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10-07-2007, 06:23 AM
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| Formerly: G00DGIRLG0N3BAD  Veela
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Fallon Chanel Fifth Year | Say I Ain't Right - (Song Fic) Sa16+ hey yall! Its ya girl Tara back with another FF! This # 28 here on SS and it's a One Shot Dramione! Enjoy!
XOXO,
Tara
This FF includes lyrics to the song Say I Ain't Right by Donnie J. She sat there perfectly still, not moving an inch. We were almost having a staring contest. Or so it seemed, seeing as either of us took our eyes off the other. We had grown apart. I’m not even sure how it happened. We had fallen so deeply in love; seven whole years of wanting each other. I had to even kill off my own father just to be with her! And this is how she repaid me!??
“How-how could you do this to me, Hermione?,” I asked, looking deep into her eyes.
I know I looked horrible. My hair was untidy and my eyes bloodshot from the many tears I had cried over her. I hadn’t eaten in days, and I was still wearing the clothes I was wearing when I caught her kissing the Weasley. She cheated on me.
It burned like a raging fire in a wheat field- spreading quickly to each part of my body as to where I was ready to explode with anger. But I kept my cool. Malfoys don’t make a fool of themselves in front of others.
“I’m sorry, Draco. I just….I’ve always thought there was something between me and Ronald, so I wanted to see. I never meant to hurt you,” Hermione cried.
“Liar. Everyone says that. If you really loved me, you wouldn’t have ever even thought of doing something as awful…as cruel as that,” I replied. “You are just like everyone else in my life, Hermione. You like to hurt me. I honestly thought you’d be different.”
Hermione rung her hands in her lap, trying her best not to drop her gaze from my grey eyes.
“Draco, we’ve grown apart. We aren’t as close as we used to be! My job, my friends have pulled us away from each other! Why can’t you understand that maybe we shouldn’t be together!?? Maybe we should see other people! We are so different…we don’t even belong in the same world!,” Hermione pleaded.
“I have enough money as to where you would never have to work again,” I replied. “And for your friends…well, you could live without them…”
“You’re wrong. Harry and Ron are my everything,” Hermione said simply.
“So I guess I’m not,” I said.
“No I never said that,” Hermione said. “Draco…we’ve been apart for almost a month, and we began to grow apart long after that. Why can’t we just call it quits? I honestly don’t think this could ever work…”
“That’s what you meant, Hermione. Everyone always thought you and that stupid Weasley would end up together…and you wanted to prove them wrong. What ever happened to that?,” I asked.
“I just-”
“You’re never satisfied with what you have, Hermione. You always think there is something better. You always want what you can’t have,” I said.
“That’s a lie,” she choked.
“Is it? Think about it, Hermione…,” I said.
I pressed a button on the thing Hermione called an iPod docking system, and a song I quite frequently found myself listening to began to play. Life is a mystery.
You never know what’s gonna be.
I didn't know you were gonna leave,
And I was ready to spend my life with you.
Do I still cross your mind?
Do you still feel me deep inside?
Do you still see me when you close your eyes,
Or did you find a way to let me go?
You never want what you got,
But always want what you can't have.
Never miss something until it's gone
I know in your heart, that you can't walk away.
And if you want me to move on,
Just say I ain't right for you and you moved on;
The feeling's gone (and I'll try to do the same)
Say I ain't right (can you tell me?)
And I've been holding on, to love that's gone.
Just say I ain't right
Seems like yesterday, I was the one you loved to chase.
Now someone took my place.
What do you see in him, you never saw in me.
And if he loves you better, I'll walk away.
Or if it's me that’s on your mind, baby I'll stay.
You never want what you got,
But always want what you can't have.
Never miss something until it's gone
I know in your heart, that you can't walk away.
And if you want me to move on
Just say I ain't right for you and you moved on
The feeling's gone (and I'll try to do the same)
Say I ain't right (can you tell me?)
And I've been holding on, to love that's gone.
Just say I'm not right, right, right
And baby, I'll move on
Just say I ain't right, ain't right, ain’t right, ain’t right, ain’t right, aint right
Just say I ain't right, ain't right, ain’t right, ain’t right, ain’t right, aint right
Just say I ain't right for you and you moved on;
The feeling's gone (and I'll try to do the same)
Say I ain’t right (can you tell me?)
And I've been holding on, to love that's gone.
Just say I ain't right for you and you moved on; (And I’ll try to do the same)
The feeling's gone (and I'll try to do the same)
Just tell me I ain’t right (Tell me ‘cause I need to know if I had to go)
That I've been holding on, to love that's gone.
Just say I ain't right, ain't right, ain’t right, ain’t right, ain’t right, aint right
Just say I ain't right, ain't right, ain’t right, ain’t right, ain’t right, aint right
Oh no…
Hermione sat statue-still the whole song. When it ended, I turned it off and looked her directly in the eyes.
Silent tears fell down her cheeks and she shook her head. She stood up, turned on her heel, and apparated away to God knows where.
I looked down at my hands, and then over to my desk. A picture of us that was taken in seventh year was framed and propped up, us smiling and holding each other. We both looked so happy, so full of love.Then there was a picture taken of us about a month ago. I held it in my hand, and in it, we both looked broken and torn apart. The light of happiness no longer rested on either of our faces, making it quite clear that the love was gone. But I still felt horrible. She had become so dear to me. We did so much, changed so many things, just to be together. And now I felt as if it was all for nothing.
“So tell me Hermione…,” I whispered, a single tear falling down my cheek, landing like a puddle on the picture I held. “Please…just Say I Ain’t Right…” |
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10-07-2007, 11:39 PM
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| | Griffin
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katelyn Quillio Fifth Year | that...was sad. i am a big dramione shipper...and you broke them apart! *sticks tongue out* lol...no i liked it! it was pretty good!
*Kate* |
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10-08-2007, 12:09 AM
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Samantha Rose Magical Education | Tara - That was toooooo sad! Very well written and very believable, but I felt so bad for poor Draco! Another excellent FF! |
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10-08-2007, 01:58 AM
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| DA News Officer Bicorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth | Tara....that was terribly depressing and I'll tell you why. Because I just broke up with my boyfriend because we didn't see each other enough and we were growing apart. I'm crying now. Please write another, your so good at these!
Katie |
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10-08-2007, 02:36 AM
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| Formerly: G00DGIRLG0N3BAD  Veela
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Fallon Chanel Fifth Year | Thanks everyone! I'm so happy you all liked it! |
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10-08-2007, 07:27 PM
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| Fan Fiction Elf Crup
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| aw, that was so sad... 
Very well-written. Love it! Another awesome one-shot!
~Sarah |
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10-09-2007, 12:04 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Fallon Chanel Fifth Year | aww thanx Sarah! love ya girlie! |
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10-10-2007, 12:27 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarah Jayne Corner Fifth Year | That wass soo sweettt Tarrsss... butt why did you have to makee Dracoo soo misrabell !!!
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10-10-2007, 09:42 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Fallon Chanel Fifth Year | lol thanx Sam |
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