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08-30-2006, 09:48 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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Third |  Cedric Diggory ... Not Dead!? 2 - Sa16+
Cedric Diggory ... Not Dead 2
Chapter one: Month one - June
Hermione stayed around Cedric whenever she got the chance.
"Cedric," she said.
"Yes, Hermione Jane?" he asked, looking down at her as the sat by their tree by the lakeside.
"What happens with bad lungs and kidneys?" she asked.
"You slowly die because of the kidneys. You can live with one, but your life will be short because it can't clean out all the poisons from your blood on its own, it needs two. And with bad lungs as well, it'll be even shorter," he told her, not really wanting to talk about it.
She saw the look on his face and didn't press on the topic any further.
"When's your check up?" Cedric asked, breaking the fifteen minute silence.
"You mean dialysis?"
Cedric nodded.
"Tonight at dinner. Stupid mush for food I've got to eat too. Honestly she'd think I've lost my teeth, not got bad lungs and kidneys. Why can't my life be normal for once!"
Thinking she meant, "Why did I have to be a witch?!", he said nothing.
The cool breeze by the lake where they were sitting was biting like a Northerly chill. Hermione wriggled closer into Cedric to warm up. He made no move to hold her to him, just sat there against the tree, his arm limply draped over her.
'He's probably tired...' she thought, not realising he thought she hated being a witch and wished she'd never met him.
"Hermione. Are there times you wished you'd never found out you were a witch?" he asked.
"Sometimes yeah. But if I hadn't found that out, I wouldn't have met you," she said.
She glanced dow at her watch. "Shoot! I don't want to go yet!" she whined.
"You've got to go for your dialysis. It helps clean the poisons from your blood."
"Not only that, I've got to be treated like I'm athsmatic and have an inhaler! Even though on a muggle x-ray it looks like my lungs have been attacked with tuberculosis and ripped parts of my lungs to shreds," she said, trying to be humorous.
"Not funny," he told her flatly. "Go to your check up. I'll be up with you after dinner."
Hermione nodded and lifted herself up and kissed him on the cheek. She walked up to the catsle to the Hospital Wing.
"Why do I feel that I don't love her anymore?" he whispered to himself and got up to walk to the caastle to the Great Hall for dinner.
Harry and Ron saw him enter alone and called him to them.
Cedric walked to them and sat beside them.
"Where's Hermione?" Ron asked.
Cedric hesitated. Harry and Ron have no idea of Hermione's year and a half left of life.
"She's gone to do homework or read or something, I don't know with her," he said.
"Been doing that a lot," Harry said curiously. "Since the mid-May break. I haven't seen her at meals as often as we're all used to."
"Harry. This is Hermione we're talking about. Book mad, schoolwork mad Mione who the three of us love," Ron said.
"Yeah, I know. What if something's wrong?" Harry asked.
"She's fine," Cedric reasurred.
~In The Hospital Wing ~
"Where's Cedric?" she whispered, as she lay on the bed, wires attached to her bare body under her blouse for a blood cleaning machine that was her dialysis. Attached to her arm and abdomen were tubes supplying blood and liquidized food.
An hour had passed and Cedric still hadn't turned up.
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the rest of chapter one soon xxxxxx
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08-31-2006, 04:41 PM
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| | Augurey
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Madame Pomfrey walked to her and took the wires and tbes from her body.
"Matron, what will happen to me over time? Will it be treated?" the 5th year asked.
"You will get uncontrollably skinnier. The food provided in here won't give you much to work on. I don't think you will be eating much. The ling and kidney can be replaced, but I'm afraid your magic allergy will stay." she said
Hermione looked scandalized. No more studying? No more great magical career at the end of school?
"There must be something!" she cried.
"I'll try my best, Miss Granger. I'm making no promises though. The best I can do for your academic record, Miss Granger is have a talk with Professor McGonagall to let you off the more magical lessons."
"I'm surrounded by the stuff though."
"Keeping you away from the more magic around will not hurt you."
"Stupid allergy!" she grumbled. "I might have wanted to look skinny in the past but this is ridiculous! I'm going to look anorexic!" She walked to the Gryffindor Common Room.
"Hermione why weren't you at dinner?" Ron asked.
"I was in the library." she said simply, taking a seat next to Harry.
"You've been going to the library an awful lot." Lavendar said, sitting on Ron's lap and running her hand through his hair.
"Lav, who'd pay attention to an ugly book lover like her? Diggory's only using her." Parvati giggled. She pulled Hermione off the sofa and sat in her place, passionately kissing Harry.
Neither boy bothered to stop the girls.
Hermione shakily got up andran up to her dormitory. She fell on her bed and let out a strangled sob into her pillow, disturbing Draco and Ginny.
Ginny slipped from her bed and walked to Hermione.
"Hermione, are you ok?" she asked.
"I-I'm fine..." she whispered.
Ginny didn't look convinced, and left her side and back to Draco.
A few weeks later, Cedric walked Hermione to her Astronomy class.
"I have something to tell you at lunch. I'll come with you to the Hospital Wing." he said.
Hermione nodded and kissed him, unaware that Cedric was to break up with her.
She went to take a seat next to Harry and Ron, who smiled slightly at her, but Lavendar and Parvati swiftly moved from their original places and to the boys' sides. They grinned smugly at her.
She moved to the back of the class and remained hidden from the teacher and the students. All except two.
Seamus Finnegan and Draco Malfoy.
She took out her quill and parchment and took down the notes from the board. She didn't participate in the lesson, as she usually would do.
Madame Pomfrey walked to her and took the wires and tbes from her body.
"Matron, what will happen to me over time? Will it be treated?" the 5th year asked.
"You will get uncontrollably skinnier. The food provided in here won't give you much to work on. I don't think you will be eating much. The ling and kidney can be replaced, but I'm afraid your magic allergy will stay." she said
Hermione looked scandalized. No more studying? No more great magical career at the end of school?
"There must be something!" she cried.
"I'll try my best, Miss Granger. I'm making no promises though. The best I can do for your academic record, Miss Granger is have a talk with Professor McGonagall to let you off the more magical lessons."
"I'm surrounded by the stuff though."
"Keeping you away from the more magic around will not hurt you."
"Stupid allergy!" she grumbled. "I might have wanted to look skinny in the past but this is ridiculous! I'm going to look anorexic!" She walked to the Gryffindor Common Room.
"Hermione why weren't you at dinner?" Ron asked.
"I was in the library." she said simply, taking a seat next to Harry.
"You've been going to the library an awful lot." Lavendar said, sitting on Ron's lap and running her hand through his hair.
"Lav, who'd pay attention to an ugly book lover like her? Diggory's only using her." Parvati giggled. She pulled Hermione off the sofa and sat in her place, passionately kissing Harry.
Neither boy bothered to stop the girls.
Hermione shakily got up andran up to her dormitory. She fell on her bed and let out a strangled sob into her pillow, disturbing Draco and Ginny.
Ginny slipped from her bed and walked to Hermione.
"Hermione, are you ok?" she asked.
"I-I'm fine..." she whispered.
Ginny didn't look convinced, and left her side and back to Draco.
A few weeks later, Cedric walked Hermione to her Astronomy class.
"I have something to tell you at lunch. I'll come with you to the Hospital Wing." he said.
Hermione nodded and kissed him, unaware that Cedric was to break up with her.
She went to take a seat next to Harry and Ron, who smiled slightly at her, but Lavendar and Parvati swiftly moved from their original places and to the boys' sides. They grinned smugly at her.
She moved to the back of the class and remained hidden from the teacher and the students. All except two.
Seamus Finnegan and Draco Malfoy.
She took out her quill and parchment and took down the notes from the board. She didn't participate in the lesson, as she usually would do.
After the lesson, she walked to the door of the class and Lavendar "accidentally" triiped her to the ground as she walked past. Cedric saw what happened and rushed to her to help her up.
"You ok?" he asked.
She nodded. She looked slighty skinnier. Her once well-fitted clothes looked three times bigger on her now.
They both walked to the Hospital Wing.
"What did you want to say?" she asked as she was wired up to her blood cleaning machine.
"I don't think we should be together anymore." he said quietly.
"What?" she asked in disbelief.
"We could stay friends." he said, pleading with her.
Hermione nodded in disappointment and hurt.
"I didn't mean to hurt you." he said hugging her.
This is going to be a long Eighteen months... they both thought at the same time
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08-31-2006, 07:21 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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^^ that was me, i couldn't log out earlier | |
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08-31-2006, 10:45 PM
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|  Dog Star OwnerHippogriff
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New/first reader!  Poor Hermy. I can't believe she's allergic to magic. How could Ced break up with her?? PAMS!
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09-01-2006, 12:17 AM
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| | Dugbog
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I feel realy really really bad for Hermione! PAMS | |
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09-01-2006, 06:19 PM
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Aw poor Hermy. She stuck by Ced and then he abandones her!! PAMS!! | |
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09-05-2006, 11:48 AM
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| | Clabbert
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oh i read part of the 1st one and lost it. | |
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09-05-2006, 12:00 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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09-05-2006, 12:10 PM
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| | Clabbert
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thanks its all great i finished it i love it. | |
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09-06-2006, 12:20 AM
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| | Jobberknoll
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The sequel yay! *Reads it* Nooooo! Cedric you idiot!!!!! Don't die Hermy!  | 
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09-09-2006, 09:58 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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i'll have an update soon xx | |
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09-12-2006, 11:04 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
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Hope so, or I'll go crazy!!! Oh wait, already there! WOOOOHOOOOO!!!!! | |
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09-19-2006, 06:00 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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i'll post soon x | |
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09-21-2006, 04:53 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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every chapter is a month, ok xxx chapter 2 up soon xxx | |
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09-21-2006, 05:25 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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Chapter 2: Month 2- July
Two days had passed since Cedric and Hermione boke up. Hermione was able to go to meals now, but arranged dialysis in the evenings, not affecting her nightly patrol around the corridors as Head Girl.
She was excused from her more magical lessons like Charms class, Advanced Potions, Defense against the Dark Arts etc, much to her indignation. She protested to her Head of House, but it didn't make it better for herself.
Draco, Pansy, Blaise, Millicent, Cedric and Ginny were the only ones who noticed Hermione's pityful skinniness, only Cedric knew what was causing her skinniness, and the four Slytherins that were once horrible to her were nice to her. Not completely, but they were at least having civil conversations with her without the word "Mudblood" coming up.
Hermione was in the Gryffindor Common Room and the warm, Monday afternoon, reading the previous night's entry to her diary.
Dear diary,
Today, Harry and Ron didn't even look at me. Their girlfriends were nowhere near them. I need them now nore than ever, seeing as i virtually have no-one.
What did i do for nearly everyone I care about to hate me? My best friends hate me for no reason, Cedric dumped me for no reason-or at least, he didn't give a valid reason. My family barely talk to me ever since they told me about my illnesses. Oh well, I won't be here when I'm eighteen. I turn seventeen in two months' time, I would've barely started life when I'm gone.
I don't know what I'd do if I didn't have a diary to pour my heart out to and relieve my stress. I really don't.
She closed the book and set it aside next to Crookshanks who was curled into a giant ball of orange fluff, purring contently as he slept.
She took out her quill and her notebook and started to write a song as it came to her head.
You had me
You lost me
You're wasted
You cost me
I don't want you here messing with my mind
Spitting in my eyes and I still see
Tried to keep me down
I'm breaking free
I don't want no part in your next fix
Someone needs to tell you this is it
Hey listen you'll be missin'
Out on all my love and my kissing
Make your mistakes on your own time
When you come down you're just no good to have around
Instead of making money you took mine
Chorus
You had me
You lost me
You're wasted
You cost me
I don't want you here messing with my mind
I've realized in time
that my eyes are not blind
I've seen it before
I'm taking back my life
You tried to trade on my naivete
But the things you do and say embarrass me
See once upon a time I was your fool
But the one I leave behind is you
Hey listen you'll be missin'
Out on all my love and my kissing
Make your mistakes on your own time
When you come down you're just no good to have around
Instead of making money you took mine
Chorus
Vodka and a packet of cigarettes
That's all it used to be but now
You're sniffing on snow when you're feeling low
Suffocating dreams that could have been
Maybe for a minute I was down with that
But it didn't take long for me to see the light
You swore you had control of it
But when I stepped back you slipped on your supply
Chorus
Taking it back I'm taking it back
Taking back my life
Taking it back I'm taking it back
Taking back my life
Ain't nobody got no business stressing all the time
Taking it back I'm taking it back
Taking back my life
Chorus
Taking it back I'm taking it back
Taking back my life
Taking it back I'm taking it back
Taking back my life
Ain't nobody got no business stressing all the time
Taking it back I'm taking it back
Taking back my life
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next part of chapter 2 up soon xxxx Song belongs to Joss Stone, though because this is set in the 1990's, the song, You had me, was never out, so it's as though she's made it up
Last edited by ZodiacGirl : 09-21-2006 at 05:27 PM.
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09-21-2006, 05:29 PM
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Aw, poor Hermy. Harry and Ronnie have ditched her too. Stupid people. But at least the Slytherins are being nicer. PAMS!! | |
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09-21-2006, 06:02 PM
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| | Dugbog
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cool keep goin | |
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09-21-2006, 11:35 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
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Whoa!!!! Keep goin!!! | |
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09-22-2006, 11:17 PM
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| Dog Star Owner Hippogriff
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Why Harry and Ronniekins??? Bad Ron. Bad Ron! PAMS!!!
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09-23-2006, 03:11 PM
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HEY! I didn't know that you were doing a squel! *scohlds* PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
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09-23-2006, 04:27 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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ahm showwi! (sorry in a baby voice lol) i forgot to PM you, showwi! | |
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09-23-2006, 10:38 PM
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| | Ashwinder
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i'll post more soon xxx | |
