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09-17-2008, 08:31 PM
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#126 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Location: hogwarts of course!! Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 163
Hogwarts RPG Name: alice jenkins Sixth Year | first 2 post!!!!!!!
that was great. i loved it. i guesse when ur in the mood for lovin ur in the mood for lovin!!!  |
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09-17-2008, 10:10 PM
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#127 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Location: on candy mountion Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 370
Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Jullian Marks First Year | dang
she is still here
i need another tactic to get rid of her
any suggestions? |
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09-18-2008, 01:40 PM
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#128 (permalink)
| Tom's Quidditch robesDevilish Draco Bicorn
Location: Snape Manor. =] Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 1,880
Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha Savvy Snape Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Shea Safari Snape Accidents & Catastrophes | Ooh, that was awesome!!! The dinner sounded amazing, how sweet.
pams!
Prongs. |
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09-19-2008, 12:19 AM
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#129 (permalink)
| | Faerie
Location: Somewhere.... Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 3,838
Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | Nice Job. Loved it ^-^ and hit was real cute.
By the way Shirel, its chapter 14 not 15. Changed that soon as you can, please.
I'll PAMS soon you guys. promise!! |
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09-21-2008, 03:59 PM
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#130 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Crup
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 2,012
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Quote:
Originally Posted by itsasnoggfest first 2 post!!!!!!!
that was great. i loved it. i guesse when ur in the mood for lovin ur in the mood for lovin!!!  | That's so right! I really was in a good mood, not for loving but for writing! lol
Thanks for reading! Quote:
Originally Posted by TriwizardChamp12 dang
she is still here
i need another tactic to get rid of her
any suggestions? | hmmm.... maybe if you call her Barney she'll leave! lol I can just imagine her in a big purple barney suit! *dreams* lol
Thanks for reading! Quote:
Originally Posted by draco*malfoy*lover Ooh, that was awesome!!! The dinner sounded amazing, how sweet.
pams!
Prongs. | Thanks Prongs! I like the dinner too. It was so romantic! *sqeels* I wish all boyfriends were like that! Quote:
Originally Posted by DanFan4eva Nice Job. Loved it ^-^ and hit was real cute.
By the way Shirel, its chapter 14 not 15. Changed that soon as you can, please.
I'll PAMS soon you guys. promise!! | ooopS! I changed it. I was really tired. And guess what? I still am! *yawns* lol School.... *sighs* I'm already counting down the days.
Lisa will post as soon as she can! 
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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09-25-2008, 12:46 PM
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#131 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: The Malfoy Mansion Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 112
Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | that was awesome!!!!!
dracos soo sweet!!!! |
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09-25-2008, 12:59 PM
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#132 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: njoin my hols Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 120
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bloom | Dracos sooooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!
but how could cynthia know they were in there????????? |
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09-25-2008, 08:45 PM
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#133 (permalink)
| | Faerie
Location: Somewhere.... Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 3,838
Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | Quote: |
Originally Posted by BLOOM but how could cynthia know they were in there????????? | She doesn't. Plus Cyn was never mentioned in this chapter. |
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10-02-2008, 12:17 PM
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#134 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Crup
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 2,012
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Quote:
Originally Posted by sakura that was awesome!!!!!
dracos soo sweet!!!! | Thanks! I agree he's the best BF ever!! And right now I am thinking of a plan to steal him away! Quote:
Originally Posted by BLOOM Dracos sooooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!
but how could cynthia know they were in there????????? | Well, I didn't write it in, but you could probably guess that she followed them. She really likes Draco and will do anything to steal him away from Hermione so she probably followed Draco and Hemione up to see what they were doing. And while they were in the room of requirment she probably imagined to herself what they were doing, probably kissing. That's what romantic couples do! Hope this helped. Thanks for redaing.  Quote: |
Originally Posted by DanFan4eva She doesn't. Plus Cyn was never mentioned in this chapter. | Cynthia is mentioned. Look on the last sentence from the last chapter. Here's the quote: Quote: | Hermione and Draco felt like the luckiest people alive. There was no better match, or so they thought. Just outside the door stood a very angry girl, wishing to be the one that Draco was kissing. | Lisa will post soon! 
-*~ Shirel ~*-
Last edited by shirelbb : 10-02-2008 at 12:22 PM.
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10-13-2008, 03:11 AM
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#135 (permalink)
| | Faerie
Location: Somewhere.... Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 3,838
Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | I'm very sorry for not having the next chapter up, but I PROMISE i'll have it up soon... i just need to think of one first. =/ |
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10-13-2008, 07:07 AM
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#136 (permalink)
| | Glumbumble
Location: Hogwart's my home! Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 178
Hogwarts RPG Name: Diana Lynton First Year | New reader here!!!!I've read all the chapters,and it's just FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PAMS!!!PAMS!!!PAMS!!!!!!!!! It's just great.Post more soon.And I hate Cynthia.(Why does she poke her nose verywhere???) |
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10-13-2008, 12:15 PM
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#137 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Crup
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 2,012
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Quote:
Originally Posted by DanFan4eva I'm very sorry for not having the next chapter up, but I PROMISE i'll have it up soon... i just need to think of one first. =/ | It's okay. Were all patient here! Take your time... Quote:
Originally Posted by ILoveHermione! New reader here!!!!I've read all the chapters,and it's just FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PAMS!!!PAMS!!!PAMS!!!!!!!!! It's just great.Post more soon.And I hate Cynthia.(Why does she poke her nose verywhere???) | WELCOME!!! Thanks for reading! I'm glad you like it! I know, Cynthia is very nosy! I wonder how many noses she has? Every night I dream that I cut off one nose! 
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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10-14-2008, 09:04 PM
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#138 (permalink)
| | Bundimun
Location: In Hogwarts :D Join Date: Sep 2008
Posts: 39
| New Reader!
Wow... This Story Is Fab!
I just have to say that I DESPISE Cynthia - why not just let Hermione and Draco be? They're such a lovely couple!
Laura x |
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10-18-2008, 03:23 AM
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#139 (permalink)
| | Faerie
Location: Somewhere.... Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 3,838
Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | Chapter 15
It had been three months to be exact that Draco and Cynthia's tutoring was still going on. Hermione was getting more worried every week. It was eating her inside to always think the worst of what was going on with the two. Draco had been more off each day and every time they would meet at their spot he was at least and few minutes late Or and hour late.
"So... I put this potions and this one together, right Draco?" Said her angel like voice, trying to act as a sweet good girl.
Draco smiled with a nod. "Right." He took the blue bottle and the dark yellow bottle then gave them to Cynthia. Her eyes darted the bottles and she slowly pulled her hand up to get the bottles. Her warm smooth hands touched Draco's hands. A smile smiled was placed upon his face.
Cyn smiled, then took the bottles and poured them into the empty one. A reaction of the two potions started to begin. "Yes! I did it!!" She squeeled in happiness.
"Yeah you did. You once again made another potion right." Draco said like he was proud of his student, but yet he had a gut feeling, that had came back again.
His feelings for Cynthia grew more and more but it felt very wrong, because he had Hermione and he really did truly love her. But these feelings...
Cynthia smiled widely and flung herself at Draco. "Your the best Draco. Truly are!" She kissed his cheek and moved back a bit showing how happy she was.
Draco pulled her back in with a hug. "Thanks... your doing better than the first time we started." A small chuckled came out of Cynthia's mouth.
Draco once again felt wired. It hit him hard and he pulled Cynthia away. "So... I guess we can stop here. I'll see you tomorrow, kay?"
A puzzled look was on Cynthia's face, but she didn't protest. She nodded and helped Draco clean up everything.
It was so creepy. As much as he wanted to not like Cynthia, the feelings hit him back. When they had a moment, something reminds him he had Hermione. "Uhm... can you clean up the rest?" He asked as was already taking his books and leaving.
Cyn watched him leave. "...Sure." She said, once he left. She cleaned up the rest sighing. "This isn't how I hoped it come out... that stupid girl is always on his bloody mind!!!" ~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Hermione was sitting under the tree reading. Draco and her weren't meeting today. She thought it would be best to have her own time alone. Hermione tried to read, but he couldn't really concentrate. Her thoughts always began to roam around and Straight to thinking of Draco. She sighed and her eyes looked up at the sky.
"You can't always let your problems get to you. You should sometimes forget them and say to yourself its nothing but rubbish and not something to worry about." Advised a Gryffindor girl, who was about Hermione's age.
Hermione turned to the girl. "Thanks... have we met?" She asked, trying to remember this girl.
A laugh came out of the girl's mouth. "Yes, actually. It was in transfiguration class. My name is Heather... Heather Vendalora." She said nicely. She sat down near Hermione and shut her book.
Hermione stared at her closed book then at Heather. "So whats bothering you?" Heather asked, being thoughtful.
"It's my boyfriend and this girl who is ruining everything. As much as I try to follow my friends advice I'm positive there is something going on between them." A load groan burst out.
Heather thought for a second. "Hmm... I see. Well to be honest here I can't say much. I mean I bet your friends told you all they could tell to help. I doubt I can help." She said with a chuckle.
Hermione felt worse than ever. She pulled her legs close to her upper body and held onto them tight. She placed her head on her knees and literally began to cry. "Why is this happening! I can't do anything but trust him. I can't though!! I can't! She is making me die inside and feel worse about myself, Draco and our relationship. I'm weak and I can't do a thing but seem to believe in him and his stupid words!" She cried out
Heather comfort Hermione. She felt so hurt and bad for the poor girl. "Oh Hermione, please don't do this to yourself. Don't cry." She continuously rubbed Hermione's back and lied her head on Hermione's shoulder.
Draco was right behind a tree. He heard all of what Hermione cried over. He felt horrible and it hurt him so deep inside it was almost as though he had a huge hole in his stomach.
He walked back inside the castle, feeling like he was the worst boyfriend ever in the history of boyfriends. "How could I do this to her..." He hit the wall in anger. "BLOODY DAMN HELL! WHAT GOOD OF BOYFRIEND I AM?!? SHE DOESN'T DAMN WELL DESERVE ME!" He yelled, walking down the hall. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Sitting hopelessly on her bed, Hermione was deep in a daze. Thinking of all the things that came in her mind.
She snapped into reality and cried until there were no more tears. She fell laying on her warm comfy bed and curled into a ball. "Why?!?" She said as the tear rolled down.
"Why does this have to happen to me. Draco.... Draco please..." She whispered to herself. Soon enough she fell to sleep from her crying.
Last edited by DanFan4eva : 10-19-2008 at 04:33 PM.
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10-18-2008, 03:53 AM
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#140 (permalink)
| Tom's Quidditch robesDevilish Draco Bicorn
Location: Snape Manor. =] Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 1,880
Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha Savvy Snape Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Shea Safari Snape Accidents & Catastrophes | awh that was soo sad!! *huggle Hermione* it's ok Hermione!
*finds Draco and slaps him* Jerk!
lol sorry, couldn't resist. xD
pams
Prongs. |
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10-18-2008, 12:51 PM
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#141 (permalink)
| | Bundimun
Location: In Hogwarts :D Join Date: Sep 2008
Posts: 39
| Awwwww...poor Hermione...
Hope Draco ups his anti...
Laura x |
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10-18-2008, 03:55 PM
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#142 (permalink)
| | Glumbumble
Location: Hogwart's my home! Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 178
Hogwarts RPG Name: Diana Lynton First Year | Third to post!!!!!!!Anyways,I really feel bad for 'Mione and why in the hell does'nt Draco stop giving those classes to the devil Cynthia??????????!!!!!!!!!Still,loving it.PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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10-22-2008, 07:56 PM
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#143 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Location: hogwarts of course!! Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 163
Hogwarts RPG Name: alice jenkins Sixth Year | yay!!! a post! |
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10-23-2008, 04:13 PM
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#144 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Crup
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 2,012
Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Nice post Lisa!
Poor Hermione... Draco is being kinda of a prat! (-no offense Draco )
I will post ASAP! 
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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10-23-2008, 10:13 PM
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#145 (permalink)
| | Ramora
Location: on candy mountion Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 370
Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Jullian Marks First Year | draaaaaammmaaaaaaa
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11-04-2008, 02:43 PM
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#146 (permalink)
| Fan Fiction Elf Crup
Location: (western) FRANCE Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 2,298
| Oh my, it has been awhile... I haven't been on in ages.
I just caught up to this last chapter. Took about half an hour but it was worth it! I forgot how much I love Dramione 
Cynthia's working from the inside... getting to his mind...
Uh-oh 
*wishes his knuckles broke when he hit the wall* HOW DARE HE MAKE HERMIONE CRY LIKE THAT! Stop giving that... prat of a girl lessons! Sheesh.
PAMSSSS!
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