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02-24-2008, 02:21 PM
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#176 (permalink)
| | Bicorn
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 1,922
| Ahh, no problem  This story rocks!
I liked the part where she goes "It's a wonder you're not fat" and George responds with "Blurgedby-bkulh-gje"
Love love love it!
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02-24-2008, 07:26 PM
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#177 (permalink)
| | Troll
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 4,898
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hayden Hicks First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | Awww thats soo aborable. Finaly she's admitting a few things to herself. Great post.
PAMS
~*<3*~
Heather |
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02-24-2008, 09:14 PM
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#178 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Location: New Jersey, USA Join Date: Apr 2003
Posts: 758
| aw yay! loved that post! |
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04-01-2008, 12:54 AM
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#179 (permalink)
| Head LC & FF Mod

 Coffee Talk Nundu
Location: Coffee Cup Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 26,545
Hogwarts RPG Name: Professor Maximus Vindictus Ministry RPG Name:
Vivienne G. Beauvais Department of Mysteries | Last update 22 FEB 2008 |
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07-14-2008, 10:29 PM
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#180 (permalink)
| Head LC & FF Mod

 Coffee Talk Nundu
Location: Coffee Cup Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 26,545
Hogwarts RPG Name: Professor Maximus Vindictus Ministry RPG Name:
Vivienne G. Beauvais Department of Mysteries | Reactivated per request |
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07-15-2008, 12:18 AM
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#181 (permalink)
| Hindi Language Mod Grindylow
Location: *Looks around* Paranoia bites. Join Date: Nov 2003
Posts: 931
| Wow, it's been so long guys! I know I could apologize forever and it really wouldn't make a difference; I guess I was just uninspired. But I've already put too much effort into this to leave it hanging, so no matter how long it takes, I'm going to finish it. And with that in mind, here's the next update.
The hustle of the evening had died down and Selly had fallen asleep in the large sofa by the entrance as George and Camila were finishing up a log of the week’s sales. A few relatively tranquil days had passed since their lunch with Mrs. Hamilton, and although Camila knew her relationship with George was probably pushing the line, she hadn’t voiced any reservations. She couldn’t help it: every little bit of her was attracted to him, like a moth to light, she couldn't resist. Their casual touches ran like molten lava through her body; simple smiles and winks sent her stomach into impressive acrobatics. Like a 13-year-old schoolgirl, she had a major crush on George, as she’d finally forced herself to accept the previous night.
“What are you doing for dinner tonight?” George asked her out of blue.
Shrugging, she responded automatically, “Take-out, I suppose. I’m not much
of a cooker.”
“Mum’s absolutely taken with you, and she’s been bugging me to call
you over again. Why don’t you and Selly come have dinner with us?” His tone was casual, but an almost pleading look filled his warm brown eyes as he turned them towards her. How could she possibly resist?
Still, she bit her lip and replied, “What if she hasn’t cooked enough, I don’t want to-”
“Don’t worry about that, Mum always makes enough to feed an army of starving hippogriffs for a month.”
“Yeah?” She asked, hope lacing her voice.
“Yeah,” he replied softly, his voice dropping an octave as he looked at her murky eyes.
She swiped her hands on the back of her muggle jeans and said, “All right, I’m going to go home and change, and we’ll be there in…what time should we be there?”
“You don’t have to change, you look gor…I mean, you look presentable,” he amended, looking a little out of sorts.
Camila furrowed her brows, but then shook her head, “No, I won’t feel comfortable looking as if I don’t care how I show up to dinner. It will only take a few minutes, I swear, and then I’ll be right at your house. I remember where it is and Henry’s released me for the night, so I’ll be able to apparate there in no time.”
“Your boyfriend holds your powers of apparition?” George asked incredulously.
She shifted uncomfortably, “Um, kind of, yeah."
Stepping closer, George leaned down to bring his eyes to her eye-level as he asked, “Why did you let him?”
Camila stared back into his eyes, burning with something greater than just curiosity. Wanting to tell him, but knowing that she couldn’t, she turned her head away. As she did so, Camila missed the hurt flash through his eyes.
However, she didn’t miss his clipped tones as he said, “I’ll see you in a bit.”
“Wait, George!”
It was too late – he’d already disapparated.
Disappointed, but vowing to draw George aside and explain it to him at dinner, Camila picked up Selly in her arms and apparated home. |
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07-15-2008, 12:34 AM
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#182 (permalink)
| GWFC Prez/BWFC Promo Fred & George's Pranks Molar Master Troll
Location: In Ginny's Pocket!:D Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 4,724
Hogwarts RPG Name: Laylee Lynn Russell Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cambell Anne Robinson Minister's Office | Ummm, YAY! Im so glad your back!
I have missed this story!!
I LOVE it!
But please, please post again soon! |
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07-15-2008, 01:06 AM
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#183 (permalink)
| Hindi Language Mod Grindylow
Location: *Looks around* Paranoia bites. Join Date: Nov 2003
Posts: 931
| You have no idea how happy your quick response makes me! I actually already have the next part written, so it'll probably come up either tomorrow or the day after, depending on how much editing it needs. |
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07-15-2008, 06:49 PM
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#184 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 326
Hogwarts RPG Name: Janie Smith | YAY!!!!
It was so long since you posted but your last chapter was really good!!!
Keep it up!! |
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07-15-2008, 06:57 PM
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#185 (permalink)
| GWFC Prez/BWFC Promo Fred & George's Pranks Molar Master Troll
Location: In Ginny's Pocket!:D Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 4,724
Hogwarts RPG Name: Laylee Lynn Russell Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cambell Anne Robinson Minister's Office | Okay okay! !Im ready for the next chapter... right now! lol |
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07-15-2008, 08:45 PM
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#186 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Location: Neverland Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 99
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lucy J. (no last name yet) Fourth Year | ***New Reader***
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Wonderful story can't wait to read the rest!!
-meg  |
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07-15-2008, 11:23 PM
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#187 (permalink)
| | Troll
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 4,898
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hayden Hicks First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | I so can't wait for the next chapter I keep wondering when your going to post. I love this story.
<3
Heather |
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07-16-2008, 05:20 PM
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#188 (permalink)
| Hindi Language Mod Grindylow
Location: *Looks around* Paranoia bites. Join Date: Nov 2003
Posts: 931
| Thank you adorable folks! And for your patience, a random fact accompanies this chapter. Random Fact #16: Swallowed gum is not digested by the gastrointestinal system, it usually passes through within 24 hours.
In a matter of minutes, Camila had changed into a beige sundress with a modest neckline and that ended gracefully at top of her knees. Just as she was clipping on a pair of black studs to match the black belt and hem, Henry apparated into her room.
She gasped, startled, and then asked, “What are you doing here?”
“What, do I need permission to see my girlfriend now?” He sneered. Then he looked over her outfit. “Going somewhere, my dear?”
“Just-just to dinner, you know,” she stuttered.
“Dinner where?” He asked menacingly, stepping closer.
“With a really nice family,” she answered tentatively.
He raised his eyebrows. “Whose family?”
“A friend of mine – uh, Ginny Weasley.”
He stared at her speculatively, presumably trying to figure out whether she was telling the truth or not. Camila fought to keep her face void of all guilt.
Finally, after several agonizing moments, he inclined his head in acceptance.
“Well, that’s too bad for Ms. Weasley, isn’t it? Because our dinner meeting got cancelled, and you’re going to make me a hot home-cooked meal for tonight.”
Taking a deep breath to keep her anger in check, Camila attempted to reason with him, “Henry, I made a promise.” Not that you would know what that means, she thought to herself.
He turned his large form towards her, glaring down menacingly. “Are you implying that dinner with some Weasel family is more important than looking to the needs of your boyfriend?”
Heart hammering, she admitted in a small voice, “No….no, of course not.”
“Well, then, bring my meal quickly!” Having his needs looked after, he plopped himself down on the couch and turned on the muggle television.
Camila winced as the loud noise filtered through the house. Cautiously, she ventured to ask, “Uh, Henry? Could you turn it down a bit, please? Selly’s asleep.” Indeed, she was. Apparently, instead of being beaten as
punishment today, Selly had been made to run nearly 3 miles continuously. While some marathon runners would scoff at this distance, for a young girl her age, it was quite a feat. Obviously, she had been extremely tired and immediately gone off to sleep.
He grunted, and muttered something like, “Who cares? She’s a nasty little witch anyway.” But, as the logical side of him decided that he didn’t want some little girl intruding on his private dinner, he nodded and told her, “Yeah, whatever, turn it down.”
Sighing in relief that at least Selly would be spared the horror tonight, she turned to volume down and began setting up the dinner. She knew that Henry had a hearty appetite and refined taste, that a pinch too much salt or a few grains of missing sugar would not go unnoticed. If she thought he wouldn’t notice, she would have just ordered food from a famous restaurant, but he was a bit too clever for that.
Three quarters of an hour later, when she had finally finished cooking the meal with painstaking labor, her heart was squeezing with guilt. Poor George, he must be waiting for her. Not to mention that he was angry with her already – what must he think? Lost in these thoughts, she tripped over one of Selly’s toy trucks littering the floor and in the act of steadying herself, lost a hold of the plate.
It happened as if in slow motion – the plate, with a large mound of perfectly cooked wild rice and seasoned chicken with a pinch of barbeque, toppled to the ground. The floor was carpeted, and the barbeque sauce quickly began expanding its stain on the floor. Although the plate didn’t break, and there was more food already cooked to replace it, Camila flinched as Henry’s expected roar came when he saw the mess.
“Clumsy fool! Look what you’ve done!” He exclaimed, seizing her arm
roughly. Biting down a cry of pain, Camila readied herself for the inevitable onslaught, praying that Selly remained asleep. She ducked her head as he raised a large hand, squeezing her eyes shut as she awaited the blow.
“Don’t you dare!” The voice was warm and familiar, but with a steel edge that she had never heard before.
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07-16-2008, 07:59 PM
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#189 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 326
Hogwarts RPG Name: Janie Smith | George to the rescue
Ahhh!!!!!!
<3Georgie!!!!!!!<3
***Grins from ear to ear***
Gosh I hate henry!!
Poor Selly!!! I cant even run 3 miles straight!! I feel so bad for her!!
Thanks for posting so very quickly!!!
Great Post!! |
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07-17-2008, 03:22 AM
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#190 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Location: Neverland Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 99
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lucy J. (no last name yet) Fourth Year | YAY George is there to save her!!
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This Henry dude needs to die!!!!!!
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Poor Selly i cant even run 1 mile without running out of breath imgine 3!!
-meg  |
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07-17-2008, 12:35 PM
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#191 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: njoin my hols Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 120
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bloom | YAY!i am totally glad you are back
i just love your fic!!!
its awesome!
and YAY(again) coz george is there to save camilla!!!
and pams! |
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07-17-2008, 12:41 PM
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#192 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: The Malfoy Mansion Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 112
Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | YAY~glad you are back
ur fic is gr8!!!!!!!
yay coz camilla wont get hurt coz she has georgr with her
and PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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07-23-2008, 06:59 AM
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#193 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Location: New Jersey, USA Join Date: Apr 2003
Posts: 758
| i rly wanna see george kick this guys butt |
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07-29-2008, 09:40 AM
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#194 (permalink)
| GWFC Prez/BWFC Promo Fred & George's Pranks Molar Master Troll
Location: In Ginny's Pocket!:D Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 4,724
Hogwarts RPG Name: Laylee Lynn Russell Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cambell Anne Robinson Minister's Office | Ummm, OMGEESH!!!!
Im so excited right now!!
I really, really cant wait to read the butt-woopen that about to happen... well actually, if you wrote the next chapter in a way other than the one I just imagined, then there may not be a butt-woopen... just a few words, an apparation, and trouble to be saved for later! lol
Which will it be????
I cant wait to find out!
PAMSPAMS!!!! |
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08-14-2008, 12:06 AM
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#195 (permalink)
| PAMS PLZ! Imp
Location: on the soccerfield Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 115
Hogwarts RPG Name: nicole kristen todd Ministry RPG Name:
haylie ann lupin Accidents & Catastrophes | oh wow wow wow
new reader alert
PAMS PAMS APAMS PAMS XD XD XD =)=) |
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08-16-2008, 09:25 PM
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#196 (permalink)
| | Troll
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 4,898
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hayden Hicks First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | GEORGE!!!
I so hope she's and him are going to be okay.
PAMS!!
<3
Heather |
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08-17-2008, 06:52 PM
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#197 (permalink)
| SS Vaulter Hippocampus
Location: On The Computer! ^_^ Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 287
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tasha Ginerva Hermione Starlight First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Alicia Luna Daniels (Soon to be Starlight) Accidents & Catastrophes | new reader!!!
wow... i love your story!! I hope George is ok after this!!!
PAMS
Abi...xox |
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08-18-2008, 05:03 AM
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#198 (permalink)
| Head LC & FF Mod

 Coffee Talk Nundu
Location: Coffee Cup Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 26,545
Hogwarts RPG Name: Professor Maximus Vindictus Ministry RPG Name:
Vivienne G. Beauvais Department of Mysteries | Last update 16 JUL 2008 |
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