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12-03-2006, 09:17 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
Location: Searching for my own McDreamy// Avvie by Marjerie Bluton Join Date: Oct 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melissa Second | Yay for new posties!!
This is still awsome! |
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12-08-2006, 09:48 AM
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| | Dugbog
Location: My Own Little World.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jade Emma Jacobs Third | Hewwo! It ish I! For some reason the site has been unblocked but I can't post cause I've gotta go to lessons like now! But I'll post soon! Cause I'm coming home next Friday! <3 Elle |
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12-11-2006, 01:28 AM
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| DA News Officer Bicorn
Location: Just being me! Join Date: May 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth | yea! i shall wait elle!
Katie |
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12-11-2006, 01:43 PM
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#54 (permalink)
| Stealthy Ninja QueenTrick-up Puck Griffin
Location: the boondocks. Join Date: Feb 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tiaan Lady Fifth Year | Hey hope you have a good time with your rents. and post when you Have the time for it okay okay. well love it.
-sarah |
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12-15-2006, 08:21 PM
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#55 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Location: My Own Little World.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jade Emma Jacobs Third | Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeww wooo! Yeeeash I'm back and bad! XD WooO! So I now can postie but not 2nite cause I am beat =o! But 2moz deffo =D *Luffs Yoo* <3 Elle |
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12-16-2006, 10:35 PM
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#56 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Location: My Own Little World.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jade Emma Jacobs Third | Hewwo! Yeash its a postie!!!!! Chapter 6- Everything I do, I do it for you Hermione's POV: Well, my life is officially going right once again. With only a short time till Christmas, another ball is on the horizon. The theme is "The Crystel Masquerade". My life is like one of those dreams, where every moment, every breath, is a miracle! I feel as if i'm in another persons body watching, its hard to believe only a year previous, Draco and I hated each other. But I feel like he's the one, the one I would spend my whole life with. "Draco" I said, rubbing my eyes. It was about 11 and we where patrolling...okay we where outside and talking. "Yes love" he replied, "Its funny, I never expected two people like us, to get together and fall in love" I replied, looking into his eyes. He smiled dreamily, "I first started liking you at the Yule Ball" he smiled "You looked so...beautiful, I felt so jealous that you where with Krum" I smiled at him lovingly. I felt something cold hit my face, I held out my hand and saw a soft white cold substance in my hand. "What the-?" I said, then I looked up. White whisps of snow flew in the air, the stars glittered and the cold air wrapped around us. Draco pulled me in for a hug, "You know...they say that kissing in the snow is one of the most magical things you could do" he leant in and kissed me. I felt the snow cover us, as time stopped and all I could see and feel was Draco. We broke apart our foreheads touching, I remembered a song which I thought was terribly exact to the moment, "Don't tell me it's not worth tryin' for,You can't tell me it's not worth dyin' for
You know it's true, Everything I do - I do it for you" I sang softly. He wrapped an arm around me. "I think i've never felt so much in love with someone as I have with you Mione" I smiled and shivered happily, and snuggled into his warm embrace. We watched as the soft flakes hit the ground covering the darkness with that little bit of magic which gave this world its beauty and tranquility. Look into my eyes - you will see, What you mean to me, Search your heart search your soul, And when you find me there you'll search no more. Hehehehe! Yey Postieee!!!! Anywhooo...Wowie Guess what! 9 More Days WoOooO! And on Christmas Day a Tres Special Postie! But I will post between now and then =D Post more soon! <3 Elle |
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12-16-2006, 11:48 PM
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| | Bicorn
Join Date: Dec 2005
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| OOoohh! I love this fic, and especially this post!! So fluffy and romantic...I agree...kisses in the snow are the best =)
Love
Adrienne |
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12-17-2006, 01:51 AM
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| DA News Officer Bicorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth | yay elle! BTW, I am going to post the last chapter in my story, Love Is Blind! It's in the restricted section! Elle! I shall wait for your next post!
Katie |
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12-17-2006, 03:40 AM
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| | Jarvey
Location: hogwarts of course!! Join Date: Oct 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: alice jenkins Sixth Year | aaaahhhhh!!! how heartwarming*** now i'm jealous...*it doesn't snow in california*:< |
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12-17-2006, 09:47 PM
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| Stealthy Ninja QueenTrick-up Puck Griffin
Location: the boondocks. Join Date: Feb 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tiaan Lady Fifth Year | oh that's so sweet i love it so much it's so pretty. awww that's all i can say and glad you posted too.
-sarah |
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12-18-2006, 06:53 PM
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| | Dugbog
Location: My Own Little World.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jade Emma Jacobs Third | Hewwo, I have serious writers block on this story...Aack! Any ideas would help me so much, If you have any can you PM me please, I need an idea to get me from the last post, to the Masquerade ball. The problem is that I have an idea for another story, its quite funny actually. Oh well, I'll post soon, Ideas are welcome <3 Elle |
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12-24-2006, 12:51 PM
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| | Dugbog
Location: My Own Little World.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jade Emma Jacobs Third | Hewwwo! Yesh I'm back and I'm out of writers block! After seeing plenty of movies and listening to moosic! I have a Post!!!! Chapter 6-Part 2 Draco's POV: "Draco come on, theres only a few more shops!" Hermione giggled, pulling my hand. I sighed, how I loathed shopping for dresses. "Please Mione! We've already looked in about five shops!" I drawled, she kissed me softly on the lips. "Just a little longer my darling" she said softly. I smiled at her, and she dragged me into a small cosy dress shop. The shop itself was warm and comfortable, a kind faced aged lady stood at the till and smiled at us happily. Hermione immediatly started savaging through the racks. I flicked through the dresses until I found one which caught my eye. "Mione, come look at this one" I said softly, she walked over and gasped when she saw it. "Draco its beautiful" she gushed, she took it out and held it up against her in the mirror. "Well, what are you waiting for, go try it on!" I said, she smiled at ran off into the changing room. I sat down and waited, and waited...and waited. "Mione, dont mean to rush you...but, Hurry it up!" I sighed, "Fine, i'm coming out...but dont laugh!" I heard light footsteps, and felt my jaw drop when I saw her. I dont think i've ever seen a girl more beautiful then I ever have in my life. The dress was in a Midnight blue, It had a bell skirt and it was at floor length. It was an off the shoulder number, but the dress was decorated, so it looked like you where looking at a night sky. It fitted at all her right curves, and highlighted the texture of her hair and her eyes. "Oh Mione, you look...amazing" I said, wrapping an arm around her. She beamed at me happily. The lady at the counter came up to us, "Will you be taking the dress Ma'm?" she said softly, "Yes please" Hermione rushed to the dressing room to get changed. I walked over to the counter and looked at the jewellary and acessories that where on sale. But one thing that caught my eye, was a Masquerade Mask. It was silver decorated with small dimante jewels and had a silver sparkly material trim to it. "How much is that mask may I enquire?" I asked. "Its 2 Galleons, sir" she replied. "I'll take it" I gave her the money and she wrapped it in a small bag. Besides apart from that, I already had her Christmas present waiting for her. Hermione walked out with the dress in hand, paid for it and we where on our way. Hermione snuggled into me, "Draco" she sighed, "Yes Mione" I replied, "Thank you" she said, "For what?" "For being the most perfect boyfriend ever" I kissed her forehead and hand in hand we started walking back. The snow once again began to fall softly all around us. "Draco...close your eyes" she said softly, I obeyed and she kissed my lips softly. I then felt something very cold, and very wet hit my face. I opened my eyes and saw Hermione with a snowball in her hand. "This means war" I yelled after her, I picked up a snow ball and threw it at her. It hit her on the back of the head. "Score!" she turned around outraged and during my laughing fit that I was expierencing she threw one and it hit me in the face. She burst out laughing and made a run for it. "I'm going to get you Mione!" I ran and caught up with her and grabbed her by the waist and picked her up in a Bridal style. "Noo...put me down!" she cried out, I smirked at her. "Put you down you say.." I laughed, I dropped her in a pile of snow and she glared at me. "You!" She pulled my leg and I fell back into the snow beside her. "Alright...were even" I sighed and turned over and faced her. "Okay...Truce" she giggled. I leant in and kissed her, tingles of electricity ran up my arms, warming me up. I broke off needing air quite badly. "Well...that was nice" I said breathlessly. She sighed happily, I stood up and helped her up. "Come on, lets go back to the castle" She said. Sliding an arm round her waist, Freezing, and wet. But still happy, well I guess this could be a match that is really worth it. Well thats it for now...the next part will be the ball! And that will be posted tomorrow...but maybe the day after not sure yet. But for now.. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Elle |
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12-25-2006, 06:43 PM
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| | Dugbog
Location: My Own Little World.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jade Emma Jacobs Third | Hewwooo....
Merry Christmas guys! And heeeere's a Post! Chapter 6-Continued... Hermione's POV:
Well Tonight’s the night...Christmas Eve...the Night that will be one to remember. I'm so nervous, I’m shaking! I mean sure everything will be okay, I mean Draco left me the mask he got me on my bed. I mean...I look good, which is a Plus. My hair wrapped up elegantly in a bun with a few pieces in my face, my hair is decorated with glitter and little gems. Obviously the beautiful gown which Draco picked out for me. I'm wearing a pair of silver shoes with diamantes encrusted in them. My make-up consisted of Silvery eye shadow with blue eyeliner, silvery blush and I made my lips to be blue-ish, and silvery with a hint of glitter. Oh and of course the mask, which was truly beautiful. I checked my appearance for what seemed like the hundredth time that evening, picked up my skirt and headed to the door. Draco had already gone down to the entrance hall, he said he wished for me to make a big entrance.
I took a deep breath and started to head down the stairs. I immediately felt all eyes on me, I looked around for Draco and saw he was talking to Harry, Ginny, Ron and his date who was a Pretty Hufflepuff girl. Harry looked up and smiled at me, Draco turned around and I saw his eyes widen. I smiled and slowly walked down the stairs, some guys drooled…which was not the most pleasant thing, but some girls threw envious glares…especially Pansy, who wasn’t wearing a dress…it was like an Lingerie get up. But most people smiled, which was good I guess. When I reached the bottom, Draco took my hand and kissed it softly, he put a white rose in my hair and stroked my face softly.
“You look…so beautiful” he said, he looked at me. I smiled at him, “Most beautiful girl in the entire school I think…in the Universe more like it” He bowed gracefully and took my hand. I followed him into the Great Hall, which was decorating beautifully…Crystals, the ceiling bewitched to look like a Nights sky with snow falling softly, the lighting creating a silvery, blue effect. A Huge Christmas Tree stood grandly on one of the stands behind the band.
Draco spun me round softly and we began to dance, he wrapped his arms round me.
“Mione” he whispered,
“Yes?” I replied,
“Do you want to go outside, for a walk?” he asked.
“Yes…that would be nice” So he took my hand and we began to walk outside. The night was cold, but for some reason I felt warm. The ground was white and sparkled in the Moonlight.
“Close your eyes” he whispered, I obeyed and I felt myself being led, occasionally being told “Step” and “Bump”. Then we stopped,
“Okay…open” he said, As my eyes flicked open, I gasped. The area where we had stopped had a beautiful crystal tree and the light flicked making the tree glow, there where candles and flowers and soft music playing, which I recognized to be Clocks by Coldplay. I felt butterflies bouncing in my stomach, creating a nauseating feeling. He led me over to the bench, I heard him take a deep breath.
“Mione” he said,
“Yes” I whispered, he took my hand and held it.
“I love you, more than anything…we’ve only been going out for a couple of months, but I’ve already fallen deeply in love with you.”
I felt tears stinging in my eyes, really badly…I think I’m going to faint or be sick. Draco pulled out a small velvet box, he opened it for me. But it wasn’t an engagement ring, but a silver ring with little emeralds and diamonds in.
“This isn’t an engagement ring…but it’s a promise ring…I’m promising you that no matter what happens, as soon as we are ready…I want to marry you…because I’ve never been so sure in my life that I want to be with you…forever” I felt tears roll down my cheeks,
“Oh Draco” I breathed,
“So will you…not properly…marry me?” he waited,
“Yes…yes…Oh…Of course!” I cried out, He slid the ring on my finger and he lifted up my mask and kissed me. He took me into his arms and just held me…and when I say I’ve never been happier…I never have.
And there it is! My present from me to you… Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
<3 Elle |
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12-28-2006, 01:51 AM
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| | Jarvey
Location: hogwarts of course!! Join Date: Oct 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: alice jenkins Sixth Year | aaaahhhhhh how romantic  !!! he gave her a promise ring, i would've been crying!!!
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12-28-2006, 01:28 PM
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| | Bicorn
Join Date: Dec 2005
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| EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!! THEY'RE GETTING MARRIED!! That was so romantic! Oh, how amazing =)
Great post!
Love
Adrienne |
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12-28-2006, 10:44 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
Location: Searching for my own McDreamy// Avvie by Marjerie Bluton Join Date: Oct 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melissa Second | EEEEEEEEEEEKKKK!!
Yay for promise rings!
Keep posting. This story is amazing!
xoxo
Mezza
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01-01-2007, 01:09 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: u.s.a. Join Date: Aug 2005
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| I don't think I would have cried... I know I would have. Super great post, so romantic too...*sighs* can't wait for more.
~Toni |
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01-03-2007, 02:05 PM
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| Stealthy Ninja QueenTrick-up Puck Griffin
Location: the boondocks. Join Date: Feb 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tiaan Lady Fifth Year | read the first one still have to read the second sorry i have to go so i'm busy so you know i'll read it but love it.
-sarah |
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01-04-2007, 11:09 PM
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| | Dugbog
Location: My Own Little World.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jade Emma Jacobs Third | Hewooo! Wowie... Okay lets start with HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! WOOO 2007! I hope yew all get everything yew want and have a good fortune and all that jazz! So here is a post! Chapter 7- Blurry {Not in anyones POV really}
“HE’S WHAT?” screamed an angry Lucius Malfoy. Looking at the letter that had arrived, informing of his pathetic son’s promised engagement to the Mudblood. He crumpled the letter up and threw it in the fire, his face contorted into an ultimate rage, he picked up the vase containing flowers and threw it at the wall, it smashed and the sound echoed around his study, he took a deep breath and began pacing. An idea occurred to him,
“Well if my pathetic son wants to marry dirt, he shall join the dirt…just like anyone else who gets in my way” he began to laugh. And threw the picture of his son and wife into the fire. Hermione’s POV:
I’m engaged, I’m Promised, he loves me and I love him.
“Hermione calm down, You’ll spontaneously combust in a minute” Harry laughed. I pouted at him and stared at my ring for a moment. “Can’t believe it, Our Mione promised to be married!” He wrapped an arm around Ginny, and kissed her cheek. I watched as he whispered something in her ear, which made Ginny’s eyes widen and her jaw drop.
“You mean it!” she gasped, Harry nodded. Ginny turned around and kissed him. “I love you too” I smiled at them happily. Ron looked a bit out of it, so I gave him a one-armed hug.
“Hey cheer up grumpy!” I giggled, Ron smiled at me “Where’s that pretty girl who was on your arm, what was her name…oh Alexia?”
“I like her, but I haven’t spoken to her” He replied sheepishly. I giggled,
"Bless you Ron, Honestly you are hopeless!" I teased
"Hey! thats not nice" He said in a mock hurt voice, "So Mrs Malfoy eh? So when will the little ones be popping out?" I playfully punched him in the arm.
We started walking back to My common room. But as we turned the corner and was in the corridor with the door at the end. I began to feel a bad vibe, like something terrible had happened. I started to run, leaving my three friends behind me. They shouted after me. I said the password quickly and the door opened letting me in, seeing no one in the common room I ran up to Draco’s room and knocked on the door.
“Draco?” I shouted, No answer. I knocked again but louder, “Draco!”. I muttered Alohamora, and the door opened.
What my eyes saw, almost killed me. Draco was lying on his bed, covered in blood. With large scrapes, gashes and deep cuts in his skin. I did the only thing that came to my head, I screamed. I ran to his side,
“Please N..No! Please Draco wake Up!!” Behind me, I could hear my three friends.
“Holy sh-” Ron shouted.
“I’ll go and get help” Ginny said, and ran off. Harry rushed over and began to check his pulse etc. Ron hugged me tight. As if hiding my eyes from the sight before me, the horrors before my eyes. Harry had a look of graveness but hope. The look told me, Draco might not survive. I felt the room spinning, I felt like being sick. Then darkness covered my eyes.
“I think she’s waking up” a voice above me said, my heavy eyelids opened slowly. The room focussed and I saw Harry, Ron and Ginny above me.
“Wher…Where’s Draco?” I whispered, They turned there faces to the bed next to mine. His cuts looked better, his face was peaceful. I could see his chest rising softly. “Is he…going to live?”
“They don’t know Mione” Ginny whispered, I sat up and got out of bed. I sat next to him and stroked his face. I didn’t even notice them leave.
“Please…don’t leave me…Hold on please” I whispered, tears falling softly down my face. I took a gulp and sat in the chair. I felt my eyes grow heavy, and a coldness wrapped around me making me shiver. I ignored it and fell into
an uneasy sleep. Cause I am lost without you, I cannot live at all. My whole world surrounds you, I stumble then I crawl. Aaah I hated writing that!!! So what shall happen...we shall wait and see! <3 Elle |
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01-05-2007, 06:13 PM
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| Stealthy Ninja QueenTrick-up Puck Griffin
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tiaan Lady Fifth Year | no that's really mean Elle.... that's not fair i loved them and what goes on why is it that in every HG/DM ship they always have Lucius come in halfway through the fic i cry every time not fair but still loved it.
-sarah |
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01-06-2007, 08:10 PM
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| | Erumpent
Join Date: Jul 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Fallon Castillo | omg PLEZ let draco live!! me loves him!!! PAMS PAMSOID |
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01-10-2007, 08:18 PM
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| | Jobberknoll
Location: Searching for my own McDreamy// Avvie by Marjerie Bluton Join Date: Oct 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melissa Second | OMG!
PleasepleasePleasepleasePleasepleasePleasepleasePl easepleasePleasepleasePleasepleasePleasepleasePlea sepleasePleasepleasePleasepleaseeeeeeeeeeee live Draco! |
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01-10-2007, 09:33 PM
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| | Gnome
Location: Europe Join Date: Dec 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | I've just read the story and it's ... ABSOLUTELY PERFECT! Keep writing! Btw. let Draco live ... for a while  |
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01-17-2007, 04:52 AM
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| | Jarvey
Location: hogwarts of course!! Join Date: Oct 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: alice jenkins Sixth Year | ooooommmgggg!!! i'm so scared. that post was scary... i wouldn't want anyone to leave me by myself if something like that happened to someone i cared about!!! |
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01-27-2007, 04:54 PM
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| | Dugbog
Location: My Own Little World.... Join Date: Apr 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jade Emma Jacobs Third | Hewoooo..... I'm sooo sorry I havent posted in Aaaaages! Well...Here's one...which isn't that big...aaah I'm terrible! Chapter 7-Continued Hermione’s POV: I opened my eyes with a start and hoped to see Draco’s eyes open, but alas they remained close. I saw his chest rising that was the sign I needed. I felt tears fall down my cheeks once more, and I felt the cruel stab that was in my heart once more. I stood up and shivered, it had been a long night. I rubbed my arms and stared out of the window. It was still dark, but there was evidence of the sun beginning to appear, I walked back to Draco and brushed his lips softly. I grabbed my jacket and ventured outside; as I opened the door a cold wave hit me making my body shiver. The sky was now a tinted red and pink with a golden glow beginning to show. I sat down by the tree in front of the lake, just watching. Maybe I was waiting for something to happen, or maybe I’m hoping that he’ll pull through. I stood up the sun was nearly risen now, I ventured along the bank, not really paying attention. Until I realized that I was surrounded trees, I was deep in the Forbidden Forest. I suddenly felt very frightened, there where beasts here. I heard a rustle, then more rustling, “Hello?” I called out. “Well well, if it isn’t the little mudblood” a voice drawled behind me. Then darkness surrounded me. Draco’s POV: I heard voices around me, recognizing Hermione’s more than anyone else’s. Hermione! I’ve got to wake up, I must warn her. Father, that stupid coward! I’m going to kill him, I hate him! Come on why can’t I wake up! My eyes opened, everything was swimming. I saw Harry, Ginny and Ron, “He’s waking up!” Ginny called out; when my vision cleared I noticed they had grave faces. “Where’s Hermione?” I whispered, even thou I knew the answer. “Draco, she’s been kidnapped…” I closed my eyes and blocked out everything else. Rolling over on my side, I felt the tears well up in my eyes. I could loose her forever, please I need a miracle. You could be my someone, you could be my scene, you know that I’ll protect from all of the unclean. I'll post sooon... <3 Elle |
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