ill post soon, i promise

Ginny walked out of the school grounds, undetected, and walked down the slippery path to Hogsmeade station. She couldn't risk taking the carraiges in case she might be seen. She got to the Station and boarded the Hogwarts Express, telling the driver to take her to King's Cross.

Hermione sat on the couch in front of the comfortable and inviting fire. "Ron, what's wrong with Ginny, she just ... left."

Ron just shrugged.

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Sorry, writer's block, Ideas are welcome for my story xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

awwww poor Ginny...i feel bad for her now PAMS

I'm open for new ideas on how to improve or to add, if you want

OMG this is really funny! I just began reading your story, and now I'm on post One, and the names are Leah and Ria. My name is Mia It rhymes!! (well, if you're pronouncing it Lee-uh and Ree-uh ) Okay, I'll add my comments as I read each post, okay? So now I'm moving on to post number two...

Okay, that's really cute! This is going to be Harry/Hermione, isn't it? YAY! lol That dad is evil!! Why is she bringing Jason with her?

Are you making up the songs? I like them a lot! Lol

Gahhh! Malfoy and Ginny!! I absolutely love that ship hehehe

Hahahah it seems like Draco and Ginny and Harry and Hermione are all friends…. Lol strange…

Whoa, this fic was written in 2004?!?!?! Oooh I didn’t know that! Lol Is Luna just starting school? She put the sorting hat on… Wait, is this the same Luna?? Ahhh I’m confused!



Snape taking points off Slytherin? Okay, I do believe this is the only part of the Fan Fic that isn’t believable hahaha at least Draco and Ginny will be together at detention! *Squee!*

You really need longer chapters, you know >< lol

Ooooh Luna is in Gryffindor because of a re-sorting…. Lol! Who knew there was such thing? Hehehe

Er…. when did Harry and Hermione… um…. Uh… Hermione is having a baby? Um…. Uh… never mind, let me keep reading… wait, what happened to Ginny 0_o ??

Whoa! Someone else posted for you hahahha okay, they found Ginny? When?! Lol I’m missing something, I know it…

Wow!!!! Now Ginny is going to have a kid, too? WHAT??!?!?! Since when??

Hey, now we are in the year 2005! Hahahhaha wow, you’ve had this fic for a while

Waaittt…… what? What happened to Hermione’s kid?!?!?!?! Lol and now Ginny already had hers? Scary much?

Wow, okay, now I’m on page 1 (finally!) This fic has soooo many twists.

Okay, my suggestions:

1. Please have more descriptions! Please?? You have tons of great ideas, but you don't have to say them all at once. You can just stay on one for two posts, for instance, but describe them more. I love the part where Ginny has a kid Are Hermione's brother and sisters still there?

2. Longer posts, please!

Okay, what should you add? Maybe.... um... Follow Ginny through where she disappeared. have her kid with her, and then Voldie taking her kid, and Draco has to save them both, Harry and Hermione tag along, but Ron is too angry at Ginny for... well... having a kid with Draco. Harry is badly hurt, and then Hermione needs to find help while Draco saves Ginny. That would be an interesting read

Wow, that's a lot... Umm ... Maybe hermione miscarried? i dunno? the brother n sisters arent there because they have been taken by Wormtai-... said too much *sly grin*

It's the same Luna Lovegood.

EEK! I know. Longer posts!! I promise I'll try!!

That's an interesting idea. Ill see if it flows with the rest of the fic.

Yep, it was started ... *starts looking and finds it* 29th July 2004! Well over a year's work this is, and I'm not intending on stopping!

PAMS though...its really good though

Ginny made her way to Diagon Alley, the col December air whipping her face as she shielded Katie-Jane from the cold with her body.

She wasn't looking where she was going and she ran smack into something solid.

It helped her up and said "Are you alright?"

She looked up, knowing the voice. "Cedric!" She hugged him with her free arm, and he hugged back. "It's been so long! I thought you were dead. Harry came back with your body and he was a wreck, and your dad too but ..."

He put a finger gently to her mouth to keep her quiet.

"It actually missed, but i put a spell on myself before Harry could see me in the maze, that's how he saw my ghost. I had to make it look like it had hit me." he explained, and led her into his little home, out of the cold and the snow-blizzard that had begun.

"What happened to you? You alright?" he asked her.

She lay Katie-Jane on the small sofa and tears fell down her cheeks as she sat by her. "No." she said. "This child, is mine. I've nowhere to go because when my mum found out, she told me to get rid or I was disowned from my family. My brothers hate me. Their enemy is the father. Draco Malfoy. He, then today, told me to leave him alone, that I was a cheating wench, when all I had done was help Seamus and Neville with homework. Hermione took it in her pride to let herself hear Katie-Jane's first word instead of me. She's probably laughing it up with Harry and Ron." she said, and she broke down crying.

Cedric put a comforting hand on Ginny's shoulder and she lifted herself up and into his arms.

They sat there in each other's embrace, Cedric whispering comforting words to the crying, and terrified Ginny.

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Meanwhile, In the Great Hall.

Harry, Ron and Hermione were talking in their usual seat at the Gryffindor Table.

"Herm-own-ninny?" a familiar voice said behind the trio.

Hermione, thinking it was Harry or Ron, said, "Very funny you two. I'm off to bed." She laughed and stood up, only to walk straight into Viktor Krum.

She looked up. "Viktor?"

Sure enough, there stood Viktor Krum, towering over her only 5ft7" body.

Harry stood up and pulled Hermione gently but firmly from Viktor's grip.

"It has been so long. Vat is going on?" Viktor asked.

"Um ... Viktor ..." she pulled him out of earshot of everyone else. "I didn't know if we were still together. You hadn't informed me ... so ... I thought we were over."

"Oh ... And Potter is ...?" he pressed on.

"I'm not sure if i love him ..." Hermione sighed, looking at her feet.

********************** I'll post more later, I gotta get ready to go home, I'm in class. xxxxxxxxxxxxxx cyaz xxx mwazxx Imogen *********************

keep goin

awww so sad...PAMS

I'll post tomorrow

ok then...works for me!!!

Harry crept up behind her as she had said it. He looked at her angrily.

"What?!" he asked, dangerously quiet.

Hermione jumped. she turned just as Harry pulled her away to the Gryffindor common room. He threw her against a wall.

"What other lies have you been telling me?! Other than you never loved me anyway?!" he shouted

Hermione was scared. Her dad did this to her for no reason.

"Y-you're turning into my dad!" she shouted back. The second the words emerged from her mouth, she regretted it. Harry hit her full force across the face, almost sending her into the crackling fire.

She got up, shaking. She wouldn't look Harry in the eye and stumbled over to the couch.

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THIS ISNT ALL OF IT! I'LL POST THE REST TOMORROW IF I GET TIME!

wtf no!!!!!!!!!!!! harry is not an abusive maniac. dude this sucks now....there better be some lil loophole cuz harry is NOT i repeat NOT!!!!!! abusive.

how mean...i feel really bad for hermione...i really do..Harry shouldnt be treating her like that...what happened to him? PAMS

He doesn't mean to hurt her, he's just sick of everyone lying, he thinks hermione lied 2 him so he snapped and hit her.

cute story.............. =P

Harry walked up to his dormitory, feeling shocked. What happened?! why did I do that?! he shouted in his mind.

He lay on his bed, waiting for sleep to over take him.

*Dream sequence*

"'Mione." Harry walked to her. She backed away.

"Keep away from me!" she shouted.

"Please, 'Mione, I love you! I didn't mean to hurt you!"

"You missed your chance Harry!" She was now walking towards the Durmstrang ship with Viktor.

He ran after her, but when he got there, the ship was leaving and going underwater for its return home.

Harry stood, quite alone. Tears rolled down his face.
*End of dream sequence*

Harry woke up in shock. Tears mingled with the sweat on his face. He reached for his glasses an shakily got up and walked downstairs.

Hermione tensed in her chair when she heard someone coming down the stairs. She turned her pale and bruised face toward the fire, ignoring Harry.

"Hermione, I-" Harry started.

Hermione burst into tears and walked out. Not knowing Harry was following her all the way to Viktor's common room, near the Ravenclaw's common room.

She said the password and walked in to find Viktor asleep at the doorway to his room.

"Wingardium leviosa." she muttered and led the floating Viktor into his room and in his bed. She put the covers over him and lay next to him on the bed.

nooooooooo!!!!! hermione!! dont dooooooo it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go back to harry. hes hotter!! and cooler. and HOTTER.

speechless...

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I'll try and get some posts up either wednesday, thursday or friday, ok xxxx

wow i love that u brought Viktor and Cedric back!!! and Cedric is alive!! yippy! does cedric like ginny??????!!how could Harry be so evil to hermy! i love this story!!PAMS!

~*~Much Luve Taylor~*~

That would be saying too much :evil smirk: Harry doesn't mean to be evil.

NOOOOO Hermione your with the wrong person...go back to Harry!!!! PAMS...i feel bad for both Harry and Hermione right now

'''Hermione, no, don't do it! Krum's evil!''' Harry spoke telepathically

Hermione looked around. "Harry?" she spoke.

'''In your head, love.''' Harry spoke again.

'''Harry? How ...?'''

'''Never mind that. Please honey, I'm sorry about what happened. I didn't mean for it to happen! But listen, Krum is evil. He-'''

'''You said that in fourth year. Told me he was bewitched, that he attacked Fleur and you and Cedric!'''

'''He did, put veritaserum on me or something!'''

He must be telling the truth... he's actually saying to use the truth potion on him ... Hermione thought.

'''Please, Hermione. I can't live with out you.''' Harry said.

Hermione sighed. She looked at Viktor. '''He can't help it if someone controlled him Harry'''

'''You're forgetting I fought off the Imperious Curse.'''

'''He's never hit me!''' Hermione snapped.

'''I didn't mean to hit you!''' Harry said.

'''I'll bloody hit you again and mean it this time!''' The voice didn't sound like his. it sounded like ...

"Viktor ..." Hermione gasped.

'''Harry, Viktor must have controlled you! Listen. Fight it off, just like you did in fourth year.''' Hermione told him. She ran out and into Harry's waiting arms. There she sobbed uncontrollably.

"It's ok, it's ok." Hary whispered.

They stood there, in each other's arms, Harry comforting the love of his life.

"H-Harry ... i love you so much ..." she whispered.

"I love you too, just as much." Harry said gently.

"Well, well, Head girl out late after hours, not even doing her rounds ... Potter, I suppose you're both in this. Oh, dear, we ARE in rouble."mean for it to happen! But listen, Krum is evil. He-'''

'''You said that in fourth year. Told me he was bewitched, that he attacked Fluer and you and Cedric!'''

'''He did, put veritaserum on me or something!'''

He must be telling the truth... he's actually saying to use the truth potion on him ... Hermione thought.

'''Please, Hermione. I can't live with out you.''' Harry said.

Hermione sighed. She looked at Viktor. '''He can't help it if someone controlled him Harry'''

'''You're forgetting I fought off the Imperious Curse.'''

'''He's never hit me!''' Hermione snapped.

'''I didn't mean to hit you!''' Harry said.

'''I'll bloody hit you again and mean it this time!''' The voice didn't sound like his. It sounded like ...

"Viktor ..." Hermione gasped.

'''Harry, Viktor must have controlled you! Listen. Fight it off, just like you did in fourth year.''' Hermione told him. She ran out and into Harry's waiting arms. There she sobbed uncontrollably.

"It's ok, it's ok." Hary whispered.

They stood there, in each other's arms, Harry comforting the love of his life.

"H-Harry ... i love you so much ..." she whispered.

"I love you too, just as much." Harry said gently.

"Well, well, Head girl out late after hours, not even doing her rounds ... Potter, I suppose you're both in this. Oh, dear, we ARE in trouble." Filch said, with a triumphant gleam in his eyes.

"Better than being a squib, is it not?" Hermione snappe. She and Harry ran back to the Gryffindor Common Room, laughing.

"How did you you Filch was a squib?" Harry asked, still laughing.

"Honestly, don't you read?" Hermione giggled.

"You said that in first year." Harry said, remembering when they tried to research on the Philosopher's Stone.

"Yeah, I did, didn't I?" Hermione realised.

They both sat there in front of the fire, remmberin their years at Hogwarts.