan
Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: The Softball Field
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Juliet (Julie) Marshall Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
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New Reader!!! I love this!! Please PAMS soon.
BTW, I think it's Molly. That's just my guess.
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06-07-2009, 10:11 PM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: May 2009 Location: Scotland
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jack West Second Year | Great Chapter! I can't think who maggie could be. o well . Post next chapter soon please!!!!! |
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06-08-2009, 04:24 AM
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| | Jarvey
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NEW READER!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS GREAT ......and i agree with them i think its ginny
and PAMS PLEASE
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06-10-2009, 09:29 AM
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|  Urdu Mod SS Featured Author Lethifold
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06-11-2009, 02:23 AM
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| Formerly: coolgirl97 DP Journalist SS Featured Author Diricawl
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Clark Landers Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Adeline (Addie) Renae Carlisle (no twilight affiliation) Daily Prophet | Disco Duck Leader of the Spork Rebellion
OK, I can post it now.
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Maggie stared at her for a few minutes, then spoke up. "I-I.....Ginny?" she asked, looking down at her feet like they were the most exciting thing since sliced bread. "I know who you are. Mione. Don't worry. Everything will be fine." Maggie looked up at her, and Hermione noticed an unusual glint in her eyes.
Her black eyes.
As soon as Hermione noticed this, Maggie stood up and transformed into the face Hermione never wanted to see again, the face of a killer and a theif of life, the woman whose heart was so full of hatred she could never see light in this world. Bellatrix Lestrange.
Hermione turned aroung in horror as Ron stood up and rushed to her side. "CRUCIO!" Hermione heard someone yell in a coarse voice.
And everything went black. In the seconds she had, she felt.....
Complete.
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