keep goin

guys, i'm thinking of ending this soon, what do you think? please tell me...

itll b a shame ebdin da story as its gd, but all things end @ sum point i spose, b4 u do end it mke sure u explain everythin n wrap everythin up n mayb add a big climax w/ voldemort or hermiones dad?

"I don't know Mione. I really don't know." Cedric said.

They stayed like that for an hour or so, till Hermione's head shot up in shock.

"What?" he asked her.

"I ... I have to go. I was supposed to be on my way home half an hour ago..." she said. She vowed to her dad she wouldn't tell a teacher or a member of the Order, she was going to suffer in silence again.

"Why?" he asked.

"My dad is going to kill me... literally!" she said, panicing.

She threw herself reluctantly and hurriedly out of his embrace, and out of the room.

She speed walked to the entrance hall, and out of the grounds to the station.

"Miss Granger, you're late." Snape said maliciously, as though he knew what was going to happen to her.

"S-sorry sir." she said, and looked to the ground.

He pushed her on to the train and go in after her. He locked the door and trapped her in a compartment.

Oh God no ... She thought. She knew what was about to happen, her whole being trembled in fear. She backed against the window, as he advanced towards her.

He grabbed her roughly and shoved her onto the hard seat, relishing in her squeal of pain. He was going to love his time with her, delighting in her pain, his enjoyment of seeing her suffer.

He climbed on to her, forcing her to de-robe him, and forced her to de-robe herself.

She was sobbing the whole time, wishing he wouldn't do anything, wishing her life would end before he began until she was left in nothing but her undergarments, her self-harmed scars showing all over her.

"My my Granger, you've been really bad ... mutilating yourself? You'll surely have to be punished." Snape said, and he began to torture her in the terriblist way you could ever imagine.

He beat her, raped her, beat her again until a few of her bones broke.

Soon the train ride ended and Hermione quickly got dressed and ran from the compartment.

She ran from the train, picked her trunk from the luggage rack and ran off the platform to the Muggle World.

The pain in her ribs seemed to subside. Had this been the first time she had had her ribs broken, she would've been in agony. She was used to the pain now, it seemed to numb her.

She hadn't noticed her father waiting by the car until:

"Granger get over here before i beat you that bad you won't be able to sit up never mind sit down!"

*gasps* awww poor hermione..i feel really really really bad for her..PAMS soon

oh my...keep goin its really gd

omgomgomgomg!!! poor hermione! immie plz carry on! i don't want it 2 end!!

lv cat xx

thanx Cat! This might or might not be my last EVER post for this fic, i'll see how i feel

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Hermione whimpered and walked to him, forgetting the warnings from the ministry, and as she reached him, she received a couple of sharp blows to the stomach and her head.

He pushed her roughly into the car and sped off to their home

When they got home, Hermione didn't hesitate to run into the house and into her room and lock the door. She knew it was useless because it was only a matter of time before the monster came running up the stairs, kicked down her door down with one kick and battered her.

"GRANGER YOU HAVE TEN MINUTES BEFORE I COME UP THERE WITH YOUR PUNISHMENT!" she heard the monster say.

"For what?" she asked, but instantly regretted opening her mouth.

"WHAT FOR?! DO YOU WANT ME TO COME UP THERE AND SHOW YOU NOW!! YOU KNOW WHY! BECAUSE YOU LIVED!" he shouted.

She cowered in her bed, wishing and hoping and praing he would finish her off before she did it herself.

She glanced at her many deep, self-inflicted scars all over her arms, and didn't want to think about the other scars on her body. Her hand itched for her to grab her razor blade andcut herself, to lose herself in the bliss that it gave her.

Soon, she heard pounding up the stairs and the door being kicked in. He pulled her out of the bed by her hair and kicked her. He hit her, slapped her, shoved her into things, bit her so hard he drew blood from her, raped her, and went back round in the cycle. Kicked, hit, slqpped, shoved, bit, raped.

After four hours of the battering, she lay curled up in her own pool of blood, bruised, shaken, beaten.
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ok, not the last post, the final one will be soon tho xx#

nasty beatings....keep it cumin!

Awwww poor Hermione...she shouldnt have to go through with that!

"Why can't you just die? Hm?!" he spat to the cowering form on the floor.

Hermione just lay there, trembling.

"No-one cares! No-one loves you, so why live?!" he shouted.

Her blood boiled. Why did she have to fall the victim. She found herself getting up and shouting back.

"YOU'RE WRONG!"

Her dad flew into a rage and went to hit her. She dodged his blow and tore out of her room, out of the house.

"WHEN I CATCH YOU YOU'LL GET WHAT YOU DESERVE!" he shouted after her.

"HELP! MY DAD'S GOING TO HURT ME!! PLEASE GET HIM AWAY!" she shouted as she ran down the street. She ran smack into a passing police warden.

"What's the matter young lady?" he asked.

"My dad, he's going to hurt me, he's over there, coming this way. He made these bruises on me." she said.

The police warden stoodin front of Hermione as her dad got to them.

"Let me past." he snapped.

"Go away dad! I won't be your toy anymore! I won't be your punchbag anymore! I won't be a Granger anymore!!" she shouted.

"Calm down, Miss. Mr Granger I'm arresting you for child neglect and abuse, and for killing your family." the police warden said and took out a pair of metal handcuffs and cuffed Mr Granger's arms behind his back.

He struggled and lurched towards Hermione, who backed away.

"There won't be a trial, your evidence is enough to bang him up for life, Miss." the warden said and dragged Mr Granger to the nearby police station.

Hermione breathed a sigh of relief and thought, I'm free. Why did I get all of that?

"May as well finish Hogwarts, and find somewhere to live ..." she thought and went back to her home and started packing.

She got to her final book to pack, and as she picked it up, a piece of paper dropped out, which Crookshanks lay on immediately, hiding it from view.

"Come on, Crookshanks. It's time we got out of this dump." she said after she put the book in her trunk. She picked the ginger fluff ball up and put him in his carry cage.

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almost finished xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

hmmmm hermione forgot that paper on the floor..i wonder what it says..PAMS

awww keep it cumin

Crookshanks gave a meow of disapproval as he was moved. She locked his cage and cast a lightening charm on trunk. She was about to pick Crookshanks up when she spotted the note.

She picked it up and it read:

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short i know but my cousin's here n i gotta go xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx i'll complete it later!!!

*gasps* CLIFFE!!

Darling Mione, when you read ths on your 17th birthday, I'll be gone ...
I'm sorry I couldn't see you off to Hogwarts with your parents when you started.
Inside the envelope you'll see a silver locket, with the Bulgarian flag engraved in it.
You see, your daad, isn't your real dad.
He didn't like you, he killed your real dad just before you were born, and wanted to do the same to you.
But you always fought him away. There was something in your spirit that kept you alive, I believe it was your father.
Your real father would never have lifted a finger to you, he was the prince of Bulgaria, your mother ws to be Queen with him as King by the time I stepped down. But when he died, things changed, you and your mother fled, with your stepfather in tow. I am left to rule until my dying day. Yes, Mione. This means you're a princess. Don't let your spirit die Mione.

love always, your grandmother.

Hermione sat on her bed in shock.

'Me, ordinary, ugly bookworm Hermione, a princess, no way...' she thought.

She put the letter into her coat pocket, picked up her trunk and Crookshanks and walked out to King's Cross Station.

The last term at Hogwarts went by happily. The seventh Years graduated, along with Cedric. All the older students were packing and saying goodbye to their friends.

"Mione." Cedric said, causing Hermione to turn around. They were in the crowd in the Grounds.

"Yeah?" she asked.

"Something's got you happier than you usually would. Been good news?" he asked jokingly.

"Yeah. My dad's in jail. Turns out he's not really my dad, and I'm a princess. Unrealistic isn't it." she giggled.

"Need someone there with you?" he grinned.

"Really?" she asked.

Cedric nodded. "Someone's got to look after you."

"Cheeky!" she said and playfully slapped his arm.

"So, princess. What country do you have to rule?" he asked.

"Bulgaria." she said, looking to the floor.

"Still think of Krum?"

"Yeah. I know it's stupid to, but I can't help it."

He hugged her and followed the gaggle of seventh years out to the station with her.

"Ced." she asked.

"Hm?"

"Please don't tell anyone." she said.

"I won't." he said and the pair boarded the train, for their new life across the world.

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Well ... end of the line! *tear* so sad to end it! Hope you've enjoyed it! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

awww how cute! PAMS

wow that was a really gd story, n a really gd endin, it seems open 2 do a sequel 2 r u gonna?