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06-01-2008, 12:25 AM
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so afr ive only read 2 chapters but man!!!!!!!!! you're good nooo you're better than good!!!!!!!!!!!! | 
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06-01-2008, 01:01 AM
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are u thinking of being an author 'cause if u are i will definitely be reading your books!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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06-01-2008, 01:02 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
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 are u thinking of being an author 'cause if u are i will definitely be reading your books!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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06-01-2008, 06:59 AM
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Originally Posted by Femiperumbally  so afr ive only read 2 chapters but man!!!!!!!!! you're good nooo you're better than good!!!!!!!!!!!! | Quote:
Originally Posted by Femiperumbally are u thinking of being an author 'cause if u are i will definitely be reading your books!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xoxoxo | Naw thanks deary!! I always thought about it and ive written a few books but i cant write without inspiration. my books are always dark and twisted and well ... my mum said that is not exactly what people want to read!! Or they are like blody romance novels and pretty gross! lol sometimes they are a bit of both! I'm actually writing 3 hp FFs at the moment so I'm sorta messing myself up!!! I've got this one ... another one about a gryffindor ... and an epic 7 book one that ive started every book at the same time!! its in the trio era so yeah ive got my hands a bit too full at the moment to be writing my own stuf!!
but thanks for reading!! i'll keep it in mind! 
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06-01-2008, 03:04 PM
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Kildara leave Jade alone, she probably has a very good reason for making you become friends with Narcissa. I'd say its so then Narcissa trusts you around Lucius and you can spend more time with him.
Jade, don't worry hun, write more when you're ready!
Jemma
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06-01-2008, 03:16 PM
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Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Kildara leave Jade alone, she probably has a very good reason for making you become friends with Narcissa. I'd say its so then Narcissa trusts you around Lucius and you can spend more time with him.
Jade, don't worry hun, write more when you're ready!
Jemma
xxx | Okay okay.  Sorry Jade. I forgive you.
That's okay.
Thanks Jemma. I luff yoo.
Love Jade xxxx and Kildara xxx | |
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06-03-2008, 07:00 AM
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JADE!!!!!!! OMG!!!! You silly billy! You should've told me about htis story about like......5 years ago! It's a novel now! It's sooooo good! Kildara is one vixen! Narcissa is sooooo....immature. Anyway great story!!!! | |
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06-03-2008, 07:06 AM
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Originally Posted by Alexa Black JADE!!!!!!! OMG!!!! You silly billy! You should've told me about htis story about like......5 years ago! It's a novel now! It's sooooo good! Kildara is one vixen! Narcissa is sooooo....immature. Anyway great story!!!! | Naw thanks babes!
I know i know! I'm in a bit of a rut know but I'm slowly digging my way out! Slowly but surely! I should be able to post this week! I'm past my everest of a mistake so I'm working on the rest of the chapter! yay!!!!
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06-05-2008, 09:00 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
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you're really good,
its qiute a complicated story, isnt it? | |
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06-05-2008, 11:33 AM
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Originally Posted by Femiperumbally you're really good,
its qiute a complicated story, isnt it? | Naw thank you. I do try!
Well yes it is. And it's mucking itself around in my head. Kildara has become a real person to me and sh is dictating everything to me but she likes to stuff me around! But yeah .... it's a complicated story.
Thanks again for reading, new post should be up this weekend.
Love Jade and Kildara
xxxxxxx
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06-06-2008, 01:47 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Originally Posted by alyweasley Naw thank you. I do try!
Well yes it is. And it's mucking itself around in my head. Kildara has become a real person to me and sh is dictating everything to me but she likes to stuff me around! But yeah .... it's a complicated story.
Thanks again for reading, new post should be up this weekend.
Love Jade and Kildara
xxxxxxx | well im looking forward 2 the weekend then
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06-06-2008, 01:50 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Originally Posted by Jason Potter Weasley " This is well written for your first time. "Being that I am all Gryffindor, I do not like Kildara or the rest. I like Lily Evans and James Potter. I would anyway as my character has Rom Weasley and Hermoine Grainger as my grandparents. Harry Potter as my cousin.Hugo Weasley and Orinda Evans( Lily's sister) are my father and mother.
Well you better hope you are a Slytherin. Again, your writing is very good. I like the story. | i sorta agree with u
kildara isnt exactly my favouritecharacter either its snape!!
but i still cant wait 4 da rest of the story 2 come out this weekend. | |
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06-06-2008, 03:56 AM
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Originally Posted by Femiperumbally i sorta agree with u
kildara isnt exactly my favouritecharacter either its snape!!
but i still cant wait 4 da rest of the story 2 come out this weekend. | I will say to you what I said to Jason Potter Weasley. I am a Gryffindor, always have been always will be. One day I was sitting on the computer writing one of my other fan fics, about a Gryffindor, then all of a sudden I started writing this one! I don't know why I chose a Slytherin, and a Death Eater no less, but I did. In the normal world, Kildara wouldn't be favourite character either, although I do have a bit of a weak spot for Snape. But this is the world of fiction, anything can happen.
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06-06-2008, 01:34 PM
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Minister's Office |  chapter 13 part 2 ... FINALLY!!
Okay so here it is! The much anticipated Part Two for Chapter Thirteen. After all my fretting it's done. It's not very good and it's really short because I simply needed to finish the chapter. So with out further ado,
Chapter Thirteen: Part Two
The next morning saw a significant change in Narcissa and Kildara’s relationship. They were being civil. It shocked a lot of people. The two Slytherins sat together at breakfast and laughed at each other’s jokes. People started to get suspicious and confused. But none more so than Lucius Malfoy. He was extremely confused. These two were enemies. And now they were acting like friends. They got some odd looks from other students and people started to think Kildara was losing her touch.
After a week of this behaviour, Lucius confronted them. He walked up to the girls when they were sitting in the Common Room doing their homework.
“What is going on?” he asked.
The two girls looked up at him innocently. “What ever do you mean, my dear?” Kildara replied sweetly.
Lucius looked lost for words. What ever did he mean? Seriously! “Umm. You two are being friendly. Not just friendly, you are acting as though you have been friends all along. What happened?”
Narcissa and Kildara looked at each other. “We decided to grow up,” Narcissa said. Kildara shot her a look. “Both of us.” Kildara’s look softened.
Lucius looked at them, astonished. “Grow up?”
“Yes dear. That is a thing you generally do when you get to our age,” Kildara and Narcissa laughed, together.
This was doing Lucius’ head in. He had absolutely no idea what was going on.
“I know what growing up is. But what are you-” he waved his hands in front of them. “-doing?”
The two girls looked at each other and laughed. He was acting like an idiot.
“We don’t really know why, okay? It just happened.” Narcissa said, trying hard not to laugh.
“Just happened?” Lucius asked.
Kildara laughed, her fluffy cutesy laugh that drove Lucius mad. “Yes, dear. And now, if you don’t mind, Narcissa and I have some homework to do.” She and Narcissa put their heads down and started on their homework again.
Lucius looked at them, nonplussed. Defeated, he walked back over to where Crabbe and Goyle were seated.
Over the next week, the two girls caused a stir around the castle. She were walking around the school as though they had been friends forever. The teachers were happy for it. They no longer had to put up with Kildara/Narcissa episodes or the two of them trying to kill each other in Duelling Club. Lucius still looked at them, completely confused, all the time. On one hand, he was sort of annoyed because he liked having girls fighting over him. On the other hand, it was good because now he could spend more time with Kildara without Narcissa questioning them all the time. They were meeting several times a day and Narcissa didn’t so much as raise an eyebrow.
During one of these ‘meetings’ Lucius decided it was time to confront Kildara on her own.
“What exactly is going on, Kildara? Why are you friends with Narcissa?”
She looked up at him and smiled. She leaned into him and kissed him, rather passionately on the mouth. She smiled as she pulled her head back. “That’s why.”
He looked her confused.
Her smile dropped. She looked annoyed. “I became friends with her so I could spend more time with you and she wouldn’t grill us about it.” She shook her head. “Seriously”
He smiled. “Oh. I get it now.” That caused Kildara to shake her head even more. “So it’s all an act?”
Kildara’s smile returned, this time as a sly, mischievous smirk. “Yes. So I could have you all to myself.”
He laughed. “Well I like that.”
She smiled. “Like I would ever be friends with that.”
He nodded and they resumed the agenda of their ‘meeting’. | |
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06-06-2008, 01:54 PM
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Kildara you really need to stop holding meetings! Cissa's going to find out eventually that you're only pretending to be her friend.  Actually I may tell her.... *sends Sabrina off to tell her Aunt*
Jade that was really good, even if it had taken you ages to figure it out 
Hopefully you are now going to be able to post more!!! And don't forget Kildara, be nice!!
Jemma
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06-06-2008, 01:57 PM
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Tut tut Sabrina. Wouldn't dream of it would you? Oh and Jemma I'll try to be nice to Jade. But as you probably know, nice isn't one of my strong suits.
Thanks Jemma. *runs after Sabrina* No please don't! You'll ruin my story!!!
Any ways.
Thanks for reading!
Loves you smuchly!
Jade xxx | |
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06-06-2008, 07:43 PM
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Aww soo good! Kildara's a little trickster!! just like my liam  | |
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06-07-2008, 06:11 AM
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Originally Posted by hermione03 Aww soo good! Kildara's a little trickster!! just like my liam | :muaha: Sure ammmm!!! hehehe!! Only way I know how to roll!!
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06-07-2008, 06:27 AM
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Man u had me scared I thought Dara was losing her touch!! I'm doing the Dara dance right now  | |
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06-07-2008, 11:04 AM
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Originally Posted by Tomasina Riddle Man u had me scared I thought Dara was losing her touch!! I'm doing the Dara dance right now | Losing my touch? Seriously Tisha! Have you gone mad??!!
hehe the Dara dance! Interesting touch!
Love Kildara
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