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02-22-2007, 03:26 PM
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| | Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels First Year Special Ops | Clarysaa's Secret - Hannah Montana - Sa13+ I'm sure most of you have heard of Hannah Montana, right? The girl leading a double life as a pop star and a normal kid? Who has to keep it from everyone but her family and close friends? Well, while watching it, I thought; why not blend the Hannah Montana idea with the Hogwarts one?
I know I've got lots of others, but the ones currently inactive I want to get rid of, because I missed vital information. But this one...this one will be one of my biggest ones I hope.
The characters you haven't met are;
Serenity Karma/Clarysaa Louisa (Clah ri say Lou i say) - normal girl who gets her letter for Hogwarts and is also a famous singer. 16.
David Karma - Serenity's dad
Maria Davidson - Serenity's best friend, fellow Hogwarts student. Doesn't know about Serenity's alter ego. 16.
Billie Katz - Serenity's elder brother, Harry's year. 17.
Here goes.
Chapter One Serenity Karma smiled to herself as her father drove her into town one sunny morning. Her long, black hair flew out beside her as she turned the window down. She laughed, her blue eyes sparkling with delight.
'Hey! Roll that window back up little lady!' her father, David, ordered. Serenity turned to him, her eyebrows raised.
She rolled her eyes at his stern look and sighed, rolling the window back up. 'Dad,' she said. 'Where are you taking me anyway?'
David looked at her, his chocolate eyes twinkling mischeviously. 'You'll see,' he said, turning on the stereo. Serenity cocked her head to listen to it, then her favourite song came on.
'Hey, Dad!' she said. Her dad had always written songs. 'You wrote this song, remember?' she shouted, laughing again, and singing along to the words.
'You're always there for me when I need you most, you're always there for me cos we're so close, you're always there for me though you're a ghost, cos you've always been there for me,'
'Honey, when you left me, I was so alone, honey, when you left me, I was so depressed,' she began to sing, until David frowned and turned the stereo off.
'Dad!'
'What?' he asked, raising his shoulders. They stopped at a traffic light. 'I know you're a good singer and all, but I don't think I want you singing to my songs just yet,'
Serenity raised one eyebrow and crossed her arms, pouting. She leant back in her seat in a huff.
'Fine,'
David nodded. 'Okay then. Come on, we're here,' he said, turning a corner down a deserted street. Serenity undid her seatbelt, swinging her long hair over the other side of her face as she stepped out.
'Dad, this place it empty,' she said quietly. 'What are we doing here?'
David smiled. 'Just do a favour and put this on,' he said, throwing her a ginger wig. Serenity's eyes immediatly got bigger, but she slipped it on anyway. 'And if anyone asks, you're Clarysaa Louisa, right?'
Serenity nodded and took a deep breath, walking into the building.
*****
Harry Potter lay on his bed, thinking. He was seventeen, and his best friend Ron Weasley was snoring away nextdoor. Harry could hear him through the walls. He was so loud!
He jammed a pillow over his head. When that didn't work, he turned on the stereo beside his bed which was flashing three in the morning. Harry sighed and turned over, listening to the announcer and his pathetic voice.
'And now, we have a song from a new comer to the charts, Clarysaa Louisa!' Harry heard him say. He looked up. He'd heard of Clarysaa once or twice. He knew she was only about his own age.
'Without you, I am just so lost,
Within you, I am just so found,
Cos baby, you are my everything,
Baby, you are the only sound,'
Harry sat up. He frowned at her voice. It was the best voice he'd ever heard sing, and that was saying something, because he could remember his mother singing to him when he was a child. It was only a faint memory, but he could vividly recall her voice. She had been amazing, never missing a note. But now this...Clarysaa sounded even better.
'Without you, I'm so dead
Without you, I'm trapped in my own head,
Within you, I'm so alive
Within you, in the water I dive
Don't leave ma gain, honey, dear one
Just please, stay, and listen to this song
You're my everything, and if I lose you,
I have nothing, so please tell me that you... That you won't become my everything
Cos without you I have nothing, nothing at all
Don't become my everything,
I'm too shaken, too lost, you stand too tall,'
After a few more minutes, the song came to an end. Harry found himself wishing it could go on forever.
'That was Clarysaa Louisa, with My Everything. We have an exclusive interview with Clarysaa at half seven this morning, so stay tuned folks!'
Harry smiled. He knew he would stay tuned. It's very hard not to make this sound like Hannah Montana right now, but it will get better, I promise.
Nicky. |
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02-27-2007, 07:02 AM
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| | Basilisk
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaitlynnh G.C.K Mae First Year x2
Ministry RPG Name:
Artemis J. Galanis Diagon Alley | Fortress of Brilliance I'm So sorry I didn't come check out your story sooner Nicky!! 
I Love, love, love, love it so far!!!
I Can't wait to read more!!!
PAMS please . |
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02-27-2007, 07:13 PM
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| | Faerie
Join Date: Aug 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels First Year Special Ops | Hi Grace! It's okay you didn't check it out sooner!
I'm glad you love it and you can't wait to read more. I am gonna post more, right now, and I'm actually gonna put Miley/Hannah into the story. I'm not just gonna make a girl like her up, I'm gonna put her into the story. Miley Stewart sighed and switched her radio off. It was really early in the morning and she'd just listened to a girl who sounded even better than her. She sighed. It wasn't fair.
Turning away from the clock, the fell onto her pillows and stared at her closet. Behind there was her secret identity's home. Closing her eyes, she deozed off.
**
'But Daddy, it's not fair!' Miley cried the next day. Her dad looked at her and raised one eyebrow.
'Look, Clarysaa's manager and I spoke on the phone last night. You're gonna meet her and become her friend, and you're gonna sing with her and you're gonna go to the same school, Hogwarts,' he said. 'Which means you'd better get your wig on. Change into Hannah,'
Miley sulked and walked over to the stairs. Her brown curls bobbed up and down as she stomped up. *****
Harry turned over in thet morning. He'd been awake all night waiting for the interview.
'...slippery between Junctions 3 and 6. That's all from travel now, onto the news,' said the announcer. Harry smiled. The interview would be coming right up.
'And now, we have new popstar, Clarysaa Louisa in the studio! Clarysaa, you're here to be interviewed. Care to tell us some things about you and answer our questions?' |
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02-28-2007, 06:27 AM
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| | Basilisk
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kaitlynnh G.C.K Mae First Year x2
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Artemis J. Galanis Diagon Alley | Fortress of Brilliance Cliffie!! >.< Evil Cliffieeee!!
Hmm.. Wonder if Miley knows she's going to a wizarding school? 
PAMS Pretty please  |
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03-02-2007, 12:21 AM
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| Run, Emma, Run! Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Emma Cullen Graduated | New Reader!! Hey! I'm a new reader and I am loving your story!
And I may be 16 but I love the show Hannah Montana!
I wonder what is going to happen?
PAMS! |
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03-02-2007, 12:29 AM
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| | Crup
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ashley Ollivander | New reader its interesting..cant wait to read more! Pams! |
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03-02-2007, 06:25 AM
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| | Faerie
Join Date: Aug 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels First Year Special Ops | Hmm, maybe she does, maybe she doesn't. Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? Hey! I'm a new reader and I am loving your story!
And I may be 16 but I love the show Hannah Montana!
I wonder what is going to happen?
PAMS! | YAY! New reader! It doesn't matter wwhat age you are to love Hannah Montana. I'm glad you like. And the interview's gonna be up after school...if my friend's in. Quote:
Originally Posted by ylprincess New reader its interesting..cant wait to read more! Pams! |
Another new reader! Yipee! You will hopefully read more after school.
My friend's gonna pretend to be the announcer and I'm gonna pretend to be Clarysaa so I can get the interview right, so it'll hopefully be up tonight. If not tonight, it'll definatly be up by the end of Monday
Nicky. |
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03-03-2007, 04:18 PM
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| | Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels First Year Special Ops | I wasn't in school yesterday (Uni trip) so my friend couldn't help me, but I saw her today and she did so I have the interview done! It's just the interview. Clarysaa will be blue and the questioner(Jon) will be red. Clarysaa, we understand you're only sixteen, about the same age as Hannah Montana, but you seem to be beating her already. How does that make you feel?
To be honest, it makes me feel a little guilty. I mean, people loved her for a while, then I came along and now they love me. I think I've taken the limelight off Hannah. But surely you're also a little pleased you were such a success?
A little, well, okay, a lot. *laughter* So, your new single's called My Everything. Did something make you pick that as a debut single...
Well, I think it was the fact that my manager's son's girlfriend and her friends - one of them being my best mate - liked My Everything more than the others, so I just thought it would be a great place to start off. Well, it's a brilliant song, Clarysaa.
Thanks.
Onto another topic now; school. Do you get home tutored, do you not get tutored at all...what?
I get home tutored by my dad and soon my mom because I'm going to hers. Cool. Could you tell us where you mom lives?
*pause* I can't say. Okay then. Well, tell us about yourself, I mean, I can see what you look like but the people listening can't, and no one knows your personality.
*sigh* Well, I'm five foot three, I have long, red curly hair. I have blue eyes. As to my personality, I'm loud, I hate books, and I pretty much flirt with cute guys. Not you, Jon. *laughter*
Well, okay then. I think we can pretty much wrap that interview up. For those of you who weren't tuned in earlier, here's Clarysaa's single My Everything. |
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03-03-2007, 05:27 PM
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| Russia's Glam Girl Grindylow
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ginny Clearwater-Malfoy Fourth | *new reader*
very nice...love ppl who find fab out of this worl idias and puut them down for us to read....cant wait for more PAMS |
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03-05-2007, 05:01 PM
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| | Faerie
Join Date: Aug 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels First Year Special Ops | Quote:
Originally Posted by Dasha *new reader*
very nice...love ppl who find fab out of this worl idias and puut them down for us to read....cant wait for more PAMS |
Thanks.
Post here! Serenity smiled to herself as Clarysaa finished her interview. She didn't think she'd be able to keep her secret much longer, if those were the kind of questions she'd be asked on an interview.
As her song came on, she stood up and slipped away from Jon, smiling at him. The mikes were off now. 'Thanks Jon, see ya!' she said, walking over to her father and hugging him.
His fake moustache tickled her slightly as he gave her a light kiss on the forehead. Serenity giggled. As her song faded, she heard Jon again.
'After this next song, we've got Hannah Montana being interviewed too, on what she thinks of Clarysaa!'
Serenity and her father froze. They didn't move a muscle, until the bun which Serenity had put her wig in came loose and the hair fell over her face.
She brushed it back as the second song came on and the door banged open. She turned, to see a girl with long blonde hair with her own manager in tow. She took this to be Hannah.
The blonde haired girl froze at the sight of Serenity. After a moment, her manager elbowed her. 'Mi - Hannah Montana,' she said, quickly, hlding her hand out.
'Clarysaa Louisa,' Serenity said, shaking it.
***** 'Hurry, Daddy, or we're gonna be late!' Miley cried from the back seat of her Dad's car.
'Don't worry Miles. We'll be fine,' he said reassuringly. 'We're just round the corner. Besides, Clarysaa's only just finished hers. Look, we're here,' he said, pulling into the space next to the door to the radio station.
Miey quickly undid her seatbelt and threw the door open at the same time as her dad as he yanked the keys out of the engine. They both headed straight to the door and threw it open.
Upon entering, Miley saw a girl she assumed to be Clarysaa. She froze. She recognized this girl from somewhere. How did she recognize this girl? She'd never seen her before in her life!
Robbie nudged her and Miley started, sticking her hand out. 'Mi -' she began, nearly saying her real name. 'Hannah Montana,' she said quickly.
The girl smiled and shook her hand, brushing back a few strands of hair. 'Clarysaa Louisa,' she said quietly. Miley smiled at the girl and moved her bangs out of her eyes to get a better look at the girl.
'Nice to meet you Clarysaa. My manager here,' she pulled Robbie closer to her, 'says we're performing in concert one night together,'
Clarysaa nodded. 'My manager says that too,' she said. Miley smiled, though the smile was forced. For some reason, she had taken an instant disliking to this girl.
'You remind me of someone,' Miley said, thinking. She barely heard Clarysaa's 'Really? Who?'
~FLASHBACK~
'Oh, get a grip Lily,' Miley said, running a hand through her brown hair. Lily scoffed.
'I'm not the one annoying that new girl, Serena or whatever her name is! She deserves to be treated kindly like you, not have rumours that she's a maneater spread!'
Miley slammed her hand down on the table as Oliver walked up. 'Ladies! Calm down!' he said. Miley glared at him.
'i did not start that rumour Lily, and you know very well Serenity's a big fat-'
'Not talking about me girls, are you?' came the voice of Serenity.
'Clear off,' Miley said, sitting down. Lily simply smiled.
'Hello! I'm Lily, please, sit down,' she said, ignoring Miley's glare. Serenity smiled and took a seat.
'I'm Serenity,' she said. Miley grunted hello. 'Miley? Are you okay?'
'Keep your nose out of my buisness!' Miley said, standing up and grabbing her pasta. It was still warm and the sauce was still runny. 'Now, clear off,'
Serenity frowned and looked at Lily, who had stood up, her blonde hair bobbing around in it's ponytail. 'Miley,'
Serenity shook her head and stayed seated. Miley's eyes narrowed. She really didn't like this girl, with her pretty, black hair and blue, innocent eyes.
She grabbed the pasta in both hands. Serenity had annoyed her in lesson, trying to earn a good reputation and working. She sighed and mustered up her strength.
'Don't say I didn't warn ya,' she said as she threw the pasta down and pegged it out of there, as fast as her legs would carry her.
Serenity screamed. The pasta had got stuck in her hair, her blouse - everywhere. 'I'll get you for this Stewart!' she yelled.
~END OF FLASHBACK~
'A girl at school, Serenity Karma,' Miley said. She couldn't help but notice the way Clarysaa and her manager glanced at each other and sighed.
It was going to be a long day. |
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03-06-2007, 12:46 AM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lena Lovegood Fifth | Hey! New Reader here! I really like your story so far! PAMS! |
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03-06-2007, 02:06 PM
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| Russia's Glam Girl Grindylow
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ginny Clearwater-Malfoy Fourth | lol that was good !!! btw was that flash back set in hogwarts or a normal school. I loved that post very funny cant wait for mare PAMS PAMS PAMS |
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03-06-2007, 03:08 PM
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| | Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels First Year Special Ops | Quote:
Originally Posted by lena lovegood Hey! New Reader here! I really like your story so far! PAMS! | Thanks, I'm glad you like! Quote:
Originally Posted by Dasha lol that was good !!! btw was that flash back set in hogwarts or a normal school. I loved that post very funny cant wait for mare PAMS PAMS PAMS |
Thanks Dasha. And normal. I think Miley's school's named Seaview High, (This is where an avid HM fan corrects me) so I set it there, like Serenity was a new student there.
I'll update again next Monday, before anybody asks! |
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03-06-2007, 03:30 PM
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| Russia's Glam Girl Grindylow
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ginny Clearwater-Malfoy Fourth | coolness cant wait for that  |
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03-13-2007, 02:15 AM
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| Run, Emma, Run! Hippogriff
Location: Forks Join Date: Jul 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Emma Cullen Graduated | Just read the post and it was awsome!
Can't wait till you post more!! |
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03-13-2007, 03:50 PM
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| | Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels First Year Special Ops | Thanks! Glad you liked.
I have some bad news; I was in hospital Friday so I can't write an update as I don't feel well enough and I know I'd make about a hundred mistakes. I'm struggling with normal spelling a little at the moment.
As soon as I feel up to it, I'll give you a nice, long, lengthy post.
Nicky, |
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03-13-2007, 11:34 PM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lena Lovegood Fifth | Oh no! I hope you feel better. Please take you time with a post until you feel up to it. |
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03-14-2007, 08:40 PM
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| Run, Emma, Run! Hippogriff
Location: Forks Join Date: Jul 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Emma Cullen Graduated | Oh my poor baby! I hope you feel better darling!
Don't worry, take your time to post. It doesn't even have to be a long post just as long as you are feeling better we'll be happy, okay?
Love Always,
Emma |
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03-15-2007, 07:57 AM
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| | Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels First Year Special Ops | Quote:
Originally Posted by lena lovegood Oh no! I hope you feel better. Please take you time with a post until you feel up to it. | Aww, thanks. Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry and Ginny??? Oh my poor baby! I hope you feel better darling!
Don't worry, take your time to post. It doesn't even have to be a long post just as long as you are feeling better we'll be happy, okay?
Love Always,
Emma | Thanks Emma. I'll feel better soon, I hope.
Here's some news; if I don't take ill again in school, like yesterday, I'll be back here after school. (3.30pm GMT) WHen I'm back here, I'm going to update my other fic, and then I'll update this one. It may not be long though, and there will probably be several mistakes.
I am just worried that I'll go into hospital suddenly and leave you lot withotu a psot which you will probably hate me for!
See ya later!
Nicky, |
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03-15-2007, 04:18 PM
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| | Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Xylina Samuels First Year Special Ops | I didn't take ill! I'm here to post!
'I'm David,' Serenity's dad introduced himself to Hannah's manager.
'Robbie,' (A/N; This is his name, right? I get confused)
David nodded. 'Come on. Shall we leave the girls to talk a little?' he asked, curiously, a sly smile on his face.
Robbie nodded. 'Coem on then,'
Hannah and Serenity gaped at the two men. Leaving them on their own, when it was obvious they didn't like each other - and Hannah's radio interview had proven that.
'So, Hannah, what do you think of Clarysaa?' Jon had asked Hannah. She had smiled sneakily and bit her lip, throwing an evil glance towards Serenity.
'Clarysaa? Oh, erm, that's easy. In my friend's school, there's a new girl, Serenity, and she's just like her - stuck up, self-centred and it seems evil too,'
Serenity glanced coldly at Hannah and took a seat on one of the benches. They were outside in the street. No one recognized them - they both had sunglasses on and their hoods up.
'WHy do you dislike me so?' Serenity said suddenly. 'I've done nothing to you. And, FYI, Serenity Karma - who you were on about in the interview - is nothing like that, she's one of my mates,'
Hannah snorted. 'Good luck on you,' she said, dodging the first thing Serenity asked.
'Hannah. Why do you dislike me so?'
'I just do. You remind me of Serenity, okay?' Hannah said abruptly, standing up. She ran a hand through her blonde hair as she let her hood down. After a moment, she said; 'Tell Robbie I'm waiting in the car, okay?'
Serenity sighed and nodded. 'Fine,'
*****
David and Robbie sat around the corner from the girls, discussing what it was like managing them. Robbie was laughing.
'Yeah, Hannah's a handful some times,' he said. 'But don't tell her I said that. SHe'll kill me,'
David smiled. 'Don't worry, I won't,'
Robbie nodded and thought for a moment. 'Hey, David, why don't we get the girls to live together a bit before school? So they can get used to each other, I mean,'
David frowned thoughtfully, and then nodded. 'Okay then, you're on,' |
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03-15-2007, 05:18 PM
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| | Griffin
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Taryn Moira Bennet Ministry RPG Name:
Amanda M. Vanalda Magical Transportation | Dumbledore's Licorice Snaps Hey Nicky! This is really good so far! I like it! Post more soon!
~Taylor~ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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03-15-2007, 05:27 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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| new reader!
I love the story! I love how you have Oliver in it  *lurvs Mitchel Musso* |
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03-15-2007, 10:11 PM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lena Lovegood Fifth | Yay! A post! I wonder why they seem to hate each other so much? Can't wait to find out! PAMS!! |
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03-16-2007, 05:09 PM
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| Russia's Glam Girl Grindylow
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ginny Clearwater-Malfoy Fourth | I feel so mean for not saying this before...Get well soon Nicky ... I totaly forgot to check up on this fic...i feel so silly cause this fic is radicle (sp?) PAMS PAMS PAMS
~Ria~ |
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03-20-2007, 07:31 PM
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| | Crup
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ashley Ollivander | very nice |
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