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Old 04-06-2008, 10:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello Hello! I'm Nicolle and I really love my Bella, so when I can't be on to role play her, I like to write about her, which is how this story evolved. Narrated by Bella herself, this is the story of a girl named Maddie, who surprisingly, has the same exact life as Bella. Freaky huh? Maybe not so much. *shifty*

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Let me tell you a story about a girl named Madeline. First of all, Madeline hates her name, and she would prefer that you call her Maddie. Kay? Thanks.

Second, it is important that you understand Maddie's home life, her parents, while far from being in love, have been married for 30 years, and she is the product of their time together. The only one.

Being an only child, all of her parent's attention, obviously, was focused on her, sadly enough.

Maddie never saw eye to eye with her parent's philosophies, and the moment that she found a place to go, she moved out.

Ironically enough, she found herself living with the kind of person her parents loathed above any other. A Muggle.

So, this is where Maddie's Hogwarts adventure begins, after two and a half years at Beauxbatons Academy, she transferred to the one school she had wanted to be in to begin with.

Maddie loved being at Hogwarts.

She was closer to her cousin, she made lots of new friends, and she had access to all of the chocolate that she could ever want.

Then, everything suddenly went wrong, but at the same time it went right.

It's weird how at your worst moment, the most important things can happen.

Maddie's cousin disappeared along with the other students at Hogwarts, and no one knew where he was.

She was devastated to say the least, would she ever get to see him again?

Or would he be gone forever?

Did he miss her where he was?

Or did she never cross his mind?

She didn't know.

And not knowing was the worst thing ever.

But then, something good happened. Something that would forever change her.

Maddie met a boy.

Not just any boy did she meet, but the boy. One of those boys that you never forget, no matter how hard you might try.

He was simply perfect in just about every way. Perfect smile, perfect eyes, and he had that way of making her feel like she was the only girl on earth.

This boy made her feel special. Not like "stop eating the paste special". But then again, you totally knew that right?

Anyway, it turned out that this boy reciprocated her feelings, and that also made her very happy.

But, if everything was going so well with her newfound love interest, why did she find herself, from time to time, thinking of someone else?

Someone who she had never really thought of developing a relationship with.

Someone who had, when she thought about it, great relationship potential.

Someone who she had very recently fought with.

Hooked yet? I certainly hope so, because Maddie's story has only just started.

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Old 04-07-2008, 02:39 AM   #2 (permalink)

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I love it!! <3333 I like the 'He made her feel special' line. It made me giggle
... I want moar!!! -bounces up and down- It's awesome!! ^___^
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Old 04-07-2008, 02:46 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I love it!

I especially loved this part:

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But, if everything was going so well with her newfound love interest, why did she find herself, from time to time, thinking of someone else?

Someone who she had never really thought of developing a relationship with.

Someone who had, when she thought about it, great relationship potential.

Someone who she had very recently fought with.


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Old 04-07-2008, 02:49 AM   #4 (permalink)
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EEEEEK! It is supa good, Nicolle!

*stalks

I can't WAIT for more!
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Old 04-07-2008, 02:59 AM   #5 (permalink)
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OMG, this story is awesome. I can't wait till u post again.
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Old 04-07-2008, 04:52 AM   #6 (permalink)
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OMJ. I love Maddie already Kneecolle, I thought I should tell you I'm subscribing to this. If you hadn't figured it out already.

Lookin' good. PAMS, buddy!
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Old 04-07-2008, 05:28 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I am loving it.. Cant wait for more!!
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Old 04-07-2008, 08:29 AM   #8 (permalink)
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This seems like it is going to be a really good fan fic! Keep writing please!! :woop:

PAMS!!!

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Daughter! *Cling* I cannot wait for the story to begin, and you know that I will be reading

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Old 04-07-2008, 02:14 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Oooooh. Interesting.

I luff it Colley Wolley.

Maddie rawks. *pokes you to write more*
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Old 04-07-2008, 04:00 PM   #11 (permalink)
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I really like this. It's very diffrent than all the other fan fics. I am waiting fo more!
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Old 04-07-2008, 06:42 PM   #12 (permalink)
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I love it!! <3333 I like the 'He made her feel special' line. It made me giggle
... I want moar!!! -bounces up and down- It's awesome!! ^___^
haha thanks BFF!
I totally stole the stop eating the paste thing from Gilmore Girls though



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I love it!

I especially loved this part:





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I wonder who that boy could be.......
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EEEEEK! It is supa good, Nicolle!

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I can't WAIT for more!
Thank you dear! I'm very glad that you like it

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I'm going to post more right now

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OMJ. I love Maddie already Kneecolle, I thought I should tell you I'm subscribing to this. If you hadn't figured it out already.

Lookin' good. PAMS, buddy!
OMJ? Is that Oh My Josey?
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I am loving it.. Cant wait for more!!
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Hmm. I hope that Maddie's life is interesting enough, it is to me

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Daddy!! *tackles*
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Oooooh. Interesting.

I luff it Colley Wolley.

Maddie rawks. *pokes you to write more*
*squishes Terd*
Does Maddie rawk more than Bella?
I'm wayy ahead of you missy, I've got three chapters done already

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You think that she would know better.

You think that after the accident on her broom, when she fell and broke her arm, that she would be more careful.

You would think a lot of things.

She should have paid attention. She should have had a tighter grip on the branches.

Actually, let's just blame this on him. After all, it was his fault that she had been so distracted right?

Well, no.

It really wasn't anyone's fault, though some people who shall remain nameless, would like to blame it on Maddie.

Maddie prefers to blame the tree.

Actually, I believe her words were, "Stupid tree, with it's stupid slippery branches."

What eventful and exciting day is complete without a trip to the Hospital Wing?

I dare say that it is the best way to pass your life away.

Not.

The waiting room was, in itself, an entirely different affair. Besides being boring, it seemed also a place where one would have a strange conversation.

As Maddie sat there, awaiting care for her broken arm, Tree Boy asked her where she would rather be.

Where would she rather be?

Should she take the sane person's route? Or the drama queen route?

......

Drama Queen, dur.

So, she said that she would rather be back at home with her insane mother who was already lining up eligible bachelors for her.

Perhaps it had not been such a good idea to bring that up, because then, he asked if she would marry him.

Would she like to marry him?

Well, she supposed that if she were in love with him, and he asked her to marry him, sure she would.

And that is exactly what she told him.

Maybe that was not the right answer after all. Even though it was the truthful answer, she didn't exactly know how he felt about her.

What if he did like her? It would do her no good to lead him on in anyway, especially when she didn't know how she felt about him.

Confused? Well, you're not alone.
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Bwaha. Tree boy. I have no idea who that is.

I'm hooked. Can't wait to read more. ^__^
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Bwaha. Tree boy. I have no idea who that is.

I'm hooked. Can't wait to read more. ^__^
LOL! I love you Katie. You're too cute
I'm glad you like it, although you might not want to let Jack read the next chapter.... but he might like the one after that...

Maddie's got a boyfriend!

Yes, it's true, it became official last night in the Dungeon Corridor. He asked her to be his girlfriend.

How adorable!

Yes, Yes, these two are moving a little fast, but they are young, and there is plenty of time to be boring when they're old.

Besides that, Maddie doesnt believe in putting things off to another day.

You never really know what a day can bring, so why not do what you want, while you can?

Lesson of the day: When someone asks you to be his girlfriend, do not ask him "really?"

Because all it does is make you look silly.

Honestly.
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I love Maddie almost as much as I love Bella
actually, Kneecolle, I'm not telling what OMJ is

Maddie is too cute. He asked her to be his boyfriend? In the dungeons? :eyebrow: that seems romantic..... and awkward. *cough*

buuut... tree boy? Who - ohhh! *winks* gotcha. Tree boy. Who's tree girl?
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Aww, so cute!
I love this story to pieces!

But what's gonna happen to Tree Boy? I like Tree Boy
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YES! Maddie has a boyfriend now

I'm totally hooked now

But I like Tree Boy as well...
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I love it how everybody loves Tree Boy. ^__^

You know I love this, right? It's like a much easier way to stalk! Like a .. a ..STALKING REPORT! :O

Is Bella stalking Maddie, btw?
She sure does know alot of details of Maddie's life!
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Oh wow. -pets Tree Boy- He's kinda upset.

But, I so can't wait to read more. =O It's amazing.

-waits for next chapter-
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