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Old 06-29-2006, 05:12 PM   #201 (permalink)
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omg no you have to post sooner than next week! arrgh! that was sooo passionate and well, everyone else is saying it so ; HAWT!!! omg see people, Draco is the best!! hehe

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Old 06-29-2006, 05:31 PM   #202 (permalink)
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yay!!!!! lol. PAMSOID means Post Another Message Soon Or Ill Die. lol. i feel soo special!! *originalness* lol. well, i am really likin this fanfic..lots. keep it up!
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Old 06-30-2006, 01:58 AM   #203 (permalink)

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OMG! Cookie! That was....wow! Definitely one of the best kiss scenes I've read. Excellent job with the debating dilemma with Hermione with her trying to decide to stay or pull away from him.

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Hey, tone it down, Mione,” he said slyly and softly, moving closer to me.
*sighs* How cute! I love how he used her nickname!

I so love your style of writing! You have such a way with words that creates the perfect atmosphere.
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Old 06-30-2006, 02:20 AM   #204 (permalink)
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omg no you have to post sooner than next week! arrgh! that was sooo passionate and well, everyone else is saying it so ; HAWT!!! omg see people, Draco is the best!! hehe

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Will it help to say that I will post on Sunday? Maybe it sounds sooner...
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That is very original indeed! I was wondering what it stood for...lol.

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OMG! Cookie! That was....wow! Definitely one of the best kiss scenes I've read. Excellent job with the debating dilemma with Hermione with her trying to decide to stay or pull away from him.

*sighs* How cute! I love how he used her nickname!

I so love your style of writing! You have such a way with words that creates the perfect atmosphere.
Hee hee..thanks, Sabs!
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Old 06-30-2006, 02:48 AM   #205 (permalink)
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haha, Sunday doesnt change much, but seeing how you posted tonight, even though it was short, i will find ways to occupy myself in the meantime.

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Old 06-30-2006, 01:21 PM   #206 (permalink)
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Yes, Sunday sounds much sooner! Please make it Sunday! Hehe!
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Old 06-30-2006, 03:06 PM   #207 (permalink)
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gah! I can't wait any longer but it looks like I will have to
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Old 06-30-2006, 03:13 PM   #208 (permalink)
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haha, Sunday doesnt change much, but seeing how you posted tonight, even though it was short, i will find ways to occupy myself in the meantime.

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I will have to, because the day after that I'm out of town!

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Old 06-30-2006, 04:28 PM   #209 (permalink)
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That, and if you don't, you will be hunted down by us fans!
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Old 07-01-2006, 01:01 AM   #210 (permalink)
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lol, I totally agree. I'll gladly offer services to the 'hunt-Cookie-down-so-she-is-forced-to-make-another-post' club

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Old 07-01-2006, 01:53 AM   #211 (permalink)
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omg!!! that was hottt. i cud picture draco sayin he's a darn good kisser bein the bad boy he is. really awesome post.
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Old 07-01-2006, 02:04 AM   #212 (permalink)
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lol, I totally agree. I'll gladly offer services to the 'hunt-Cookie-down-so-she-is-forced-to-make-another-post' club

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omg!!! that was hottt. i cud picture draco sayin he's a darn good kisser bein the bad boy he is. really awesome post.
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Yeah, that's what I pictured he'd say before he kissed someone for the first time. *fans herself*
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Old 07-01-2006, 05:48 AM   #213 (permalink)
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ooooooooooooh! dang. wow. haha. that is pretty hot. cant wait. hah. post more as SOOn as u can!

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Old 07-02-2006, 05:43 PM   #214 (permalink)
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Post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-02-2006, 07:29 PM   #215 (permalink)
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ooooooooooooh! dang. wow. haha. that is pretty hot. cant wait. hah. post more as SOOn as u can!

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I'm posting right now.

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At that moment, I wanted to tell her my feelings about her, about my longings, about how she edged my dreams. I opened my mouth to say something. Then I closed it again. I couldn’t bring myself to say those things. I guess I had too much pride in myself to admit it. “You’re a good kisser,” I finally blurted, sneering in a teasing but not yet comforting way. Then I sauntered away.

I replayed the kiss over and over again in my head as I walked to the Slytherin common room. It was so sweet, so different than the other kisses I’d delivered in the past. The kiss I gave to Gra—Hermione was something more than a one-time snog. I hoped.

My mind was still swimming in thoughts when I entered the common room. Luckily, no one was there, so I could gather up my feelings for a while.

After a couple of hours of simply lying on the green sofa, I decided that I had to grasp the opportunity and show Hermione that I really did care, and I was softer on the inside than anyone knew.


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“Follow the directions on the board,” Professor Snape instructed, and with a wave of his wand words appeared. “Since this is a harder potion, you will be in partners.” The class began turning to each other to ask whether they wanted to be their partners. “Silence,” Snape commanded, shooting death glares at students who were signaling each other. “To save you the trouble,” he sneered, “I will be selecting the partners.” There was an audible groan. It was a well-known fact that Snape paired students up with other students they didn’t know. He claimed it was so that you wouldn’t fool around while working.

“Crabbe and Potter, you two are partners. Goyle and Mr. Weasley, you’re a group. And Miss. Granger and Malfoy, you’re together.” Snape continued to match students up. I didn’t know what to think. Me with Draco? If this happened a year ago, I would have been one sulky individual. But now, I didn’t find the idea that horrible.

Slowly, I got up and walked to his table. Of course, he wouldn’t want to move from his spot. He smirked (now it was almost a smile) when I set my books down beside his. “Destiny, eh?” He mumbled under his breath.

I rolled my eyes and skimmed the directions from the board. “Ok, we need mandrake roots, a stirring rod, one cauldron…” I listed off the supplies as he gathered them from the nearby cupboards. Then I laid them out neatly in front of us.

The potion worked pretty well, and I was satisfied with how it was going. Draco wasn’t as bad at potions as I thought.

“Time’s up,” Snape announced in his slick voice. “Cork your cauldrons, clean up, and place them on my desk. You will be required to give me an explanation of your potion. I am expecting fifty inches.” The whole class erupted in a groan. “No using books from the restricted section.”

Draco reached over me to grab the cork. He sure smelled nice. I took it before he did and handed it to him. “Thanks,” he said, running his hand across mine before taking the cork and closing the cauldron. His touch sent shivers up my arm.

I carried my books back to the table I shared with Harry and Ron. They were chatting about how their potions went. “Goyle’s as dumb as a doornail,” Ron grumbled to Harry.

Harry only snorted. “Crabbe’s no better, you know.”

Ron looked at me. “But I think ‘Mione got the worst of the deal. Malfoy must be a pain to work with.”

I only shrugged. “He’s okay.” Their faces were questioning and unbelieving. “Really,” I assured them, as well as myself.


I'm going to be gone most of this week so I won't be able to reply to all your comments or post till I come back. Until then, see you later!
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Old 07-02-2006, 11:49 PM   #216 (permalink)
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awwwww ur leaving!! okay. i will wait. unwillingly, tho. haha. draco has fallen head over heels with her. YAY! more wen u get back!!

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Old 07-03-2006, 12:40 AM   #217 (permalink)

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*dies* They kissed... And then they ended up partners in Potions. Does Snape actually pair people up? You can't leave... *cries* That's the second time I've died... both times in your FFs... *giggles* I love dots... and Remus... especially Remus... *walks away*
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Old 07-03-2006, 12:54 AM   #218 (permalink)
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Draco is soo charming (wow, that's kinda ironic, isn't it) I loved his "Destiny, eh?" line

And what's with you and Hermione smelling people? lol (but I bet Draco does smell nice)

I LOVE DRACO!!! *swoons*

I hope you have fun on vacation and post AS SOON as you get back, mmk?

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Old 07-03-2006, 02:53 PM   #219 (permalink)
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Haha, I noticed that too, Cookie. Post more when you're back!
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Old 07-03-2006, 04:26 PM   #220 (permalink)
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Ahhhhhhhhh!! That was really good!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read your post when you get back from out of town!! Have fun!!!
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Old 07-03-2006, 06:05 PM   #221 (permalink)

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It's not that unbelievable!! Draco's just too cool for them. PAMS!!
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Old 07-03-2006, 09:16 PM   #222 (permalink)
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Ah, that was so sweet! I'm falling for Malfoy all over again! He's just so... mysterious, and I like mysteries!

Waiting for your return.
I miss you already!


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draco is dashing. snape is unreal...50 inches??? wow
well i guess they will get to work together now
hope he asks her out
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very nice indeed.. I wonder how Hernione felt being close to him again...Oh too many unanswered questions.......I can't wait for more!!!!
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Awwwwwwww!!! That was SOOOOOOOOoo sweet! I loved it! PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS! Come back soon to post!!! Til then, I'm just going to imagine what it's like to kiss Draco, and imagine what he smells like. I bet it's intoxicating!!!
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