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11-05-2004, 07:48 PM
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| Hogwarts Poltergeist News Moderator Peeves: the lovable version Ashwinder
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| The Lost World of Kiera: The Unfolding - Sa16+ EDIT BY STARDANCER488: DO NOT DELETE THIS FANFICTION. Hello guys. I started this a while ago but then never posted so I decided I'd take it up again and actually do it. So I hope people enjoy it. Years passed and generations were born in Kiera. Ties were still lost and the world was just like it was hundreds of pwen after the loss of the gods. Aleca was only a legend now; it was cast away as an evil island and never sought after again, it was a place of mystery and for the children of Kiera an adventure into a graveyard. Prologue
Kiera was never a world of evil until that horrendous night in 208 of pwen. The Alecan gods disappeared from the world and a dark shadow casted upon Kiera from the north. A great evil was brought that would make the once peaceful Kiera into a world much different then any one person could ever imagine. Aleca, a land once flourished under the beauty and care of the gods, was now dead and empty; it became the forgotten land – The Unknown.
The Shadow that was cast to the north became populated by ferocious and ghastly beasts no one had known of before or could have ever imagined. Their population grew by the day and in no more then a matter of days was the whole north of Kiera taken by these beasts. The land of these beasts would later become known as Maticun, land of orcs and beasts alike. No man or magical creature walked into their land safely and no one dared to go for sake of their own life either.
Chelan, the land of magical beings, and Huerlan, the land of humans, were once in unity before the gods departed. After the Alecans left the unity between the Chelan and Huerlan broke. They were no longer friendly; they were now enemies and were hunted down if ever in each others land.
A once peaceful Kiera was brought into turmoil, and no one person of magical skills or power could understand why. What brought upon the departure of there gods or breaking of their land could be told but one thing...
A prophecy will come to be, someone will bring forth the answer and possibly someday the Alecan gods will return. Chapter 1
Rising from the west the sun began to shine upon a house just beginning to stir on the outskirts of Quant, the western world of man. “Wake up!” Yelled a small lively girl at the foot of the stairs. “’Tis morning already!” The girl picked up the basket of dried clothing and headed to the kitchen where her mother stood over a boiling oven and ready food. “Don’t worry Elevea; they’ll be sure as down when they smell the food.” Ordala, her mother, said as she prepared the morning table. Elevea just sighed and began folding up the clothing like she was taught and forgot the many stresses of her waking brothers.
Sitting down the clothes and taking a seat, Elevea threw her brown shimmering hair over her shoulders, away from her eyes and plate and began to eat her morning meal. “Morning,” came her two younger brothers Sebastian and Dorthun. Elevea turned to them with her blue green eyes looking at them with a serious look and said with a tone, “Well ‘tis about time don’t you think?!” The two boys said nothing as they snickered at their sister. “Now if that’s how you want it fine! I’ll be going on my way mother.” Elevea added with a huff as she gathered her things and walked out the door.
Elevea was a very compassionate girl when it came to her chores and waking. She was a very hard working girl and took it quite seriously at times, sometimes to much so. But even so when she had something set out to do, it was done, no questions asked, and no slacking was taken; she did everything on time and was ready before everyone else. Other girls prided solely on their looks, and even though Elevea was beautiful and was always looked at, she never let it be that. She made people look past her beauty and beyond towards her heart and brain, she never let anyone take that away from her.
“Elevea! Elevea wait!” Yelled two voices behind her, “About time…” Elevea mumbled as she turned around. “And you two must have been stuffing your face now weren’t you?” She asked with an annoyed smile. “Well…” Said Sebastian. “We were hungry!” Yelled Dorthun back. “Yeah, yeah come along now.” Mumbled Elevea as she walked on with the boys trailing behind her kicking stones trying to catch up to her fast walking pace.
Sebastian and Dorthun were Elevea’s two younger twin brothers. They were a thorn in her back but she did love them dearly, she had taken up as their influence when their father died a little after her 10th birthday and the boys 7th. He died after a group of orcs had attacked the village and taken not only their father but many others who were important and loved in the village. The twins’ only difference from her was the eyes; they had their mother’s eyes of brown while she had her father's and also the height, they were tall just like their father.
“Hurry up children! Hurry now, were about to begin!” Yelled the school teacher Jacqueline from across the village street. They had just arrived in town when their teacher spotted them and they dashed into the circled pitch in the middle of the town which they called a classroom. It was a deep pitch with seats around the levels, it was used for town meetings and celebrations also; but in the mornings it was used solely for the purpose of the children’s learning.
Last edited by stardancer488; 06-23-2005 at 05:29 PM.
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11-05-2004, 08:51 PM
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| Firecrab
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Wow! Very nice! You've written it extremely well. But is it HP related? Or does it not have to be for this section?
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11-05-2004, 11:00 PM
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| Hogwarts Poltergeist News Moderator Peeves: the lovable version Ashwinder
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Thanks. No, it doesn't need to be HP related.
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11-10-2004, 09:28 PM
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| Hogwarts Poltergeist News Moderator Peeves: the lovable version Ashwinder
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| Chapter 2
Elevea and her brothers separated and she quickly went to sit down on the second level beside one of her closest friends, a young brunette with a spunky attitude named Sarah. Sarah smiled up at Elevea as she sat, "I thought you were going to be her earlier Ele." Whispered Sarah as they listened to Jacqueline speak about the days lesson. "I had to wait for them..." Elevea responded back as she stared over at the twins with a group of their friends talking furiously away about nonsense no doubt. "Thought it may have been that." Sarah laughed as she passed a piece of paper to Elevea, "You might like to see that." She added with a smile.
Taking the paper Elevea looked at it, "Your...this has to be wrong!" She gasped and read it over again. Then she snuck a glance behind her up to the fifth row where a group of older boys her own age seated. In the middle sat Kial, the mayors only son, next to his gang. Kial was one of the best looking boys in their villiage, his blonde glimmering hair was his most admired feature along with his light blue eyes. Every girl had an infatuation with Kial, and he wouldn't hide the fact that it was so. Now Elevea held a note from this boy himself, blushing severely she turned her head back and stared at the piece of paper in her hands. "He...wants to go to the festival with me?!"
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Elevea had a hard time that morning trying to concentrate on Jacquelines' lesson about the star formations that day. Walking off with Sarah after their lesson she was still quite shocked at the days developement. The girls walked to the local lake, a usual thing for the girls after their lessons. Sarah had graciously granted Elevea some quiet time as they walked down to the lake, but then finally spoke up. "It's true Elevea." She said with a giggle as Elevea blushed once again. "Oh please Elevea! I would be jumping up and down if I were you." Sarah added with a sigh,"You are so weird. Sometimes I wonder about you."
"Hey!" Elevea responded finally,"I resent that so that you know. I'm not weird, just...different." Elevea smiled and then nudged Sarah with her arm. "It is rather swell though." The girls laughed and went to sit down under a big tree by the lakes edge. Elevea stared at the waters suface and watched the fish under swim around in their big pool. Some other children were now coming to the lake for swims and fun, they were all on the other side of the lake laughing and jumping into the water. Elevea watched as the boys from the villiage started dunking each other in the water and the girls watch as they giggled and threw water on the boys. "I remember when we were like that." Sarah said as she saw where she had been staring at. Elevea smiled and the girls began chattering about the lesson they missed. Not much but I hope you all enjoy! EDIT BY STARDANCER488: DO NOT DELETE THIS FANFICTION.
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08-11-2005, 02:18 PM
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| Flobberworm
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Bradford, West Yorkshire, England
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I think this is pretty cool. Write some more soon.
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