Hey everyone...well this is my first fanfic and I'm sure everyone will probably think it's horrible but I would love some constructive critisicm!!And by the way I do NOT own any of these characters. They are all from JK's beautiful imagination! So anyway here goes nothing.....


24 Deatheaters crowded around Lily and James Potter's graves, forming a circle around the four teens that stood before them. They threw harmless spells at them, just to scare them. The Deatheaters had strict orders from their Lord not to hurt any of them. If a spell meant for someone else hurt Harry, the one responsible would be severely punished.

Underneath the nearest hood, Harry heard a cold, familiar voice. " Yeat again I cannot kill you, Potter. But, soon, you will see all your little friends go before you." Bellatrix Lestrange gave a high-pitched manic laugh at this thought.
"Now, now Bella, don't get to carried away. The Dark Lord may want to keep these three after he kills Potter. The might have some more information about this so-called "Order" than I do. And they may even know where Dumbledore is."

Hermione, Ron, Ginny, and Harry all looked up, stunned. That voice. The person Dumbledore trusted. They had all suspected, but none had ever really thought it possible.
"How could you??!! Dumbledore trusted you! I trusted you! And after all Dumbledore has done for you, you've betrayed him! He gave you a job, a life! And now you throw it all away? How could you?!" Hermione spat at him. All spell-casting had ceased so everyone could hear Snape's reply.
Snape took a while to answer."Dumbledore only thought he was doing me a favor. The Dark Lord always has been and always will be where my true loalty lies. Yes, I admit that maybe I did think The Dark Lord was gone forever, but that never made me sink as low as to become loyal to Albus Dumbledore!"
No one spoke. Only Harry noticed something about Snape after he stopped talking. Just a slight wave of his wand, and Harry knew Snape had been lying.
BOOM!!
A puff of smoke near Bellatrix materialized into a body, if you could call it that. The pale face had red slits for eyes, and skin clung to the bones.
"So we meet again, Potter. Too bad it will be the last," Voldemort said icily.Cackling he began to raise his want. " Now, Potter, I want to get this over with so choose quickly. Would you like to be the first to go, or would you like to see sweet little Ginny Weasley go before you?"


Well sorry its so short!! I just dont have time to write anymore!
~Amy~

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Ok Well i guess im writing this just to hear the clack of the keyboard because no one is reading it..but oh well I'll add some more anyway...

"Not so fast, Tom," a warm voice said. Before everyones eyes, Albus Dumbledore revealed himself standing between the teens and Voldemoret. Looking around, Harry saw members of the Order approaching from all directions. Silently, Minerva McGonagall, Remus Lupin, Bill and Charlie Weasley, and Molly Weasley put non-apparating bonds on the ignorant Deatheaters. Arthur Weasley, Nymphadora Tonks, and Mad-eye Moody appeared beside the teen.

All of a sudden, Bellatrix couldn't stand the inaction any longer. With a scream of rage she raised her wand at Tonks and yelled the Cruciatus curse. Tonks dodges the stream of energy and it hit Goyle, another Deatheater. The the turmoil began. Curses and hexes flew everywhere. There were yells of terror and rage. Ron was about to curse Snape, but Harry stopped him.

"Have you gone mental?? He's a Deatheater!" Ron screamed, dodging an Impedimenta curse.

Look, he's on our side! He only said that stuff to keep to others from attacking until the Order got here!"

"Bloody hell!" Ron said, awed.

"Are you two having a moment, or can you get over here and help us?!" yelled an amazingly irritated Ginny. Her and Hermione were fighting four Deatheaters. Ron and Harry ran to their side.

Behind them, Tonks battled Bellatrix Lestrange. she was more fierce than Harry and the rest had ever seen her.

Harry worked himself along the Deatheaters until he came face to face with Voldemort himself. He had been watching the scene with mild interest, throwing a spell here or there, taking the apparating bonds of his followers.Harry finally noticed he was not alone. Standing beside him was Bill Weasley, wand ready.

"Hello, Harry. Nice to see you again."

"Now that the meet-and-greets are over, can I kill you know?" Voldemort asked sarcastically.

"You can try," Harry said," but I'll defeat you. Maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow, but sooner or later I'll find a way to destroy you!"

Voldemort was silent for a moment. He seemed to be trying not to laugh. Then, at the same time he yelled "Crucio!", Harry yelled "Stupefy!". The two curses hit and hissed like a bomb to go off. Everyone stopped to see what would happen, but no one knew what to expect. Then..

BAM!
There was a shower of sparks as the wands blew up in the owner's hands. The force sent every single person flying.

"We will meet again, Potter," Voldemort promised as he left in a puff of smoke. With a loud pop, all the Deatheaters apparated at once. Ginny went running to Harry and gave him a huge hug. Then, remembering they werent' together anymore, awkwardly shied away.

"I think we can go back to the Burrow before we talk about this," Molly said gently. "Ginny come over here and we'll apparate." Slowly, everyone made their way back to the house. The last ones in the graveyard were Harry and Lupin.

"I just need to say goodbye to them."

"Ok Harry, but be quick. We don't need Molly worrying anymore than she already is." Lupin gave Harry a sad smile and left. Harry walked to his parents' headstones and looked down.

"I think seeing you will help me fight him. I won't-can't- let you down. I will get rid of him somehow. I love you." Fighting back tears, Harry took a couple deep breaths and went back to the Burrow.
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"Oh Ron, that was terrifying. Harry could have been killed. ANY of us could have been killed! Oh Ron!" Hermione cried, sobbing into Ron's shoulder.

He was disappointed that Hermione seemed more concerned with Harry's death than with his own, but he knew Harry was in the most danger, so he pushed those feeling aside. " It's ok, Hermione. None of us got killed, we're all safe. It's all going to be alright." Hermione knew that Ron couldn't promise that, but it comforted her anyway. Or was that being in Ron's arms? She was so confused. She couldn't have feelings for Ron, he was her best friend. But if these weren't "feelings", what were they?

She looked up to Ron's face. He was looking down at her, a genuine look of concern in his eyes. The held their gaze for what seemed like an eternity, until they both moved into eachother and kissed. It wasn't anything special as far as a kiss goes, but they both felt something there. The kiss ended, and Hermione put her head back on Ron's shoulder. At the same time, a knock came at the door.

"It's Harry and Ginny. Can we come in?" called Ginny softly. She knew Hermione was upset adn that Ron came to try and console her. Ginny just hoped Hermione had calmed down a bit.

"Yeah, come in," Ron said back.

Hermione shifted while the door opened, clearly thinking she should move away from Ron, but decided against it. She felt so calm in his arms and didn't want to lose that feeling.

Harry and Ginny walked in and flopped onto two bean bag chairs on the floor. Both looked extremely exhausted.

"So, what do we have here?" Ginny chimed, raising her eyebrows toward Ron and Hermione.

"Nothing, nothing at all. Ron was just calming me down, thats it. Nothing happened," Hermione said as she hastily unwrapped Ron's arms from around her back and moved away. Ron didn't say anything, just looked out the window as his face turned scarlet.

Ginny giggled a bit, but let it go. Even if Hermione didn't tell her, Ginny knew she like Ron. The four played wizard chess and exploding snap all afternoon.

Later that night, Harry couldn't sleep, so he went and laid on the grass in the Weasley's backyard. Ginny couldn't sleep either, so she was cleaning her room. She walked down the stairs and saw Harry through the screen door. She gasped.


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OK, So I'm getting some views, but no one is replying! Disappointing, but I guess I'll put some more up. So here it is:

"Harry," she whispered. she dropped the laundry she was carrying and ran to him. By the time she got to him, she was bawling.

Harry turned at the sound of the door. He jumped up, eyes wild. "Ginny, are you ok?What happened?" Ginny didn't stop crying, but she wrapped her arms around Harry in a huge hug.

"Oh Harry. You were lying there, not moving, I thought-"

Harry cut her off. " Shh, Gin. It's ok, I'm ok. Calm down, it's alright." She nodded, but didn't stop crying or let go of Harry. That he didn't mind so much. He led Ginny over to the patio set and got her sitting down, then pulled up a chair for himself. After sitting silently for a while, Ginny was ready to talk.

"What were you doing out here?"

"Thinking," Harry answered.

"About?"

Harry's cheeks turned slightly red, but his answer did nothing to reveal why.
" I was thinking about how stupid I am sometimes."

"Harry, what are you talking about? You are one of the most brilliant wizards I know."

"Oh sure," Harry replied. " I can wave a wand and say some fancy words. But when it comes to stuff that really matters, I'm a complete idiot."

Ginny was shocked, and more than a little confused." How can you say fighting Voldemort isn't important."

"Of course it's important, but there are more important things in life." Harry sighed. He wasn't giving her a lot of hints, but he thought she would get it by now.

" Harry, what-"

"YOU, Gin. You're more important," Harry got up and turned so she couldn't see his face, which was now the color of her hair. "I lost you, and it's all my fault. I was stupid enough to think that Voldemort would think I didn't care about you if I broke up with you. Now I lost you for no good reason at all."

After being silent for a couple minutes, Ginny spoke. " Are you saying you want to get back together?" She was trying to keep the hopefullness out of her voice, but she didn't think it was working.

"No kidding, Gin. Of course I want to get back together with you... but I completely understand if you don't want anything to do with me."

Ginny stood up. "I- I'll have to think about it. I better get to bed. Goodnight, Harry."

"Goodnight."

As Ginny walked back into the house, she told herself that the only thing she needed to think about was how to tell Harry she wanted to go out again. She felt happy as she fell into a deep, dreamless sleep.

the next morning, everyone was finished eating breakfast before they noticed Ginny and Harry weren't up yet. Mrs. Weasley was just about to tell Ron and Hermione to go get them when Ginny walked in. She offered to go wake up Harry and ran back upstairs. Once she got to his room, she knocked on the door and opened it before he answered. Harry turned when he heard the door open. He was getting dressed and was shirtless. Ginny let her eyes wander down to his six-pac and then slowly back up to his face.

"Yes?" He asked.

Ginny smirked. " Fighting Voldemort sure keeps you in good shape. Anyway, I was supposed to come and wake you up. Everyone but you and me have finished eating already." As Harry pulled a shirt over his head, Ginny added, " I also have an answer. You know, from last night."

Harry's head shot up. Ginny could see the nervousness on his face, even if he tried to keep it out of his voice. "And?"

Ginny walked up to him and gave him a long, deep kiss. " I want everything to do with you. You'll always be in my life. And if you're too groggy and can't figure this out, it's yes."

Harry smiled stupidly. "Great. Well, we better get downstairs. I'm starving." Ginny took his hand and led him downstairs.

Everyone was ecstatic to see that Harry and Ginny were back together. Mrs. Weasley even started to cry. As she put it, " Everyone needs love in difficult times like these."

Over the next few weeks, everyone was surprised at how quiet it was. Fred and Georges joke shop became #1 in the country, and Bill got a girlfriend named Genevive, but that was it.

One afternoon, Hermione, Ron, and Mrs. Weasley were in the kitchen when Ginny and Harry walked in. "We're going to go up to the clearing and fly a bit, ok mom?" Ginny asked.

"Sweet, can I-" Hermione cut Ron's question off with an evil glare. She could tell Harry and Ginny wanted to be alone.

"Ok dears. Be careful," Mrs. Weasley said, giggling as Ron tried to figure out what he did wrong.

Harry and Ginny got their broom and started to walk hand-in-hand to the clearing. They were still laughing about the look on Ron's face before they left when Harry stopped dead in his tracks. They were almost there, and he had seen a rat -that was coincidentally without one toe- scurry ahead of them.

He handed Ginny his broom and got out his wand. "Ginny, use my broom and get back to the Burrow. And stay there! I don't want you to get hurt."

"What did you see?" Ginny asked, dropping her broom and getting on Harry's.

"Wormtail. Now go!" Ginny sped off into the sky and Harry walked toward the clearing. Once he got there he heard a cold voice.

"So you sent her away. Too bad. She would have been so much fun to torture. A heart as pure as hers always is."

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"Bellatrix Lestrange. Just here to scare me a bit until Voldemort comes or what?"

"Crucio!" A voice said from behind Bellatrix. " I'm already here Harry. And apparently so is your fan club." Harry turned around to see the whole Order behind him. He turned back to face Voldemort and saw that Deatheaters had shown up behind him also.

Voldemort was telling Harry-once again- how he killed Harry's parents when a Deatheater hit Ginny with the Cruciatus curse.

Voldemort laughed then turned to Harry again. "Alright, get your wand up. We're going to do this right, since it's going to be the last."

Harry was still seething with rage after that Deatheater cursed Ginny. " Wait, if we are doing this right, we're going all out. No witnesses. No help. Everyone but us will go fight somewhere else. There is another clearing about a quarter-mile east. It's just going to be us, right to the end."

"If thats how you feel, I completely agree. Everyone, go to that clearing." After they all left, Voldemort spoke again. " That was very noble, Harry, not letting them all see you die. It would be break their hearts. It's just too bad being noble won't make you beat me. Crucio!" Harry dodged the spell and reatalliated with a silencing spell. the use of such a simple spell caught Voldemort off gaurd, and he was hit.

This gave Harry the confidence and momentum he needed. For the next half hour, Harry struggled to remain in charge. He was exhausted, and just wanted to give up. But then he thought of Ginny, and he hit Voldemort with a spell so hard that he knocked him unconscious. Harry walked over to him and picked up his wand and put it in his pocket.

"Well, Tom, you were right. It did end here, today. All I have to do is say two little words and wave my wand. Then its all over." Voldemort started to moan. "A-"

"Crucio!" The spell came from Draco Malfoy, hiding in the trees behind Harry.

Harry was caught of guard and dropped to his knees, in too much pain to even comprehend what was going on. Harry couldn't really even tell that Malfoy's spell was going through Harry's wand into Voldemort. the shock was too much for the frail body, and he exploded in a puff of dust. At the same time, every single Deatheater felt a burning pain on their arm, and when they looked, the Dark Mark was gone. Harry had just enough energy left in him to turn around and stun the gaping Malfoy. After that was done, Harry passed out cold.

The Deatheaters that had been fighting the Order quickly apparated, and the Order went over to the other clearing as fast as they could. Ginny got there first and ran over to Harry's body, expecting the worst. She flung herself over Harry's unmoving body. She looked at him and put her hands on his cheeks.

"No Harry! You can't! You just can't! Do not die on me!!"

Alright thats it for now!

~Amy~

That is so unfair!!!
Voldemort escaped with Draco's help....
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What? No Voldemort Died!!! "Exploded In A Puff Of Dust" lol

~Amy~

Sorry.
Maybe i didn't read carefully.
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haha no problem!! dont worry about it i really couldnt care what you say as long as i have a reader!!!! lol i will come on and post tomorrow i promise but im so tired right now i just gotta go to sleep!!

~Amy~

Harry's eyes fluttered open and focused on Ginny's face. "It's over. He's gone," he barely whispered. The he passed out again. All the girls there were absolutely bawling with relief. Even Ron was getting a bit emotional, but trying not to show it. Mr. Weasley floated Harry down the hill, Ginny hanging on to his hand the whole way back to the Burrow. Once in the house, Ron and Ginyy got Harry settled in his bed.

For the next two days, Ginny barely left Harry's side. He still hadn't woken up and she was starting to have a breakdown.

"Come on, Harry. You have to pull through this. I know you can. We need you, Harry. I need you. And Ron's a mess. He just wanders around in sort of a daze. Any mention of you or Voldemort sets Mom and Hermione off crying. But I'm the worst Harry. I'm so lost without you. When we were broken up before, even though we were'nt together, I knew you would be there anyway. But now I'm absolutely terrified that you won't be there. It's driving me crazy, and you've always been the only one that could calm me down. So you have to wake up and calm me down. I need it. I love you."

Ginny took a couple long deep breaths. She figured Harry couldn't hear her-which made saying the l-word easier- but it felt nice to talk anway. As she was trying to control her emotions so that she could go get something to eat, she felt Harry's hand move. The movement startled her so much that she pulled back and flipped her chair over, landing on the ground.

Harry smiled."Well that's a nice welcome, you falling on the floor." Ginny got up and gave Harry a huge hug, and he kept talking. "I don't think I've ever felt this rested. I must have slept for quite a while though-I feel stiff. How long have I been out?" Harry asked as Ginny let go of him.

"About two and a half days. I can't believe you're awake. I've missed you so much! We all have. Oh Harry, I was so worried that you wouldn't wake up. I just wouldn't have been able to cope." Ginny swallowed hard. Saying what she was about to say was a lot tougher when Harry was awake. " I really think I love you, Harry. No. I know it."

Harry's eyes widened, but then he smiled. " I love you to, Ginny." He laughed at her sigh of relief. " I guess this means you didn't ditch me while I was being Sleeping Beauty over here?" Harry tried to get up from the bed, but was too stiff. Ginny ran over and helped him, and whith Ginny supporting Harry, they walked out to the hallway.

They were just about to go down the stairs when Harry stopped."After sleeping for two days, I really have to go relieve myself." He looked Ginny in the eye."And that I can do by myself." Ginny smiled and nodded and waited for Harry by the stairs. As they were walking down, Ginny told Harry that it was about 8 o'clock and she thought everyone would be in the living room.


ok im sorry it's short!! thats just all i have typed up right now!

~Amy~

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PAMS! I love the story! I hope you post more soon!

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Yay! I have another reader!! I'll post more tomorrow tonight i gotta catch up one the ff's i read! lol

~Amy~

When they walked into the living room, just as Ginny had suspected, everyone was in there. They all looked up when Harry and Ginny walked in.

Hermione jumped up. "Harry, you're awake! Thank goodness." Ron walked over and shook Harry's hand. " Right on mate, I knew you'd pull through." Harry laughed, then pulled Ron into a hug. He didn't care that everyone was watching, Ron was his best friend. After that, everyone else came over and congratulated Harry.

After all that was finished, Harry, Ginny, Hermione, and Ron retreated to the kitchen to get something to eat. The other three filled Harry in on what happened in the last few days. The Prophet wanted to do a three page story on the final fall of Voldemort, and wanted an interview with Harry as soon as he woke up. The Minister for Magic also wanted a meeting with Harry as soon as possible. Also, unfortunately, Draco was taken to the ministry, but he had made a deal with the minister and was let free.

"Stupid prat, the minister, but I guess I should meet with him. No yet though. I'm not ready to talk yet," Harry said, swallowing some potatoes. "But I will never, ever, talk to the Daily Prophet."

"We understand Harry. You don't need to talk about anything until
you feel ready to," Ginny said.

"And you certainly never have to talk to that horrid newspaper," Hermione added. She was still holding a grudge against Rita Skeeter which extended to her employers.

"We're just happy you did it, mate, Now we never have to worry about him again," Ron said.

"Well maybe not him in person, but we can't let our guard down. There will still be Deatheaters everywhere, wanting revenge."

The four were silent for a while but then they moved past that discussion, and onto another topic. Harry was the first to bring it up. "This is pretty tough to say, but I promised myself that if I was still alive after this was all over with, I would move out, to Sirius' house. I can't yet, I want to re-do it before I move in, but I should get started. Your parents already know I'm going to."

"What,we aren't good enough for you now that you finished him off or what!?" Ron said, clearly hurt.

"Ron!" Hermione and Ginny said in unison but Ginny continued,"If Harry wants to move out and leave us, it's his choice." She sounded very depressed and angry.

"Whoa, Ron, Ginny, chill out!" Harry exclaimed. "You didn't let me finish. I want to renovate so that every room is liveable, so that all of you can move in with me. If you want, of course."

They all sat in shock. Finally, Ron spoke up. " Harry, that's pretty huge. It'll break Mom's heart if we all move out."

"Don't worry. I understand. Just think about it, though, ok? Now, why don't we play some exploding snap?"

So they played their game until quite late, when they went to the living room and watched a muggle movie.

Hermione and Ron fell asleep rather quickly, but Harry and Ginny stayed awake. Suddenly, Ginny spoke. " I want to come and live with you, Harry. I know mom will be upset, but I really want to."

"That's great, Gin. And we'll work out telling Mr. and Mrs.Weasley when the time comes. For now lets just keep it between us."

And they went back to watching the movie until they fell asleep.

Alright Thats It For Now!

~Amy~

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The next day, the four and Mrs. Weasley went to 12 Grimmauld Place to start cleaning up. They were washing all the walls first, then they would start painting. "Harry I'm so sad that you won't be living with us anymore, but at least you aren't that far awa. And you know you will always be welcome at the Burrow," Mrs. Weasley said.

"I know. Thanks, Mrs.Weasley," Harry replied.

Around 11:30, Mrs. Weasley went back to the Burrow to begin preparing lunch, and she left Harry and the rest to finish up a bit more before stopping to eat. Ginny pulled Harry into another room to speak with him away from Ron and Hermione. "Harry, I hate keeping secrets from mom. I just about blurted it out like six times this morning! Can we tell her and dad at lunch?"

"Of course we can,Ginny. I hate keeping secrets from them, too. And from Ron and Hermione, speaking of them, they still haven't given me an answer. But even if they don't want to now, my doors will always be open to them."

"Thank you so much. I love you," Ginny said, smiling.

"I love you, too," Harry said back. Then they went back to finish up washing walls.

After a delicious lunch, Harry and Ginny stayed back to help Mr. and Mrs. Weasley with the dishes. Ginny figured this would be as good as time as ever to tell them, so she did.

"Mom, dad, we need to talk. Just please don't talk until I'm finished. I don't want you guys to get angry, but it's better to tell you now. Really, I am an adult, and Harry and I have been going out for quite a while now, so, well, I'm moving to 12 Grimmauld Place with him when it's ready."

"Oh, honey, thats wonderful!" Mrs.Weasley exclaimed, while Mr.Weasley nodded his head in agreement.

"Really? I thought you would be absolutely livid," Ginny said in awe. Harry just grinned. He was extremely happy Mrs.Weasley wasn't angry, that was truly terrifying.

"Oh, not at all. Actually, we were kind of worried about Harry living by himself. We thought you would ask all three of them to come live with you, Harry, but at least one makes me feel so much better," Mrs. Weasley said.

"Actually, I did. Ask Ron and Hermione, too, that is," Harry interrupted. " They just haven't given me an answer yet."

"Well, not that I want to get rid of them or anything, but I would love if they went and lived with you."

"I'm sure you don't want to get rid of them, Mr.Weasley, but maybe you should tell them that. I got the feeling they didn't want to overwhelm you with so many people moving out."

So Mr.Weasley did go tell them, and they decided that they would go live with Harry and Ginny at 12 Grimmauld Place.

For the next week, the four worked endlessly with Mrs.Weasley to get the house ready. The even got Mrs.Blacks portrait off the wall, although no one knew quite how they did it. Then it was ready, and within the next week they were all moved in.

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