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Old 04-27-2007, 02:03 AM   #1 (permalink)

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Hey! It's everybody's favorite annoying person who has too many fics (except for Tara! Love ya!) That's right, it's Katie! Got a new idea for a Dr/Hr fic! Wait till you hear how this one came about!

I was posting on my fic, when Bells posted an idea for a new pic, and I thought that was a great idea, so we PMed back and forth for awhile, and now I think we have something worthy to be called a fic! Hope you like it!

The basic gist of the story is: Harry and Hermione have been dating since Harry and Ginny broke up. Ginny has fought tooth and nail to stay at Hogwarts, but with the death of Dumbledore, and since Hermione doesn't like him that way, Ron has allowed himself to be pulled out of Hogwarts. Ginny is still wanting Harry for herself.

But that's not the whole story.....

See, Harry is taking more special classes, but this time with all the teachers, so he can up his skills in order to defeat Voldemort. But by an act that no one was prepared for, Hermione suffers a blow to the head, and has amnesia. Because Harry doesn't have time to look after her, Professor Slughorn offers the help of his favorite student, a familiar face....Draco Malfoy!

But wait, it get's better...

Since Hermione has no idea who Draco truely is, they fall in love, and Hermione must choose between old love and new love! WHOO HOO!

Harry was glad for one more year at Hogwarts. Without Dumbledore there though, it was going to be different, and probably difficult. But now that he had Hermione at his side, Harry felt a sort of calm. Because now he had someone to relieve all his worries too, and he knew that Hermione would listen.

The fact that Ron had been taken out of school depressed him to no end. Ron was his best friend. But for their own reasons, the Weasley's hadn't wanted him in school if Dumbledore wasn't there. They had wanted to take Harry out as well, but Professor McGonagall would not allow it. So all Harry had left was Hermione...


Harry boarded the train to Hogwarts alone. He didn't know where Hermione was; she hadn't sent him an owl yet. Which was odd for Hermione, but maybe she had slept late, or something. Either way, he saved her a seat next to him in their compartment. Ginny, who'd ranted and had multiple tantrums throughout the whole summer just so she could go back to school, had walked into the compartment followed by Luna and Neville.

"Uh, Harry? Can we come in here? Everywhere else is full..." Ginny asked nervously. She and Harry had been rather cold since their breakup.

"Sure." Harry said, a little abrupt. Neville nervously put his suitcase up on the rack, noticing the tension. Luna, as usual, noticed nothing, and pulled out the latest edition to The Quibbler.

"What's new this month, Love?" Neville asked Luna, putting his arm around her shoulders.

"Nothing Neville. Only that The Ministry is now using Straight Gibbed Johnpers in our owl post, to control us." She gave him a Look. "Please don't tell me you didn't know that."

"Of course not..." Neville looked at Harry. Harry hid a giggle. Just then Hermione burst into the compartment, looking exhausted.

"Hi Ginny, Neville, Luna. Harry." She gave Harry a kiss, and Harry moved over for her. She flopped down on the seat and leaned in Harry's lap. "Slept late, and mum couldn't find her cell phone, and insisted that I take mine. Even though I told her that it doesn't work on Hogwarts Grounds."

"That's ok Hermione," Luna said dreamily, "Cell phones are the Ministry's weapon to control the Muggle world."

"Oh really?" Hermione asked, and put her hand on Harry's knee. Ginny turned a deep red, her ears turning pink, the universal Weasley sign of embarrassment and rage.

"Yes. They're not satisfied with the Wizarding World." She did not elaborate, but continued to read. Neville rolled his eyes, and then kissed the top of her head.
Ginny looked away from Harry and Hermione.

The talk after the train had left was light and somewhat dampened with Ginny's mood. It lasted the whole ride, and even the weather was moping, for it had started to rain. Hermione was now wearing Harry's jacket, and that made Ginny all the more frustrated.

Finally, the train arrived at Hogwarts. Harry helped Hermione up, and proceeded to get Ginny's suitcase down.

"I can do it myself!" Ginny snarled, and grabbed it, knocking down Neville's suitcase, and narrowly missing Hermione. "Oops, sorry Neville." She flounced away, as much as her suitcase would allow her. Harry looked at Neville.

"What's eating her?"

"Dunno. You got everything, Luna?"

"Yes Neville. Are you two joining us in our carriage?" Luna asked Hermione.

"Sure." Hermione answered for both of them, and together they walked to the carriages.


KK! Tell us what you think!

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Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32

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GREAT START!

I'm your FIRST reader!!

I love it so far!

If you need someone to proof read ever *points to self* I'm your girl...just in case you don't have time or something!

Loooooooove it!
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great start! Cant wait 4 more!
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*gaps at both of you* that is the weirdest most awsomest story ever!!!! wow *iin aw* *coughs* anyway........that was great! PAMS!!!!

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but i hope the h/hr ship ends soon
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I'm writing the next chapter now it should be up either later today or (because I'm kinda slow)tomorrow. but most likely today.

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ok guys here's the next chapter enjoy!

After the carriage ride up to the school the students all shuffled into the Great Hall to get some warmth. Harry put his arm around Hermione.

"I'm so glad to be back Harry." Hermione sighed feeling content.

"Me too love," Harry replied, "although it will be kind of odd without Ron." he added sadly.

"Don't worry we'll keep in touch through letters." she replied with a reassuring smile and a long kiss. Ginny coughed loudly, her face already reddening again, and lead the way to the Griffindor table. Hermione sat down next to Harry, Ginny immediatly sat on Harry's other side followed by Neville who gave Luna a quick kiss before she walked off to her own house table.

The first years were sorted quickly because there weren't many of them. Nobody was surprised though, many students left after Dumbledore's death. The room quieted as McGonagall stood up to begin her speech. Hermione looked around the room, she spotted a certain blonde, Draco Malfoy. Hermione stared at him, shocked that he actually came back. He suddenly turned to her, his grey eyes pierced hers. The awkward moment was killed as he stuck his tounge out at her.

"How childish," Hermione whispered to herself, although it was taking much of her will power to not stick her tounge out right back at him.

"Everything okay Mione?" Harry asked her.

"Yes, I'm fine." she replied.

As Harry turned his attention back to McGonagall Hermione shot Draco a nasty look and then ignored him for the rest of the meal.

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The next morning Hermione got up bright and early. Harry had promised her a romantic walk through the grounds that morning. She dressed quickly and walked down the stairs excitedly, after five minutes Harry came in.

"You ready to go for a walk?" she said smiling widely.

"Oh I completely forgot! Professor McGonagall told me to come in this morning to talk about my extra lessons. I'm already late, sorry love maybe we could take a walk some other time." and with that Harry rushed out the portrait hole.

Hermione flopped onto the couch, disappointed when Ginny walked in.

"What's the matter Hermione?" she asked curiously.

"Harry couldn't go for a walk this morning."

"Oh that's too bad," she replied trying to hide her satisfied grin, "Want to get an early breakfast with me?"

"No thanks," Hermione replied, "I think I'll still go for a walk."

Hermione walked outside the grounds and just as she reached the lake the sunrise had began. She sat down to admire it when suddenly a cold voice came from behind her.

"A pity that a mudblood has to ruin such a beautiful sight."



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DRACO=LOSER

he needs to be nice

Jesus!!

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I looooooove this fic so far =)

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"How childish," Hermione whispered to herself, although it was taking much of her will power to not stick her tounge out right back at him.
I thought I was cute...

Sheesh, Draco is mean! But that's(the real) Draco for ya.
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but harry needs to get back with gin
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Draco Malfoy turned the corner and sniffed the air.

"Yea, it's definitely a mudblood. I can smell it from here."

"What do you want Malfoy?" Hermione asked, tired. She was sick of dealing with Malfoy. "And why are you here?"

"My parents-parent-wanted me to finish my education in this dump." Malfoy spat on the floor. "Not that it's any of your business." He flopped down on the grass, near Hermione.

Hermione skitted further away from Malfoy, and tried to ignore him. Malfoy shot glances at Hermione. She looked...different. But he didn't know why.

"Hey, mudblood."

"What?"

"What's your problem?" Hermione jumped up, infuriated.

"What do you mean, WHAT'S MY PROBLEM? What's yours? Coming down here, insulting me, and wondering what my problem is!"

Without even looking up Draco replied simply, “Yup.”

Hermione did want to fight back today and with a defeated sigh she plopped back down, this time a little closer to him. “Well if you must know, Harry couldn’t go for a walk with me so—“

“Wait a minute!,” Draco interrupted, “Are you saying that you’re going out with Potter?!”

“Yeah, why?”

“Nothing, I just thought you would end up with the Weasel.” He laughed.

“Anyways.” Hermione continued, “ he had to go-err- somewhere. So I’m alone this morning.” She said hurriedly not thinking she could trust Draco with the knowledge of any plans against the Dark Lord.

"Oh so he doesn't have time for you." Draco replied smoothly.

"No that's not it! He's just very busy." Hermione said irritated again. "What about you? I'm sure someone of your stature would have plenty of engagements." she said, her voice dripping with sarcasm.

He shrugged, "Of course everyone wants to be around me, but that's just it, sometimes you have to just get away from it all, you know?"

"Oddly enough Malfoy what you're saying does make sense." Hermione said remembering the worst of times that the trio had to face.

Draco shot Hermione another glance, still confused with trying to figure out what was different about her.

Hermione caught him looking, "What?"

"Nothing you just- there's something different about you."

"What change? Good or bad?"

"Well it's definitely an improvement. You know Granger you look pretty good considering your a mudblood." Draco said looking out at the lake laughing at his own little dumb joke.

Hermione took this as a chance to take a look at Malfoy. He had grown a lot over the summer. She noticed that he wasn't smickering, it was a true laugh. His face seemed so innocent, almost angelic.

This is when reality hit Hermione, she had been having a conversation with Draco Malfoy that entire morning!

"Umm I have to go get ready for class." Hermione said and stood up. Malfoy watched her leave, a funny look on his face.

Did I just have a normal conversation with the mudblood? Malfoy thought to himself, then shook his head. He started walking towards the castle, when he bumped into one of the Weaslys. He grimiced.

"Now I'm gonna have to wash...again. What's your problem?"

"What were you tw