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Old 04-28-2007, 08:54 PM   #76 (permalink)
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omg bree(i hope i got ur name right!) but those posts were awesome!!! i miss them havent got much time, next week is exams and i havent came on ss for like AGESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS james is as mischevious as ever... but i think he should've said well, you change my tougne back to it's original color AND get missstubborn flower to kiss me, that potion will go as if it was water.... but keely kiss james? 50% unlikely. lily kiss james? 100% no way, and thats what makes it fun. lily will go stufy study study study about potions till her eyes drop and finally find a way to turn it back... or maybe keely will just kiss james and u know that rest...pranksters on the loose, warning pranksters on the loose!!!
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Old 04-28-2007, 09:09 PM   #77 (permalink)
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yeah, I thought I could have James and Sirius have a crush on Keely before James likes Lily and Sirius likes...I'm not saying who. And Keely really belongs to...once again, I'm not gonna say, you're gonna have to find out yourselves
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Old 04-28-2007, 09:32 PM   #78 (permalink)
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Awsomest post yet! Silleh James, who was he talkin' to? Keely or Lily?

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Old 04-28-2007, 09:45 PM   #79 (permalink)
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he was talkin' to Keely, here's a doll version of her just so you know what she looks like



She has a pet cat named Bynx, by the way
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Old 04-29-2007, 02:49 AM   #80 (permalink)
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New reader here I love where this story is going so far I can't wait to read more about them. it's exciting......
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Old 04-29-2007, 09:16 AM   #81 (permalink)
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I'm just really excited so I'll just put in a new chapter anyway

Chapter Four: Past, Present, and Future

"Are you mental?" asked Keely, "I would never, I repeat, NEVER kiss you."
"Alright," Sirius said as he shrugged and he and James began to walk away, "Enjoy the new look 'til seventh year, Lil."
"Wait," said Lily, "She'll kiss you, please?" she added to Keely, "You heard McGonnagle, it's not school appropriate and I don't want to be a mess up on my second day here." she put on a sad face that Keely couldn't resist and she said, "Yeah, I'll kiss you both."
"And it's gotta be on the lips." said James as he and Sirius quickly turned and walked straight back to Keely. Keely groaned and he said, "Just think happy thoughts!"
"I'm gonna punch you!" she said under her breath and she leaned in close and kissed James's lips. Whe she backed up, she wiped her mouth and kissed Sirius's lips too. They both did high fives when she finished and she started to wipe here mouth.
"Okay," said Sirius, "Take this, and you're hair will be back to normal in no time." he took out a small vial with sky blue potion and gave it to Lily, "Now, can you change our tongues back?"
"Fine." Keely waved her wand and James and Sirius's tongues were back to normal.
"So we're even?" asked James
"Not even close." said Lily, "We're now officially enemies." they began to walk down the corridor to Slughorn's and Keely said, "But I still want us to hang out."
"Deal." agreed Sirius. Lily drank the potion and her hair turned red again.

Lily slept uneasily in her bed that night, she was playing with a baby again with a small black patch of hair on it's head and a man with hazel eyes, glasses, and untamed black hair ran into the room and said, "Lily, it's Him! Take Harry and run!" Lily grabbed the baby called Harry, "I'll hold him off!" Lily started to run, still holding a now crying baby until she heard the terrifieing man say, "Avada Kedavra" and heard something hit the ground. She turned and saw that the man who was panicking was lying on the floor, dead.
"JAMES!"
Lily opened her eyes, her face was sweating and she had tears in her eyes, she sat up abruptly, looked around, and saw everyone staring at her.
"Lily, are you okay?" asked Keely.
"I'm not sure, I had a night mare, and it was horrible." Lily answered as she wiped the sweat and tears from her face.
"Keep it down next time you have a dream!" Hillary said as if she didn't care, "We need to get some sleep!"
"What's wrong, Hillary. Run out of make up?" Keely asked.
"Even beautiful grils need their beauty sleep!" snapped Amber.
"Beauty sleep?" repeated Keely, "You'd have to sleep for, like, a month, or maybe even a year or two!"
"Whatever." Hillary said and Keely rolled her eyes, got out of her own bed and sat at the end of Lily's bed.
"Are you sure you're okay?" Keely asked again, "Maybe you should go to the Hospital Wing."
"I'm fine," Lily said firmly, "Like I said, it was just a nightmare."
"I hope you're right." Keely said getting back into her bed, "'Night."
"'Night." Lily closed her eyes again until she heard a flutter of wing and a ruffle of feathers. She looked around and saw an eagle owl next to her window. She opened it and saw that the owl had a note on its leg. Lily took the letter off the owl's leg and it flew off. She looked at the letter to see who it was adressed to and saw that it was for her from James.

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Old 04-29-2007, 11:20 PM   #82 (permalink)
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That was a great post, I now want to see what will happen to James and Lily.....
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That was great! Keely kissed James and Sirius...ON THE LIPS!!! PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!PAMS!
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Old 05-01-2007, 01:02 AM   #84 (permalink)
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Old 05-01-2007, 02:23 PM   #85 (permalink)
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeee. i guess its a letter tellin' bout the weird dream he had toooo... keely=kind kind girl hillary- gotta shut up abit =_=" she's ruining everything..... beauty sleep-a year? nahh, maybe 100years keep it coming!
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Old 05-02-2007, 02:01 AM   #86 (permalink)
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Yeah, Hillary really is mean, isn't she?

Past, Present, and Future Part 2

Lily opened the note and read,

Lily,
I had to tell somebody about this. I can't tell Sirius or Keely because they'll just take the mickey out of it, and I'm not sure what Remus or Peter would say but I know that you wouldn't laugh at anything like this, and it's about you anyway. I just had a nightmare where you were playing with a baby and I was panicking about a man white as a skull with spidery hands and really skinny and he killed me. He was also going to kill the baby you were playing with but you were pleading to have him kill you instead. It was really scary because then he laughed and put the killing curse on you. I even had this nightmare over the summer and I don't know what it means. I just wanted to ask you because you're really smart and you probably read a book on it somewhere. Either write back or tell me in private.
Sincerely Yours,
James Potter.


Lily's eyes widen in shock when she read this letter. James has been getting those nightmares too. She took out some parchment, picked up a quil, and wrote,

James,
You're not going to believe this, but I've been having those nightmares too. I honestly don't know what they mean, maybe we should ask McGonnagle tomorrow since she is Deputy Headmistress. Maybe she'd know.

Love From
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Lily tied the message to the owl and it took off into the night. She climbed back into bed and tried to fall asleep.

Lily felt tired that morning from the lack of sleep the other night, and so did James. They both couldn't get back to sleep because of their nightmare and the fact they wrote to eachother. They stayed behind after Transfiguration to talk to McGonnagle.
"Professor, we wanted to ask you something." said James. McGonnagle looked at him and said, "Very well, Mr. Potter, Ms. Evans. What is it?"
"Well, it's just that we had a nightmare last night and during the summer and we dont understand why." James explained poorly.
"What he means is,"Lily quickly said when McGonnagle opened her mouth, "Is that during summer and last night we both had the same nightmare. We were older-like in our twenties-and I was playing with a baby boy, and James ran in yelling, 'Lily, it's Him! Take Harry and run!' or something like that and this man whose was pure white, had spidery hands, and was really thin came in and he and James fought until he murdered James. The man then advance on me and wanted to kill the baby. I was pleading and said, 'No, please don't take Harry. Please, take me instead.' and the man laughed and killed me. We don't understand what it means, Professor. I mean, is it like our future or something?"
McGonnagle looked at her and said, "I don't know, Ms. Evans. I should take you to Professor Dumbledore and you can take it up with him for he will know. Come along."

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That was a great post I love the way McGonagall said she had no idea but that they should talk with Dumbledore
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Bwahaha! Keeley kissed them!

0.o they had the dream again?

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ps, I tink it's spelled McGonnagoll....
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Awsome post! I really like how they are having premionitions about their futue. PAMSOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yay! dumbly-dore can helpiee (winkwinknudgenudge tell em bout harry, and how they'll be together n how hot they will look together!) loveee it
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Loved your posts post more soon pleaaaaase
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sorry that I haven't been posting, you guys. my mother just got new carpet so we had to turn the computor off.

Past, Present, and Future Part 3

McGonnagle led James and Lily down the corridor until they stopped in front of a statue of a griffin.
"Chocolate Frogs." she said and the griffin jumped aside to reveal a door for the office.
"You will speak with Professor Dumbledore in a moment, he's gone to the staff room but will be back before long. I'd wait with you but I have another class to teach." she left them and they walked into the office. There were tons of silver instruments and several portraits of past Headmasters and Headmistresses. There room would've been completly empty if there wasn't a handsome phoenix sitting on Dumbledore's desk. James and Lily looked at the facinating objects until James found a wooden bowl filled with crystal clear water.
"Hey Evans. Check this thing out." Lily walked over to the desk and looked at the bowl, "What do you think it is?"
Lily didn't answer, she just took out her wand and swirld it around in the water. The water continued to swirl until it showed a moving blurred image.
"Bend down over it." Lily instructed. James gave her a puzzled look and bended down until his nose was almost touching the water. Then he felt his feet leave the ground and he fell through the wooden bowl. He left Dumbledore's office completly and landed somewhere else in the castle. Lily finally came and stood next to him.
"What was that thing?" asked James.
"That was the water of time, I read about it in Moste Potions." aswered Lily. She looked around and asked, "Potter, do you by any chance know a red head boy?"
"No, why?"
"Because I can see you standing over there with a boy with red hair and freckles." James looked around and saw the boy too, but he couldn't understand why he was standing with the boy until he saw that his double had green eyes instead of hazel and the boy had a scar on his forehead too.
"That can't be me, he has green eyes, I have hazel. Plus, he has a scar on his forehead"
"There's something familiar about his eyes." said Lily. James looked closely at the boy's eyes and saw that they looked exactly like Lily's.
"Evans, those are your eyes!"
"That's impossible, unless..." she trailed off, James looked at her and saw that she was looking at him horrified.
"What?"
"Potter, I think that's supposed to be our son!"
"No way, he can't be."
"Let's get closer to make sure." Lily started to walk over to the boys until James grabbed her arm to hold her back.
"I doubt they'll be okay with us going right up to them asking, 'Hello, are you going to be our future son?'"
"Potter, in the water of time, no one from the water will see or hear you." Lily jerked her arm away from James and walked towards the two boys.
"I don't know why you give her a hard time, Ron." said the boy with the scar
"Don't tell me that you can't stand her either, Harry." said the boy named Ron, "Hermione is such a know-it-all. And she's always gotta show it off."
The boy named Harry shrugged and said, "I just kinda think we should be a bit nicer to her. I mean, after all she is trying to help."
"Yeah, in the most annoying way possible. Anyway, we better get going to Transfiguration otherwise McGonnagle will take points off Gryffindor." The boys ran past Lily and James, clearly not noticing that they were listening to everything they were saying."
"They kinda remind me of you and Black." said Lily.
"And that Hermione girl kinda sounds a lot like you." said James.
"I believe you were waiting for me?"
James and Lily whirled around and saw Professer Dumbledore standing behind them, his eyes twinkling

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Wow I loved that post!!!!!! I like how they saw Harry. That was kool Please Post More Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I loved that post please post soon I want to find out what Dumbledore has to say about what might happen to James and Lily.
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oh me goshie- dumbledore- the professonial mr. scary man much! totally awesome, if i were with james or lily, i wouldve screamed in fright. water? i thought it was called a pensieve... hmm i dont care much bout that, get back into story!!! james n lily fall in lovie had a babie called him harry and he had ickle ronnie standin' beside him all the while wee gonna have some fun maybe you can catch some

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the water of time is actually a little invention of mine for the story, the pensieve only shows you memories(I think that's what it does, I'll have to read GOF to make sure)
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cool invention then.. water... makes me thirsty :x water=good but only EXTREMELY COLD WATER

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