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Old 07-10-2008, 09:17 AM   #126 (permalink)
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Ooooh, I'm so happy. I am facing a horrible Staff Away Day at work, which is always BORING but I had this to read before I go. It's set me in a good mood for the day.
I love this story! It's so exciting! I have some ideas, I shall PM you!

Oh yay, I hope you post more soon!!!!
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Yet another new reader! This is a great story. I love your style. I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens!! Hope you post very very soooooon!!!

Abbe!!!!!!!
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Ooh cliffhanger. Me no likey.
Excellent Prongs. I'm officially hooked even more than when I started reading this in your notebook. =]

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ooo I know the answer to the question! *reads fic* It's Rina!!

Yay!!! My rina's in the story! Now what the heck has Harry seen? You've left a cliffie, so now I'm going to leave a humongouos cliffie in Sabrina's fic when you least expect it.

PAMS!!! please?

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and i can't wait to read your cliffie, Jem! you will soon find out what he sees, yet i'm still trying to figure that part out. =/

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I love this story! It's so exciting! I have some ideas, I shall PM you!

Oh yay, I hope you post more soon!!!!
I loved the PM! Thanks, Nik!!! they were pretty awesome.

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Hey new reader alert! I only read your last chapter but it was awesome! PAMS
OMG!OMG!OMG!! New readers!!! I'm so glad you guys like my story!!!

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Ooh cliffhanger. Me no likey.
Excellent Prongs. I'm officially hooked even more than when I started reading this in your notebook. =]

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I'm back!!yup Rina's in the chappie!!!!ok erm thinking up some suggestions.....
PAMS!!PAMS!!AMazing chappie
YAY MAthI's back!!! I missed you!!! can't wait for your suggestions!!

Ok, like I told you guys in an earlier post. I'm camping for a week and it happens to be this coming week [july 20-26] so make sure you PM me your suggestions on what you'd like Harry to see. So far 3 of my amazing readers have. Let's see those ideas!!

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Ok, well I'm camping this week and this is probably the only chance I'll get to a computer until sunday. So I hope you guys are enjoyin the story and I'm workin on the next chapter.

Here's the poll for what you want to see happen in the next chapter.

[If you know which one YOU sent me, please do not vote for your's. Try and pick a different option.]

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Old 07-25-2008, 07:46 PM   #133 (permalink)
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I started reading this ages ago but somehow it slipped my mind...
Oh well, I'll just subcribe to it then...

Love it so far! Please post soon!

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Old 07-29-2008, 08:28 PM   #135 (permalink)
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AH... i want to know what Harry saw... EEP!!!

This is a wonderful story! i absolutely adore it!

PAMS PAMS PAMS!!

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Ok, I'm almost done chapter 11, but you guys have been so awesome that I'm giving you what I have done so far. I'm starting this chapter right where chapter 10 left off with Harry. Hope you like it!

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Chapter 11

Harry climbed into the Portrait just as Ginny and her friend were leaving. What is the matter with him? He thought. He’s never done this, why all of a sudden? I can’t believe he didn’t even talk to me about it. “Ron,” He shouted.
“He went to the dormitories,” Lavender said.
“Oh, thanks, Lavender.”

Harry ran up the stairs and into their dorms. “Ron, what is the matter with you? Why’d you hit Hermi---” Harry stopped short. He could not believe what he was seeing.

******

“Do you know if Harry talked to Ron, Ginny?” Hermione asked.
“I don’t know. I did see him run in to the common room.”
“Could you guys go find out? I don’t think I can wait any longer.”
“Yeah, sure. Let’s go Sabrina, I’ll get back to you as soon as I can,” Ginny said, with a smile.
“Thank you so much, Ginny. It was wonderful meeting you, Sabrina.”
Sabrina smiled and got up, her and Ginny walked to the portrait door and left. As they were walking down the hall, Ginny saw Blaise walking toward them with his friend Gabrielle.

“Hey, Ginny, is Draco in the common room?” He asked.
“Yeah, him and Hermione are,” Ginny said, “Why?”
“I gotta talk to him.”
“Oh, ok. I’ll see you later then.”
“See ya, Gin.”

Blaise and Gabrielle walked by them to the common room. As Ginny and Sabrina continued down the hall, they walked by a closet and heard a bump against the door. Ginny stopped, and tried to open the door, but it was locked.

“Is someone in there?” Ginny asked.
“Yes, please open the door,” a male voice said.
“Alohamora!” said Ginny, and the door swung open, and the person fell right out. Ginny looked at the boy in shock.
“Ginny, isn’t that...?” said Sabrina, pointing to him.
“Ron.”

******

Blaise and Gabrielle got to the picture and banged on it. Draco got up and answered it.
“Blaise? Gabrielle?” Draco said, surprised to see them both, “What are you two doing here?”
“Draco, we need to talk,” Gabrielle said, sternly.
“About what?”
“My cousin, Pansy.”
“Draco, who is that?” Hermione called.
“It’s Blaise and Gabrielle,” he called back, “come in guys, sit.”

All three of them walked in, and sat down.
“What’s going on?” Hermione asked.
“I don’t know, they want to talk to us about Pansy.”
“What about her?”
“Well,” Gabrielle started, “she was talking to me about how you guys were dating”
“Apparently, she went to the restricted section in the library and found a book with the polyjuice potion in it” Blaise continued, “stole all the ingredients from Snape’s closet, and took a vile of Veritaserum.”

******

Harry stared at Ron with shock and disbelief. Harry watched as Ron shrunk on the spot, his messy red hair turning black and growing shoulder length.

“Pansy Parkinson?!” Harry said.
Pansy turned and saw Harry staring at her, “Potter, what are you doing here?”
“This is my dorm, Parkinson. How could you do that?”
“Draco doesn’t deserve that filthy mudblood. He belongs with me.”
“Making Ron do something like that is not going to make Draco want you. Come on.”
“Where are we going?”

Harry grabbed Pansy’s arm and pulled her along side of him as they walked to the Head’s Common Room.

******

“What did she end up doing?” Draco asked.
“Well what she told me,” said Gabrielle, “was that she was going to find out how Ron felt about Hermione and try to use it against her. Pansy made some polyjuice potion and became Ron.”

There was a knock on the door and Hermione ran to get it. When she opened it, there was Harry gripping Pansy’s arm, hold her against him.

“Oh, my Harry, uhm come in.” Hermione said, as Harry and Pansy climbed through the portrait hole. “Draco, guess who just showed up.”
“Who?”
“Harry and Pansy.”
“Gabrielle!” Pansy shrieked, when she saw her cousin. “I didn’t know you’d be here.”
“Don’t try and be all ‘I love you cousin’ Pansy, you’re such a jerk. I still can’t believe you did that.” Gabrielle told her, “I am so embarrassed to even call you my cousin. That was a terrible thing.”
Draco got up and walked over to Pansy, “What were you thinking?”
Pansy looked up at him, with tears in her eyes, “I don’t know Draco, I just don’t want to see you with that disgusting mudblood. You’re a pureblood, Draco, you don’t need that filth.”

******

Ginny scrambled over to Ron and helped him up.

“Ron, how’d you get in here? You were just in the common room with a bloody nose.”
“Pansy locked me in here. So whatever happened, that was all her, I had nothing to do with it.”
“What did she do to you?”
“I don’t know, I don’t remember anything.”
Ginny looked at Sabrina, “Run and get Professor McGonagall.”

Sabrina nodded and headed for her office. Ginny and Ron sat on the floor next to each other and wait for Sabrina to return with the Headmistress. About ten minutes had passed when Sabrina came back, Professor McGonagall following right behind her.

“What has happened here?” McGonagall asked.
“It’s quite a long story Professor, but I will tell you that we must get everyone else that was part of this.” Ginny replied.
“Very well, where are they?”
“They are all most likely in the Head’s Common Room.”
“All right, Miss Dumbledore, please go there and tell everyone to report to my office immediately.”
“Yes, Professor.”
“Now, Miss Weasley, will you and your brother please come to my office, and we will wait for the rest to join us.”
“Yes, ma’am,” replied Ginny as she and Ron got up.
They followed Professor McGonagall to her office and waited.

******

“You have no right insulting Hermione any more then I do, Parkinson. I don’t care if she’s a mudblood anymore. My feelings for her are to strong for blood history to get in the way.”
“What will your father say about this, then, Draco? Surely he will not be pleased that his one and only son, is in love with a mudblood. ”
“I will deal with my father, now leave him out of this. You, nor anyone else, will speak a word of this.”
“But Draco I--”

Pansy was interrupted by another knock at the door, Blaise got up and got it this time.

“Who are you?” Blaise asked.
“I’m Sabrina, erm Dumbledore I’m a friend of Ginny’s. Please let me in.”
“Draco?”
“Yeah?”
“Come here.”
Draco got up and walked over to Blaise, “What?”
“You know her?” asked Blaise, pointing to Sabrina.
“Yeah, let her in. What's up Sabrina?”
“Uhm Pro-fess-or Mc-Gon-agal” Sabrina sputtered, catching her breath, “wants everyone to come to her office. Immediately.”
“Alright. Guys,” Draco called, “We have to go to the Headmistress’s office, immediately.”

All six of them got up from the couches, chairs, and the floor and followed Sabrina to McGonagall’s office.
******

Hope you liked it!! the rest will be coming soon!
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Pansy and polyjuice . . . that was brilliant! Loved it and can't wait till you post the rest of the chapter!
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oh that was brilliant... i love twists like that

can't wait for the rest!!!

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YAY!!!! Ron's alright love ron And Sabrina's in it! Well Pansy's cousin seems nicer then Pansy.. though that isn't that hard if you think about it! Prongs you're a genius... an absoloute genius

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Brilliant ! Absolutely brilliant ! You keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. One of the best stories around ! Go Prongs

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What a brilliant idea I TOTALLY never saw that coming, but it worked so well! Whose idea was it? Oh and poor Ron. But I'm glad it wasn't Ron that hit Hermione and it's kinda funny coz Draco actually punched Pansy! ha ha ha, serves her right.
Oh I loved it! I love this story!
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wow!!that wasnt ron!!*hugs ron!!!!It was amazing!1and that was quiet a surprise!!!PAMS!!PAMS!!
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hehe yeah, i thought that would be a pretty amazing twist.

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What a brilliant idea I TOTALLY never saw that coming, but it worked so well! Whose idea was it? Oh and poor Ron. But I'm glad it wasn't Ron that hit Hermione and it's kinda funny coz Draco actually punched Pansy! ha ha ha, serves her right.
Oh I loved it! I love this story!
haha i don't think anyone saw that coming Nik. it was the wonderful idea of my bff Padfoot. i asked her for an idea and that is what she came up with.

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Brilliant ! Absolutely brilliant ! You keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. One of the best stories around ! Go Prongs

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YAY!!!! Ron's alright love ron And Sabrina's in it! Well Pansy's cousin seems nicer then Pansy.. though that isn't that hard if you think about it! Prongs you're a genius... an absoloute genius

Now.... PAMS!!!

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of course sabrina is in it. it wouldn't be a crazy intense chapter without her! =D and pansy's cousin just happens to be one of my other reader's [Weasleylookalike] charrie, Gabrielle Messerschmidt.

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can't wait for the rest!!!

PAMS!

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Pansy and polyjuice . . . that was brilliant! Loved it and can't wait till you post the rest of the chapter!
well hopefully i will be done the rest of the chapter soon. and of course i'll let you know if anything changes. =]

while you're waiting i did happen to come across the most awesomest trailor. it happens to be the trailor to the upcoming harry potter movie, i found it on yahoo. if you guys didn't see it yet, here is your chance to!! enjoy!

xo, Prongs

p.s. don't forget to check out the iPhoenix site. like i said before, you do need a myspace to see it. but also myself and Padfoot are working on a non-myspace site.
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Yay! I just now remembered to come and see if you added on to your post and I was so excited that you incorporated Gabrielle into it! Thanks so much! You did a great job with her telling Pansy off. If I was writing it would've been a bit more harsh but that's just me and how I made Gabrielle. But, a