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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | After The End - Sa16+ Hello, I'm Thomas, and this is my first fan fiction. I hope you all enjoy it. I would also like to say thanks to the many people that write these fan fictions as it is no easy buisseness. And so we go. Chapter 1: The Speech
I’ve had enough trouble for a lifetime... Harry was lying on his four poster bed in his dormitory, it was
early in the morning (the sun was hardly up) and he could still hear everyone cheering in the basement.
He knew that it wouldn’t last long. Soon it would be time for them all to mourn over the many casualties.
Harry sighed. They had lost so many the previous night, but at the same time gained so much. He stared
over at the half eaten sandwich on his bedside table when he heard a knock at the door. A pretty, red
haired girl stepped into the room looking tired.
“I thought you would be awake,” she said. Harry felt her lips gently brush against his feeling what he
wished he could have felt many times over the previous months.
“Hello Ginny. How are you this morning?” Harry stated as he sat up leaving room for Ginny to sit on
the end of the bed.
“I wish I could answer to that,” she replied quietly. Harry knew exactly what she meant. He had been
feeling the same way ever since he had disposed of the elder wand. Euphoria from knowing that HE was
finally gone. At the same time he felt aggrieved knowing that so many of the people closest to him had
died in the battle to protect him. He knew that he must go down to the great hall and make a speech,
which he figured was why Ginny was here in the first place.
“Are you sure you’re ready for this?” she asked reading his mind.
“I’ll never be ready, but you know as much as I do that it must be done.” With that he silently got up
and walked back downstairs with Ginny thinking over what he had to say. As he entered the hall people
all around cheered. He didn’t acknowledge this as he walked towards the center of the table where he
had seen Dumbledore make speeches so many times before. As he stood up all eyes went to him, all talk
went quiet.
“We stand here today, with a sense of accomplishment knowing that Voldemort is gone. You should
have no fear of the name anymore, for this time he is gone for good. Yes we should cheer for we have
done what many have dreamed of, but at the same time we must mourn, for we lost many brave people,
all of whom I would recognize as many of my dearest friends. As we attempt to go back to our normal
lives, we should make sure we remember how bravely many people fought to bring us to this day, for
without them, there would be no life. So now I leave you with one last message,” as he stopped
everything was quiet, “Love.”
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02-17-2008, 08:44 PM
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | just so everyone knows, that was more of a prelude into the actual story. I hope to get the next chapter up within the week . |
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02-18-2008, 01:07 AM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | this is awsome more post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!  |
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| DRFC Co-Pressie K.O. Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity b> Griffin
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | Quote:
Originally Posted by voldemort&88 this is awsome more post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!  | thanks you very much, i hope to get the next post up in the next couple of days, im currently going through the editting process of it and am hoping to finish ASAP Quote:
Originally Posted by Little Trooper This is good. Please post more soon. | I'm glad you like it  |
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02-19-2008, 05:12 PM
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | Here it is everyone. I was sick today, and therefore had the day to finish working on this, so know that I'm here I leave you with chapter 2. Voila. Chapter 2: The Funeral Of Remus Lupin
It was a full week since that speech had ended, and now Harry sat eating breakfast in the burrow.
“Pass the eggs,” Ron asked him gloomily. As Harry had predicted, the euphoria of Voldemort’s death had
ended to be replaced with a sense of gloom in everyone. Harry wasn’t sure what he should do. He had
never been more confused in his life [and with a life like his THAT is saying something]. Today was an
even sadder day. He had to go mourn over one of his closest friends. He couldn’t believe that Remus was
dead. He knew it was true, yet still he wanted to hope that his death was all just a bad nightmare.
“We better get going now if we want to be on time,” Mrs. Weasley stated sadly.
“May I have a word with you Harry,” a voice said. It was Mr. Weasley. Harry went over to talk to him
wondering what he wanted.
“You do know that you can stay with us for as long as you want?” Mr. Weasley asked. He meant it too.
Harry was glad he had been asked this finally. The Burrow was one of the few places the Harry had ever
loved to be.
“Are you sure?” Harry asked in reply, only for the sake of being polite, “you don’t have to do this you
know.”
“After all you’ve done for our family? Of course I have to do this, you ARE part of our family. Besides,
where else would you go?” He finished determined.
“Thank you Mr. Weasley, you have no idea how greatful I am for this. We better get going though, Mrs.
Weasley is right, we don’t want to be late,” and with that him and Arthur walked out the door towards
the ministry car that was waiting to take them. Harry sat down in the roomy backseat beside Ginny, who
was silent. She reached for his hand. He let her take it, knowing that it would make him feel better, the
soft feel of her skin on his. The car drove away amid the morning dew. It was quite a beautiful day
outside, on any other day, chances are they would be playing quiditch in the orchard. They sat in the
car silently for the next hour. It was a fairly short drive to the funeral, but under the circumstances it
seemed much longer. As they stepped out of the car, Harry remembered the day before. It had been
Tonks’ funeral at this very place. Ginny stepped out of the car still holding Harry’s hand. It still gave him
a sense of comfort and he never wanted her to leave his side. They stepped towards where the
procession would be taking place. Andromeda Tonks came up to Harry with a small baby with purple hair
in her hands.
“Hello Teddy,”Harry said softly taking the baby from her. “You look so much like your father. Except for
your hair. That’s...definitely your mother’s. They were both very brave people and you should be very
proud of what they did.” Harry felt as if he was talking more to himself than he was the baby, but he
didn’t care. “And how are you today Andromeda?” Harry asked.
“Very well considering...” she spoke softly her voice cracking. Molly came up and comforted her as the
funeral was about to begin.
With Teddy in one arm, and Ginny in the other, Harry watched as the casket of his good friend Remus
Lupin was carried in. Ginny was crying. This was one of the few times Harry had seen this very tough girl
cry, but he didn’t say anything. They watched as the funeral went on. Harry finally had a sense of
closure, knowing that he wouldn’t be coming back. All four of the Marauders had finally come to rest.
Harry felt a sense of disappointment for Teddy, knowing that he would face a similar fate as his own. But
that wasn’t true. Teddy had a loving grandmother, and of course a caring godfather [that being himself].
But Teddy’s life still wouldn’t be exactly a normal one, and Harry knew this. He watched the body lower
into the ground. Somehow his sorrows seemed to be buried along with the body.
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02-24-2008, 09:01 PM
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | update : the next chapter won't be up for a while. This is due to the fact that I have a school project that I have to do. Give it a week or so and it should be back.
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| DRFC Co-Pressie K.O. Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity b> Griffin
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Keylee May Magical Games & Sports | That is a great chapter. Love all the emotion that you put into it it was great. So can't ait for the new chapter. |
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02-28-2008, 05:38 AM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | Hope you are feeling better.
That was very sad. There so was so much emotion and i love it!
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | Quote:
Originally Posted by Little Trooper That is a great chapter. Love all the emotion that you put into it it was great. So can't ait for the new chapter. | I'm glad you liked the chapter. I wasn't sure how much emotion would be too much. I hope you like the next chapter, which should hopefully be up by march 7. Quote:
Originally Posted by voldemort&88 Hope you are feeling better.
That was very sad. There so was so much emotion and i love it!
Voldyxoxox  | thanks very much, i hope you enjoy the rest. |
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| DRFC Co-Pressie K.O. Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity b> Griffin
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Keylee May Magical Games & Sports | It was the perfect amount of emotion for me. I loved it. So can't wait for March 7th. |
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03-01-2008, 06:17 PM
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | One More Update - Due to the fact that i have virtually NO homework this weekend, I hope to have it up by later today, or tomorrow. |
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | And now it is here! i thought I would leave a little...suspense with this.
and without further ado, hear is. Chapter 3: Part 1: Beggining Again
The next day, The Burrow already seemed a much cheerier place, even so much earlier in the morning,
though the sense of loss still loomed. George was staying at the burrow. He was extremely depressed at
the loss of his twin. Harry knew that he shouldn’t bother him about it, but at the same time he should
comfort him. As he lay in bed he was thinking it all through when there was a knock at the door.
Hermione Granger entered the room in her traveling robes.
“Hello Hermione,” Harry said sleepily, still half asleep. He knew what she was here for, but he
figured he would let her tell him herself.
“Hello Harry,” she said calmly, “I’m leaving to Australia today with Ron, as you probably already
know. I haven’t seen my parents in so long now, I really think I need to find them as soon as possible. I
thought I would just come in and say good bye.”
“I’m certain that you’ll be fine. You’re a great witch, and Ron’s a great wizard.”
“Thanks Harry, anyways, Ron’s waiting outside. He told me to say goodbye for him.”
“Good luck finding your parents,” Harry said as Hermione walked out his bedroom door. This left
him with something to think about. He needed to talk with Ginny, and he knew that now was the perfect
time. He walked out of his own room (it was very early in the morning), and quietly made his way into
Ginny’s room. He walked in and she was laying in bed with her eyes open, as if she was expecting Harry
was going to come.
“Good Morning,” she said with a slight smile sitting up. Harry took a seat on the end of her bed.
“There’s something I need to talk to you about,” Harry said. He’d carefully thought it through
the night before. “I think that Mcgonagall is going to ask everyone to redo last year’s schooling.
Hopefully after that we can all get our lives back on track.”
“Everything will be set back a year. In a few years it will all pay off though. Anyways, how
does this affect us?”...
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Santana Venezula Department of Mysteries | Well I would like to say that this FF so far is really great!! But I was wondering if I can give a little advice 
Your paragraphing is kind of hard to follow. It looks kind of jumbled. I can peer edit for you if you would like. 
I have a few writing pieces floating around SS. So if you would like some samples of my work, ask 
If you feel this is just an annoying post, then forget what I said. 
But if you would like some help PM me 
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | oops, i just realized that. What happened is that i typed it on wordperfect before posting it, and then when i paste it onto here it messes it all up. No I don't think this is an anoying post, and i will try to fix it up a bit, and if i do need any further help from there, i will ask.
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| Formerly: ~*just_me(lily_evans)*~ Latin Language ModConstant Vigilance!O_O AWAKE! Acromantula
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Daniel Kevin Wenride Magical Games & Sports | aww This is a very deeeep story, Mufasa. I like it. I sort of teared up at one point. Okay, several points.
PAMS! *subscribes* |
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03-08-2008, 05:19 AM
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | That was a great post. Can the next one be longer PLEase?!!!!!!!!
Thanks
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | Quote:
Originally Posted by voldemort&88 That was a great post. Can the next one be longer PLEase?!!!!!!!!
Thanks
Voldy  | The next post is going to [probably] be the same length as that post (sorry) , this is only because its a two part chapter. The post after that (chapter 4) should be longer than those two posts put together (fingers crossed)
Yours Truly,
Thomas
Update: Due to the fact that i get a week off of school (Yay for Spring Break!), I will be [hopefully] able to get two more posts up in the coming week.
Once again,
Thomas
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| | Hippocampus
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | Thank you very very much!!!!!!!!!!
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| DRFC Co-Pressie K.O. Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity b> Griffin
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | Firstly I would like to say to all, Thank you for reading. I was scared I would have no readers, but I am glad you all proved me wrong. Secondly I would like to apoligize for making you wait for this. I was kind of caught up with other things in life and didn't get the chance to ever finish editting it. Thirdly I would once again like to apoligize for leaving you all hanging after part 1 of this chapter. And finally, here it is. Enjoy! Chapter 3: Part 2: Beggining Again
An hour later, the two of them walked downstairs to grab some breakfast.
Ginny looked a little sad, but at the same time she looked like she was
happy. Harry looked...well...like Harry. Mrs. Weasley noticed Ginny looked
different, but she just assumed it was from the depressing day before. “What
would you kids like for breakfast?” she asked politely while making the bacon.
“Apparently we’ll be having bacon,” Ginny said with a slight smile.
“Yes, of course, but what would you like WITH the bacon?” asked
Mrs. Weasley once again this time with a smile herself. Ginny looked ready to
retaliate with some sly remark, but Harry decided he better say something
before she got the chance.
“How about eggs?” was all he could think of saying. Of course,
bacon and eggs were a tradition together. Ginny looked at him appearing
almost angry that she didn’t get to retaliate before they both burst out
laughing. Mrs. Weasley joined them.
“What’s so funny?” asked a voice from the stairs. They all
immediately stopped laughing. George took a seat on the other side of Harry.
Harry couldn’t get used to seeing George like this. He looked so...gloomy
when he wasn’t accompanied by his twin. “Good morning Harry,” he said with
a slight smile. Everyone stopped breathing in surprise. None of them had
seen George smile in weeks.
“Good Morning George,” Harry said trying to disguise his happiness
that George was starting to cheer up. George noticed this and smiled himself.
“Can I talk to you upstairs Harry?” George asked politely a few
minutes later after they had all finished eating.
“Of course,” said Harry shortly. He quickly followed George up the
stairs. George led them into his and Fred’s old room.
“Harry,” George started. “All you children are going to be going
back to school this year probably. With Fred gone, I’m going to need help
reopening the shop. Seeing as you’re already kind of part of it, I figured that
you could come in on the weekends to help set up.”
“You dragged me all the way up here for that?” Harry said with a
grin,”Of course I’ll help! All you needed to say was ‘Harry help me at the
store’ and I would of been there.” To Harry’s great surprise George let out a
laugh. This was the first true laugh he had let out in weeks. Things were
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03-10-2008, 11:35 PM
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| | Hippocampus
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I am so happy george is taking again!!!!!
thank so much for the post
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Daniel Kevin Wenride Magical Games & Sports | aww that's happy. George isn't gloomy anymore he's more like George!
PAMS, Mufasa! This is great. |
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03-12-2008, 04:07 PM
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| K.O. Trevor Ashwinder
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Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | Hello again everyone. I hope you're all enjoying this story. I thought it would be nice to notify you that, after 7 chapters I am likely going to rap up the story and bring in the sequel called "After The Ending".
Wishing you all a good day,
Thomas. |
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