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03-01-2005, 04:57 PM
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| Formerly: Darkangel77 Escapee from Azkaban Crup
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gavin Lupe Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Marek Callum Magical Transportation | It Takes Two PG-13 Well, I wanted to make a fanfiction about the Marauders. ^^ It won't be PG 13 until the middle, or so. But this is only the first part, the Prologue. Plot: As the start of the Marauders' 5th year is arriving, a new student appears. Awful secrets she has, disappearing whenever. Sometimes in the middle of the night. All the Marauders know is that she disappears when a cresent moon appears. Strange, yes. So when the Marauders try and investigate, they find out things they never wished to know. Author: Darkangel77 Story: It Takes Two Prologue It was a dreary night, with only half a moon shining, 9 years ago. Leaves falling from the trees, announcing that autumn was arriving, and that All Hallow's Eve was yet to come. As for one family, it seemed like the horror had already come. You see, this was no ordinary family. They were strong believer's of the dark side. As another leave fell, they became more and more of a believer. A six year old girl was watching her father get murdered. As for her mother, she was already dead. Loanshark wizards and witches, is what her family was. Now, by the looks of it, horrile looking creatures had come to murder her father. As the night grew darker, one last scream from her father was heard, as the group turned to the little girl. With a sudden burst of light, the small child gave a shriek and fell down, unconcious. A few hours later, healers were at the scene. They pronouced the small child's father dead, but her, still alive. With out much farther inspections, they rushed her to Saint Mungo's hospital. Aye, if they would've looked more closer, they would've seen a small cresent moon with thorns around it, engraved on the girl's right wrist. If they looked closer, it would've probably saved many people's lives. *** End of the prologue. I will post the next part as soon as I can. Please Read and Review. |
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03-09-2005, 10:45 PM
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Location: Manchester British Pride! Join Date: Jun 2004
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Originally Posted by Darkangel77 If they looked closer, it would've probably saved many people's lives. | ooh sounds very interesting!
Good start!
*wait's for more* |
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03-17-2005, 11:58 PM
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| Formerly: Darkangel77 Escapee from Azkaban Crup
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Gavin Lupe Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Marek Callum Magical Transportation | Ugh. Too much schoolwork. Sorry I couldn't post until now! >>;; Anyway, here's more: It was nearing the end of the summer, when all the Hogwarts students are suppose to arrive at King's Cross. A messy black-haired boy with glasses, a tall boy with long black hair, a medium sized boy with dirty blonde hair, and a very small, and very blonde boy all met at the station. By they way they greeted each other, you could see they were close friends.
The sun was high in the sky, as many wizards and witches grew at King's Cross. It was very crowded, especially on Platform 9 3/4. Today was the day that the students from Hogwarts came back to school. First years mingled with seventh years, though, more cautiously.
A tall boy with messy black hair, glasses, and deep hazel eyes shielded his eyes to look around. You could see that he didn't care much for the pushing and shoving, but, looking around for someone.
His eyes lit up as another tall boy, this time with long black hair and mischievious dark eyes came up to him. His jeans were dirty, as if he fell, and his shirt was wrinkled. He grinned, then muttered something to the boy with glasses, and together they looked out in the crowd again.
This time, two people came. A medium sized boy with dirty blonde hair, and brown eyes seemed to be absorbed in a book. His clothes were neat on his body, and he had an interesting way of reading and walking at the same time.
As for the other boy, he seemed hidden in the crowd. As short as he was, he stood out by his bright blonde hair and shining, excited blue eyes. He seemed so eager at something, that he bounced instead of walked.
As soon as the four boys were together, they started to whisper. The first one, the boy in glasses, grinned at the boy with long hair.
"Lookit Lupin, Sirius," he said slyly, turning to look at the boy absorbed in the book.
The boy with long hair - Sirius - also grinned, then playfully punched the boy with glasses. "Aw, leave Remus alone. You know his mother's strict with books."
The boy with the book - Remus Lupin - finally looked up, his brown eyes looking confused. "Eh - Oh. Hi, Sirius... James... Peter."
The boy with glasses - James - grinned again and nodded to the small boy - Peter. "Watch out for him. If he gets too over-excited he might wet his pants."
Sirius snickered loudly, Remus gave a small smile, but Peter stared blankly at James, then stared behind him.
James instantly felt annoyed. "What is it?" He asked exasperatly.
Peter pointed to something behind him, then opened his jaw in awe.
Sirius turned, then shrugged. "So what, Pettigrew. It's just a girl," he said, then turned and added quickly, "A very cute girl."
Peter shook his head, his blue eyes bulging excitedly. "No. Look at her wrist! It's a mark."
---- Hope you guys liked that post! |
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03-22-2005, 11:36 AM
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Location: Manchester British Pride! Join Date: Jun 2004
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| Awesome Post! Love Sirius reaction to the girl! XD
It's ok we all get school work
*is procrastinating getting dressed, and actually doing work* |
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04-26-2005, 11:53 PM
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| SARKCatch a Falling StarAmberlina Chimaera
Location: In a house Join Date: Feb 2004
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| This fanfiction has been inactive for over a month, please PM myself (stardancer488) or san (madame charmin) if you wish for your FF to be "active" again. *moved* |
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04-29-2005, 07:35 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2005
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| Please Post More Love This FF!!!!!! |
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07-02-2005, 05:36 AM
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Location: Comforting Moony, because Padfoot is gone Join Date: Jan 2004
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| Very interesting! I'll have another serving of PAMS, please! LOL! |
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08-11-2005, 02:16 PM
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Location: Bradford, West Yorkshire, England Join Date: Aug 2005
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| That was cool. You'll just have to write some more soon. |
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