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12-24-2006, 01:26 PM
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| | Bicorn
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 1,922
| Losing the Memories - Sa13+ Hello there everyone!
My name's Adrienne (aka Moxie) and this is my third fanfic on Snitchseeker. I'm trying out a bunch of new stuff on here, so I've got a story for everyone...
Just some ground rules: You can give constructive criticism (always welcome) but no flaming please! Not a lot of spam, and if you have questions about the story, just ask!
Onto the summary! Okay, so it's a time story...takes place in seventh year...Hermione decides to try the Time-Turner again, and somehow, Harry manages to get a hold of it. Hermione catches him playing with it, and they both end up in James and Lily's seventh year at Hogwarts. They soon realize that they have no memory of the future they came from, offering some...interesting ships.
Okay! Hope you enjoy! "HARRY!" Hermione shouted, coming into the empty, Gryffindor common room. It was Christmas, and Ron had gone home for the holidays, leaving Harry and Hermione at Hogwarts. Harry jumped. "OH MY GOD!" He screamed, not even in a close-to-manly voice. Hermione scowled at him and stocked over to where he stood, her Time Turner hung loosely around him neck. "Harry! Professor McGonagall told me specifically we could NOT. MESS. WITH. MY. TIME TURNER!" "I'm sorry, Hermione, jeez. Just breathe." Harry began fiddling with the Turner again. "I want to show you something. It's your Christmas present. Come over here." Hermione hesitated. Harry held out the Time Turner chain to her, and she carefully stepped under the chain. He turned the hourglass many times, and then...the common room was filled with people. The most prominent a boy with shaggy black hair, and a girl with emerald eyes.
Comment, por favor!
Love
~Adrienne~ Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10 Chapter 11 Chapter 12 Chapter 13 Chapter 14 Chapter 15 Chapter 16 Chapter 17 Chapter 18 Chapter 19 Chapter 20 Chapter 21 Chapter 22 Chapter 23 Chapter 24 Chapter 25 Chapter 26 Chapter 27 Chapter 28 Chapter 29 Chapter 30 Chapter 31 Chapter 32 Chapter 33 Chapter 34 Chapter 35 Chapter 36 Chapter 37 Chapter 38 Chapter 39 Chapter 40 Chapter 41 Chapter 42 Chapter 43 Chapter 44 Chapter 45 Chapter 46 Chapter 47 Chapter 48 Chapter 49
Last edited by demented_death_eater : 07-28-2007 at 08:20 PM.
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12-24-2006, 03:57 PM
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| Formerly: Draco's Darling Russian Language ModDumbledore's GargoyleRussian Beauty Troll
Location: *JULY 5TH* BIRTHDAAY Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 4,886
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lola Demesne Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Talon C. Doucette International Cooperation | Very nice! I CANNOT wait to see where this goes!!!!!!!!!!!
Another phenomenal piece of work!
Best of Luck,
Lea |
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12-24-2006, 07:48 PM
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| | Hippocampus
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 275
| NOOOOOO I AM THE SECOND POST
I WANTED TO BE THE FIRST ONE *TEAR*
although we all know that first is the worst and second is the best =P
lol but anyways
the beginning of this story is AMAZING and if its anything like your last ff's then i'm sure it will be brilliant
have a merry christmahannukwanzikah
luvsya to death XP
lol
bye
~fia~ |
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12-24-2006, 08:08 PM
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| Red-head Ginny FanJames' PranksK.o. Lupin's Loyalty Grindylow
Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel. Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Weasley Second | Oh my gosh! This story seems completely spectacular so far! PAMS please!!!!! |
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12-24-2006, 08:20 PM
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| | Bicorn
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 1,922
| Hey everyone!! Thanks for the comments!
Could you do me a HUGE favor and post whether or not you've read my other fics, "Underneath This Smile" or "To Cross the Line"
Thank you!
Love
Adrienne |
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12-24-2006, 08:24 PM
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| Red-head Ginny FanJames' PranksK.o. Lupin's Loyalty Grindylow
Location: Sitting........On the rocky coast of Maine.......my nose burried in a novel. Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katie Weasley Second | No, I have never read you other fics. However, I'm sitting here, with nothing to do...... so I am off to go read them. |
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12-24-2006, 10:01 PM
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| Formerly: Draco's Darling Russian Language ModDumbledore's GargoyleRussian Beauty Troll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lola Demesne Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Talon C. Doucette International Cooperation | I am an active reader in Underneath This Smile as you know , but I never read To Cross The Line. I will read it sometime! |
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12-24-2006, 11:20 PM
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| | Glumbumble
Location: Hanging out in my cousin's fic....... When You Say Nothing At All Join Date: Jul 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaitlyn Weasley None | Hey Moxie! I just finished "To Cross the Line" and it was completely fantastic! I would start "Underneath that Smile", but I am completely exhausted..... so I'll probably start it on the 26th 'cause I deffinately won't have time tomorrow. Anyhoo, I can't wait for the next chapter in this fic. PAMS! |
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12-24-2006, 11:23 PM
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| Rossignol Chimaera
Location: Time. Join Date: May 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Regina Strizhakov Seventh Ministry RPG Name:
Kayleen Rawlen International Cooperation | this is awesome...i'm subscribing.... pams. |
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12-24-2006, 11:39 PM
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| DD's Teddy Bear Fan Fiction Elf Demiguise
Location: I live some where, were you can leave ur mind wide open Join Date: Jul 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maylin Janet Bokshil Sohma Fourth | ah...a cliff hanger...lol..i like it so far... |
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12-25-2006, 01:10 AM
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| RWFC Vice President RGFC Vice President Hippogriff
Location: Re-reading Deathly Hallows and STILL crying over it! Join Date: Oct 2003
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| Wonderful start, Adrienne! This is going to be awesome...and I don't need to tell you I've read the others, coz you already know I have! *huggles* Shan XoXo |
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12-25-2006, 02:08 AM
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| | Bicorn
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 1,922
| Oh my lanta!! So many readers!! Thanks to Maylin-Janet, Luv_snuffles, Weasleygurl, HP_lover09, Draco's Darling, and of course, SHAN SHAN and SOPHIA!! WOOT!
Okay m'dears...another postie soon, I promise! Knowing me, though, it'll prolly be mid week though...ah the joys of reading my fics...
Love you all!
Adrienne |
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12-25-2006, 04:04 AM
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| Rossignol Chimaera
Location: Time. Join Date: May 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Regina Strizhakov Seventh Ministry RPG Name:
Kayleen Rawlen International Cooperation | Quote:
Originally Posted by Moxie Oh my lanta!! So many readers!! Thanks to Maylin-Janet, Luv_snuffles, Weasleygurl, HP_lover09, Draco's Darling, and of course, SHAN SHAN and SOPHIA!! WOOT!
Okay m'dears...another postie soon, I promise! Knowing me, though, it'll prolly be mid week though...ah the joys of reading my fics...
Love you all!
Adrienne | No problem! Keep up the good work. You can call me Kay or Kathryn...Your doing a great job! |
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12-25-2006, 04:22 AM
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| RWFC Vice President RGFC Vice President Hippogriff
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| *squee* Can't wait, Adrienne! |
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12-25-2006, 01:26 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Hippogriff
Location: kissing posters of Eminem... it's not weird. Join Date: Apr 2005
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| Woot! NEW REAder Awesome post. I can't wait for Sirius, hehe. PAMS!
Amie |
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12-25-2006, 07:55 PM
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| DD's Teddy Bear Fan Fiction Elf Demiguise
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maylin Janet Bokshil Sohma Fourth | Alrighty..I'll have to wait..:Cry: |
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12-25-2006, 08:50 PM
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| | Hippocampus
Join Date: Dec 2005
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| dont you mean ' oh sophia's lanta' lollllll
yes i've read your other amazing fics darling and this one is sure to be sheer brilliance
so much faith in you
~fia~ |
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12-26-2006, 12:57 AM
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| | Gnome
Location: Springfield,Ohio Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 77
| ya another fic i am subbscribing right now PAMS |
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12-26-2006, 01:27 PM
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| | Bicorn
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 1,922
| Hey everyone!
bigk7brave: Ah, thanks!! Glad you like it! Thanks for reading everything I write, m'dear!
Sophia: My mistake!! I did indeed mean 'Oh Sophia's Lanta.' Thank you for believing in me with a deep faith *huggles*
Maylin-Janet: Hah, I'm sorry I made you cry!! Thanks for reading, love.
AMIE!: Hey there, dearie!! Thanks so much for reading yet ANOTHER fic of mine =) I looooove you!
Shan-Shan: Hah, I picked up your technique of typing with a color nobody can see =) It makes me chuckle!
Kay: SQQQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUEEEEE!! I'm so glad you like it!! YAYAYAYAY!
Weasleygurl: Ahh, thanks for going to read everything I've written!! I'm glad you liked it!
HPlover_09: Thankies for reading and liking it, hun! I love ya!
Draco's Darling: Hehe, I know you!! You and I are fellow Draco lovers =)
Okay,
Here we go! They both crumpled to the floor, breathing heavily from the impact of the traveling.
"What...happened..." Hermione asked, standing up weakly.
"I dunno...this isn't where we were supposed to be going." Harry told her, worry lines indented on his forehead. "But we might as well make the best of it, right?"
"I suppose." Hermione said hesitantly. "I'm going to bed. See you tomorrow, Harry." She passed through all the Gryffindors that were crowded in the commonroom and walked to the door where she shared her bedroom with the other girls. She flung it open to find three girls, all about her age, lying on her bed.
"Uh...can we help you?" One of them asked coolly. She had long, straight blond hair and cornflower blue eyes. She tugged at the top of her shirt, as when she laid down, you could see straight up it.
"Yes, actually." Hermione said. "I need to know why you're on my bed."
"Your bed?" The girl asked. "And do you mind telling me who you think you are?"
"Shay. Be nice." The girl sitting cross-legged next to her said quietly.
"I'm just wondering!" Shay said defensively.
"I'm Hermione. My friend, Harry, was playing with my time-turner, and-"
"Listen, hun, I don't want to hear your sob story. I just asked your name." The girl named Shay laughed at her own stab of cruelty, while the second girl, a brunette with almond shaped eyes, hopped off the bed and hugged Hermione.
"My name's Lea. Don't mind Shay, she's a bit mean at times." Lea said, looking at Hermione. "But she's right, we aren't on your bed. This is Bridget's bed. We share with one other girl."
"Oh, god." Hermione groaned. "I'm not supposed to be here, so it's likely I wouldn't have a bed. Could I bunk in here for a while?"
"Sure!" Lea said kindly. "It'll be fun...I'll take you under my wing."
"Oh, god, Lea..." Shay laughed from Hermione's bed. "This is going to be an interesting night.
I know a lot hasn't happened yet, but I need a lot of background to make it work, so...give me one or two more posts like this, and the REAL story will actually start =)
Thank you all for sticking with me!
Love
Adrienne
Last edited by Moxie : 12-26-2006 at 01:33 PM.
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12-27-2006, 12:30 PM
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| | Gnome
Location: Springfield,Ohio Join Date: Feb 2006
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| good post |
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12-27-2006, 12:57 PM
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|  SS Quill Journalist Hermione Co-President Book Club Babe SotS Champion Vampire
Location: Maryland Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 11,300
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Jermey Jackston Special Ops | Hey, it story is a little like mine, Harry and Hermione are back in time and have to deal with Harry's parents and their friends? Is that it? Is it? Is it? pams! pams! pams! pams! pams! pams!
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12-27-2006, 01:30 PM
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| | Bicorn
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 1,922
| Hey dancerbookl
It's kind of like that, but something's going to happen between Harry and his parents and Hermione and the marauders...just remember as you read this what the title is.
Thanks so much for reading, peoples!
Love
Adrienne |
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12-27-2006, 01:45 PM
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| RWFC Vice President RGFC Vice President Hippogriff
Location: Re-reading Deathly Hallows and STILL crying over it! Join Date: Oct 2003
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Originally Posted by Adriennieoo Shan-Shan: Hah, I picked up your technique of typing with a color nobody can see =) It makes me chuckle! | I actually stole that of my dear Ottery...he started the craze. LOL. I hope there aren't too many people catching on to it. Takes the fun out of it otherwise...LOL. Haven't read the post yet, but I'm just about to. Will reply again, or edit this one, depending on whether I feel like spamming or not *giggles, once I've read it. I'm sure it will be perfect, like usual! *huggles* Shan XoXo |
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12-28-2006, 05:59 AM
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| Dog Star Owner Hippogriff
Location: kissing posters of Eminem... it's not weird. Join Date: Apr 2005
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| Hehehe, I love you too Adrienne! Stupid Shay. PAMS!
Amie |
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12-29-2006, 12:36 AM
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| | Glumbumble
Location: Hanging out in my cousin's fic....... When You Say Nothing At All Join Date: Jul 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaitlyn Weasley None | Quote:
Originally Posted by Moxie
I know a lot hasn't happened yet, but I need a lot of background to make it work, so...give me one or two more posts like this, and the REAL story will actually start =)
Thank you all for sticking with me!
Love
Adrienne |
Of course; anything you need to get your story started........ and the posts are still really interesting, anyways. PAMS!
Last edited by Weasleygurl : 12-29-2006 at 12:36 AM.
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