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Old 09-04-2007, 11:11 PM   #176 (permalink)
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ZOMG!!! Hermione please say yes, please please please!!!!!! you know you like him! If you didn't you wouldn't have let him kiss you!!!


Sarah:yeah, my logic is kinda weird, but some people understand them, brava to you!!!*applauds*

great chapter!!! I so love the kiss!!!
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Usually I suck at writing anything sappy (and I found out at 4:30am on some morning in June that I'm better at it when I handwrite it...), so it's great to hear

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i think that i dont know, is a yes.
Maybe it is Maybe it isn't

Lol! I'm not even gonna quote every comment I laughed at and thought was cute

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Old 09-05-2007, 01:47 AM   #177 (permalink)

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Quote this: PAMSIOD!

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Old 09-05-2007, 01:59 AM   #178 (permalink)
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PAMS PAMS i love their conection so much it so romantic and there and Hermione why he loves you.PMAS PMAS
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Old 09-05-2007, 03:22 AM   #179 (permalink)
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OMG! How cute!
Ahh! Hermione Harry is gone! LONG GONE! Just for get about him! You have Draco now! DRACO! Listen to me!
No one listens to me these days! *pouts*

Awsome chapter!

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Old 09-05-2007, 03:27 AM   #180 (permalink)
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Quote this: PAMSIOD!

There, it's quoted now.

Gah, can't... feel... legs! PAIN! (Karate... just started and all I can say is fun, sweaty, and OWIE!)

I'll post like... sometime within the next two or three days, maybe longer. Dunno...
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Old 09-05-2007, 11:20 AM   #181 (permalink)
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*GASP*
SAY YES YOU IDIOT! *throws rocks at Hermione*
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Usually I suck at writing anything sappy (and I found out at 4:30am on some morning in June that I'm better at it when I handwrite it...), so it's great to hear


Maybe it is Maybe it isn't

Lol! I'm not even gonna quote every comment I laughed at and thought was cute
haha...early mornings make wonders...


I say it's a yes too!!! even Ginny said 'it looked like a yes from here!' I so loved that line!!!
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Old 09-07-2007, 01:11 AM   #183 (permalink)
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Yep, they sure do

Another short update, but an update nonetheless.
And I looked up the June birthstone and they had too many different options, like pearl and something else and alexandrite, so I used the alexandrite (you'll see what I mean).
This is even shorter than the last update I'm sure, so I'll update within the next two days cause the chapter after this is SUPER long... I'm gonna split it in half (it's not like I'm going to post one part and then hold off for days and days, it's just to break it up; I'll be posting both parts on the same day)
Enjoy =)
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Chapter 17
Hermione’s Christmas Surprise


Things were silent between Draco and Hermione up until the start of Christmas break. Hermione went back to the Burrow for the first half of Christmas. On Christmas Eve, she left the Burrow for her parents to stay for the remaining holiday.

On Christmas Day, an owl woke her up with a gift and a letter. She untied both, and the owl sat on the desk in her bedroom. Opening the envelope, a funny Christmas card fell out. It read:

Merry Christmas, Hermione.

She looked for a signature, but saw nothing. The owl hooted lightly and looked at her pensively. She opened the envelope and saw a letter inside as well. She opened it and started reading.

I would’ve delivered this myself if I could’ve – my parents would’ve killed me if I wasn’t at home. Either way, have a happy Christmas and... I’ll see you back at Hogwarts. I hope you like your gift.
D.M


Hermione read the short letter over again, but then put it aside and opened the small box. She pulled out a silver necklace with a diamond heart pendant. Inside the heart were two gems – a sapphire and alexandrite. She recognized the two gems as birthstones, her birth stone and one for the month of June, which, after a few moments of thought, was the month Draco was born in. She smiled as she held the pendant of the necklace in her hand – she had never known him to be so thoughtful. She clipped it around her neck, letting the pendant droop down just over her shirt enough that if she needed to hide it from her parents, she could.

She heard a soft hoot and looked at the owl now sitting on her windowsill. After a moment, she realized she probably should write a response. She wrote a short response, and quickly scrawled ‘Mione’ when she heard one of her parents coming down her hall. As she was tying the message to the owl’s leg, her bedroom door opened. Hermione heard her mom, Jane, squeal in surprise at seeing an owl on Hermione’s windowsill. Hermione’s parents were still getting used to owls, even after 7 years of using them.

Draco’s barn owl flew off as soon as the letter was securely tied to his leg.

“Whose owl was that? Haven’t seen it before,” Hermione mom commented.

“A... a friend of mine. Just acquaintances, we don’t really talk too much,” Hermione lied as she put her new necklace underneath her shirt.

Her mom looked suspicious, but didn’t say anything other than, “Well, dad’s waiting, and you know how he can be...”

Hermione’s eyes widened and she walked out of her room with her mom, holding the heart pendant through her shirt, feeling the cold diamonds and silver against her skin.

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Old 09-07-2007, 01:37 AM   #184 (permalink)
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OHHHHHHHHHH!

How WONDERFUL!

I just love Draco, and I love your vocabulary and descriptions! Marvelous, dollface, just marvelous

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I just love Draco, and I love your vocabulary and descriptions! Marvelous, dollface, just marvelous
Thanks Glad you enjoyed the short update!
I think I ended up developing more volcabulary and more ways to reword things to sound more proper since starting an Eragon fan fiction (I couldn't have... Murtagh saying 'Hey, how's it going, E?' or something crazy like that).
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Old 09-07-2007, 02:44 AM   #186 (permalink)
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aww loved it twinneh!
PAMS!! PAMSOID!!
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Old 09-07-2007, 04:26 PM   #187 (permalink)

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Aww Draco all sensitive

PAMS!
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Old 09-07-2007, 08:18 PM   #188 (permalink)
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Draco is soooo sweet i want him so much.I loved itPAMS
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that is so cute, omg! post soon!
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Old 09-08-2007, 01:43 AM   #190 (permalink)
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Aww..i want a necklace too!! PAMS!
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aww!!! how sweeeeeeeeett!!! Draco is so..

that necklace is so pretty! I want one! wow...I am intrigued by what Hermione wrote... will we know?

love this chapter! It's kinda nice not having Harry or Jaimie in it!!!

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Awww! Draco is so sweet!
PAMS.

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Draco's great! I'd love to have a necklace like that!
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I don't know when I'll be updating the next two parts (the next chapter)...
Long story on something that happened, all I can say is I'm counting down the days until I don't feel like an only child so my dad can quit focusing on me and what I do and as a result quit making me have break-down after break-down...
And i didn't notice how depressing msot of my songs on my iPod/on iTunes are until that point as well.

Sometime this week tho (for an update). I might just post one part in a few days and wait a few days til updating the last half.

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I've had that feeling.My parents always makes me feel like an only child.I hope everything works out for you.Post when you can.
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Sarah!

I love you!

And if you ever need to talk, PM me and we'll talk...maybe work on some e-mail exchanging...'Cause I don't want you to be sad You're my favorite

Love love love
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*sad* Don't be sad, Your making me sad now. hope everything goes well. Take your time on the chapter. No rush. take all the tiem you need.



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*pets* take your time...I'll watch over your FF for you...no worries!

I hope you feel better soon...
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