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prongs1295 · 08-25-2007, 03:47 PM

This is gonna be my fourth FF and I’m excited! This FF is about a girl named Lorraine Lively and a boy named Corey Kessler. They’ve been enemies since forever. They’ve been opposites for a loooonnnnggg time. Lorraine’s in Gryffindor and Corey’s in Slytherin. Lorraine rarely ever gets in trouble and Corey always gets in trouble. Lorraine loves homework and reading and Corey despises it. It’s always been this way. But what happens, when Lorraine and Corey discover they have feelings for each other? But no way are they going to admit that! So through a long time of fights, love spats, and denial, will they be able to admit their love for each other? And will things turn out as they wished?

x*Daphne*x

Beginning of Last Year

Chapter 1

Lorraine crossed the barrier and onto platform 9¾. She looked around and spotted her friend Carl Asher, and his twin brother Cameron. You can always tell the difference between them by their hair. Carl has dark brown hair and Cameron has bright blonde/brown hair.

Lorraine walked slowly to them and said, “Hey.” Cameron just nodded his head, but Carl’s a whole ‘nother story. Carl hugged Lorraine really hard and said, “Thank goodness you’re here! Old Cammie here is killing me!”
Lorraine raised her eyebrows and split herself apart from Carl. “Okay… what’s up?”

“Cammie’s being a weirdo!” Carl said and then was slapped on the head by Cameron.

Lorraine cleared her throat and said, “Okay… weird.”

Carl nodded his head in agreement and said, “Tell me about it!” Lorraine rolled her eyes.

Cameron put his arm around Carl’s shoulder and said, “Hello Lively.”

“Hello Asher,” she replied. “You know, we should get going, Carl. It’s about time we boarded.” Carl muttered, “Dang!” and Cameron nodded his head. “Carl doesn’t want to go to school,” Cameron explained. Lorraine nodded her head slowly.

“C’mon!” she said and dragged Carl and Cameron over to the train. They lifted their luggage up and put it onto the train. Then they boarded the train. Cameron went his own way, while Carl and Lorraine found an empty compartment all to themselves.

Lorraine seated herself next to the window and Carl sat across from her. Lorraine pulled out a book from her slinging bag; she brought on the train with her, and began reading. Carl rolled his eyes and took the book away from her. “Hey!” she said. “What’d you do that for?!”

Carl replied, “Don’t get all dorky on me on the train. Not even in Hogwarts! You can only be all bookwormish in the library!” Lorraine raised her eyebrows with her arms crossed.

“You done?” she asked. Carl gave her a blank stare. The compartment door opened. It was Griffin Cartwright, one of Lorraine’s best friends. “Hey!” she said and held her hand up for a high-five.

Griffin gave her a high-five and sat down next to her. “Lorraine. Carl,” he said, nodding his head at each name.

“How’s mah man?!” Carl asked enthusiastically.

Griffin just smiled and replied, “Doing great.”

“Where were you? We came on the same ride,” Lorraine asked. Lorraine and Griffin both lived in the orphanage, the local orphanage in London. They both received a ride by the orphanage owner’s daughter, Melissa.

“Oh, I was talking to some people. Then I was caught in between a conversation that Corey and Cameron were having,” he replied.

“Corey? As in Corey Kessler?” Lorraine asked in almost pure disbelief. Griffin and Carl didn’t know why.

“Yeah…” Griffin said slowly. “How many Coreys do you know?!”

Lorraine rolled her eyes. “Only the one,” she said simply and took her book from Carl.

Griffin pointed his finger at the book Lorraine was holding, and asked, “What’s the book?”

“Tales of the Ancient Men, telling about vampires, werewolves, etc.” she replied.

Griffin nodded his head. “Oh… that book! Could I borrow that after you? I’ve always wanted to read it, but I never had the chance.”

“Sure,” Lorraine said. The compartment door opened once more.

“Hello.” It was Lorraine’s closest friend ever, May Serobie. May sat down next to Carl and crossed her legs. “How was summer?” she asked.

Lorraine groaned. “That terrible, huh?” May asked.

“Not just terrible! Horrifying! I had to baby-sit every day while Mr. Cartwright here got to go muggle skateboarding. All I was able to go to, were the fairs, swimming pools, the zoo, the library, and that’s all!” Lorraine groaned.

Griffin let out a small smile. “It wasn’t bad. I had to baby-sit too and you were allowed to go skateboarding… other places too!”

Lorraine sighed and replied, “But you got to go more than I did. Please don’t tell me that it has something to do with gender…”

Griffin was taken aback and shook his head vigorously. “Of course not!” he said. “It’s just-Well-It’s-Forget it! I’m not gonna even explain!”

Lorraine smiled and leaned back. “Very well then,” she said. Shortly after she said those words, she and Griffin were jerked forward while May and Carl was jerked backwards. The train was starting to move towards Hogwarts. This would be the last time they’d be getting ready for Hogwarts. It was an awfully unnatural feeling.

“So…” May said, interrupting the silence. “I hear that the muggle computers in the libraries are installing Internet and that they’re placing about 10 of their own computer labs in the library.”

Lorraine nodded her head and said, “Yeah. I heard.”

The compartment door slid open and Lorraine saw the last person that she wanted to see in the world.

“What do you want Kessler?” she asked coldly.

Corey just smiled evilly. “Oh, just looking for a compartment that has a room for four,” he said as Cameron, Tyler Brokman, and Alexander Romora appeared next to him.

Lorraine groaned and said firmly, “Fine!” Corey and his gang smiled as they sat down. Corey seated himself next to Griffin with Cameron next to him and with Tyler and Alex next to May.

That's all for now. Hope you likey!

emma_rlz · 08-27-2007, 08:53 PM

Hey! I'm just first reader! This story is brilliant so far! I love it!

Can't wait for more,

Love,
Lena xXx

hpfan4eva · 08-28-2007, 01:54 AM

its brilliant..heehee computers? lol i was laughing really hard..its hard to imagine computers their. lol...i love it cant wait for the next chapter!

dracoismysmexyone · 08-28-2007, 03:19 PM

THEY REMIND ME OF DRACO/HERMIONE!!!!! i luv draco/hermione, so you've got yourself a reader. great story.

demented_death_eater · 09-30-2007, 01:08 AM

Last update on 25 AUG 2007

demented_death_eater · 11-11-2007, 05:49 PM

Reactivated per request

shirelbb · 11-12-2007, 01:50 PM

How cuuuute!! <3
PAMS!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

Ally · 11-20-2007, 05:16 PM

like it

i really do :d can't wait to see what happens next

post soooooon

xoxo Alda

i heart voldy · 11-20-2007, 06:40 PM

Cant wait to read more!

The Busy Bee

padfoot4ever896 · 11-23-2007, 02:14 AM

i want the rest gimmie now
Lilah

prongs1295 · 12-01-2007, 07:56 PM

Dear Readers,
Sorry that I haven't been posting much. I know that my FFs are becoming more inactive and I'm sorry. Just please bear with me. And remember to post comments please! I will try to make it a goal to post another post before Tuesday due to huge project assignments and their due dates are creeping up on me. Thank you!

x*Daphne*x

prongs1295 · 12-05-2007, 08:31 PM

Sorry for the delay. Read on!

Corey seemed to enjoy tormenting Lorraine. “What’s the matter Lively?” he asked her casually and leaned back.

“Oh… nothing. Nothing you need to worry about sweetheart,” Lorraine said, putting on her best sweet girl voice. She turned away to look out the window and made a face.

“Glad you think I’m cute,” Corey said, smirking when Lorraine turned to look at him. She just rolled her eyes. “I think you need a nickname…” he said, rubbing his chin in “thoughtfulness”.

“Oh really?” Lorraine asked him, still annoyed. It was quite true and visible to everyone that Lorraine and Corey had spent years of hatred for each other. In fact, the day they met ended up making them enemies forever.

“Ooph!” Lorraine yelped as she fell down on her knees. She rubbed them repeatedly and looked up at who had bumped her.

“Oh! Sorry!” the boy said apologetically and held out his hand. Lorraine hesitated but gave him her hand and the boy pulled her up. “You okay?” the boy asked Lorraine.

She nodded her head. “Yeah… I’m fine,” she said. “I’m Lorraine Lively,” she said, extending her hand.

The boy just nodded his head and said, “Corey Kessler.” He just looked at Lorraine’s hand in disgust.

Corey looked around himself and whenever his head turned back to Lorraine, he flashed a smile that seemed to soften Lorraine’s cold, nervous mood.

A moment of silence followed his smiles and Lorraine looked anxiously about her. She didn’t know much about the wizarding world since her father, who was a wizard, died when Lorraine was five. She didn’t know anything.

When Lorraine had just started to open her mouth to ask Corey how to get on Platform 9 ¾, she saw two twin boys a bit older than her, run at full speed with their cart, into a barrier that was between Platform 9 and 10. Lorraine’s eyes widened.

She turned to ask the boy next to her what to do, but he seemed to already know what she wanted.

“You must be one of them mudbloods,” he said, sneering.

Lorraine shivered at the word. She didn’t know what a “mudblood” was, but she didn’t have to know what it meant to know that it was a terrible and cold thing to say.

“Okay… look here mudblood,” Corey said. “Just run towards the barrier and you’ll be fine! See!” He then ran towards the barrier and disappeared.

Lorraine looked around to see if anyone would be looking and would be believe what was happening. A boy with messy brown hair looked at the barrier in disgust. He walked up to Lorraine and said, “Sorry about Kessler. He’s such a jerk. My name’s Carl Asher. You?” He extended his hand and Lorraine shook it.

“Lorraine Lively. But I’d prefer it if you called my Lor or Rory,” she said, smiling. This boy was definitely more decent than that Corey.

Carl nodded his head and smiled. “You a muggle born?” he asked.

Rory cocked her head and asked, “What’s a muggle?”

“You must be one of them then! Muggle’s are non-magic folks! Then half-bloods are those that have half wizarding heritage. And pure-bloods are ones like that Kessler. Sniffing for trouble because they are pure and everything and we’re not!” he said annoyed. “But… I’m a pureblood too,” he added softly.

Rory nodded her head and smiled. “Well, if all purebloods are troublesome and egotistical, you’re far better than them,” she said, comfortingly.

“Thanks,” Carl said. “Hey, are you a muggle?”

“Nah… my dad was a wizard,” Rory said. “Just, never knew that he was a wizard until I got my letter.”

Carl nodded his head. “I see. That happens sometimes,” he said. “Say, are we early? The clock hasn’t struck eleven yet and I’m determined to be at least one minute late.”

Rory raised her eyebrows and glanced at the clock from above. “Yes, we’re early. About five minutes at the least,” she said, smiling that Carl would need to wait about six minutes to be late for the train. Then her thoughts drifted back to Corey Kessler. He was a rather peculiar boy and what on earth did mudblood mean?! Rory turned back to Carl and asked, “Um… what does mudblood mean?”

Carl had nodded his head encouragingly at Rory but once he heard what Rory wanted to say, all color drained out of his face. “Mudblood is a really foul way to call muggle borns. It’s the worst insult you could ever think of to say. Why do you ask?” Carl asked.

“I heard from that Corey Kessler,” she said softly. Carl winced and said, “I have to survive him all the time. We’re both purebloods and our parents just have to be friends and he just has to be friends with my twin brother Cameron.” He sighed and then glanced at the clock. “Oh! It’s eleven,” he said as a bell rang out. “You go on ahead, I gotta wait another minute,” he yelled out to Rory.

Rory nodded her head and ran towards the barrier. She closed her eyes, waiting for the impact of a crash, but she didn’t feel anything. When she opened her eyes, she saw children around her age, bustling and running towards the train. And a clock that was about to be one minute past eleven. She quickly ran towards the train and handed her luggage towards toward two boys that were twins that Rory had seen earlier. They smiled at her and said, “Good day to you lass.”

Rory smiled and said, “Lorraine Lively. Call me Rory.” They nodded their heads and one of them said, “I’m Andrew,” and the other said, “I’m Norman.” Then they both said in unison, “And we’re the Kessler twins.”

Rory bit her lip. “You’re a Kessler?” she asked nervously. They nodded their heads proudly. “Yep. We saw you earlier. See you’ve met our little brother, Corey. Don’t mind him; he can be a huge pain in the butt. Anyway, you best run along Rory. You don’t want to miss the train,” the one named Andrew said. While Norman greeted a rushed Carl. Carl then grabbed Rory’s hand and whipped her around and then they ran onto the train. They looked through the compartments, but none were empty. They were forced to sit next to four evil looking boys who one of them just happened to be Corey.

“Nice to know you like me mudblood,” Corey sneered.

Rory rolled her eyes and said, “For your information, I happen to be a half-blood.” The compartment was filled with taunting “oohs”.

“Big whoop,” Corey said, waving his hand incoherently.

Cameron, who happened to be Carl’s twin and Corey’s best friend, said sarcastically, “Gee, Lively, so sorry for mistaking your wizarding heritage. There is definitely a huge difference between a mudblood and half-blood. So sorry.” All the other boys laughed as they gave each other high fives and slaps on the backs.

Rory clenched her fists as she looked out the window. Her temper was growing as her patience was dissolving.

“Hey Lively!” Her head whipped around to face Corey. “Why don’t you just go home? Go run into the arms of ya daddy? Daddy’s girl. Or do you not got a daddy? A little birdie said you got no daddy or mama. Should I be surprised that that they deserted you? I guess it’s expected out of Livelys, after all, they’re nothing but two pieces of cows when us Kesslers are the ones that cut off their heads. They’re nothing but a piece of junk and two pounds of slime,” he taunted.

That’s when Rory’s patience disappeared entirely. Corey was too busy laughing to see it. But it came. Rory’s fist came in contact with Corey’s face making him fly backwards. From that day on, Corey and Rory were enemies for eternity.

hpfan4eva · 12-06-2007, 12:27 AM

GAH COREY...is cute. lmao....he seems...mean, yes, but in a cute way, if that makes...sense? lmao...PAMS

*KATE*

shirelbb · 12-06-2007, 08:16 AM

Great chapter!!! I love corey! *goes and finds him*
He reminds me soooooo much of Draco!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

Aquamarine818 · 12-07-2007, 01:33 PM

oh mah gosh!i heart it!im a big fan now.

eric_2007al_2006 · 12-22-2007, 04:33 PM

great story. Am i the only who thinks carl sounds cute

.Phoenix.Tearz. · 12-28-2007, 06:18 AM

Wow, this is a wonderful FF so far! I absolutely love it! You're an extremely talented writer!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
<3
Phaylinn

Alex Eres · 12-28-2007, 02:09 PM

Awesome! Can't wait to see what happens!!!

x-HermioneGranger-x · 01-07-2008, 08:19 PM

Brillant
I love reading them
Plz post soon!!

prongs1295 · 01-16-2008, 12:26 AM

Hi guys. I'm so sorry for all the delays. Here's a new post.

“Hogwarts! Wake up kids! We’re at Hogwarts!” yelled a voice over the PA. Rory jumped and was glad to see that Corey had jumped too. She rubbed her eyes and checked her watch. She guessed that she must’ve fallen asleep a few hours ago.

Rory got up and stretched. “Hey Rory. You knocked out hours ago, you missed it all,” Carl said, jumping up and down. By that, Rory immediately guessed that Carl didn’t “knock out” at all.

Rory shrugged. “You can catch me up later,” she said, yawning. When she glanced at the tainted side, where Corey’s gang obviously was, the side was empty. They must’ve left when she wasn’t looking.

“Come on Rory!” Carl said, tugging on her arm. Rory then walked out of the compartment with her friends.

Chapter 2

Rory’s eyes were blinded by the light pouring through the windows. She groaned and muttered, “Who keeps on pulling apart the curtains?!” A snore was heard on the left of her, but it was just May. Rory smiled as she scrambled out of bed. Moments later, she walked down the stairs and into the Common Room.

“You’re up!” Rory glanced around for the source.

“Oh. Hey G,” Rory said, sitting down next to him. Griffin seemed like he hadn’t slept in days. He had purple bags under his eyes, his hair was out of order, and he was still in his pajamas.

It took Rory a while to process what she was seeing, but when she realized how disastrous Griffin looked, Carl came sliding down the railing. “Hey guys!” he shouted loudly.

“Shut up!” said a voice. Probably one of those non-morning people.

Rory waves at Carl and then turns back to Griffin. “What in the world happened to you G?!” she asked incredulously. Griffin was always nicely dressed, was sane, and always had his game face on.

“Just tired,” Griffin replied, smiling. It was as if that it was such an obvious thing that he couldn’t believe that he was the first one to know the answer.

“G-Man… go to sleep. You need it,” Rory said, pulling Griffin up and pushing him to the stairs.

Griffin turned around, walking right into Rory. “I’m fine!” he insisted.

Rory scoffed, turned Griffin around, and pushed him towards the stairs again. “No you’re not!”

“Yes I am!” Griffin said, turning around again, but he overestimated how much he needed to turn, because he ran into the railing.
“G, just shut up and get some sleep,” Rory said, setting her hands on his shoulders. She turned Griffin the right way and pushed him forward and didn’t let go until they reached the Boy’s Dormitory. “Kay? Get some sleep,” she said, pushing him into the room.

“I don’t need to!” Griffin yelled.

“Shut up!” yelled the same voice earlier.

“Just go get some sleep!” I yelled back and shut the door.

“Shut up!” yelled the exact same voice. A boy opened the door that Rory had just shut. More like flung it open. “Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! Shut up!” he yelled in Rory’s face and stomped back in.

Rory bit her lip to prevent herself from laughing, but see Carl. He’s carefree so he started laughing way before the boy even left.

“Geesh. Look’s like Damin’s off his game…” Rory said, as Carl just continued laughing. His laughing didn’t seem to be laughing any more. It was more like a seal snort or choking. “Okay big boy, let’s get us some breakfast,” she said, pulling Carl by the collar and pushing him out of the door of the Common Room.

They walked through the hallways, to the Great Hall. Well, Rory was the one walking, and Carl had to be dragged along. He just seemed to think that what she had said earlier was so funny that it had to last for more than 5 minutes.

Rory, annoyed with all Carl’s laughing, stuffed a roll into his mouth when they sat down. “Shut up!” she hissed. Carl just gave her one of his puppy smiles and ate the roll.

Rory was satisfied with the silence and was glad that Carl’s laughing had stopped. But then her silence was once again disrupted by Carl’s lip smacking.

She turned to look at him and glared. “What?” he asked. “It tastes good! I like!” Rory just rolled her eyes and cherished what was left of her previous silence.

But once again, her silence was disrupted. She heard hoots outside of the Great Hall. Rory turned to look at the door and saw the last four boys that she wanted to see. Corey, Cameron, Alex, and Tyler came running down the aisles and kept on running around the tables. They seemed to have brought a new girl along, for she was practically being dragged behind them, but she seemed to enjoy it.

Then the worst thing happened. They stopped right at the Gryffindor table and right next to her. Rory looked up at them dangerously. Corey and Cameron just gave her their goofy grins while Alex and Tyler seemed to have their attention focused on the girl they brought.

“Looks like they’ve found a new concubine,” Rory whispered to Carl under her breath. Carl just grunted.

“Hey Lively,” Corey said, smiling at her. He then grabbed the new girl’s hand and pulled her next to him. “This is Tania. Tania, this is Lively,” he said, smiling.

“Hi,” Tania said, smiling at Rory.

padfoot4ever896 · 01-16-2008, 12:52 AM

omg he s trying to get her jealous corey dont!!!!!!!!! pams pams
Lilah

Ally · 01-23-2008, 05:16 PM

great chapters

ooomg... pams-pams-paaaaaaaaamsoid

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