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03-23-2008, 06:09 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | How Far We've Come - Sa16+  Thanks to Khat Hiya everyone ! This is my 7th FanFic. Doing this FF with me is Shirel [Shirelbb]! We each will post in a chapter trying our best to stay on topic with the plot. I hope you enjoy this FF!
Draco and Hermione have been together for five months now. But as an transfer student makes her way into the famous school, the world of Dramione is different. Malfoy goes after the new girl leaving Hermione heartbroken. Hermione starts to get angry and jealous. With all these emotions, she gets an evil idea. Chapter One Walking down the hall with her two best friends, Ron and Harry, they all talked about class, homework, teachers, rumors, students, and other topics.
"Hermione, you’re going to study for the DADA quiz with us, right?" Harry questioned.
Hermione played with her notebook rings and gave an uncertain look. "That was today?" She asked still playing with the rings.
Harry looked at her, placing an angry look. He couldn't believe Hermione chose Malfoy over Ron and him. "Tell me you aren't going to be with Malfoy?! 'Mione don't you think work is more important?”
Shocked, Hermione shot him a glare. "Of course work is important to me!" She cried in the middle of the hall. Ron coughed. ‘What!?" She barked at Ronald.
"If it's important, then tell us why you've been caught up with Malfoy and not homework... what happened to our Hermione?"
"Rubbish Ronald! I'm still here. More importantly, it isn't any of your business what Draco and I do... but if you must know, I do my homework first with him. Satisfied!?!"
Ron and Harry looked at each other exchanging the same look. They went back to Hermione and just gave a small nod.
"If you boys can't handle me then fine!" Hermione strode off to the next class.
"Pshh, and she said I'm hard to handle!" Ron said to Harry.
Harry and Ron didn't mind Hermione going out with Draco, but she was always with him and never with them as much. They worried about her at times.
As the two boys made it to class, they saw everyone sitting all around the class. Harry and Ron sat down at a table to the far front of the right in front of the room. They could see Draco and Hermione giggle and talking.
"What has the boy done to her Harry? Hermione would be stuffing her face with papers and stuff."
Harry sighed. "Mate, I don't know..." He faded off watching the two.
CHAPTERS: Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10 Chapter 11
Last edited by DanFan4eva : 07-02-2008 at 01:00 AM.
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03-24-2008, 05:23 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janie Smith | Hey~!
Hows it goin?
Awsome first chapter!!!!
I luv the plot line for it!! It's so cool and it sounds like a super super good one!!!
~Abby~ |
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03-24-2008, 06:58 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Heather Malfoy Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | Quote: |
"Pshh, and she said I'm hard to handle!" Ron said to Harry.
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Thats funny.
Anyways. I can't wait for more.
This story seems interesting.
PAMS
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03-24-2008, 09:34 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Quote: |
Originally Posted by Abby13** Hey~!
Hows it goin?
Awsome first chapter!!!!
I luv the plot line for it!! It's so cool and it sounds like a super super good one!!!
~Abby~ | Quote: |
Originally Posted by springbaby 
Thats funny.
Anyways. I can't wait for more.
This story seems interesting.
PAMS
~*<3*~
Heather | Thanks you guys for the support of reading our FanFic. Glad you enjoyed it. And your comments and support mean a lot to me... and Shirel! She'll post when she can!
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03-25-2008, 11:44 AM
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| | Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Vanfer Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Hey Everyone!!!!
I read it yesterday but I had to get off so I didn't have time to reply.
It was really good, Lisa! Hermione's getting a little Slitherney! 
I will posy as soon as I can!
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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03-26-2008, 04:50 PM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Jullian Marks | new reader i like how this story is gonna play out
im a hr/r fan but lately i have been going for her & draco |
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03-26-2008, 10:24 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Quote: |
Originally Posted by Shirelbb Hey Everyone!!!!
I read it yesterday but I had to get off so I didn't have time to reply.
It was really good, Lisa! Hermione's getting a little Slitherney!
I will posy as soon as I can!
-*~ Shirel ~*- | Thanks a bunch Shirel. Can't wait until you post! Quote: |
Originally Posted by TriwizardChamp12 i like how this story is gonna play out
im a hr/r fan but lately i have been going for her & draco | Thank you. I'm glad you like it and I'm glad your like the D/Hr ship. They are such an interesting ship! Love them! ..:Lisa:..
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03-31-2008, 04:39 AM
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Second | Ooh, loved that first chapter 
Keep it up!
~Sarah |
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04-01-2008, 02:24 AM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | nEW rEADER I like
What year are they in?????
can't wait for the next post
Love VoldyXOXOXOXO |
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04-01-2008, 03:32 AM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Quote: |
Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved Ooh, loved that first chapter 
Keep it up!
~Sarah | You finally read our FF. Thank you so much Sarah. Quote:
Originally Posted by voldemort& I like
What year are they in?????
can't wait for the next post
Love VoldyXOXOXOXO | Thank you very much for reading! Year? *thinks* Their like in their sixth or seventh year.
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04-02-2008, 05:26 PM
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| | Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Vanfer Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Hey everyone! It's me, Shirel, with the next chapter! It's only Draco and Hermione with a lot of romance in it. Enjoy! ~Chapter Two~
That night Hermione was walking across the Hogwarts ground where she and Draco planned to meet under a tree near the lake where no one would be able to see them. It was just her and him.
As she walked down she saw the outline of him leaning against the tree with his arms folded. When she finally approached him, her heart was racing. Hermione and Draco were not such a new couple, and she knew very well what a date at night meant.
"Hey," Hermione greeted Draco breathlessly.
Draco turned around and smiled at her. She was wearing her hair in a tight pony which made her cheekbones stick out. She was beautiful.
"Hello, my morning, night and day!" Draco said and Hermione recognized it as a poem from a book called 'Light and Rains poetic words'.
"I didn't know you read poems," she whispered to him as he took a few steps closer to her.
"Neither did l," Draco said coming closer that their faces were merely inches apart.
Hermione's heart was racing and she was sure that you could hear its beat five yards away. She knew what was coming and the only problem was she didn't know is she was prepared for it. She was scared it would get too far. She just stood there staring onto those grey eyes of his and waited.
Draco put his arms around her neck and with one quick movement he was pushing her towards him. Their lips attached and he kissed her with such force. Her arms were wraped around his neck automatically and you couldn't tell which hand was whose. It felt great and she didn't want it to end. She wanted him to keep kissing her and even more than just that. He moved his lips all around her face and down her neck. His lips went lower and lower until they were almost at her chest, right at the end of her neck. But Hermione forced herself to brake apart from him before it was too late.
"Draco, no," she said trying to catch her breath, pushing him away. "I'm not ready. We're moving too fast."
Draco looked at her questioningly but then his face softened.
"I'm sorry, I shouldn't have… you're right."
They stood in an awkward silence, each trying to catch their breaths.
"I better go," she said breaking the silence. She turned around and left without another word. Well It's kinda short. The next chapters will get longer. Please comment!
-*~ Shirel ~*-
Last edited by shirelbb : 04-12-2008 at 05:14 PM.
Reason: Thanks to TriwizardChamp12 for realizing my spelling mistake! ^_^
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04-02-2008, 08:00 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Cute.. akward but cute! Great Job.
I'll post soon. 
..:Lisa:..
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04-02-2008, 09:11 PM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Jullian Marks | it is spelled wraped
but if you meant to say
he had forced sex with her neck than
nevermind |
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04-03-2008, 12:45 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Heather Malfoy Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | OMG Hermione and Drco are so going to make me cry
I love you Draco!!!
Great post Shirel
~*<3*~
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04-04-2008, 11:51 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | new reader here!
i liked your fic!
i love draco and hermione fics!
pams! |
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04-04-2008, 11:56 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bloom Fifth | another new reader here!
hermione and draco?! and hermione neglecting her work?! thas totally strange!
anyways what does dracos father think about dracos relationship?
and is thus taking in the trios 7th year? and is dumbeldore dead?
pams!
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Reason: had a question
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04-05-2008, 02:31 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | VERY CUTE
GREAT WORK
I LOVE IT |
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04-05-2008, 06:40 PM
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| | Skrewt
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily Vanfer Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Smile! Quote:
Originally Posted by DanFan4eva Cute.. akward but cute! Great Job.
I'll post soon. 
..:Lisa:.. | Thanks! Yes, it was a little awkward at the end, but I figured that even in real life with relationships, there are always those awkward moments. So I thought, well now they're a couple... Even Draco and Hermione will have those moments. Quote:
Originally Posted by TriwizardChamp12 it is spelled wraped
but if you meant to say
he had forced sex with her neck than
nevermind | Thank you for realizing! I didn't even notice that I wrote that. I meant wraped, and I will change it right away! Thanks!! Quote:
Originally Posted by springbaby OMG Hermione and Drco are so going to make me cry
I love you Draco!!!
Great post Shirel
~*<3*~
Heatherl | I know! They are the sweetest couple! But will it last?? we'll have to wait and see! muhahah! Thanks for reading, Heather!!! Quote:
Originally Posted by sakura new reader here!
i liked your fic!
i love draco and hermione fics!
pams! | Hey Sakura! (Is that your name?) Thanks for reading! Me and Lisa are really happy that you read it! I think D/Hr are my facvorite ship too! Quote:
Originally Posted by BLOOM another new reader here!
hermione and draco?! and hermione neglecting her work?! thas totally strange!
anyways what does dracos father think about dracos relationship?
and is thus taking in the trios 7th year? and is dumbeldore dead?
pams! | Hey Bloom!!!! Thanks soooo much for reading! You are such a faithful reader! I think Draco's father would probably kill Darco if he knew about it. But I don't think he knows, or at least yet. This is taking place I think in their seventh year. (Right Lisa? Is dumbledore dead?? ) Quote:
Originally Posted by voldemort&88 VERY CUTE
GREAT WORK
I LOVE IT | Yay!! Voldy came to read our fic!! Thanks soo much for reading! I think there will be a post soon enough!
Thank you all so much for reading. I think Lisa will post soon.
Have a happy smiley day full of smiles! 
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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04-05-2008, 08:01 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Chapter Three
Hermione walked in the hall, she could still feel his kisses on her. It was very weired. "HERMIONE!" Called a voice. She turned seeing Draco. A smiled was placed slightly on her face.
"You can never get enough of me, can you?" She said smirking.
Draco walked close to her and shrugged, his hands were in his pockets. "Guess not. I just wanted to say I'm truly sorry about what happened." He loved her so much, that it was true. He couldn't stop being around her. And for loving her so much he had to respect her.
Hermione giggled. That laugh of hers made him smile. He knew with her around he was always putting a smile. A smile no one could ever make him have on his face but her.
"Accepted. We are going to be late for class." Hermione says, taking his hand.
"It's potions. Snape won't mind if the Slytherins are late."
Hermione raised her brow. "Yeah, but I'm not one of them." She reminded him.
"Ah, true. But babe, your with me. He wont do a thing." He said reminding her.
"Thats true..." She said, as her lips went to the right of her face.
The two then began to walked down the hall together making their way to potions.
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Harry and Ron were already at class. When the door of the class opened they both rolled their eyes and face the front of the class.
Draco and Hermione sat down across the boys. Hermione turned to Ron and Harry and gave a smile. "Listen, I'm sorry about earlier. But please, don't get mad at me." She asked.
The two gryffindor boys sighed and nodded, suddenly the door slammed opened. "Students turn to page 512." Snape quickly said as he walked down to the front of the class.
All the students groaned once they got to the page. A lesson they didn't want to repeat again. "Stop your whining!" The professor called out.
Few hours later the students were in the middle of their potion. "You will be graded simply for what you have. It wont be my fault for what I give you baboons. It's your fault for making your potion horribly bad." Snape told them all as he walked around the class.
The bell then rang. Students rushed out not wanting to deal with the class. "Ugh... I can't believe we had to do the lesson again." Hermione told Draco. Both held hands walking in the hall.
"Don't let it bug you as much." Draco tried to comfort her.
"I'll try but.. UGH!" He laughed and let go of her hand put his arm around her.
"How about we go my common room. We can finish up some morning homework and then hangout." He suggested.
"I like that idea." Hermione smiled at him.
Once getting to the hall to were the Slytherin's tower was, the two saw a teacher with a girl that seemed new. "I wounder who she is." Hermione asked.
The girl looked as though she was in the same year as they both were. She has long dark red hair that ended four inches top of her back. A cute slim figure but a little chubby. Without even thinking she look royal like Draco and a full pure blood.
"Must be that transfer student. Think her name is Cynthia." Draco answered staring at her.
Hermione moved her eyes to Draco. "Draco! Stop looking." She yelled at him.
Draco laughed, looking down at her. "I'm not looking looking." He said, leaning in kissing her soft lips. He let go and smiled. "Come on." They went to the door.
"Now, Cynthia. You'll be in this tower. Please feel welcome." McGonagal said to Cyn.
The bubble that Cynthia made snapped, making Professor McGonagal jump. 'Right, well here is your things," She said pointing to the bags that came floating right to them and fell slowly onto the floor. "and here is your schedule."
Placing her hand on her hip she said "Thanks." In an unfriendly way. Professor McGonagal then left.
"Hello, you must be new. My name is Hermione." Hermione greeted herself, putting her hand out. Cynthia stared at Hermione's hand, then at her. She just gave gave a look. "Aww, how cute, you want to be friends." Cynthia rolled her eyes. The gum became a bubbled then it snapped.
Hermione felt uncomfortable and put back down her hand. 'Well, welcome to Hogwarts. If you'd like I can help you a round." She asked nicely. She tried to be a help, but this girl wasn't pleased.
"I'm fine. I can figure things out myself perfectly fine." Cynthia snapped her fingers and the bags began to levitate. She walked up to the door and whispered the password. Cyn stopped and turned back to them. "By the way.. you boyfriend is hot." She smirked then went inside, with the bags following her.
Hermione glared, then expression let go. "She hates me. I tried to be nice."
"She's new, just give her time.. or unless its in her blood or thats just how she is." Draco responded.
"Thats not helping, Babe. Do you like her?" She quickly asked.
Draco shook his head. "No, not at all! Just don't let her get to you, ok. I love you more than anything."
They then went inside and up to Draco's room, ignoring Cynthia.
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