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04-11-2008, 11:27 PM
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Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | Hey everyone, it's Friday, I'm free of writer's block, and here is the new section of Lizzie...Davis!!
~~~ It had been a couple of weeks since the Hogsmeade visit and everyone in the castle seemed to know that Draco and Lizzie were dating. A lot of the Gryffindors had asked her why she was dating the Slytherin, of course Lizzie just ignored them and would continue what she was doing at the time. After a week all the Gryffindors had stopped talking to her, with the exception of Ginny who would get into a fight with Lizzie every time they crossed paths. A few times Lizzie wanted to go to the headmistress and request to be placed into Slytherin to end the drama.
One Saturday morning Lizzie got out of bed and got dressed, her and Draco were to spend the day together, although he didn’t tell her what they would be doing. She walked down the stairs leading into the common room, she stopped, however, at the foot of the stairs when she saw four people staring right back at her from the center of the room.
“I’m not going to get into this right now you guys.” She said the four of them.
Harry stepped forward, blocking Lizzie and Ginny who was starting to turn red already. Hermione stepped in front of the portrait hole to block Lizzie’s only exit, Ron just stood there looking stupid as always.
“Lizzie, with the exception of Ginny, we all have your best interest at heart.” Harry started. “We have known Malfoy longer than you, he’s the reason Dumbledore’s dead!”
Lizzie shook her head. “You of all people should know better Harry! You were there at the scene, you saw what had happened, he was acting out of fear of Voldemort!” She rolled her eyes as Ron flinched at the name, why were people so afraid of her father?
“No Lizzie, he is a death eater, he even has the mark!” Harry tried to tell her.
“Yeah, he told me, he told me that his father forced him to become a death eater, that he didn’t want to become one!” Lizzie told him, anger building up in her eyes.
“Lizzie, where are you going so early anyway?” Hermione asked calmly, clearly telling she was getting angry.
“Like it’s any of your business where I go and who I meet.”
“You’re going to meet with Malfoy aren’t you?” Ron asked.
Lizzie turned to Ron and glared at him. “So what if I am, he’s my boyfriend, isn’t he?” She said to him calmly.
“Lizzie please, you don’t know Malfoy, we have known him for seven years, he’s just going to hurt you.” Hermione told her ‘friend.’
Lizzie had enough of this, she pushed past Harry, gave Ginny a punch in the face, and shoved Ron out of her way and left the common room.
She ran all the way to the lake, tears starting to form in her eyes. As soon as she sat down on one of the rocks, she felt hands grasp her shoulders. She jumped and turned to see Draco.
“What’s wrong Lizzie?” He asked her once he had seen the tears.
“The stupid threesome are still at it, they tried stopping me from coming here.” She told him and explained how she managed to get past them and Ginny.
“They’re stupid, don’t listen to them.” He told his girlfriend and pulled her into a hug. “You ready to sneak into Hogmeade?”
Lizzie smiled and wiped her tears. “After that, I’m willing to go anywhere but here.” She told him as Malfoy led her to a tree. “Draco, this is the Whomping Willow.”
Malfoy smirked and pointed his wand at the branch of the tree. He murmured a spell and the tree stopped moving. “Don’t worry, can you trust me?” He asked as he walked to the foot of the tree.
Lizzie nodded and watched as he got into the small hole. She heard him calling for her to follow and as soon as her head went under the ground, the tree came back to life. “Where are we going?” She asked Malfoy as he took her hand and started walking along the tunnel.
“You’ll see in a few minutes.” He told her.
The journey took a while, but when the couple reached the end of the tunnel, Lizzie could hear voices above her. “Draco, what’s going on?” She asked him, she was starting to get a bad feeling about this whole thing.
Malfoy removed a section of the top of the passageway and jumped out. The voices grew quiet and a few seconds later Malfoy reached down and pulled Lizzie up.
“Ah, Draco, I see you managed to bring our guest of honor here today.” Said a cold high pitched voice.
Lizzie froze, there were a dozen masked wizards in this dusty little room, she looked up and saw a snake like face with red eyes.
“I finally get a chance to meet my daughter.” The snake like person said, grinning evilly. |
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04-11-2008, 11:35 PM
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| One fish, two fish... Hippogriff
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“I finally get a chance to meet my daughter.” The snake like person said, grinning evilly.
| You've got one thing right, but it's you that's evil leaving me hanging like that  It's a really, really, really, really, really, really, really beyond nice post, and I really wanted to trust Draco, not I'm not to sure.
It's an awesome post as usual and I especially like the part where she punches Ginny, at least that's what I got from it
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!
Well, I'm off, I need to find something other then chile for supper. I sooo CANT wait for your next post, that one was absolutly, positivly breathtakinginly amazing. (if you cant tell I was trying to come up with as many words I could think of, it's not getting to far right now)  love ya
p.s. bake apple pie smells good  |
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04-11-2008, 11:43 PM
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| Yeehaw! Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sahrina Marie Potter (Rian) Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Jessica Emily Miller Magical Creatures | You better be nice to your own dughter Voldy!
OMG! Draco is so evil! (see how easily you can change my mind? lol)
I cant believe he would do something like that! Ahh! Okay, I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter, pams! |
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04-17-2008, 01:26 PM
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|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Crup
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Hey! I found your ff and i just caught up!
You write really well and you really fooled me. I was positive Drcao was good. I would never have thought he would betray her.
Please post more soon.
Lots of love,
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04-18-2008, 06:50 PM
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| Jump Around! Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | Quote:
Originally Posted by H/G4eva You've got one thing right, but it's you that's evil leaving me hanging like that  It's a really, really, really, really, really, really, really beyond nice post, and I really wanted to trust Draco, not I'm not to sure.
It's an awesome post as usual and I especially like the part where she punches Ginny, at least that's what I got from it
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!
Well, I'm off, I need to find something other then chile for supper. I sooo CANT wait for your next post, that one was absolutly, positivly breathtakinginly amazing. (if you cant tell I was trying to come up with as many words I could think of, it's not getting to far right now)  love ya
p.s. bake apple pie smells good  | LoL, I changed my mind, I know that I said I don't like cliff hangers that much, but boy is fun to stop on one, lol. Yeah Lizzie punched Ginny, she hates her so much, I feel for Ginny, but then again she hates Lizzie as well, we'll see Ginny more often soon.
Everytime i see your p.s. it makes me want some apple pie, haven't had one in a long time, lol. Anyway, a new post is coming up and then later today I'll post for Destiny's Decision. Quote:
Originally Posted by iheartdan You better be nice to your own dughter Voldy!
OMG! Draco is so evil! (see how easily you can change my mind? lol)
I cant believe he would do something like that! Ahh! Okay, I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter, pams! | Voldy, nice, since when? I'm sorry I keep changing your mind on like everything, but I was planning this from the beginning, though I was thinking of having it later on. then I got a new idea so I had to bring it in so soon. You'll see in due time what I'm talking about, lol. Quote:
Originally Posted by shirelbb Hey! I found your ff and i just caught up!
You write really well and you really fooled me. I was positive Drcao was good. I would never have thought he would betray her.
Please post more soon.
Lots of love,
-*~ Shirel ~*- | Shirel, you found it! 
LoL, I wanted to fool everyone, but i wouldn't make a definately decision for Draco, things might change soon again, might being the key word there.
Like I said guys, I'm posting again and this post will finish up the meeting between Lizzie and her father. hope you like it!
~Khristina. |
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04-18-2008, 06:51 PM
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Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | Lizzie looked into those red eyes of Lord Voldemort, seeing for the first time in her life, the menacing face of her father. She looked at Draco, confusion and hurt on her face. He wouldn’t look at her, and that made her hurt even more. Harry, Ron and Hermione were right, he was a death eater, he was using her. Tears started to form in her eyes as she looked at the death eaters all around her, there was no way to escape, and fear was starting to fill her body.
“What’s the matter Elizabeth?” The cold voice asked her and she turned back to the Dark Lord. “Don’t you want to see your own father?”
Lizzie shook her head. “I heard stories from my friends, you murdered people for the fun of it!” She almost yelled at him. He just stood there, a evil smile on his face.
“Your mother shouldn’t have kept you from me, she should’ve known I would find out about you, and force you to join the dark side.”
“And what if I don’t.” She asked folding her arms across her chest.
Lord Voldemort let out a high pitch cold laugh as he raised his wand and pointed it at his daughter. “Crucio!” He shouted.
Lizzie fell in a heap on the floor, scream in pain from the torture curse. After what seem like ages, the curse was lifted and she was breathing heavily on the floor, tears in her eyes. She felt a couple of hands pull her up and dragged her closer to her father. She looked into his eyes, hatred filling inside her as one of the death eater rolled up her left sleeve. She screamed in pain again as her father touched her forearm and the dark mark appeared on her skin.
“Now Draco, take her back to Hogwarts, it’s been a while since you been here and we don’t want people to get suspicious.” Voldemort told the young Malfoy then turned back to his daughter. “If you even hint about this to anyone, you’ll go the same way as those innocent people.” He laughed as Draco took a hold of her and pulled her down into the secret passageway and back to Hogwarts. |
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04-18-2008, 07:30 PM
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| One fish, two fish... Hippogriff
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04-18-2008, 11:52 PM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | I love this fan fic soooooooooooo much. Im a new reader but more readers the better. I THINK. Hehehe. Lol!!!! Please post more soon.
Luv ya
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04-19-2008, 12:24 AM
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| Yeehaw! Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sahrina Marie Potter (Rian) Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Jessica Emily Miller Magical Creatures | I'm so mad at Voldemort! (I never liked him anyway...) I hope Harry believes her that she didnt want to become a death eater, if he notices her dark mark!
Erg. And Draco's so evil! |
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04-21-2008, 01:01 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | 2000th post!! Okay everyone I'm going to make another post after I reply to your comments.
Jenn: Yes Ginny will have a bigger role, though it's not coming up in this post nor the next, or at least i don't think so.
Ummph. *gets up from the ground* why is it you're alway tackling me? lol
Evangeline: Evangeline!! Welcome, I'm glad you like it, it's actually moving along faster than what I expected. I hope you won't be mad at me in the future though... not saying why. 
Sydnie: Oh Sydnie, oh Sydnie, what will I do without my Sydnie, lol. Don't worry I'm just bored and I was just told a funny joke, so I'm kind of hyper. Harry won't know about the mark...yet, no one will...yet. lol, but yesh Voldy is evil, he needs to...nevermind. Anyway new post coming right up!!
Oh before I post though, I have to say I promised Jenn that I would make my 2000th post as an update for Lizzie...Davis, only because she promised to make her 1000th post for one of her fics. So yes, this is my 2000th So without further ado, Lizzie...Davis!! ~~~~~~
The tears in Lizzie’s eyes continued to flow down her eyes as her and Draco walked away from the Whomping Willow. Half way across the grounds Draco turned to Lizzie.
“I’m sorry about this.” He told her, stopping her.
Lizzie ignored him and, clutching her left forearm, headed back to the Gryffindor Common Room.
Hermione was there, along with Ginny, but Harry and Ron were no where to be found. “Hey Lizzie, are you alright?” She asked, noticing Lizzie’s tear stained face.
Lizzie ignored her and walked up the stairs to the girls dorm, almost zombie like. She flopped on her bed, her tears running into her pillow. She didn’t’ hear Hermione and Ginny walking in.
“I’m telling you Hermione, she doesn’t want me to be here.” Ginny told her best friend.
“Ginny, she needs us.” Hermione told her before walking to Lizzie’s bed. “Lizzie, what happened?”
Lizzie shook her head, how could she tell Hermione what had happened if her life was at risk. She turned around and sat up, looking at Hermione, but ignoring Ginny. “Nothing, just, Draco and I broke up.” Lizzie told her, not looking at Hermione.
“Oh Lizzie, I’m sorry to hear that.” Hermione said, though not looking at all sorry.
“Don’t worry about it, after all you all tried to warn me.” She said to her as she laid back down on her bed. Her right hand was laying on her left forearm where the mark was, the pain had left her, but the thought that Draco betrayed her and ended up selling her out to her father was still very painful. “I just want to be left alone, okay?” She said as she closed her eyes and pretended to fall asleep.
A minute later she heard two sets of footsteps and the dorm door closing. She lifted her head just to make sure Hermione and Ginny had left before sitting up in her bed again. She pulled up the sleeve of her robe and looked at the dark mark on her arm. Letting one last tear fall down her face, Lizzie got up and changed into her pajamas. She climbed into her four-poster bed and this time really did fall asleep.
The following day she had received a letter from the Headmistress to meet her in her office after classes were over. She didn’t know why she of all people wanted to see her, but after her last class, which was Charms, Lizzie made her way to the headmistress’ office.
“Ah, Miss. Riddle, please come in.” Professor McGonagall said from behind her desk as Lizzie knocked on the opened door. “And please close the door behind you.”
Lizzie as she was told, though she was shocked who else was in the room. Standing beside the desk was none other than Professor Snape! She looked at him nervously before stepping closer to the desk.
“Please take a seat Miss Riddle, we might be here for a while.” McGonagall said and watched as she sat down. “Now, Professor Snape here tells me that you met your father.”
Lizzie’s eyes grew with fear, why would he tell the Headmistress. Lizzie stood up, clearly wanting to run out of the office and not come back. As she made to turn around, however, Professor Snape quickly casted a spell, and Lizzie was glued to the spot. She looked at the Potions master and the Headmistress, tears forming in her eyes again.
“Lizzie, we’re here to protect you.” The Headmistress told the young girl as she got up and walked in front of Lizzie. She took a hold of her left hand and rolled up Lizzie’s robe sleeve to unveil the dark mark. “Lizzie, there will be extra precaution for you to take in order for you to be safe. Professor Snape and a couple of other teachers will…”
“NO!” Lizzie screamed, interrupting the headmistress. “No one but the death eaters are supposed to know, he’ll kill me if he finds out you know!” She then turned to Snape. “I can’t believe you actually told her! I thought you were supposed to be his faithful servant!” Lizzie shouted at him. She pulled out her wand, shouted ‘Finite Incantatum’ and ran out the door before either one of them could say another word. |
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04-21-2008, 02:14 AM
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| Yeehaw! Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sahrina Marie Potter (Rian) Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Jessica Emily Miller Magical Creatures | Wow. Poor Lizzie! I hope she's okay! PAMS! Happy 2000th post by the way lol. |
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04-21-2008, 06:33 AM
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|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Crup
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Poor Lizzie! She is having a bad time. I hope she'll be okay at the end becasuse she makes me sad when she cries!
Happy, happy, happy, happy, HAPPY 2,000 POST!!!!
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04-21-2008, 08:14 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | Wow hope lizzie's ok. This must be very hard for her.
Good post plz post more soon
And happy happy happy 2000th post
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04-21-2008, 03:42 PM
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| One fish, two fish... Hippogriff
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Liliana Hayman Department of Mysteries | if a mod see's this can you please delete this, it posted twice on me  |
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04-21-2008, 03:44 PM
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| One fish, two fish... Hippogriff
Location: Ontario, Canada Join Date: Jul 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaitlynn Hayman Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Liliana Hayman Department of Mysteries | Happy 2000th post
I loved the post, but not the situation Lizzie is in, I wish that she didn't have to go through this. It must be really hard for her. I'm glad Snape told McGonagall though. I wonder how Harry will take it when/if he finds out.
You posted  Sorry that I never game back online last night, my friend told me about this show, called pysch, and I hadnt found it, and then I found it last night and watched it because I told her if I found it I would and it was really funny. If you ever come across it you should watch it.
PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!! Can't wait for more!!  Jenn |
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04-23-2008, 07:55 PM
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| SBFC Activity Offic. LPFC Event Officer Neville's Patronus Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | New Reader!!! Hey Khristina!!
Love this story! I'm going to kill Malfoy!!  I swear he is a no good, piece of dirt!!
Can't wait for the next post! See Snape can be nice, when he needs to be. PAMS!!!
luv,
Jemma
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04-29-2008, 06:27 PM
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| Jump Around! Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | Jey everyone, sorry this isn't a post I'll explain why after I reply to your comments!
Sydnie~She'll be okay, I hope, I'm still thinking of evil plots for her though, but shhh you didn't hear anything from me, lol.
Shirel~Like I said to Sydnie she'll be okay, well actually it depends on what you vote for in the above poll whether or not the overall story will be a happy one or sad one, so vote people, please?
Evangeline~ It is hard for her, and she actually hates her life, this is why her mother moved to America, so that people wouldn't give her a hard time and that she wouldn't fall into a trap of Voldemorts, guess she couldn't protect Lizzie forever.
Jenn~ Physic, I love Phsyc! I don't watch much of it though since well, I don't watch much tv, lol.
See, everyone is starting to make me feel bad, everyone loves the post but not the situation and I was working on this part of the plot since the beginning, just didn't expect it to happen so soon, lol. But it had to happen soon for other....events later on, that's all I'm saying.
Jemma and Sabrina~ Malfoy was always a no good piece of dirt, but I love him, I was actually going to end up having Draco and Hermione date but I couldn't tie it in with everything that needed to be done, next fan fic of mine will be a Dramione but I won't get that up until after this one, I know if I start writing any more fan fics I'll totally forget about Lizzie, trust me I've done it before, lol.
And thanks you guys for the happy 2000th post, I appreciate it.
Okay I told you that I was going to explain why I'm not posting yet, well, I dont' have a post finished yet. I'm moving in a few weeks and I've been packing my room up, though I swear the more I pack the more it becomes messier. Anyway, I'm going to try and have a post up before I leave, but I can't promise anything, if I don't I won't be able to post until June. I'm sorry everyone, I hate moving and this makes my fourth move in a year. And on top of that, I'm moving around my birthday, which in my opinion stinks. Anyway like I said I'll try and post before I leave, but if I don't I'm sorry, and I hope you'll stick by Lizzie even when I'm gone.
I love you all! 
Khristina |
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