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10-20-2007, 10:26 PM
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| | Erumpent
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|  When It Was Me - (Song Fic) Sa16+
Hey yall! Its ya girl Tara back with my 30th FF here on SS! Woot! Well, anyways, as usual, this is a Dramione one-shot. Hope you like it!
XOXO,
Tara
This FF includes lyrics to the song When It Was Me by Paula DeAnda.
I laid on my bed, crying my eyes out, trying my best to drown out the sorrows Draco had put me through. It seemed just like yesterday when we started going out in sixth year. Now today was the last day of school of my seventh year, and I’ve never felt so alone. Earlier, I got so many awards for all of my accomplishments. Sure, I’m the brightest witch of age and everything else they tell me, but it’s still hard to be so in love with someone, and then they suddenly don’t feel the same. He left me for some girl named Adriana. It really hurts, especially seeing the two of them together, and seeing the look in Draco’s eyes that I too used to receive. But it had all changed.
The music wasn’t helping. So I cranked up the volume on my iPod and flipped to a different song I knew too well.
She's got green eyes and she's 5'5",
Long brown hair all down her back.
Cadillac truck,
So the hell what.
What's so special about that?
She used to model, she's done some acting,
So she weighs a buck 'o 5.
And I guess she's alright if perfection’s what you like…
And I'm not jealous, no I'm not.
I just want everything she's got.
You look at her so amazed,
I remember way back when you used to look at me that way.
Tell me what makes her so much better than me?
What makes her just everything that I can never be?
What makes her your every dream and fantasy?
Because I can remember when it was me…
And now you don't feel the same.
I remember you would shiver every time I said your name.
You said nothing felt as good as when you gaze into my eyes.
Now you don't care I'm alive.
How did we let the fire die?
And I'm not jealous, no I'm not.
I just want everything she's got
You look at her so amazed,
I remember way back when you used to look at me that way…
What makes her so much better than me?
What makes her just everything that I can never be?
What makes her your every dream and fantasy?
Because I can remember when it was me…
That made you smile (me)
That made you laugh (me)
Me that made you happier than you have ever been, oh me
That was your world (me)
Your perfect girl
Nothing about me has changed
That's why I'm here wondering
What makes her so much better than me?
What makes her just everything that I can never be?
What makes her your every dream and fantasy?
Because I can remember when it was me.
What makes her so much better than me?
What makes her just everything that I can never be?
What makes her your every dream and fantasy?
Because I can remember when it was me
When it was me
When it was me
When it was me
“Hermione, it’s time to go now darling,” my mother called to me.
I got up off my bed and straightened up my robes. I looked around at the dorm I had stayed in for seven years. I grabbed my trunk and left silently, following my parents out of the Gryffindor common room. I walked down the hall towards the front doors, and I passed Draco and Adriana too busy snogging each other to even worry about the others all around them. A single tear fell down my cheek as I gave the boy I loved so much one more look. My parents were already out the doors, headed towards the train that would take us back to King’s Cross. I looked at him and then stepped out of Hogwarts. I remember Draco, I thought to myself. I remember when it was me… | 
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10-21-2007, 02:10 AM
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|  Fan Fiction ElfCrup
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Aw, that was so sad 
Loved it tho. Great work as usual, twinneh xD
Last edited by MalfoyzBeloved : 10-21-2007 at 02:10 AM.
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10-21-2007, 03:24 AM
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aww thanx twinneh! Glad you liked it. | |
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10-21-2007, 11:21 AM
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Awwww!! It was another sad one shot of yours! It was sooo sweet and saaad!! But I luvved it!!!
*heads off to read your other one shot  *
-*~ Shirel ~*-
Last edited by shirelbb : 10-21-2007 at 11:21 AM.
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10-21-2007, 12:35 PM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx. glad ya liked it! | |
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10-21-2007, 01:22 PM
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Great job!
.:Adrienne:. | |
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10-21-2007, 01:24 PM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx Adge! | |
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10-21-2007, 06:07 PM
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aww how sad. really good though! 
-Bells ♥♥ | |
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10-21-2007, 06:08 PM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx Bells. Glad you liked it! | |
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10-22-2007, 05:48 AM
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Excellent writing though, sadly, another tragic ending! Tara, you write extremely well! | |
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10-23-2007, 02:03 AM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx Linda! Glad you liked it. | |
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10-26-2007, 01:24 PM
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Awwww Tara that's so lovely! 
*Pets Hermione*  *Pokes Adriana* 
-Holliee xx | |
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10-26-2007, 10:16 PM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx Hollz! | |
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