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11-09-2007, 01:55 PM
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|  F&G's Chicken Wing Bowtruckle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Natasha Yu Mori [Tasha] [Tash] First | Concrete Angel - Sa13+ hola. I'm Brooke and this is my first FF. *yay* Ok. well I use a lot of Paramore songs in it, and I give complete credit to them. Ok, let's begin! I must warn you, though, it's terribly sad. <3 Concrete Angel
Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel Chapter 1. I've Seen Love Die... "I've seen love die way too many times when it deserved to be alive. And I've seen you cry way too many times when you deserved to be alive." sang Hermione with the purest voice you could ever hear. Her eyes wept as the statue stood hard and cold, and what she thought to be only a drizzle poured down upon Ginny's life-like grave. The Next Day. "Here lay Ginevra Molly Weasley. Her life was taken last night around 11:11 PM." belted the priest. He didn't even know Ginny but cried along with everyone else. "She didn't give up without a fight." he quickly added, "Her murderer, however, put up a better one." he bowed his head in remembrance of the body. Mrs. Weasley put his head on her husbands shoulder and Ron had his arms around Hermione without showing any signs of letting go. Everyone seemed to be be there...except Harry. Harry couldn't show his face at the funeral. Instead he stayed in his room. Harry's always brilliant eyes, weren't so brilliant. They cried, "I've seen my love die". He thought the funeral would be over by now, but decided not to go check. His heartbeat matched the ticking of the clock. Somebody opened the door, and suddenly both stopped. "There is a boy in the mirror. I wonder who he is." Hermione walked into Harry's room and sat beside where he laid. "Sometimes I think I know him. And sometimes I wish I did." she gulped unable to smile. "There is a story in his eyes. Full of lullabies and goodbyes, and when he's looking at me. I can tell he's hurting inside." Hermione's voice was reduced into a whisper. "I wonder who did this to him. He seems so young and scared. Somehow I can relate to him, I guess that's why I cared." she ran her fingers through his hair. Harry didn't move and inch or say a word. They sat together in silence, but a good silence. After a while Harry looked at her.
"I've seen love die way too many times..." he said a silent tear rolled down his face. Hermione got closer, "I've seen you cry way too many times.". It might just have been a moment or maybe they really did care about each other but Hermione Granger and Harry Potter kissed passionately. The rain poured harder at that moment- perhaps Ginny's crying. |
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11-09-2007, 06:59 PM
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| | Bicorn
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| Oh no. Who killed Ginny? And why? I NEED ANSWERS, PLEEEEEEASE
At any rate, you're a really good writer and I LOVED it
Keep up the fabulous work!
.:Adrienne:.
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11-09-2007, 07:48 PM
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| R/Hr Bridesmaid Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellen Calaway First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ellen Jean Callaway Magical Transportation | Wow, that was really good!! Keep up the awsome work!! Pams!!
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11-09-2007, 08:58 PM
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| | Erkling
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katelyn Quillio Ministry RPG Name:
Klara Manssum Magical Creatures | lalaaaaa...lol i liked it! but i think you should NOT ONLY give credit to PARAMORE..but also Martina McBride...jeeze Concrete Angel is SUCH a GOOOOD SONG! i cry evertime i hear the song...keep it, bay PAMS!
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11-10-2007, 12:20 AM
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| | Gnome
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ange-Aimée Belle Morin | hey!
i like this story alot! i really like the song concrete angel too... my cousin sang it and i was crying sooo badly... i adored the post! PAMS!!!!! |
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11-10-2007, 12:57 AM
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|  F&G's Chicken Wing Bowtruckle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Natasha Yu Mori [Tasha] [Tash] First | *yay* I will now be keeping track of my readers! Moxie EmmaRules hpfan4eva marshmello_snitch Okay heres chapter 2! Let's bring on the flash-backs!! Chapter 2. Tending to Fate
Thunder echoed throughout Hogwarts grounds. Hermione-startled by the thunder- let go of Harry. They both sat there, staring at each other.
"Well I best be going now...I'm sorry for your loss." Hermione said to break the awkward silence. She pecked Harry's cheek and walked away.
Harry pressed his hands on his face. Guilt stuck every inch of his body. He couldn't help but think that Ginny's death was all his fault. Plus kissing Hermione felt like betrayal to Ginny and Ron. "Ron..." Harry thought. His best friend believed Harry killed his baby sister, and now kissing Hermione? What was he to think of Harry now?
"How dare you kill my sister and then try a steal my wife?" Ron burst through Harry's door screaming.
Harry said nothing.
"I hope you rot in Azaban! And stay away from Hermione...you...you murderer!" Ron eyes blinked in fury and hatred. Yet deep in Ron's heart he knew Harry would have never hurt Ginny or try and hurt Hermione.
"I LOVED GINNY! AND I STILL LOVE GINNY!" Harry screamed at Ron. "I was going to purpose to her..." he began to cry.
"C'mon mate." Ron patted Harry on his back.
Harry didn't know where Ron was going to take him but decided to go. Ron understood Harry, after all Ginny was Ron's baby sister. They made there way outside to the grounds of Hogwarts. In the distance, Harry could see the statue. He froze, unable to move.
Ron looked back at Harry. He spoke with his eyes.
Harry took a deep, long breath and continued on. What he thought to be silent step, echoed louder than the roaring thunder. Ron held out his wand and engraved 'I miss you' into the statue.
"Ron, can I have a minute...alone with her?" Harry asked once Ron was finished.
Ron nodded and walked to Hagrid's hut.
"Hello Ginny." Harry began, "I miss you a lot." he cried. Harry's acid green eyes scanned her grave. Memories of the night she died played like a video in Harry's head. "Hello Ginny darling!"
"Hello my love"
Harry shook his head back to reality. He kissed the statue and with a blink, everything came back. "I saw you with her!"
"Gin, I WASN'T WITH HER!"
Harry cried, "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to yell at you...". More than memories returned. "Ginny I'm sorry come back!"
*door slams*
"HARRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Harry could hear her shrieks in the back of his head. He remembered opening her door and finding her body. With his wand he wrote in her grave: "I'm Tending To Fate."
Last edited by making-a-memory : 11-10-2007 at 01:03 AM.
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11-10-2007, 01:21 AM
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| | Erkling
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katelyn Quillio Ministry RPG Name:
Klara Manssum Magical Creatures | ARGH! this is AMAZING! I LUFFIT!
PAMMSSSS
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11-10-2007, 02:36 AM
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| DRFC Co-Pressie K.O. Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity b> Griffin
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Keylee May Magical Games & Sports | New Reader here. that is so good. It is making me cry. Can't wait for more. |
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11-10-2007, 12:51 PM
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| | Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hufflepuff and proud of it! Fifth Ministry RPG Name:
Lauren Ministry Security | OMG!! This is amazing! I really love the story so far but it made me cry. I hope that Harry, and Ron will end up ok and I want to know who really killed ginny. It's just sooooo sad!!!! |
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11-10-2007, 12:56 PM
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| R/Hr Bridesmaid Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellen Calaway First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ellen Jean Callaway Magical Transportation | That is sooooooooooooo sad! *cry*  |
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11-10-2007, 02:16 PM
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| | Gnome
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | NEW READER HERE!!!!!!!!
love ur fic!!!!!!!!
but it made cry alot*sniffles*
PAMS!!!!!!! |
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11-10-2007, 02:18 PM
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| | Imp
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bloom Fifth | Quote:
Originally Posted by sakura NEW READER HERE!!!!!!!!
love ur fic!!!!!!!!
but it made cry alot*sniffles*
PAMS!!!!!!! | totaaly agree with her!!!!!!!!!!! |
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11-10-2007, 02:19 PM
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| | Imp
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Stella First | NEW READER HERE!!!!!!!!!!
loved it totally!!!!!!!!!!!
made me cry*sniffles*
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11-10-2007, 02:41 PM
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|  F&G's Chicken Wing Bowtruckle
Location: this heart will start a riot in me. <3 Join Date: Oct 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Natasha Yu Mori [Tasha] [Tash] First | OMG I'm glad so many people like it! And I know, it is soooo sad. I even cried writing it! I use an Avril Lavigne song in the chapter. *huggles her with credit*Okay well heres chapter 3...enjoy... Moxie EmmaRules hpfan4eva marshmello_snitch Little Trooper Trio1237 sakura BLOOM STELLA Chapter 3. When Your Gone...
Ron peeked his head out the door of Hagrid's hut. "Uh...Harry are you finished?" he asked trying not to be rude.
"Yeah, c'mon." Harry replied unable to get Ginny's horrified terror shrieks out of his head.
"Listen mate. I want you to be my best man, but if you still need to recover then I understand." Ron explained on his wedding day.
Harry froze once more. "Wedding day? Best man?" he repeated in shock...plus earlier on he had kissed Ron's bride?
"Yes. I'm getting married to Hermione." Ron smiled in deep thoughts about his beautiful bride.
"Um of course I'll be your.....best.....man." Harry stuttered. However, he was also planning to run away this evening in search of Ginny's murderer and needed Ron's help, but if Ron was getting married then Harry would have to go on his adventure alone. It wouldn't be fair to Hermione and Ron to have to leave on a trip they may never come back on right after they got married.
"Alright I'm going to find my bride, will you be okay?" Ron asked. He looked Harry straight in the eye and lightly patted his back.
"Yes...I'll be fine." Harry said turning around and walking the opposite way.
"Where are you going?" Ron asked in complete shock. He figured Harry would want to be as far away from Ginny's grave as possible.
"Hagrids." Harry simply replied stopping at Ginny's grave. He whispered in Ginny's concrete ear, "I will always love you." And silently walked walked to Hagrid's without looking back...not even for a moment. Hagrid's Hut " 'Ey Harry!" Hagrid greeted Harry. "How are ya? I'm so sorry for your loss." Hargid looked down. He too missed Ginny but it couldn't even compare to what feelings Harry had for Ginny.
Harry couldn't help but smile. "I'm...hanging in there." he said. His happy expression changed in a blink of an eye.
"Sit down, sit down. Make yourself at- make yourself comfortable." Hargid quickly rephrased. He knew from years of experience that Harry wanted to be anywhere but home... if he even had one!
Harry sat down and sighed. "Hagrid... Ron's getting married." he said still in shock.
"Is that right?" Hagrid took a seat right next to Harry, which made the couch they were both sitting on sink to the left.
"Yeah." Harry said staring at the window.
"Then you better be going mate! The wedding starts in a hour...maybe less!" Hagrid stood up which balanced the couch out.
"Bye Hagrid." Harry waved running back to the castle. This time he didn't even stop at Ginny's grave. He just ran past it. The Wedding Everyone at Hogwarts was at the wedding. It was such a sight to see. All of the Weasleys were on one side of the Great Hall. And everyone else on the other. Harry could picture Ginny. He saw her in a beautiful gown crying...wedding always made her cry. He thought about how much she wanted to have a wedding of her own and how close she was to having one.
At the very front of the Great Hall was the priest for whom was at Ginny's funeral. Behind him were all of the Hogwarts professors. Harry could also picture Dumbledore sitting in his hair. A grin on his face. Dumbledore always knew Rom and Hermione would end up together. Right now he needed Dumbledore more than ever, but as he wrote on Ginny's grave: I'm Tending To Fate.
Ron was in front of the priest, waiting for Hermione to walk down aisle, And Harry right beside him.
"This is it, mate." Harry whispered into Ron's ear. "No going back down."
"I love her." Ron whispered back.
The organ starting playing and everyone turned their attention down the aisle.
Where was Hermione?
Everyone waited a while before Ron ran down the aisle. "I'm going to check on her." he said.
They all waited for the longest time. Harry had a gut feeling something was wrong. He took one step before Ron burst through the doors...his hands dripping a sticky maroon substance...blood.
"She's dead!" Ron got on his knees and cried hysterically. Everyone ran out of Great Hall, Professors obviously first. The Next Day "Here lay Hermione Jean Granger." The priest said, a tear rolling down his face.
Ron interrupted him. "Excuse me Sir, may I put this letter in her coffin?" he asked.
The priest led him to the coffin. "Go right ahead" he nodded his head.
Ron placed a letter in the coffin that said: Quote:
When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
When you're gone
The face I came to know is missing too
When you're gone
The words I need to hear to always get me through the day and make it ok
I miss you
| Before walking away, he kissed her forehead. "I miss you"
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11-10-2007, 02:52 PM
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| | Erkling
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katelyn Quillio Ministry RPG Name:
Klara Manssum Magical Creatures | OMG. this is sad...SO SAD. makes me want to cry. no..i didnt cry. i dont cry..lol...but t makes me want to! AWW. Ginny,...okay, i could live with her death, BUT HERMY. NOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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11-10-2007, 02:58 PM
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| MEMFC President Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Elizabeth Lively Fifth Ministry RPG Name:
Annabel Fletcher Accidents & Catastrophes | Oh my gosh! That is so good! It's sad and all... but I like it a lot!
I'm gonna break down crying soon! *sobs, sobs*
PAMS! I must know who killed Ginny and Hermione! |
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11-10-2007, 03:08 PM
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|  F&G's Chicken Wing Bowtruckle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Natasha Yu Mori [Tasha] [Tash] First | Hello all of my lovely readers! I usually don't post unless I have a chapter ready but I'm just letting you know that there is a poll open now, so vote! |
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11-10-2007, 06:37 PM
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| Spanish Language Mod Bone Crusher Wedding Crasher Lethifold
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Willow Kovac Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Nicholas Dwight International Cooperation | well this is a happy story! *sarcasm*..I LOVE IT!..is awesome..incredibly sad..but incredibly awesome as well! |
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11-10-2007, 06:40 PM
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| Keeper of Ginny's AttitudeLLFC Promotion OfficerBatty Bella Fwooper
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Tessa Maria Kensington | oh my god this is amazing, sad amazing, oh my god...this is all so crazy!! |
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11-10-2007, 07:50 PM
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| | Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hufflepuff and proud of it! Fifth Ministry RPG Name:
Lauren Ministry Security | This was amazing. You are an amazing writer. I cried when I found out Hermione died and when Ginny dies. Poor poor Harry and Ron. They don't get to get married but Ron on his wedding day?!?!? That's horrible. |
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11-10-2007, 10:48 PM
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|  F&G's Chicken Wing Bowtruckle
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Natasha Yu Mori [Tasha] [Tash] First | Hola, once more! I have chapter 4 ready and in action! But I must give credit to Mariah Carey because I use one her songs in it. And right now I'd like to take this time and thank my readers. You guys have no idea how much I appreciate each and every one of you. *glomps * This next chapter is very short. Enjoy.Moxie
EmmaRules hpfan4eva marshmello_snitch
Little Trooper Trio1237 sakura BLOOM
STELLA prongs1295 Willow_Kovac futuremrsmalfoy Chapter 4. A Hero Lies in You "C'mon Ron we have to leave before anyone has any time to catch us." Harry whispered to Ron the night they were going to leave, in search of the murderer(s) that killed Hermione and Ginny.
"I'm coming, I'm coming." Ron whined back.
"Okay meet me outside then." Harry said and walked away impatiently.
Ron gulped. He was looking through Hermione's things. Harry had told him earlier that Hermione might have something useful. He couldn't believe she was actually dead. And on his wedding day.
"What horrible monster would do this?" He thought beginning to tear up. Ron found Hermione's diary sitting in a box underneath her bed. Dear Diary,
I'm absolutely, 100% in complete love with Ron. And yes I know what your probably thinking I'm crazy but it's true. I've fallen...fallen fast. I knew ever since the day I met him, he'd be the one. Well no actually not but if you would told three years from now I'd be love with him I'd probably punch you! Okay well Ron said he's got a special surprise waiting for me. Don't wanna keep my love waiting.
Yours Truly,
Hermione. <3 Ron's tears splashed on the parchment. He quickly shut the diary and put it back in the box.
After Ron finished looking through the bed area he moved to her dresser. On it was a letter, say To Ron. Suddenly a rock hit the window. Half terrified, Ron looked down. Harry stood at the bottom and mouthed "C'mon Ron!". Ron threw the letter in his pocket and ran outside.
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"What do you got there?" Harry asked referring to the letter.
"Let's find out." Ron shrugged his shoulders and opened it. My Dearest Ron,
Your my best friend, my lover, and you will be the father of my children. I wrote the poem to give to you on our wedding day:
It's a long road
When you face the world alone
No one reaches out a hand
For you to hold
You can find love
If you search within yourself
And the emptiness you felt
Will disappear
And then a hero comes along
With the strength to carry on
And you cast your fears aside
And you know you can survive
So when you feel like hope is gone
Look inside you and be strong
And you'll finally see the truth
That a hero lies in you
You are and will forever be, My Hero.
-Hermione.
"What does it say Ron?" Harry asked with his head slightly turned to the side.
"Everything I need." Ron smiled and put the letter in his pocket.
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11-10-2007, 10:58 PM
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| R/Hr Bridesmaid Jobberknoll
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellen Calaway First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ellen Jean Callaway Magical Transportation | Wow, that was a great post, I can't wait for more, but it is sooooo sad that both Ginny and Hermione died. *cry*
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11-11-2007, 12:26 AM
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| Spanish Language Mod Bone Crusher Wedding Crasher Lethifold
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Willow Kovac Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Nicholas Dwight International Cooperation | BEAUTIFUL! ..I ABSOLUTELY ADORE IT! |
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11-11-2007, 12:33 AM
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| DRFC Co-Pressie K.O. Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity b> | |