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07-11-2007, 11:48 AM
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#101 (permalink)
| | Banned Shrake
Location: Packed her bags and gone to live with Shannon on OAW Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,994
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bakura Sapphire First | Remnic’s Visit Luna sighed and stretched her legs out on the bed. She had been placed in a holding cell overnight. It was pretty basic, the metal barred walls contained an uncomfortable bed which she had been lain on through the night, not sleeping, just thinking, worrying, about what was going to happen, what happened to Hannah and James, when she would be getting the Dementor’s kiss. A toilet was the only other thing in her cell. It felt quite cramped compared to her Azkaban cell where the only thing she had was her chains. Luna felt fairly comfortable, she had a bed and a toilet, plus there was no dementor hanging around the outside of her cell, sucking the life force out of her. No, this time the dementor was inside her stomach, clenching at every thought of what lay ahead for her. A fate worse than death.
"Well well well, captured by muggles, I'm rather disappointed in you Moore."
Luna span her head around to see who it was, so fast the resounding crack could be heard through the good acoustics of her cell. A tall man with jet black eyes and wavy brown hair shot with the odd grey one, stood at the cell bars. She could vaguely remember seeing him somewhere.
"Who are you and what the hell do you want?" She snapped.
"I'm the man who's been tracking you down for the last few months..."
Remnic didn't get a chance to finish his sentence as Luna jumped up and threw herself at the cell bars in front of him, looking positively bonkers. Remnic stumbled backwards with shock, away from the cell bars to which now Luna was clinging to in a crazed way.
"SO IT'S YOU!" She shrieked. "You've been the one chasing me down! Trying to get me back in Azkaban! Setting me up! It was all YOU!!" Luna pounded her fists on the bars with pure anger and rage.
"Yes Luna, Its me. I guess I didn't really need to bother, I should have left the muggles to it sooner." Remnic smiled at her, sending Luna into another fit of rage.
"When I get ou--" Luna started, it was Remnic's turn to interrupt.
"Luna, you're not going to get out though. You're being transferred to Azkaban later on today to receive the dementor's kiss." He said simply, watching as Luna stepped back from the bars and slump down onto the floor, the colour from her face gone as if she had been given the kiss already.
"You can't give me the dementor's kiss... you just can't!" Luna said, her voice shaky.
"It's not even in my hands Luna, the minister of magic himself has signed for the kiss." Remnic said with almost a trace of bitterness in his voice. He had worked for months to find Luna, and what did he get? A pat on the back and a 'well done'. That was about it.
"Talk to him! Tell him you don't think I should be given... it." She begged.
"But that would be lying."
That was enough to set Luna off again.
"YOU'RE JUST LIKE THE REST OF THEM!!" She roared. "YOU JUST WANT ME DEAD LIKE EVERYBODY ELSE!"
"I never said I wanted you dead." Remnic said quietly. "I just think you deserve it."
"So you DO want me dead." Luna yelled, turning her back to Remnic, sitting cross legged on the floor.
"Turn to face me Luna." Remnic said in a deathly calm voice.
"No!" Luna snapped "Why?" She added hesitantly, there was something in his voice that felt weird to her.
"Because I want to help you."
"No you don't" Luna replied, slightly unsure though.
"Just calm down Lun--"
"You're not getting me THAT easily." Luna chortled, "You almost had me there, but yet again you fail to get me."
"I already have you Luna." Remnic replied slightly miffed that she hadn't fallen for his little tactic.
"No, the muggles have me, not you. You're just annoyed that you didn't catch me! Hell even the muggles did better than you did!" Luna laughed, she had no idea what was so funny, she guessed it was the idea that he had been trying for ages to catch her and he was outwitted by a bunch of muggles.
"Hey, I'm not the one who got caught by the muggles am I?" He said smoothly.
Luna scowled at him. "Muggles won't keep me long, before you can get me to Azkaban I'll be long gone. And it will be YOU I'm going after first."
Remnic pondered her for a moment before shaking his head slowly. "Luna, Luna, Luna. You have a lot to learn."
This confused Luna, what did she have a lot to learn about? Killing people? Well she sure knew how to do that a lot more than he did.
“Just get lost alright, you caught me, congrats, just shut up about it.” Luna scowled at him, he HAD to rub it in before she was kissed didn’t he?
“You’re not in much of a position to be making requests are you?” He asked with faint amusement.
“I will be when I’m holding you at wand point.” Luna retorted. “The first chance I get, you’re going to regret you ever crossed a Moore.”
Remnic stared at her for a moment, thinking. “You seem almost proud to be a Moore, even after what he did to you.”
Luna froze and turned around slowly to see him, speaking quietly. “What do you know about him?” She asked, not angrily, but nervous and shocked.
“I know enough of what he did.” Remnic replied simply, he knew vaguely of what happened, but none of the specifics.
“When did you know this?” Luna asked, in an almost accusing way, as if it had all been his fault.
“I only found out when I started looking for you but…” He hesitated, Luna wasn’t going to be around for much longer, so what was the real harm in telling her what he found out. “…but the ministry knew when you were 10, and they just forgot about you.”
Remnic braced himself for the explosion that would come, as if Luna was a time bomb and somebody had just set the clock running. Sure enough, Luna threw herself at the cell bars with an almighty clang.
“YOU KNEW!!” She roared. “YOU KNEW AND YOU DID NOTHING?? NOTHING!!”
“I didn—“
“YOU JUST LET HIM TORTURE ME!! NOBODY EVEN CARED??” Luna shrieked, bashing her head against the cell bars almost as if she was trying to use her skull to break through the bars.
“Luna stop it.” Remnic said ineffectually, Luna completely ignored him.
“HOW COULD THEY LET HIM DO THAT TO ME AND KNOW??”
“Luna you’re going to hurt yourself.”
“I DON’T CARE! THE MINISTRY OBVIOUSLY WANT TO HURT ME OTHERWISE THEY WOULD HAVE STOPPED HIM!!”
“Stop it Luna.”
“NO! YOU COULD HAVE STOPPED HIM!!”
“PETRIFICUS TOTALUS!” Remnic snapped Luna’s arms to her sides and her legs together, she fell to the floor with a bump and anger was still painted on her face.
“Its for your own good… the aurors will be here in a few hours.”
Remnic turned and left the room. Despite his experience with many murderers and criminals, Luna still left him quite freaked at what he had seen, Luna had been more unstable than he had imagined, no wonder people were scared of her, no wonder people wanted her dead, he could clearly see why now. |
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07-11-2007, 11:56 AM
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#102 (permalink)
| | Banned Acromantula
Location: Kris & Touz's Dog House Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 10,002
Hogwarts RPG Name: Eliza Shannon Malfoy Fifth Ministry RPG Name:
Shannon Dalle |
NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! -kills Remnic- She will NOT get the Dementors kiss. I won't LET it happen. |
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07-15-2007, 11:26 AM
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#103 (permalink)
| | Banned Shrake
Location: Packed her bags and gone to live with Shannon on OAW Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,994
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bakura Sapphire First | Only a few more chapters left to go. The True Friend James and Hannah were hiding in the bushes not far from the police station they had guessed Luna had been taken too. James was rather tired and groggy, Hannah had woken him up at the crack of dawn and despite their early start a series of wrong turns and the fact they really had no idea where they were, they had only just reached the station. Hannah looked at James.
"Okay, so the plan is we go in there and kill them all." Hannah said with a small laugh to disguse her nervousness, she had always been fighting beside Luna, now she had to take control, she found it rather scary.
"Are you sure thats the best thing to do?" Asked James.
"Uh... Yeah!" Hannah snapped, she was nervous enough without James throwing more doubts into her mind.
"Come on Hannah, do you want to risk going back to Azkaban?"
Hannah glared at him. "Are you saying we should just leave Luna?"
"I'm saying we should consider our options carefully." James said silkily.
"We either go and save Luna or we let her have her soul sucked out, what's your point."
"Luna wouldn't save us."
"She would." Hannah said loudly, uncertain herself what Luna would do. On a good day she would be bright, happy and positively kind, but on a normal day she was the complete opposite, heaven forbid Luna on a bad day. James gave Hannah a crooked look.
"Are you sure about that?"
"That's not the point though! It's not wether Luna would do it, it's wether either of us would do it and to be honest, Yeah, I would want to save my friend."
James gave a loud sigh and ran his fingers through his blonde hair he turned away from Hannah for a moment, lost in thought. He had known that it had been a bad idea to seek out Luna the first time she crucioed him, and now he had the chance to leave, but Hannah was holding him back.
"Hannah, I don't want to be Luna's slave for the rest of my life, I want to go, leave now while I have the chance." He said softly, turning to face her again.
"Well go then." Hannah said, affronted. "I'll save Luna myself if you dont care about her."
"How can I care about her? How can ANYBODY care about her? She's cruel and evil!" James snarled, "How can you be so loyal to her?"
Hannah stared at him, thinking over her answer. "I care because I want to, I know that somewhere she cares about me and because I don't have the sensitivity or mental capacity of a wooden plank, I dont need to have her feelings for me waved around on a flashing banner in front of me!"
James gave a small snort. "I know why you like her."
"Enlighten me then."
"Because you're both a load of crazies!"
Hannah jumped up and raised his wand to him. "How DARE you!" She spat indignantly. She wasn't going crazy... was she?
"Come on Hannah, I've seen the way you look when Luna's torturing me, your eyes do the same thing hers do. Shine with insanity!"
"So what does that have to do with it? if you dont want to save Luna then get lost, I'll do it myself, wether I'm crazy or not."
James shifted from foot to foot and looked nervously at Hannah.
"I can't let you save her either."
Hannah looked at James calculatingly. "And why might that be?"
"Because..."
"Tell me or I'll force it out of you." Hannah growled, jabbing her wand towards him threateningly.
"Okay okay keep your wig on... If I let Luna get saved then I would go to Azkaban."
Hannah gave James a confused look. "You would go to Azkaban for just being around her but anyway nobody knows that you're with us so you're in the clean even if I rescue Luna."
"No, they know."
"Who knows?"
"Everybody... anybody who reads The Daily Prophet, if you read it more often you would see the articles on a certain Luna Moore and Hannah Wilsone."
James gave a self satisfied smile that didn't last long as Hannah leapt at him and pinned the struggling James to the ground, her wand at his throat.
"You've been selling stories on us!" She spat.
"I did say my father worked at The Daily Prophet, he needed stories so we came up with the plan, I got the gossip on how you two live and stuff, and he makes endless articles on it." James said confidently, trying to mask his fear.
"Your father mustn't care about you then." Hannah laughed, a small echo of insanity ringing through it. "If he did, he wouldn't have sent you to us, he must know that once Luna found out why you're here, she would kill you."
"True, but Luna doesn't know, does she?"
"I do." Hannah grinned. "And according to you, I'm turning into her."
"No, I said you were turning insane."
"There's no difference." Hannah shrugged, pressing the wand harder into his neck watching him flinch. "You sell me out and expect me to let you go? You're the crazy one." She laughed.
"You're not killing me!" James bellowed as he kicked Hannah away from him and jumped up, aiming his wand at Hannah. "You're going to come with me Hannah." He said forcefully.
"Oh please." Hannah snarled. "CRUCIO!"
As the jet of red light hurtled towards him, James just managed to dodge out of the way, he steadied his wand and took a step closer to Hannah.
"I'm not just doing it because of that, I'm getting back at Luna for all the times she crucioed me, I'm not going to let her get away with it like you do."
"I don't let her get away with it."
"Right, keep thinking that from your cell in Azkaban."
"I'm not going back there." There was a definite glint of insanity in her eyes as she spoke. "You wont make either of us go back."
"I think I will." He flicked his wand towards Hannah, white ropes flew out of the end and threatened to wrap themselves around Hannah but she was too quick, rolling out of the way of the ropes and throwing herself at James, grabbing hold of his collar throwing him down onto the floor. He struggled to get back up but Hannah put a foot firmly on his chest and pointed her wand down at him.
"Say goodbye... AVADA KEDAVRA." Hannah screamed her eyes wild as the power of the curse sent her hair flying up into the air, her blonde hair tinted green for a moment as the colour lit up the scene; Hannah grinning psychotically at the dead body of James. |
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07-15-2007, 12:32 PM
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#104 (permalink)
| | Banned Acromantula
Location: Kris & Touz's Dog House Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 10,002
Hogwarts RPG Name: Eliza Shannon Malfoy Fifth Ministry RPG Name:
Shannon Dalle |
AHHH! I'd kill that -something worse than a git- myself if he was real!
But---oh-well, he's dead now. -shrugs- Now--- SAFE LUNA! |
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07-15-2007, 12:39 PM
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#105 (permalink)
| | Banned Shrake
Location: Packed her bags and gone to live with Shannon on OAW Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,994
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bakura Sapphire First | My RL friend Hannah will be really pleased, she always wanted Hannah to be insane and it's been hard trying to squeese it in along with Luna's insanity but I think I've finally got it
I think theres only 2 or 3 chapters left  |
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07-16-2007, 06:37 AM
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#106 (permalink)
| | Banned Shrake
Location: Packed her bags and gone to live with Shannon on OAW Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 12,994
Hogwarts RPG Name: Bakura Sapphire First | Holy! I can't believe I've finished it :O I really have!!! Dementor's Kiss Luna was starting to feel anxious, it had been quite a while since Remnic had left and as she sat in the middle of her cell, she waited for the aurors arrive to take her to her death. It wasn't that she hadn't tried to find a way out, she had tried breaking the bars, kicking the wall in and finding a secret exit of some sort that people always seemed to find in films, trapdoors and secret tunnels, but there were none, this was real life. There was no knight in shining armour ready to take her upon his horse's back and make her the princess for the land of far far away, her prince had decided she wasn't worth saving a long time ago.
She could feel the dementor before she saw it, the familiar feeling of cold abandonment washing over her, it made her almost sick as she stood up in time to see Remnic, a dementor and two aurors walk into the room. She gave Remnic a puzzled look, not letting on how scared she really was.
"I thought we were going to Azkaban for the kiss."
"Well I was talking with the ministry about how... unstable you seemed earlier." Luna felt her stomach sinking further than it already had. "And we decided that it was best not to risk giving you a chance by moving to another location. We're administering the kiss here."
There had been a vague plan of escaping once they let her out of the cell, it wasn't anything specific but it had been something for her to hold onto and now it was crushed, she would experience a fate worse than death with no chance of escaping.
"No." She said quietly as Remnic opened the cell door, the dementor hovering just outside of the cell. Luna backed away in horror, her back pressing up against the wall, she wished she could melt through it and run off. She knew that she couldn't, but she wasn't going soulless without a fight. The dementor advanced on her and she skirted around the side of it, making her bid for freedom she sprinted out of her cell only to be tackled by the two male aurors who each took an arm and dragged her kicking and screaming back into the cell.
The last of her dignity lost she kicked, screamed and struggled wildly against the aurors who pinned her to the floor, but it was useless, they had a firm grip on her and they weren't going to let go no matter how many times Luna threatened to kill them if they didn't. She fell deathly silent as the dementor hovered over her, it leaned over her and lowered its hood. It's head looked as demented as the rest of its body, but a layer of scarred skin stretched over where the eyes of a human would be. Luna closed her mouth tightly in a vague attempt to keep the dementor from getting her soul. Her head thrashed around and the dementor extended a cold, clammy hand towards her face and grasped hold of the bottom of her jaw, holding it tightly and stopping her from moving. The only thing stopping the dementor now was her tightly sealed mouth that refused to open as the dementor moved its empty face inches from her's.
Luna was feeling that as long as she could keep her mouth shut, she would be able to stay alive... but the auror holding her right side had an answer to that as he pinched her nose tightly. She kept her mouth closed for another thirty seconds until she couldn't hold her breath any longer and opened her mouth wide, taking a shallow breath of air. In the seconds it took for her to open her mouth, the dementor moved lower and clamped it's mouth around her's. It inhaled and Luna felt everything going dark, the cell was fading away, she could hear her father's voice echoing around her, there was a scream, it was a woman's, her sound seemed familiar but she couldn't put her finger on who it was. But she didn't have time to think any further as the dementor began to feast on her soul, her memories, her hopes, her dreams... they were being extracted slowly and painfully from her. Her eyes closed and Luna faded away.
As quickly as they left, the memories flooded back and her eyes snapped open. Luna took a gasp of breath and looked around confused, was she dead? why wasn't she a soulless nothing? The dementor was gone and jets of light were being flung around the cell. Somebody was grabbing hold of her ragged robes and lifting her to her feet, that same somebody thrust a wand into her hand. Luna was still dazed, what on earth had happened? What on earth was happening now?
Focusing more on the figures in the room she saw Hannah duelling with the two aurors and Remnic, then it hit her, Hannah had saved her immortal soul from the clutches of the dementors. She looked down at the wand in her hand and pointed it at one of the aurors, a jet of green light hitting him in the back, he crumpled to the floor and both Remnic and the alive auror spinning around, shock on their face as they saw that Luna was still... there. Hannah sent a killing curse at the remaining auror, leaving Remnic alone with both Hannah and Luna. He didn't stray for long though, running as fast as he could from the police station, dodging the curses that Hannah flung his way.
Luna slumped down onto the floor, tears welling up in her eyes, she couldn't comprehend what had just happened. It was too much to take in, even for her. Hannah sat down next to Luna and placed a comforting hand on Luna's shoulder. "Come on." She said quietly, "We should go before they bring more aurors."
Luna nodded silently and allowed Hannah to help her up, they hurried out of the police station together, Hannah helping Luna walk as her legs seemed unable to keep her up for more than a few strides.
Hannah didn't know it yet, but saving Luna had earned her something that almost nobody else in the world had. Hannah had earned Luna's complete trust and Luna knew as they ventured out back into the world that would forever see them both as wanted criminals, whatever happened, they would face it together.
*faints* OMIGOSH IT'S FINISHED!!! |
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07-16-2007, 11:06 AM
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#107 (permalink)
| | Banned Acromantula
Location: Kris & Touz's Dog House Join Date: May 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Eliza Shannon Malfoy Fifth Ministry RPG Name:
Shannon Dalle |
For a moment there---------I thought Luna would be soulless I was scared! I was trully scared for Luna! -dies- This one is most definitely better than the last, especially since there's more BBBLLLOOOOOOODDD in this one! lolz.
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! |
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