Members in Chat: BertieBot, Gildebot_LockHart | |
If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above.
You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed.
To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.
| | The High Security Vaults (Mature Fan Fics) Where mature fics of all genres are posted. This forum is for content rated Sa16+ only and is recommended for more mature audiences. | Vote for SS!
04-11-2008, 05:29 AM
|
#26 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 1,720
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Vanfer Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Hello my friends!!
Did you miss me?
Well I did.
Anyway, guess what! I am finally on VACATION!!!!! from school for two weeks!
Do you know what that means?!?!?!?
IT MEANS THAT I CAN POST ( and soon, I hope)!!!!!!!!!!!
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
| |
04-11-2008, 11:55 AM
|
#27 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: njoin my hols Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 120
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bloom | hey there another great post!
but that cynthia is soooooo mean!!!
please pams! |
| |
04-11-2008, 11:57 AM
|
#28 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: The Malfoy Mansion Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 109
Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | awesome post!
but that cynthia i just have one word ughhhh!!!!
but anyways pams soon!!!!!!! |
| |
04-11-2008, 07:00 PM
|
#29 (permalink)
|  SBFC Activity Offic.LPFC Event Officer Ginny Weasley-Potter Faerie
Location: At home.... duh Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | yay!!! *tackles and pins to the floor* You will write a post now!!!! We have waited to long and I want cynthia to be punished for being so mean.
PAMS (or I swear I will sit on you and crush you to death)... and you think I'm joking
Jemmz
xxx |
| |
04-12-2008, 03:30 AM
|
#30 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 278
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | QUOTE=shirelbb;6462389]
Did you miss me?
[/quote]
i did i did
you are lucky my hoildays finshed 2 weeks ago
please post right now
love voldyXOXOXOXOXOX[/center] |
| |
04-12-2008, 03:56 PM
|
#31 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: *SHRUGS* Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 100
Hogwarts RPG Name: Dylan Fulke Sixth Year | Finally caught up. Both of you did a great job.
And Lisa I love your plot. You always know how to do great story lines and stories :].
By the way Shirel, they haven't been going out since last week they've been going out 5 month. Just saying.
PAMS you two!
*[Jamie]* |
| |
04-12-2008, 04:45 PM
|
#32 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Location: Is With Sackboy :D Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 3,765
Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | Quote: |
Originally Posted by TriwizardChamp12 *******
what who said that
love it
cant wait for more | Thank you, but i don't get what you mean by the whole stared word. Quote: |
Originally Posted by springbaby
I really don't like that girl and it takes a lot for me to not like someone. Great post
~*<3*~
Heather | Thank you Heather. Lol, well thats how Cynthia is suppose to be. Quote: |
Originally Posted by Shirelbb Hello my friends!!
Did you miss me?
Well I did.
Anyway, guess what! I am finally on VACATION!!!!! from school for two weeks!
Do you know what that means?!?!?!?
IT MEANS THAT I CAN POST ( and soon, I hope)!!!!!!!!!!!
-*~ Shirel ~*- | I'm ok with this post, but don't get to crazy. XD
POST SOON! Quote: |
Originally Posted by BLOOM hey there another great post!
but that cynthia is soooooo mean!!!
please pams! | Thanks you so much .
Lol, yesh she is mean, but thats how she is.
Shirel will post when she can. Quote: |
Originally Posted by Sakura awesome post!
but that cynthia i just have one word ughhhh!!!!
but anyways pams soon!!!!!!! | Aww,thank you very much. Once again, lol. Cynthia is who she is. I think she is cool . Quote:
yay!!! *tackles and pins to the floor* You will write a post now!!!! We have waited to long and I want cynthia to be punished for being so mean.
PAMS (or I swear I will sit on you and crush you to death)... and you think I'm joking
:read:
Jemmz
xxx
| It hasn't been to long, just please bear with us. Give Shirel time. She'll get to hers soon. Maybe Cynitha should.. but eh. Quote: |
Originally Posted by TheGreatWiz Finally caught up. Both of you did a great job.
And Lisa I love your plot. You always know how to do great story lines and stories :].
By the way Shirel, they haven't been going out since last week they've been going out 5 month. Just saying.
PAMS you two!
*[Jamie]* | OMg, Jamie you came to read our FF! Thank you SO much for coming! Aww, Thank you. I think I too also do great writing .
Oh, Well thanks for the look out for seeing that mistake, Shirel will get to that when she can and she'll post soon. |
| |
04-12-2008, 05:07 PM
|
#33 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 1,720
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Vanfer Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Quote:
Originally Posted by TheGreatWiz
By the way Shirel, they haven't been going out since last week they've been going out 5 month. Just saying.
*[Jamie]* | ooh! You're right! I made a mistake... I will go fix it. Thanks for pointing that out! 
I am not going to be near a computer for a couple days so I will try to get a post up tonight.
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
| |
04-13-2008, 07:12 AM
|
#34 (permalink)
|  SBFC Activity Offic.LPFC Event Officer Ginny Weasley-Potter Faerie
Location: At home.... duh Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | YAY!!! you're going to post!!! *takes a comfy seat in front of laptop* Now all I have to do is wait....
Jemmz
xxx |
| |
04-16-2008, 06:26 PM
|
#35 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 1,720
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Vanfer Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | The wait is over! I'm back!
Thanks for being so patient with me! I was going to post yesterday but I didn't feel so well so, I am posting now.
Enjoy!
Up in Draco's room, Draco and Hermione sat on his bed. Not talking much. They were holding hands and playing with each others fingers.
Hermione wondered what Draco was thinking about. She was thinking about that new girl, Cynthia. She was a danger in the way of hers and Draco's relationship. Hermione had to watch out and keep her eyes open.
Finally, Hermione looked at her watch and told Draco she had to go finish off some homework so she left the Slytherin common room and back to Gryffindor tower.
When she walked through the portrait hole she spotted Harry and Ron whispering together in a near corner. She frowned and walked over to them, curiously.
"What's the whispering about?" she asked.
Harry and Ron stopped whispering at once and turned to look at Hermione.
"We can't risk telling you because you are around Malfoy all the time and you just might let something slip," Ron said, rather coldly.
Harry didn't nod but stood there with his mouth closed.
"Why are you being so against him?" Hermione asked Ron. "He's not part of the Death Eaters!"
"He tried to kill Dumbledore!" said Harry suddenly.
Hermione and Ron looked at him. Hermione was loosing her case and she knew that what ever she said they wouldn't believe her no matter what.
"He's changed!" Hermione said sadly, begging them to believe her. "He's a different person now, you wouldn't believe it!"
"He can't be trusted," Harry told her.
"Just please give him a chance!" she begged, almost crying.
Harry and Ron didn't reply and people began to stare at them, wondering why the two best friends of Harry Potter were arguing.
Hermione turned around and stalked off up to the girl's dormitory. It's really short but I didn't want to keep you guys waiting any longer. 
Lisa will post when she can. 
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
| |
04-16-2008, 07:32 PM
|
#36 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
Location: my caged mind Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 347
Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Jullian Marks | y cant they belive her
i was calling cyinthia a B-word
and i was pretending that i didnt
it ok i wouldnt have got it either
Last edited by TriwizardChamp12 : 04-17-2008 at 05:35 PM.
|
| |
04-16-2008, 07:48 PM
|
#37 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Location: Is With Sackboy :D Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 3,765
Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | Lol, not much on detail but still good.
I'll post soon!
EDIT: I forgot to add in,in the first chapter that Harry and Ron are Ok with Hermione and Draco going out. Since i didn't and you post that they are mad, then thats ok.
Last edited by DanFan4eva : 04-21-2008 at 03:21 PM.
|
| |
04-16-2008, 10:34 PM
|
#38 (permalink)
| | Troll
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 4,817
Hogwarts RPG Name: Hayden Hicks First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | Okay Cynthia will die and Draco will end up with hermione and Harry and Ron are going to become little dancing Irish men.
Thats my prediction for how the story will end.
Lol. J/K.
Great post.
PAMS Lisa
~*<3*~
Heather |
| |
04-17-2008, 04:59 AM
|
#39 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 1,720
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Vanfer Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Quote:
Originally Posted by TriwizardChamp12 y cant they belive her
i was calling cyinthia a B-word
and i was pretending that i didnt
it ok i would have got it either | Thanks for reading! Isn't the b-word a little too harsh? Quote:
Originally Posted by DanFan4eva Lol, not much on detail but still good.
I'll post soon!
EDIT: I forgot to add in,in my very first chapter that happy and ron are ok with Hermione and Draco going out. Since i didn't and you post that they are mad, then thats ok. | I'm sorry about that. I really wanted to get it done because I felt really bad. The next chapters will be better because I am hoping that I will have way more time! 
Thanks for reading Lisa! Quote:
Originally Posted by springbaby Okay Cynthia will die and Draco will end up with hermione and Harry and Ron are going to become little dancing Irish men.
Thats my prediction for how the story will end.
Lol. J/K.
Great post.
PAMS Lisa
~*<3*~
Heather | You're sooo funny! I love the irish dancers part!
I'm not so sure it will end that way but maybe similar...!! 
Thanks for reading!
Lisa will post when she can.
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
| |
04-17-2008, 05:55 AM
|
#40 (permalink)
|  SBFC Activity Offic.LPFC Event Officer Ginny Weasley-Potter Faerie
Location: At home.... duh Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | Personally, I loved the last post. I wonder what the boys were talking about???
I agree though that Cynthia should probably be killed... that, or she becomes either Crabbe or Goyle's girlfriend. I think then if you put both of their brains together, they may actually be slightly smart!!!
PAMS soon !!
Jemmz
xxx |
| |
04-17-2008, 08:44 AM
|
#41 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 1,720
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Vanfer Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | lol Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Personally, I loved the last post. I wonder what the boys were talking about???
I agree though that Cynthia should probably be killed... that, or she becomes either Crabbe or Goyle's girlfriend. I think then if you put both of their brains together, they may actually be slightly smart!!!
PAMS soon !!
Jemmz
xxx | Thank you Jemmz! You guys make me laugh! I agree. she should fall in love with Crabbe or goyle. Or evn better, Cynthia will marry Crabbe and Pansy wil marry Goyle nad Hermione will marry Draco and... Ron and Harry... Will marry themselves!!! 
-*~ Shirel ~*-
Last edited by shirelbb : 04-27-2008 at 06:22 AM.
|
| |
04-22-2008, 01:58 AM
|
#42 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: *SHRUGS* Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 100
Hogwarts RPG Name: Dylan Fulke Sixth Year | FABULOUS Job, I must say!
But I do have to agree with Lisa, there wasn't much detail.
Still great though! PAMS!
*[Jamie]* |
| |
04-22-2008, 02:58 AM
|
#43 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 278
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | thanks for the post
please post soon
i agree with harry
i don't trust malfoy |
| |
04-22-2008, 04:39 AM
|
#44 (permalink)
| Sgt. Gryffindor Perfect Premolars! Kappa
Location: *runs far away* Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 985
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alycya "Aly" Weasley Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Edith "Edie" Griffiths Minister's Office | New Reader ** NEW READER **
Very good very good!!
PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!
Jade
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx  |
| |
04-22-2008, 10:39 AM
|
#45 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: njoin my hols Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 120
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bloom | hey there shirel and lisa!
awesome post!
harry and ron could atleast give malfoy a chance!
he may turn out to be good!
pams! |
| |
04-22-2008, 05:28 PM
|
#46 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Location: Is With Sackboy :D Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 3,765
Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | Chapter Five
It was the next day, Hermione stretched out of bed walking down to the showers. As she finished her shower, she dried herself and put on her school clothes.
"Hermione, you ready yet? I want to eat!"
Hermione has almost finished up straightening her hair. "No yet Ronald! If you are so hungry, why don't both of you boys go on ahead and I'll meet you."
Ron turned to Harry. "She might take awhile, lets leave her."
Harry didn't bother to argue, so he followed Ron out the door of the common room.
Hermione picked up her books, going straight down to the stairs. "He's such a pain. I'm glad I broke up with him. Good luck to Lavender!" She said mumbling to herself as she made her way to the portrait.
______________
Close to where the great hall was, Hermione could here all the students rabbling on. She walked in with a smile.
Draco had spotted her, and he was amazed how she looked. Her hair half up and half down straightened. She had her long sleeved buttoned shirt with a black vest over her buttoned shirt. It had a red outline on the sides and a Gyffindor patch representing her house. She also had a black skirt with leg warmers and on her feet were heeled shoes.
"Well would ya look at that." Blaise said eyeing Hermione.
Draco was speechless to say a word. He then automatically walked down to her.
Hermione looked around for Harry and Ron, as she held her books. A smiled was put on her face, and that meant she found them.
Walking down the isle between the tables she was at, she wisped away to the table. Her heeled shoes made clicking noises each step she took, which made the boys eye her.
Draco didn't stop once, as he walked to the Gryffindor table. He went all the way until he was near her.
"Whoa! Who are you! Where is Hermione!" Ron called out, looking how... different Hermione looked.
Hermione sat down, rolling her eyes. "Shut up Ronald. It's me, I just straightened my hair and did a lil' different wardrobe."
Harry cocked his head slightly. "I wouldn't exactly say little... but thats just me." He said. He didn't want to start anything.
"Do you boys ever stop? You can never leave me alone. Your like fathers trying to do whats best for your daughter... which is me!" She spat.
Ron was about to say something, but Hermione shot a glare at him which made him shut his mouth for good.
"Ignore those who don't appreciate your looks, my darling. You look gorgeous as ever." A smile rose upon Hermione's face. She knew by the voice who exactly who it was.
"Thank you, ever so much." She replied.
Draco's lips were placed right on Hermione's cheek, leaving her a shiver on her spine. He then sat down with the trio, and shot Ron and Harry a smile.
They boys glared. "Your not welcome here Malfoy." Barked Harry.
"Why not? I'm not doing anything to be in such harm, am Im? He asked. He made a point, so Harry sad nothing more and eat his breakfast.
Draco looked at Hermione, who had the cheeks of a hamster, because she filled her mouth with food. Obviously she seemed hungry. "Hermione...?"
"Hmm..." She replied. Draco got up off his seat and put out his hand.
"Come with me, you can eat with me and the other Slytherins." Hermione stared at his hands, gulping her food. She took her things and got off her seat while she had her hands in her boyfriends.
They walked back to the Slytherin table, leaving the boys angry as ever. " I hate him!" Ron exclaimed.
"I do to, But what can we do... nothing. We just have to trust her and him." Harry said watching the couple.
________________
"Hello you two, nice to see you both again." Cynthia said, showing her evil smile.
Hermione grabbed Draco close to her and glared at Thia. "Eye on someone else's boy, you b*tch!"
"Oh, why thank you. I'll take that as a complement." Cynthia didn't care what people thought or said.
She placed her hands on Keith Veele's shoulder's and then layed her chin on her hands. "Listen hun, its not like I get them at my will. They come to me, and I keep my word on that." She warned.
Draco just listened, stand beside Hermione. Saying not a word.
Hermione glared even harder. "Draco will never go to some girl like you. He loved me more than anyone in this school, so there is no way he could come crawling to you."
"Oh sure.... you just keep thinking that. But when he does, I'm just going to tell i was right." Cynthia teased.
Hermione tugged on Draco and walked him at the end of the table. She could hear the laugh Cynthia had. Oh how she grieved to kill her.
"I'm just warning you, Hun!" Cried Thia.
Last edited by DanFan4eva : 04-24-2008 at 06:44 PM.
|
| |
04-22-2008, 05:48 PM
|
#47 (permalink)
|  SBFC Activity Offic.LPFC Event Officer Ginny Weasley-Potter Faerie
Location: At home.... duh Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | Okay... Cynthia is dead meat!!! How dare she!!!  BAD BAD BAD!!!
Hermoine sounds like she looks good! I loved the part where she says that Ron and Harry are being overprotective!!
Well done DanFan4eva!
Jemmz
xxx |
| |
04-22-2008, 05:53 PM
|
#48 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Location: Is With Sackboy :D Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 3,765
Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | Thank you so much! Hermione does look good, the way i described it . Yeah, the boys sound very protective, . |
| | |