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Old 12-24-2006, 01:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello there everyone!

My name's Adrienne (aka Moxie) and this is my third fanfic on Snitchseeker. I'm trying out a bunch of new stuff on here, so I've got a story for everyone...

Just some ground rules: You can give constructive criticism (always welcome) but no flaming please! Not a lot of spam, and if you have questions about the story, just ask!

Onto the summary! Okay, so it's a time story...takes place in seventh year...Hermione decides to try the Time-Turner again, and somehow, Harry manages to get a hold of it. Hermione catches him playing with it, and they both end up in James and Lily's seventh year at Hogwarts. They soon realize that they have no memory of the future they came from, offering some...interesting ships.

Okay! Hope you enjoy!

"HARRY!" Hermione shouted, coming into the empty, Gryffindor common room. It was Christmas, and Ron had gone home for the holidays, leaving Harry and Hermione at Hogwarts.

Harry jumped. "OH MY GOD!" He screamed, not even in a close-to-manly voice.

Hermione scowled at him and stocked over to where he stood, her Time Turner hung loosely around him neck. "Harry! Professor McGonagall told me specifically we could NOT. MESS. WITH. MY. TIME TURNER!"

"I'm sorry, Hermione, jeez. Just breathe." Harry began fiddling with the Turner again. "I want to show you something. It's your Christmas present. Come over here."

Hermione hesitated. Harry held out the Time Turner chain to her, and she carefully stepped under the chain. He turned the hourglass many times, and then...the common room was filled with people. The most prominent a boy with shaggy black hair, and a girl with emerald eyes.

Comment, por favor!

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~Adrienne~

Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49

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Old 12-24-2006, 03:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice! I CANNOT wait to see where this goes!!!!!!!!!!!
Another phenomenal piece of work!
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Old 12-24-2006, 07:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
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NOOOOOO I AM THE SECOND POST
I WANTED TO BE THE FIRST ONE *TEAR*
although we all know that first is the worst and second is the best =P
lol but anyways
the beginning of this story is AMAZING and if its anything like your last ff's then i'm sure it will be brilliant
have a merry christmahannukwanzikah
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~fia~
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Old 12-24-2006, 08:08 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Oh my gosh! This story seems completely spectacular so far! PAMS please!!!!!
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Old 12-24-2006, 08:20 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Hey everyone!! Thanks for the comments!

Could you do me a HUGE favor and post whether or not you've read my other fics, "Underneath This Smile" or "To Cross the Line"

Thank you!

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Old 12-24-2006, 08:24 PM   #6 (permalink)
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No, I have never read you other fics. However, I'm sitting here, with nothing to do...... so I am off to go read them.
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I am an active reader in Underneath This Smile as you know , but I never read To Cross The Line. I will read it sometime!
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Hey Moxie! I just finished "To Cross the Line" and it was completely fantastic! I would start "Underneath that Smile", but I am completely exhausted..... so I'll probably start it on the 26th 'cause I deffinately won't have time tomorrow. Anyhoo, I can't wait for the next chapter in this fic. PAMS!
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Old 12-24-2006, 11:23 PM   #9 (permalink)

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this is awesome...i'm subscribing.... pams.
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Old 12-24-2006, 11:39 PM   #10 (permalink)
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ah...a cliff hanger...lol..i like it so far...
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Old 12-25-2006, 01:10 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Wonderful start, Adrienne! This is going to be awesome...and I don't need to tell you I've read the others, coz you already know I have!
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Old 12-25-2006, 02:08 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Oh my lanta!! So many readers!! Thanks to Maylin-Janet, Luv_snuffles, Weasleygurl, HP_lover09, Draco's Darling, and of course, SHAN SHAN and SOPHIA!! WOOT!

Okay m'dears...another postie soon, I promise! Knowing me, though, it'll prolly be mid week though...ah the joys of reading my fics...

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Oh my lanta!! So many readers!! Thanks to Maylin-Janet, Luv_snuffles, Weasleygurl, HP_lover09, Draco's Darling, and of course, SHAN SHAN and SOPHIA!! WOOT!

Okay m'dears...another postie soon, I promise! Knowing me, though, it'll prolly be mid week though...ah the joys of reading my fics...

Love you all!

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No problem! Keep up the good work. You can call me Kay or Kathryn...Your doing a great job!
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*squee* Can't wait, Adrienne!
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Old 12-25-2006, 01:26 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Woot! NEW REAder Awesome post. I can't wait for Sirius, hehe. PAMS!
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Old 12-25-2006, 07:55 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Alrighty..I'll have to wait..:Cry:
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dont you mean ' oh sophia's lanta' lollllll
yes i've read your other amazing fics darling and this one is sure to be sheer brilliance
so much faith in you

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ya another fic i am subbscribing right now PAMS
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Old 12-26-2006, 01:27 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Hey everyone!
bigk7brave: Ah, thanks!! Glad you like it! Thanks for reading everything I write, m'dear!
Sophia: My mistake!! I did indeed mean 'Oh Sophia's Lanta.' Thank you for believing in me with a deep faith *huggles*
Maylin-Janet: Hah, I'm sorry I made you cry!! Thanks for reading, love.
AMIE!: Hey there, dearie!! Thanks so much for reading yet ANOTHER fic of mine =) I looooove you!
Shan-Shan: Hah, I picked up your technique of typing with a color nobody can see =) It makes me chuckle!
Kay: SQQQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUEEEEE!! I'm so glad you like it!! YAYAYAYAY!
Weasleygurl: Ahh, thanks for going to read everything I've written!! I'm glad you liked it!
HPlover_09: Thankies for reading and liking it, hun! I love ya!
Draco's Darling: Hehe, I know you!! You and I are fellow Draco lovers =)

Okay,

Here we go!

They both crumpled to the floor, breathing heavily from the impact of the traveling.

"What...happened..." Hermione asked, standing up weakly.

"I dunno...this isn't where we were supposed to be going." Harry told her, worry lines indented on his forehead. "But we might as well make the best of it, right?"

"I suppose." Hermione said hesitantly. "I'm going to bed. See you tomorrow, Harry." She passed through all the Gryffindors that were crowded in the commonroom and walked to the door where she shared her bedroom with the other girls. She flung it open to find three girls, all about her age, lying on her bed.

"Uh...can we help you?" One of them asked coolly. She had long, straight blond hair and cornflower blue eyes. She tugged at the top of her shirt, as when she laid down, you could see straight up it.

"Yes, actually." Hermione said. "I need to know why you're on my bed."

"Your bed?" The girl asked. "And do you mind telling me who you think you are?"

"Shay. Be nice." The girl sitting cross-legged next to her said quietly.

"I'm just wondering!" Shay said defensively.

"I'm Hermione. My friend, Harry, was playing with my time-turner, and-"

"Listen, hun, I don't want to hear your sob story. I just asked your name." The girl named Shay laughed at her own stab of cruelty, while the second girl, a brunette with almond shaped eyes, hopped off the bed and hugged Hermione.

"My name's Lea. Don't mind Shay, she's a bit mean at times." Lea said, looking at Hermione. "But she's right, we aren't on your bed. This is Bridget's bed. We share with one other girl."

"Oh, god." Hermione groaned. "I'm not supposed to be here, so it's likely I wouldn't have a bed. Could I bunk in here for a while?"

"Sure!" Lea said kindly. "It'll be fun...I'll take you under my wing."

"Oh, god, Lea..." Shay laughed from Hermione's bed. "This is going to be an interesting night.


I know a lot hasn't happened yet, but I need a lot of background to make it work, so...give me one or two more posts like this, and the REAL story will actually start =)

Thank you all for sticking with me!

Love
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Hey, it story is a little like mine, Harry and Hermione are back in time and have to deal with Harry's parents and their friends? Is that it? Is it? Is it? pams! pams! pams! pams! pams! pams!
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Hey dancerbookl

It's kind of like that, but something's going to happen between Harry and his parents and Hermione and the marauders...just remember as you read this what the title is.

Thanks so much for reading, peoples!

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Shan-Shan: Hah, I picked up your technique of typing with a color nobody can see =) It makes me chuckle!
I actually stole that of my dear Ottery...he started the craze. LOL. I hope there aren't too many people catching on to it. Takes the fun out of it otherwise...LOL.
Haven't read the post yet, but I'm just about to. Will reply again, or edit this one, depending on whether I feel like spamming or not *giggles, once I've read it. I'm sure it will be perfect, like usual!
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Hehehe, I love you too Adrienne! Stupid Shay. PAMS!
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Thank you all for sticking with me!

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Of course; anything you need to get your story started........ and the posts are still really interesting, anyways. PAMS!

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